Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCTK6P1RZCGDT2HD5BQ7AFF

Run Details

Duration:
14.0s
Cost:
$0.005158
Provider:
BaseTen

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pulled her coat tighter and stepped past the boundary stones. Ancient oaks loomed like rotten teeth, moss choking their bark. The path she’d followed from Richmond Park dead-ended in a clearing that smelled of wet earth and old blood. She’d come for the portal. Eva had scribbled coordinates on a napkin, swore the Grove held answers about Evan. About why he’d tracked her all the way from Cardiff. The trees formed a perfect circle. No wind touched them, yet wildflowers swayed—bluebells in October, daisies black with rot. Her pendant hung heavy. The Heartstone pulsed, crimson catching starlight, warm against her sternum. Wrong. Rory’s boots crunched dead grass that should have been silent. Behind her, twigs snapped—once, twice—then stopped. She spun. Nothing. Just oaks bending inward, branches knitting a ceiling that blotted out the moon. “Hello?” Her voice came flat, swallowed. The snap came closer. Rory walked faster, heart hammering her ribs. The clearing stretched. She should have reached the center by now—three old stones arranged like a broken crown—but they never appeared. Instead, the path looped back to the same mossy oak with the lightning scar. Time had curdled here. She knew the Grove’s reputation—an hour inside could be minutes outside, or days. Her watch read 11:04. Then 11:04 again, the second hand twitching backward. The pendant burned now, a steady throb that matched her pulse. She stopped. Listened. A child laughed—high, bubbling—somewhere to her left. Then her right. Then directly behind her ear, breath hot and smelling of copper. Rory whirled, fists clenched. Empty air. The wildflowers had turned. Every bloom faced her now, blue and white and dead yellow, tracking her movement like eyes. She ran. Her lungs burned with cold that tasted of iron. The trees refused to part, roots rising like fingers to snag her boots. She stumbled, caught herself, and the pendant flared—crimson light spilling through her fingers. That was when she saw it. At the edge of her vision, where the oaks blurred into shadow, something tall walked parallel to her. Too thin for a person—limbs like broken branches, head a tangle of antlers and black hair that might have been her own hair, mirrored back wrong. Rory didn’t look directly. She knew, bone-deep, that direct sight would be a contract. The thing matched her pace. When she slowed, it slowed. Its feet made no sound, but she heard its breathing—wet, rattling, too close. She reached the center of the clearing without knowing how. The three stones waited, covered in symbols that hurt her eyes. The portal should be here. A shimmer in the air, according to Eva. Instead, the ground between the stones was bare dirt. And on that dirt, footprints—hers, fresh—circled endlessly, going in and never coming out. The pendant went cold. Dead. Rory turned to run, and the thing was there. Not fully seen—just a slice of elongated jaw, teeth like graveyard iron, eyes that reflected nothing but held her name. It stood between her and the boundary, and its mouth opened in a smile she recognized from dreams she’d never admitted to having. “You came back, Aurora,” it said, in her mother’s voice, in Evan’s voice, layered like rot. She ran for the eastern trees, the direction she’d entered. The roots grabbed her ankle, not hard—just holding, testing. The child laughed again, closer, and now she heard others—dozens of small voices chanting in Welsh she barely understood, a nursery rhyme about doors that open inward. Rory yanked free, skin scraping bark, and broke into a sprint. The trees suddenly parted, and she was at the boundary stones, moonlight blinding beyond them. She crossed. The cold vanished. The wildflowers were gone—just normal Richmond Park grass, damp with October dew. Her watch ticked forward: 11:17. Rory ran until she hit the road, then collapsed against a park bench, gasping. The pendant in her fist was cool now, gray, dead as stone. But in her pocket, her phone buzzed—Eva, asking if she’d found the portal. Rory looked back. The oaks stood silent, normal, distant. Then, in the gap between two trees, she saw a flash of black hair, shoulder-length, turning away. Her own hair, on something that was not her. She closed her eyes. When she opened them, the grove was empty. But the footprints in her shoes—mud that smelled of wildflowers—would not wash out. And that night, in her flat above Silas’ bar, she heard the child laughing in her radiator pipes, and the pendant, locked in her drawer, began to glow faint crimson in the dark.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
93.56% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount776
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
67.78% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount776
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"perfect"
count1
2
word"pulsed"
count1
3
word"throb"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"perfect"
2"pulsed"
3"throb"
4"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"jaw/fists clenched"
count1
highlights
0"fists clenched"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences80
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences80
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen33
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords756
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
87.93% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount725
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.24
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Grove2
Evan2
Cardiff1
October2
Heartstone1
Eva3
Welsh1
Rory9
persons
0"Grove"
1"Evan"
2"Eva"
3"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Cardiff"
3"October"
4"Welsh"
globalScore0.879
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount756
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean16.8
std11.87
cv0.706
sampleLengths
011
129
229
319
414
51
616
72
814
96
104
1142
1229
1311
143
1521
166
1720
182
1935
206
2144
2214
2323
2421
2513
2622
275
289
2943
3016
3119
3227
3326
342
3520
3614
3712
3813
399
4017
419
424
438
4446
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"were gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs138
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount20
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences15
totalSentences80
ratio0.188
matches
0"No wind touched them, yet wildflowers swayed—bluebells in October, daisies black with rot."
1"Behind her, twigs snapped—once, twice—then stopped."
2"She should have reached the center by now—three old stones arranged like a broken crown—but they never appeared."
3"She knew the Grove’s reputation—an hour inside could be minutes outside, or days."
4"A child laughed—high, bubbling—somewhere to her left."
5"She stumbled, caught herself, and the pendant flared—crimson light spilling through her fingers."
6"Too thin for a person—limbs like broken branches, head a tangle of antlers and black hair that might have been her own hair, mirrored back wrong."
7"Its feet made no sound, but she heard its breathing—wet, rattling, too close."
8"And on that dirt, footprints—hers, fresh—circled endlessly, going in and never coming out."
9"Not fully seen—just a slice of elongated jaw, teeth like graveyard iron, eyes that reflected nothing but held her name."
10"The roots grabbed her ankle, not hard—just holding, testing."
11"The child laughed again, closer, and now she heard others—dozens of small voices chanting in Welsh she barely understood, a nursery rhyme about doors that open inward."
12"The wildflowers were gone—just normal Richmond Park grass, damp with October dew."
13"But in her pocket, her phone buzzed—Eva, asking if she’d found the portal."
14"But the footprints in her shoes—mud that smelled of wildflowers—would not wash out."
90.55% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount748
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount38
adverbRatio0.05080213903743316
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.008021390374331552
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences80
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences80
mean9.45
std6.34
cv0.671
sampleLengths
011
110
219
35
414
510
66
713
84
910
101
1110
126
132
141
1513
166
174
187
193
2018
2114
224
2313
244
258
2611
272
281
297
303
3111
324
332
344
3516
362
379
3813
3913
406
4118
4226
434
4410
455
465
4713
4810
4911
59.58% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.3875
totalSentences80
uniqueOpeners31
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount8
totalSentences71
matches
0"Just oaks bending inward, branches"
1"Instead, the path looped back"
2"Then 11:04 again, the second"
3"Then her right."
4"Then directly behind her ear,"
5"Too thin for a person—limbs"
6"Instead, the ground between the"
7"Then, in the gap between"
ratio0.113
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount17
totalSentences71
matches
0"She’d come for the portal."
1"Her pendant hung heavy."
2"Her voice came flat, swallowed"
3"She should have reached the"
4"She knew the Grove’s reputation—an"
5"Her watch read 11:04."
6"Her lungs burned with cold"
7"She stumbled, caught herself, and"
8"She knew, bone-deep, that direct"
9"Its feet made no sound,"
10"She reached the center of"
11"It stood between her and"
12"it said, in her mother’s"
13"She ran for the eastern"
14"Her watch ticked forward: 11:17."
15"Her own hair, on something"
16"She closed her eyes."
ratio0.239
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount51
totalSentences71
matches
0"Rory pulled her coat tighter"
1"The path she’d followed from"
2"She’d come for the portal."
3"Eva had scribbled coordinates on"
4"The trees formed a perfect"
5"Her pendant hung heavy."
6"The Heartstone pulsed, crimson catching"
7"Rory’s boots crunched dead grass"
8"Her voice came flat, swallowed"
9"The snap came closer."
10"Rory walked faster, heart hammering"
11"The clearing stretched."
12"She should have reached the"
13"Time had curdled here."
14"She knew the Grove’s reputation—an"
15"Her watch read 11:04."
16"The pendant burned now, a"
17"A child laughed—high, bubbling—somewhere to"
18"Rory whirled, fists clenched."
19"The wildflowers had turned."
ratio0.718
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences71
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Too thin for a person—limbs like broken branches, head a tangle of antlers and black hair that might have been her own hair, mirrored back wrong."
1"Not fully seen—just a slice of elongated jaw, teeth like graveyard iron, eyes that reflected nothing but held her name."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences2
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.9801%