Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCTH4972Y2VWVTJDY3F5MAP

Run Details

Duration:
2m 21s
Cost:
$0.004487
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolts snapped back in rapid sequence, each clank sharper than the last. Rory threw the door open. Lucien stood in the corridor, all platinum hair and tailored charcoal. He leaned on his cane, the ivory handle catching the light from the curry house sign below. "You have nerve." "Rory." His heterochromatic gaze—amber, black—swept her face. "Your left wrist still carries that crescent scar?" She pressed her palm against the old mark. "What do you want, Luc?" "May I come in?" "The flat belongs to Eva. I'm just borrowing space." "You've borrowed enough courage to leave, haven't you?" She stepped aside. The corridor smelled of cumin and old books. Inside, books towered on every surface. Ptolemy watched from a stack of research notes, tail twitching. Three deadbolts glinted on the inside of the door. "Your flat on Brick Lane hasn't changed," Lucien said. "You shouldn't be here." Rory shut the door. The deadbolts clicked into place behind him. "I came to London from Marseille for one purpose. You fled Evan. I heard the whispers." Her spine went rigid. "Whispers don't cover rent. Golden Empress deliveries do." He set the cane against a bookshelf. His charcoal coat settled over broad shoulders like armour tailored to a lie. "I deliver too, Lucien. I carry boxes for Yu-Fei Cheung. The supernatural underworld can find another broker." "The broker isn't here for business, Aurora Carter." He moved closer, the scent of cedarwood and something older trailing him. "I'm here for what we left unsaid in that chapel three years ago." Heat flooded her neck. "You vanished." "I was half-demon. You were the barrister's daughter who read law texts and dreamt of justice. I feared you'd break if you knew my father came from Avaros." Rory laughed, brittle glass. "You protected me by lying?" "By running." She circled him, her black hair sliding against her shoulders. The flat felt smaller, the curry-house smoke seeping through the window. "Eva's on the corner reading about wards," Rory said. "Ptolemy guards the scrolls. And me? I guard nothing." "You guard your heart behind quick thinking and cool heads." Lucien reached out, his fingers brushing the crescent scar on her wrist. His touch burned cold. "That childhood accident formed you. The abuse formed you. I formed you, Aurora." "Don't call me that." "Why? It suits you. Carter. Malphora. Rory." His amber eye held her. The black one drank her in. "Every name you've worn to hide." She pulled back, but her hand lingered in his. "You hurt me." "I hurt everyone I touch. Even my mother, human though she was." The books seemed to lean closer, the scrolls rustling despite the still air. "You think showing up with that cane—hiding a blade, hiding your nature—makes you honest?" Rory's voice shook. "You think I want this?" "I think you ran from Evan to this flat. I think you work for a restaurant lord and live above Silas' bar and pretend you're free." "I am free." He stepped closer. His breath warmed her cheek. "Then why hasn't your heart moved on?" The curry-house smell mixed with his cedarwood. Ptolemy hissed softly, then went still. Rory pressed her palm flat against Lucien's chest. His heart hammered—two rhythms, one human, one not. "You shouldn't have come," she whispered. "I couldn't stay away." She looked up. His platinum hair caught the neon glow from Brick Lane. The amber eye glowed like embers. He lowered his mouth to hers. The kiss tasted of salt and regret and the sharp edge of something that refused to die. She pulled back, breath ragged. "We have history, Lucien." "The worst kind. Attraction. Hurt. Things left unsaid." The deadbolts held. The books watched. Outside, Brick Lane carried on with its spices and noise, but inside Eva's flat, the air bent around them—two people who had parted on complicated terms, forced together by the simple, terrible fact that one of them had knocked. Rory's fingers curled into his charcoal coat. "Eva's deadbolts won't keep out what you bring." "I'm not asking them to." She leaned into him, her black hair brushing his jaw, the crescent scar on her wrist glowing faintly in the dark. The flat held its breath. The curry smoke curled. Ptolemy blinked, and for a long moment, neither of them moved away.<|end_message|>
created_at"2026-07-25T14:23:09.103Z" 7/25/2026, 2:23:09 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.211
leniency0.421
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.07% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount721
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount721
totalAiIsms0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences51
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences51
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences80
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords715
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
64.22% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount408
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.72
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory7
Heat1
Lucien4
Brick2
Lane2
Eva1
Ptolemy3
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heat"
2"Lucien"
3"Eva"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.642
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences31
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount715
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean15.54
std9.43
cv0.607
sampleLengths
018
128
23
315
413
54
69
78
811
925
109
1115
1216
1312
1420
1517
1633
176
1828
199
202
2121
2218
2339
244
2524
2612
2712
2813
2922
3026
313
3215
3313
3416
356
364
3719
3823
399
408
4145
4215
435
4421
4521
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs71
matches(empty)
35.71% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences80
ratio0.038
matches
0"\"Rory.\" His heterochromatic gaze—amber, black—swept her face."
1"His heart hammered—two rhythms, one human, one not."
2"Outside, Brick Lane carried on with its spices and noise, but inside Eva's flat, the air bent around them—two people who had parted on complicated terms, forced together by the simple, terrible fact that one of them had knocked."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount414
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount8
adverbRatio0.01932367149758454
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.004830917874396135
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences80
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences80
mean8.94
std6.37
cv0.712
sampleLengths
013
15
211
317
43
57
68
78
85
94
109
118
123
138
146
1510
169
179
188
197
2016
214
228
237
2413
2517
2620
2713
284
292
3028
314
325
332
3410
3511
369
379
3822
394
4013
414
4212
436
446
459
463
4712
4813
4917
47.92% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.325
totalSentences80
uniqueOpeners26
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.33% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences48
matches
0"He leaned on his cane,"
1"His heterochromatic gaze—amber, black—swept her"
2"She pressed her palm against"
3"She stepped aside."
4"Her spine went rigid."
5"He set the cane against"
6"His charcoal coat settled over"
7"He moved closer, the scent"
8"She circled him, her black"
9"His touch burned cold."
10"His amber eye held her"
11"She pulled back, but her"
12"He stepped closer."
13"His breath warmed her cheek."
14"His heart hammered—two rhythms, one"
15"She looked up."
16"His platinum hair caught the"
17"He lowered his mouth to"
18"She pulled back, breath ragged."
19"She leaned into him, her"
ratio0.417
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences48
matches
0"The deadbolts snapped back in"
1"Rory threw the door open."
2"Lucien stood in the corridor,"
3"He leaned on his cane,"
4"His heterochromatic gaze—amber, black—swept her"
5"She pressed her palm against"
6"She stepped aside."
7"The corridor smelled of cumin"
8"Ptolemy watched from a stack"
9"Rory shut the door"
10"The deadbolts clicked into place"
11"Her spine went rigid."
12"He set the cane against"
13"His charcoal coat settled over"
14"He moved closer, the scent"
15"Heat flooded her neck."
16"Rory laughed, brittle glass."
17"She circled him, her black"
18"The flat felt smaller, the"
19"Lucien reached out, his fingers"
ratio0.938
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
ratio0
32.97% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences13
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Outside, Brick Lane carried on with its spices and noise, but inside Eva's flat, the air bent around them—two people who had parted on complicated terms, forced…"
1"She leaned into him, her black hair brushing his jaw, the crescent scar on her wrist glowing faintly in the dark."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"He moved, the scent of cedarwood and something older trailing him"
1"Lucien reached out, his fingers brushing the crescent scar on her wrist"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences38
tagDensity0.079
leniency0.158
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.053
77.5737%