Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCTNKAM9BZD2TNW0K9W49Q1

Run Details

Duration:
7m 29s
Cost:
$0.018141
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak standing stones of Richmond Grove loomed like rotten teeth against a sky that refused to darken properly. Rory Carter stepped through the boundary, her trainers crushing dead wildflowers that should have withered in November. They had not. Crimson poppies and white moonflowers bloomed in defiance, petals too bright, too insistent under a moon that looked painted on glass. She had come because the Heartstone burned against her collarbone since dawn, a deep crimson ember no larger than a thumbnail, strung on silver chain. By day she delivered dumplings for Yu-Fei; by night she chased the pulse of this artifact. It had led her here. To the pocket between Earth and Fae. Isolde’s grove. The wrongness hit before her second breath. The air smelled of rain that had not fallen. Her shoulders tightened beneath her jacket. Somewhere to her left, an owl called. The sound arrived a half-second late, as if the grove had swallowed the noise and spat it back out, chewed. "Right." Rory’s voice sounded flat, swallowed by moss. "Show yourself. I’m not in the mood for games." She walked deeper. The wildflowers parted not with wind—there was none—but with a motion that suggested fingers brushing through long hair. At the edge of her vision, the standing stones seemed closer than they had been moments before. She turned her head quickly. They stayed put. Ancient oak bark, carved with symbols worn smooth by centuries. But the space between them had narrowed. Or she had moved without realizing. The pendant warmed. Not gently. It seared through her shirt. Rory pulled it free. The crimson gem glowed with a faint inner light, pulsing in rhythm with something beneath the soil. A portal. Hel, or something adjacent. She had not planned to open it. She planned to map it. To understand why an unknown benefactor had pressed this stone into her palm three months ago, why her left wrist—where the crescent scar marked old childhood metal—itched whenever the gem flared, and why the shadow of Evan still lingered in her sleep like smoke. A rustle came from behind a stone. Not wind. Too deliberate. Rory spun. Nothing stood there but shadow and a cluster of bluebells that glowed faintly violet in the dark. "You’re not alone," she said, quieter now. Her breath fogged despite the mild air. The grove answered. Not with words. With absence. The distant traffic of Richmond Park vanished. The hum of London, usually a faint bass through the trees, cut out like a blade through wire. Silence pressed against her ears, thick and wet. She moved forward, each step careful. The flowers released a scent like burnt sugar and iron. Flowers should not smell of blood. Something shifted at the corner of her eye. A tall form, thinner than a man, taller than any tree should allow. She snapped her gaze toward it. Gone. Only a standing stone, its carved face seeming to watch her with hollowed eyes. Rory’s heart hammered. She forced her jaw loose. "I see you." She lied. "Come on, then. I’m tired. I’ve delivered noodles all day and fought with my mother over the phone about law school I do not want. Give me your worst." The pendant flared hotter. She clutched it, feeling the silver chain bite her palm. The crimson glow illuminated her fingers, her wrist, the small crescent scar. Then she heard the whisper. Not language. Not quite. A breath of syllables that slid under her skin, cold and intimate, like someone pressing their mouth to her ear in total darkness. Rory backed against a standing stone. The bark was damp, slick with something that was not dew. Her fingers found the crescent scar. It throbbed in time with the gem. The flowers around her tilted. All of them. Their heads turned in unison toward a point in the center of the clearing—a circle of bare earth where nothing grew, not even the relentless wildflowers. The soil there was black and cracked. The whisper came again, closer. From everywhere. Rory looked down at the Heartstone. Its crimson glow lit her face from below, turning her bright blue eyes into something fierce and frightened at once. "What do you want?" she asked it. Her voice shook only once. The gem did not answer. But the earth in the circle cracked wider, and something deep within exhaled. Rory did not run. She stepped closer. Her reason for coming crystallized in the wrongness. She had not come to open a portal. She had come to close one. The unknown benefactor had warned her—through notes, through dreams—that the Grove was bleeding. That time moved differently here for a reason. An hour inside could be minutes outside, or days. She had lost enough time already. To Evan. To London. To a life that was not hers. The shape at the edge of her vision stepped into moonlight that should not have reached it. Not human. Not quite. It wore the suggestion of a body—limbs too long, joints wrong, a face like a mask carved from pale oak bark. Its eyes reflected the crimson glow of the pendant. It did not move closer. It waited. Rory’s breath came shallow and fast. She raised the Heartstone, letting its warmth fill her chest. "I’m Aurora Carter," she said. "Rory. And I’m not leaving until you tell me why you dragged me here." The silence that followed was heavier than the first. Then the flowers screamed. Not with sound, but with motion—sudden, violent, petals tearing from stems in a spiral that moved outward from the bare circle. The whisper became a word, distorted, hungry. Rory’s eyes widened. The crescent scar on her wrist burned like a brand. The standing stones hummed. The presence—or whatever wore that shape—tilted its head. In a voice like roots grinding through old soil, it spoke one word. "Malphora." Rory’s blood turned cold behind her ribs. That was not her name. Not the one she went by. But the pendant flared blinding crimson, and she understood, with a clarity that rooted her to the mossy earth, that the grove had called her by a name she had not earned yet. She did not move. She did not blink. The wrongness was not building anymore. It had arrived.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.556
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
90.51% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1054
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.56% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1054
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"loomed"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"whisper"
count3
4
word"throbbed"
count1
5
word"crystallized"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"loomed"
1"pulse"
2"silence"
3"whisper"
4"throbbed"
5"crystallized"
6"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences119
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences119
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences123
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen46
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1043
ratio0
matches(empty)
83.33% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions6
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"In a voice like roots grinding through old soil, it spoke one word."
93.65% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount976
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.13
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Grove2
Carter1
November1
Heartstone3
Yu-Fei1
Earth1
Fae1
Evan2
Park1
London2
Rory11
persons
0"Grove"
1"Carter"
2"Heartstone"
3"Evan"
4"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"November"
2"Park"
3"London"
globalScore0.936
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences68
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"seemed closer than they had been moments before"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.959
wordCount1043
matches
0"Not with sound, but with motion"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount2
totalSentences123
matches
0"dreams—that the"
1"wore that shape"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean24.83
std21.39
cv0.861
sampleLengths
060
155
27
342
417
569
693
77
84
919
1014
113
1238
1322
1442
158
1634
1726
185
1927
2030
2141
227
2338
2418
257
2669
2717
2841
2916
3019
319
324
3328
3413
354
3621
371
3851
398
406
413
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences119
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs163
matches
0"was bleeding"
1"was not building"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences123
ratio0.065
matches
0"By day she delivered dumplings for Yu-Fei; by night she chased the pulse of this artifact."
1"The wildflowers parted not with wind—there was none—but with a motion that suggested fingers brushing through long hair."
2"To understand why an unknown benefactor had pressed this stone into her palm three months ago, why her left wrist—where the crescent scar marked old childhood metal—itched whenever the gem flared, and why the shadow of Evan still lingered in her sleep like smoke."
3"Their heads turned in unison toward a point in the center of the clearing—a circle of bare earth where nothing grew, not even the relentless wildflowers."
4"The unknown benefactor had warned her—through notes, through dreams—that the Grove was bleeding."
5"It wore the suggestion of a body—limbs too long, joints wrong, a face like a mask carved from pale oak bark."
6"Not with sound, but with motion—sudden, violent, petals tearing from stems in a spiral that moved outward from the bare circle."
7"The presence—or whatever wore that shape—tilted its head."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount989
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.029322548028311426
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.008088978766430738
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences123
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences123
mean8.48
std7.11
cv0.838
sampleLengths
019
117
23
321
425
516
65
77
82
97
109
116
127
1320
148
159
163
1718
1817
195
203
2110
227
236
243
252
265
274
2817
292
304
317
325
3344
347
352
362
372
3817
397
407
413
423
432
447
4518
468
476
4810
496
44.99% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3333333333333333
totalSentences123
uniqueOpeners41
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences101
matches
0"Somewhere to her left, an"
1"Only a standing stone, its"
2"Then she heard the whisper."
3"Then the flowers screamed."
ratio0.04
85.35% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount34
totalSentences101
matches
0"They had not."
1"She had come because the"
2"It had led her here."
3"Her shoulders tightened beneath her"
4"She walked deeper."
5"She turned her head quickly."
6"They stayed put."
7"It seared through her shirt."
8"She had not planned to"
9"She planned to map it."
10"she said, quieter now"
11"Her breath fogged despite the"
12"She moved forward, each step"
13"She snapped her gaze toward"
14"She forced her jaw loose."
15"She clutched it, feeling the"
16"Her fingers found the crescent"
17"It throbbed in time with"
18"Their heads turned in unison"
19"Its crimson glow lit her"
ratio0.337
59.01% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount81
totalSentences101
matches
0"The oak standing stones of"
1"Rory Carter stepped through the"
2"They had not."
3"Crimson poppies and white moonflowers"
4"She had come because the"
5"It had led her here."
6"The wrongness hit before her"
7"The air smelled of rain"
8"Her shoulders tightened beneath her"
9"The sound arrived a half-second"
10"Rory’s voice sounded flat, swallowed"
11"She walked deeper."
12"The wildflowers parted not with"
13"She turned her head quickly."
14"They stayed put."
15"The pendant warmed."
16"It seared through her shirt."
17"Rory pulled it free."
18"The crimson gem glowed with"
19"Hel, or something adjacent."
ratio0.802
100.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount3
totalSentences101
matches
0"To the pocket between Earth"
1"To understand why an unknown"
2"To a life that was"
ratio0.03
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Crimson poppies and white moonflowers bloomed in defiance, petals too bright, too insistent under a moon that looked painted on glass."
1"The sound arrived a half-second late, as if the grove had swallowed the noise and spat it back out, chewed."
2"A breath of syllables that slid under her skin, cold and intimate, like someone pressing their mouth to her ear in total darkness."
3"Not with sound, but with motion—sudden, violent, petals tearing from stems in a spiral that moved outward from the bare circle."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
38.89% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She lied (lie)"
dialogueSentences9
tagDensity0.444
leniency0.889
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.222
86.7286%