| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 14 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "His amber eye narrowed slightly [slightly]" | | 1 | "Lucien said smoothly [smoothly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.341 | | leniency | 0.683 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.098 | |
| 81.45% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1348 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "precisely" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "completely" | | 3 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 48.07% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1348 | | totalAiIsms | 14 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "pulse" | | 1 | "rhythmic" | | 2 | "chaotic" | | 3 | "quickened" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "silence" | | 6 | "abyssal" | | 7 | "tracing" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "down her spine" |
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| 66.67% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 2 | | maxInWindow | 2 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
| | 1 | | label | "hung in the air" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "eyes narrowed" | | 1 | "hung in the air" |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 59 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 86 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 57 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 1 | | totalWords | 1344 | | ratio | 0.001 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 12 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 88.96% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 27 | | wordCount | 983 | | uniqueNames | 7 | | maxNameDensity | 1.22 | | worstName | "Lucien" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Lucien" | | discoveredNames | | Moreau | 1 | | Marseille | 1 | | Lucien | 12 | | French | 1 | | Aurora | 10 | | Underworld | 1 | | London | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Moreau" | | 1 | "Lucien" | | 2 | "Aurora" |
| | places | | 0 | "Marseille" | | 1 | "Underworld" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.89 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1344 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 51 | | mean | 26.35 | | std | 19.34 | | cv | 0.734 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 49 | | 2 | 70 | | 3 | 11 | | 4 | 36 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 15 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 48 | | 9 | 5 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 32 | | 12 | 21 | | 13 | 31 | | 14 | 33 | | 15 | 8 | | 16 | 28 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 45 | | 20 | 38 | | 21 | 5 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 13 | | 24 | 56 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 40 | | 27 | 61 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 38 | | 30 | 38 | | 31 | 24 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 7 | | 34 | 51 | | 35 | 30 | | 36 | 33 | | 37 | 14 | | 38 | 3 | | 39 | 8 | | 40 | 39 | | 41 | 2 | | 42 | 2 | | 43 | 65 | | 44 | 7 | | 45 | 71 | | 46 | 30 | | 47 | 41 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 26 |
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| 99.32% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 59 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 145 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 4 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 86 | | ratio | 0.058 | | matches | | 0 | "Under the flickering overhead bulb, his amber left eye picked up the yellow light; his right eye remained a cavern of solid black." | | 1 | "The floorboards didn't groan beneath his weight; he moved with the unnerving, fluid silence of his father's bloodline." | | 2 | "His fingers hovered in the space between them for a fraction of a second—long enough for Aurora to catch the pale silver rings biting into his knuckles—before he brushed the back of his hand against her cheekbone." | | 3 | "It wasn't gentle; it carried the violent friction of six months of silence, the taste of damp air, iron, and the bitter clove on his tongue." | | 4 | "He let his cane drop—it hit the floorboards with a dull wooden thud—and wrapped both arms around her waist, lifting her slightly until her toes barely scraped the floor." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 991 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 24 | | adverbRatio | 0.024217961654894045 | | lyAdverbCount | 9 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.009081735620585268 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 86 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 86 | | mean | 15.63 | | std | 9.24 | | cv | 0.592 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 25 | | 2 | 24 | | 3 | 6 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 21 | | 6 | 23 | | 7 | 11 | | 8 | 21 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 17 | | 11 | 15 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 32 | | 14 | 10 | | 15 | 16 | | 16 | 22 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 17 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 13 | | 22 | 8 | | 23 | 19 | | 24 | 12 | | 25 | 27 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 8 | | 28 | 20 | | 29 | 8 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 17 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 18 | | 34 | 20 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 11 | | 37 | 5 | | 38 | 4 | | 39 | 13 | | 40 | 56 | | 41 | 4 | | 42 | 26 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 8 | | 45 | 37 | | 46 | 16 | | 47 | 3 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 20 |
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| 46.90% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.3372093023255814 | | totalSentences | 86 | | uniqueOpeners | 29 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 40.69% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 26 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "She wiped her thumb across" | | 1 | "He rested both hands over" | | 2 | "He smelled of damp cedar," | | 3 | "He didn't offer to take" | | 4 | "His gaze swept the flat," | | 5 | "Her black hair fell over" | | 6 | "She gestured toward the chaotic" | | 7 | "He shifted his grip on" | | 8 | "His amber eye narrowed slightly," | | 9 | "He stopped just outside her" | | 10 | "She stepped out of her" | | 11 | "His fingers hovered in the" | | 12 | "His skin felt unnaturally warm," | | 13 | "She didn't move away." | | 14 | "Her blue eyes locked onto" | | 15 | "he murmured, using the name" | | 16 | "She grabbed his wrist, her" | | 17 | "He twisted his wrist within" | | 18 | "He pinned her hand between" | | 19 | "He squeezed her hand, his" |
| | ratio | 0.448 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 56 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | | 0 | "The third brass deadbolt yielded" | | 1 | "Aurora pulled the door inward," | | 2 | "She wiped her thumb across" | | 3 | "Lucien Moreau stood on the" | | 4 | "Rain slicked his platinum hair" | | 5 | "He rested both hands over" | | 6 | "Lucien stepped past her into" | | 7 | "He smelled of damp cedar," | | 8 | "Aurora slammed the door shut," | | 9 | "Ptolemy trotted out from the" | | 10 | "The cat circled Lucien’s leather" | | 11 | "Lucien unbuttoned his coat, revealing" | | 12 | "He didn't offer to take" | | 13 | "His gaze swept the flat," | | 14 | "Aurora leaned her spine against" | | 15 | "Her black hair fell over" | | 16 | "Lucien said, turning to face" | | 17 | "She gestured toward the chaotic" | | 18 | "He shifted his grip on" | | 19 | "His amber eye narrowed slightly," |
| | ratio | 0.966 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 58 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 67.67% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 38 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "He twisted his wrist within her grasp, catching her hand and lacing his fingers through hers before she could pull back." | | 1 | "Aurora felt the heat of his palm seeping through her skin, spreading up her arm to settle in the pit of her stomach." | | 2 | "He backed her up against the heavy oak panel of the door, his weight pressing her flat, his fingers digging into the small of her back through her cotton shirt." | | 3 | "Aurora dragged her hands up his throat, cupping his jaw, feeling the slight prickle of dark stubble along his skin." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 14 | | uselessAdditionCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Lucien said, turning to face her" | | 1 | "She grabbed, her grip tight over his pulse point" | | 2 | "Lucien conceded, his amber eye flashing with a sudden, dangerous light" | | 3 | "Aurora demanded, her voice dropping lower, raspy around the edges" | | 4 | "he said, his voice a low vibration against her skin," |
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| 52.44% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 8 | | fancyCount | 4 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "he murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Lucien conceded (concede)" | | 2 | "Aurora demanded (demand)" | | 3 | "she whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 41 | | tagDensity | 0.195 | | leniency | 0.39 | | rawRatio | 0.5 | | effectiveRatio | 0.195 | |