Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCTJBZKE1MBJJZ1F0T3WBWT

Run Details

Duration:
3m 19s
Cost:
$0.007031
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station stank of rust, old paper, and something sweeter, like cloves left to rot. Harlow Quinn ducked under the snapped turnstile and felt the air shift. Her boots hit the platform tiles with a sharp crack that echoed up the arched brickwork. Camden’s usual thunder of traffic vanished somewhere above. Down here, the silence had teeth. Uniformed constables milled near the orange torchlight. A photographer’s flash flared, then died. Quinn’s leather watch dug into her wrist. She glanced at it out of habit, though time moved differently in the dark. Eva Kowalski waited near the edge of the platform, her round glasses catching the torch beam. The worn leather satchel hung from her shoulder, heavy with books. Curly red hair framed her freckled face. She tucked hair behind her left ear. "Detective." Eva’s voice stayed low. "You should see this before they move the body." Quinn moved with military precision. She passed the constables without a word. The victim lay between two rusted vending machines, a man in a tailored charcoal coat. His throat had been opened with surgical neatness. No blood spatter reached the walls. The pool beneath him stayed contained, a perfect oval, too neat. "Bone tokens scattered," Eva said, stepping closer. "I found three pressed into the grout near the tracks. The entry requirement for the Veil Market." Quinn crouched. Her brown eyes scanned the grout lines. Small chips of bone glinted in the dust, each etched with faint sigils. "Underground market moves every full moon," Eva continued. "Abandoned Tube stations are common meeting grounds. This victim was either buying or selling." Quinn stood. She walked the perimeter of the platform. The tiles showed scuff marks, but no drag lines. The victim’s shoes lacked grime from the tunnels. He had arrived clean and walked directly here. "Your interpretation, Kowalski," Quinn said. "Different from the sergeant’s?" "The sergeant sees a mugging. I see a ritual killing. The throat wound aligns with Shade craftsmanship. The blood pool’s perfection suggests containment, not violence." Quinn paused near the far wall. A brass compass rested on the ground, half-hidden behind a fallen sign. She lifted it with gloved fingers. The casing bore verdigris patina. The face showed protective sigils etched deep into the metal. The needle spun, then locked toward a dark tunnel mouth. "A Veil Compass," Eva breathed. "Points toward the nearest supernatural rift. The needle’s fixed on the east tunnel." Quinn turned the compass. The needle held steady. She noted the absence of struggle in the victim’s posture. His hands rested open, palms up, fingers uncurled. "He knew his killer," Quinn said. "He walked here willingly. The bone tokens in the grout weren’t dropped. They were placed. Entry paid in advance." Eva adjusted her glasses. "The clique you mentioned? The ones you suspected of criminal activity?" Quinn’s sharp jaw tightened. "This is their playground. The Market sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, information. Someone interrupted a transaction." Quinn examined the victim’s coat pockets. Empty except for a torn receipt printed on black paper. The ink smelled of iron. "He came for information," Quinn said. "Not goods. The receipt lists no item, only a time. Midnight, three nights past." Eva tucked hair behind her left ear again, faster this time. "That was the last full moon. The Market moved locations then. This station was the previous site. The victim returned to a dead location." "Not dead," Quinn corrected. "Waiting. The killer knew the schedule." Quinn walked to the tracks. The rails glinted with a faint residue, a shimmer like oil on water. "The sergeant missed the shimmer," Quinn said. "He looked for footprints in dust. I look for absence." Eva followed. Her satchel shifted, books clinking softly. "The absence of blood beyond the pool. The absence of defensive wounds. The absence of panic." "Exactly." Quinn pointed with the compass needle, using it as a pointer. "The victim stood still. He offered his throat." Eva’s green eyes widened behind her glasses. "A willing sacrifice?" "A wronged partner," Quinn said. "Three years ago, DS Morris died under unexplained circumstances with supernatural origins I don’t yet understand. This victim’s wounds mirror the reports from that case. Clean throat, contained blood, ritual positioning." The station seemed to contract around them. Eva’s breath fogged in the cool air. "You think Morris’s death connects?" Eva asked. "I think the clique operates here. They use the Market’s anonymity. They leave bone tokens as signatures." Quinn straightened. She surveyed the platform, the vending machines, the scattered bone, the brass compass in her hand, the black receipt, the perfect blood pool. "Collect every token," Quinn ordered the nearest constable. "Bag the compass separately. The needle points to the rift. We follow it later." Eva stepped closer. "Quinn. The clique suspects you. They know you lost Morris. They might be watching." Quinn’s worn leather watch caught the light. She did not flinch. "I lost Morris to something that hides in markets like this," Quinn said. "The evidence doesn’t add up because it was never meant to. The killer intended this scene to confuse. Too perfect. Too arranged." Quinn turned the Veil Compass over. The sigils on the face glowed faintly, responding to her grip. "But I see the error," Quinn said. "The bone tokens face the wrong direction. They point toward the tracks, not the entrance. The victim paid to enter, but placed his payment facing the rift. He was leaving, not arriving." Eva’s freckled complexion paled slightly. "He was escaping." Quinn nodded. "And the killer stopped him before he reached the tunnel. The compass was his guide. The needle points where he failed to go." Quinn slipped the compass into her coat pocket. The verdigris left a green smudge on her glove. "We search the east tunnel," Quinn said. "Not for the killer. For what he was running from." Eva hoisted her satchel. The books inside shifted with a dull thud. "I have research on Shade artisans," Eva said. "The compass creator. I can identify the craft." "Do it," Quinn said. "But stay behind me." They walked toward the tunnel mouth, past the rusted vending machines, past the perfect oval of blood that refused to spread, past the bone tokens that pointed like accusing fingers. Above them, Camden’s traffic rumbled, unaware that beneath its feet, the Veil Market had moved, leaving behind only death arranged like a puzzle with one piece turned wrong. Quinn didn’t look back. Her military bearing kept her gaze forward, her sharp jaw set. She had missed nothing. The scene spoke to her through absence, through wrong-facing bones, through a compass that pointed not at mystery but at flight interrupted. The killer had made a mistake by being too careful. Quinn intended to use it.<|end_message|>
created_at"2026-07-25T14:23:49.756Z" 7/25/2026, 2:23:49 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags18
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.4
leniency0.8
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.09% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1122
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
59.89% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1122
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"echoed"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"perfect"
count4
3
word"scanned"
count1
4
word"etched"
count2
highlights
0"echoed"
1"silence"
2"perfect"
3"scanned"
4"etched"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences89
matches(empty)
78.65% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences89
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tended to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1122
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions21
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount662
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity4.38
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity9
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Quinn29
Kowalski1
Eva15
Veil2
Compass1
Camden2
Market1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Kowalski"
2"Eva"
3"Camden"
4"Market"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.891
wordCount1122
matches
0"not at mystery but at flight interrupted"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs50
mean22.44
std11.88
cv0.529
sampleLengths
059
113
221
341
414
552
624
722
822
934
109
1125
1249
1318
1426
1525
1615
1721
1821
1920
2035
2110
2218
2317
2424
2520
2610
2736
2814
297
3017
3125
3222
3317
3411
3535
3617
3739
388
3925
4017
4117
4212
4316
448
4530
4628
4741
4810
495
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"been opened"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs135
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences116
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount664
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.02108433734939759
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.010542168674698794
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean9.67
std6.4
cv0.661
sampleLengths
017
112
216
38
46
57
66
77
814
916
1011
117
127
135
149
155
167
1715
188
196
2011
217
2217
232
247
2513
268
2714
282
297
309
318
328
335
344
3525
366
3712
386
395
4010
4110
425
4313
444
454
4610
478
486
4919
49.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.33620689655172414
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences70
matches
0"Her boots hit the platform"
1"She glanced at it out"
2"She tucked hair behind her"
3"She passed the constables without"
4"His throat had been opened"
5"Her brown eyes scanned the"
6"She walked the perimeter of"
7"He had arrived clean and"
8"She lifted it with gloved"
9"She noted the absence of"
10"His hands rested open, palms"
11"Her satchel shifted, books clinking"
12"She surveyed the platform, the"
13"She did not flinch."
14"They walked toward the tunnel"
15"Her military bearing kept her"
16"She had missed nothing."
ratio0.243
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount63
totalSentences70
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station stank"
1"Harlow Quinn ducked under the"
2"Her boots hit the platform"
3"Camden’s usual thunder of traffic"
4"A photographer’s flash flared, then"
5"Quinn’s leather watch dug into"
6"She glanced at it out"
7"Eva Kowalski waited near the"
8"The worn leather satchel hung"
9"She tucked hair behind her"
10"Eva’s voice stayed low"
11"Quinn moved with military precision."
12"She passed the constables without"
13"The victim lay between two"
14"His throat had been opened"
15"The pool beneath him stayed"
16"Eva said, stepping closer"
17"Her brown eyes scanned the"
18"She walked the perimeter of"
19"The tiles showed scuff marks,"
ratio0.9
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"They walked toward the tunnel mouth, past the rusted vending machines, past the perfect oval of blood that refused to spread, past the bone tokens that pointed …"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags18
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
61.11% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags16
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Eva continued (continue)"
1"Eva breathed (breathe)"
2"Quinn corrected (correct)"
3"Quinn ordered (order)"
dialogueSentences45
tagDensity0.356
leniency0.711
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.178
81.6627%