Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCTNGWMZANKMT3DMD45RMRB

Run Details

Duration:
12.3s
Cost:
$0.013194
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Three heavy deadbolts clattered open in rapid succession. Aurora dragged the oak door inward, her hand freezing on the brass knob. The scent of ozone, expensive rain-soaked wool, and clove cigarettes rushed into the narrow entryway of the Brick Lane flat. Lucien Moreau stood beneath the flickering hallway bulb, rain dripping from the brim of his fedora onto the tailored collar of his charcoal coat. His amber eye caught the dim light, burning against the absolute void of his black one. He leaned slightly on his ivory-handled cane, silver rings glinting across his knuckles. "You changed the locks, Rory." "Not for you. For the things that follow you." She gripped the edge of the door, her thumb tracing the pale, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. "You shouldn't be here, Lucien. Six months ago, you walked out of the Golden Empress without looking back." "A necessity of the trade, as you well know." He stepped forward, forcing her backward into the hallway simply by occupying the frame. "And yet, here I am." "Leave." "I have information regarding your father's debts in Cardiff." Lucien tipped his hat back with two fingers, exposing the crisp platinum line of his hairline. "Shall I speak it to the staircase, or will you let me in out of this abysmal English deluge?" Aurora ground her molars together. She backed down the narrow corridor, leaving the door ajar. The flat smelled of simmering coriander from the curry house below, stale Earl Grey, and old paper. Books stacked four feet high formed sprawling labyrinths across the hardwood floor, spilling research notes and dog-eared parchment into every walkway. Ptolemy, the ginger tabby, slunk out from beneath a mahogany desk, hissed at the hem of Lucien's trousers, and vanished behind a stack of Latin lexicons. Lucien shut the heavy door, throwing each deadbolt with practiced ease. The crisp *clack-clack-clack* echoed like gunfire in the cramped room. He shed his wet coat, draping it precisely over the back of a mismatched velvet armchair, and resting his cane against the hearth. "You still live in chaos," he murmured, sweeping a glance across the scattered manuscripts. "It's research. Not that a fixer with a penthouse in Mayfair would understand clutter." Aurora crossed her arms, tucking her hands into the sleeves of her oversized knit sweater to hide the faint tremor in her fingers. "Say what you came to say, Lucien. Then get out." He stepped closer, his boots silent against the frayed Persian rug. The spatial dynamic of the small flat vanished; he dominated the room, drawing all the available heat toward his half-demon frame. Up close, the faint faint scent of brimstone edged through the damp wool of his suit. "You haven't answered my messages." "I blocked your number." "I used three different burner phones." "I blocked those too." She lifted her chin, staring directly into his mismatched eyes. "You don't get to disappear into the Marseille underbelly after... after what happened in the vault, and then text me like we're old friends checking in on the weather." Lucien stopped inches away. The ambient warmth radiating from his skin felt like a furnace against the autumn chill bleeding through the single-paned windows. He reached out, his long fingers hesitating before sliding beneath her jaw, resting lightly on her pulse point. His thumb brushed the soft skin beneath her ear. "It was never about weather, Laila." The old nickname fell from his lips, thick with the subtle French cadence he usually took great pains to hide. "I left to keep Avaros' court off your scent. The demon who tracked you to the docks—" "I handled him." She didn't pull away from his touch, though every instinct told her that leaning into it was a dangerous mistake. Her heart hammered wildly against his fingertips. "Eva and I burned his contract. I don't need your protection." "You handled his advance guard," Lucien corrected softly, his amber eye narrowing. "The primary collector arrives in London tomorrow night. He carries a warrant signed in blood by your former master." Aurora's breath hitched. Evan. The name alone set off a cold ring of panic in her chest, but she locked her knees, refusing to sway. "Evan doesn't have the authority to pull a favor from Avaros." "He sold his remaining mortal years to gain it." Lucien lowered his hand, his thumb catching her lower lip for a fraction of a second before falling to his side. "He wants you back in Cardiff. Or he wants you in a box. Whichever arrives first." She walked past him, needing air, space, anything to break the electric current snapping between them. She knocked over a column of bound leather texts; they thudded onto the floor, fanning out around her ankles. She kicked them aside and leaned against the edge of the paper-littered desk, gripping the dark wood until her knuckles turned white. "Why do you care?" Her voice cracked, betraying the stone wall she was trying to build. "You made it very clear in April that I was an asset. A useful human with a knack for lock-picking and quick exit routes. You paid my fee and vanished." Lucien turned slowly. The shadows from the single overhead lamp washed over his sharp cheekbones, casting his black eye into complete darkness while his amber eye glowed like a dying ember. "I lied." "You do that a lot." "I lied to keep you from following me into a slaughterhouse." He crossed the room in two long strides, stopping directly in front of her desk, trapping her between his frame and the heavy oak. "Do you think I wanted to leave you standing on that pier, Rory? Do you think I enjoyed watching you look at me like I was just another monster taking advantage of your talent?" "You acted the part remarkably well!" "Because if you hated me, you wouldn't track me to France!" His voice rose, sharp and cracking like a whip, shattering the quiet hum of the night. He rested both hands flat on the desk on either side of her hips, leaning down until his lips were inches from hers. "If you hated me, you stay safe in London, delivering dumplings for Yu-Fei and reading dusty texts in this pathetic excuse for an apartment." "It's Eva's flat," she snapped, her chest heaving as she glared into his face. "And I don't need your damn heroics! I spent three years letting a man control every step I took, every breath I drew. I am done being saved, Lucien. Especially by someone who treats me like fragile porcelain one day and an anonymous informant the next!" "You are hardly fragile," he breathed, his eyes dropping to her mouth. "You are the most infuriatingly reckless human I have ever had the misfortune of meeting." "Then leave." "I can't." "Why?" Lucien lifted one hand from the desk, cupping the back of her neck, his fingers tangling into her straight black hair. He pulled her forward just an inch, closing the agonizing gap between them. "Because the thought of Evan's hands on you makes the fire in my blood want to burn this entire city to ash."
created_at"2026-07-25T14:25:33.087Z" 7/25/2026, 2:25:33 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Lucien corrected softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.357
leniency0.714
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.048
74.85% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1193
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"precisely"
count1
2
adverb"lightly"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
4
adverb"very"
count1
5
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"precisely"
2"lightly"
3"softly"
4"very"
5"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
53.90% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1193
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"glinting"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"simmering"
count1
3
word"practiced ease"
count1
4
word"echoed"
count1
5
word"velvet"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"chill"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"electric"
count1
10
word"porcelain"
count1
highlights
0"glinting"
1"tracing"
2"simmering"
3"practiced ease"
4"echoed"
5"velvet"
6"warmth"
7"chill"
8"pulse"
9"electric"
10"porcelain"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences48
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences48
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences75
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1193
ratio0.001
matches
0"clack-clack-clack"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
87.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount722
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.25
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Moreau1
Lucien9
Aurora4
Earl1
Grey1
Latin1
Persian1
French1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Aurora"
3"Earl"
4"Grey"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore0.877
windowScore1
91.86% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a furnace against the autumn"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1193
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs39
mean30.59
std21.63
cv0.707
sampleLengths
08
133
253
35
445
528
61
744
815
964
1044
1114
1247
1348
145
154
166
1743
1851
1943
2041
2131
2236
2346
2457
2546
2631
272
285
2969
306
3174
3260
3327
342
352
361
3734
3822
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences48
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs114
matches
0"was trying"
66.67% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences75
ratio0.027
matches
0"The spatial dynamic of the small flat vanished; he dominated the room, drawing all the available heat toward his half-demon frame."
1"She knocked over a column of bound leather texts; they thudded onto the floor, fanning out around her ankles."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount729
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"expensive rain-soaked wool,"
1"pale, crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount20
adverbRatio0.027434842249657063
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.013717421124828532
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences75
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences75
mean15.91
std9.65
cv0.607
sampleLengths
08
113
220
324
416
513
65
727
818
923
105
111
1225
1319
145
1510
1617
1721
1826
1911
2010
2123
2214
2337
2410
2511
2621
2716
285
294
306
3114
3229
334
3420
3518
369
3726
3817
3923
407
4111
4212
4319
443
451
4621
4711
4830
4916
50.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.36
totalSentences75
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
ratio0
24.26% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences47
matches
0"His amber eye caught the"
1"He leaned slightly on his"
2"She gripped the edge of"
3"He stepped forward, forcing her"
4"She backed down the narrow"
5"He shed his wet coat,"
6"he murmured, sweeping a glance"
7"He stepped closer, his boots"
8"She lifted her chin, staring"
9"He reached out, his long"
10"His thumb brushed the soft"
11"She didn't pull away from"
12"Her heart hammered wildly against"
13"She walked past him, needing"
14"She knocked over a column"
15"She kicked them aside and"
16"Her voice cracked, betraying the"
17"He crossed the room in"
18"His voice rose, sharp and"
19"He rested both hands flat"
ratio0.489
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences47
matches
0"Aurora dragged the oak door"
1"The scent of ozone, expensive"
2"Lucien Moreau stood beneath the"
3"His amber eye caught the"
4"He leaned slightly on his"
5"She gripped the edge of"
6"He stepped forward, forcing her"
7"Lucien tipped his hat back"
8"Aurora ground her molars together."
9"She backed down the narrow"
10"The flat smelled of simmering"
11"Books stacked four feet high"
12"Ptolemy, the ginger tabby, slunk"
13"Lucien shut the heavy door,"
14"The crisp *clack-clack-clack* echoed like"
15"He shed his wet coat,"
16"he murmured, sweeping a glance"
17"Aurora crossed her arms, tucking"
18"He stepped closer, his boots"
19"The spatial dynamic of the"
ratio0.957
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences47
matches(empty)
ratio0
85.71% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences25
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He reached out, his long fingers hesitating before sliding beneath her jaw, resting lightly on her pulse point."
1"Lucien lifted one hand from the desk, cupping the back of her neck, his fingers tangling into her straight black hair."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags15
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"She didn't, though every instinct told her that leaning into it was a dangerous mistake"
1"Lucien corrected softly, his amber eye narrowing"
2"she snapped, her chest heaving as she glared into his face"
3"he breathed, his eyes dropping to her mouth"
54.76% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"Lucien corrected softly (correct)"
2"she snapped (snap)"
3"he breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.095
leniency0.19
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.19
75.9450%