Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCTQCG85E0XB33H6HCWFKR8

Run Details

Duration:
21.3s
Cost:
$0.025044
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third brass deadbolt yielded with a heavy clunk that rattled the glass panel above the doorframe. Aurora pulled the door inward, the scent of cardamom and roasted cumin rising from the curry house below to mix with the damp stairwell draft. She wiped her thumb across the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, a nervous tick she caught herself doing only when her pulse spiked. Lucien Moreau stood on the landing. Rain slicked his platinum hair back over his scalp, clinging in droplets to the shoulders of his charcoal wool coat. He rested both hands over the rounded head of his ivory cane, his posture straight despite the five flights of stairs. Under the flickering overhead bulb, his amber left eye picked up the yellow light; his right eye remained a cavern of solid black. "You took seven seconds longer than usual with the middle lock." Lucien stepped past her into the hall before she gave permission, the tip of his cane clicking against the scuffed floorboards. He smelled of damp cedar, ozone, and the bitter clove tobacco he imported from Marseille. Aurora slammed the door shut, throwing all three bolts back into their strikes with sharp, rhythmic thuds. "Three o'clock on a Tuesday, Lucien. The deadbolts exist precisely to keep uninvited half-demons out." Ptolemy trotted out from the kitchen, his striped tabby tail upright like a radio antenna. The cat circled Lucien’s leather shoes once, sniffed the hem of his trousers, and let out a flat, unimpressed meow before retreating to a stack of leather-bound folios on the dining chair. Lucien unbuttoned his coat, revealing the fitted suit vest beneath. He didn't offer to take the garment off, nor did he look for a coat rack. His gaze swept the flat, lingering on the cluttered dining table where parchment sheets and open research volumes overlapped like fallen leaves. "You changed the locks again." "I changed everything." Aurora leaned her spine against the heavy timber of the door, folding her arms across her chest. Her black hair fell over her left shoulder, framing the sharp angles of her jaw. "I left word at the Golden Empress," Lucien said, turning to face her. "Yu-Fei told me you took the night off." "I took the night off to sleep, not to entertain ghosts from Marseille." She gestured toward the chaotic table. "Or fixers who disappear for six months without leaving a forwarding address." "Six months and four days." He shifted his grip on the ivory cane, the faint scrape of metal against bone signaling the blade concealed inside the shaft. "And I was not in Marseille." "I don't care if you were in Avaros." "You do." His amber eye narrowed slightly, the lone ring of gold iris tracking the quickened rhythm of her breathing. "Your pulse is fluttering against your collarbone, Rory." "Do not call me that." The name sliced through the quiet room, sharp enough to make the cat turn his ears back. Lucien took two deliberate steps toward her. The floorboards didn't groan beneath his weight; he moved with the unnerving, fluid silence of his father's bloodline. He stopped just outside her arm's reach, close enough that the heat radiating from his damp coat reached her skin. "You left London without taking your chest from the vault," Lucien said, his voice dropping an octave, rich with the smooth, rolling cadence of his French accent. "You left three thousand pounds in uncollected fees on my desk." "I left what was yours." "You left *us* uncollected." Aurora barked a quiet, humorless laugh, tilting her head back against the wood. "There was no 'us' to collect, Moreau. There was an arrangement. You traded information, I delivered packages that didn't explode or bleed through the brown paper. Then you decided to play hero in an alley off Whitechapel, got yourself half-gutted by an Avarosian hound, and handed me off to Eva like a piece of salvaged luggage." "I was protecting you." "You were benching me." She stepped out of her slouch, closing the distance between them until her chin was tilted up to meet his uneven gaze. "You didn't trust me to stand at your back when the blood started splashing." Lucien’s hand left the head of his cane. His fingers hovered in the space between them for a fraction of a second—long enough for Aurora to catch the pale silver rings biting into his knuckles—before he brushed the back of his hand against her cheekbone. His skin felt unnaturally warm, a sharp contrast to the cold rain clinging to his suit. Aurora didn't flinch. She didn't move away. Her blue eyes locked onto his black one, searching the dark abyssal iris for the reflection she knew wasn't there. "I trusted you with my life, Laila," he murmured, using the name he had given her during their first winter in the Underworld. "I did not trust myself to keep you safe while my own blood burned out." "Safety is a lie sold by cowards and insurance adjusters." She grabbed his wrist, her grip tight over his pulse point. The crescent scar on her thumb pressed directly into his tendon. "I never asked you for safety." "No," Lucien conceded, his amber eye flashing with a sudden, dangerous light. "You asked for truth. And you ran the moment I offered it." "You offered a leash." "I offered a seat at the table." He twisted his wrist within her grasp, catching her hand and lacing his fingers through hers before she could pull back. He pinned her hand between them, right over the silver buttons of his vest. Beneath her palm, his heart beat with the slow, heavy thud of something ancient and half-monstrous. Ptolemy leapt off his stack of books, landing on the floor with a soft thump, and padded toward the kitchen, completely ignoring the pair standing frozen in the narrow hall. "Why are you here, Lucien?" Aurora demanded, her voice dropping lower, raspy around the edges. "Eva will be back from the market in an hour. She won't be as polite about the rug." "Eva is in Oxford until Thursday," Lucien said smoothly. "I made sure of it." Aurora's eyes narrowed. "You bribed her with those seventeenth-century court transcripts." "I provided research material relevant to her interests." He squeezed her hand, his thumb tracing the faint crescent curve above her thumb joint. "Which leaves us fifty-four minutes before I have an appointment with the court broker in Soho." "Then leave." "Make me." The challenge hung in the air, thick and sticky as rain-soaked wool. Aurora felt the heat of his palm seeping through her skin, spreading up her arm to settle in the pit of her stomach. The six months of anger, the sleepless nights spent looking out the flat's narrow window at the wet London asphalt, condensed into a sharp, tight knot right behind her ribs. She dragged him down by his lapels. Lucien let out a low, caught breath against her lips a second before she kissed him. It wasn't gentle; it carried the violent friction of six months of silence, the taste of damp air, iron, and the bitter clove on his tongue. He let his cane drop—it hit the floorboards with a dull wooden thud—and wrapped both arms around her waist, lifting her slightly until her toes barely scraped the floor. He backed her up against the heavy oak panel of the door, his weight pressing her flat, his fingers digging into the small of her back through her cotton shirt. Aurora dragged her hands up his throat, cupping his jaw, feeling the slight prickle of dark stubble along his skin. She pulled back just enough to break the seal of their mouths, her breath coming fast and ragged against his cheek. "You're still an arrogant bastard," she whispered. Lucien’s mouth found the sensitive curve where her neck met her shoulder, his teeth grazing the skin softly enough to send a shiver down her spine. "And you," he said, his voice a low vibration against her skin, "are still holding my wrist hostage."
created_at"2026-07-25T14:26:34.128Z" 7/25/2026, 2:26:34 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"His amber eye narrowed slightly [slightly]"
1"Lucien said smoothly [smoothly]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.341
leniency0.683
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.098
81.45% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1348
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"precisely"
count1
1
adverb"slightly"
count2
2
adverb"completely"
count1
3
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"precisely"
1"slightly"
2"completely"
3"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
48.07% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1348
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"pulse"
count3
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"chaotic"
count1
3
word"quickened"
count1
4
word"weight"
count2
5
word"silence"
count2
6
word"abyssal"
count1
7
word"tracing"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"down her spine"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"rhythmic"
2"chaotic"
3"quickened"
4"weight"
5"silence"
6"abyssal"
7"tracing"
8"stomach"
9"down her spine"
66.67% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches2
maxInWindow2
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
1
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
1"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences59
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen57
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1344
ratio0.001
matches
0"us"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
88.96% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions27
wordCount983
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.22
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Moreau1
Marseille1
Lucien12
French1
Aurora10
Underworld1
London1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
2"Aurora"
places
0"Marseille"
1"Underworld"
2"London"
globalScore0.89
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1344
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean26.35
std19.34
cv0.734
sampleLengths
017
149
270
311
436
517
615
747
848
95
103
1132
1221
1331
1433
158
1628
175
1817
1945
2038
215
224
2313
2456
254
2640
2761
2827
2938
3038
3124
324
337
3451
3530
3633
3714
383
398
4039
412
422
4365
447
4571
4630
4741
487
4926
99.32% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences59
matches
0"was tilted"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs145
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount3
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences86
ratio0.058
matches
0"Under the flickering overhead bulb, his amber left eye picked up the yellow light; his right eye remained a cavern of solid black."
1"The floorboards didn't groan beneath his weight; he moved with the unnerving, fluid silence of his father's bloodline."
2"His fingers hovered in the space between them for a fraction of a second—long enough for Aurora to catch the pale silver rings biting into his knuckles—before he brushed the back of his hand against her cheekbone."
3"It wasn't gentle; it carried the violent friction of six months of silence, the taste of damp air, iron, and the bitter clove on his tongue."
4"He let his cane drop—it hit the floorboards with a dull wooden thud—and wrapped both arms around her waist, lifting her slightly until her toes barely scraped the floor."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount991
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.024217961654894045
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.009081735620585268
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean15.63
std9.24
cv0.592
sampleLengths
017
125
224
36
420
521
623
711
821
915
1017
1115
1215
1332
1410
1516
1622
175
183
1917
2015
2113
228
2319
2412
2527
266
278
2820
298
305
3117
327
3318
3420
3527
3611
375
384
3913
4056
414
4226
4314
448
4537
4616
473
484
4920
46.90% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3372093023255814
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners29
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
40.69% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences58
matches
0"She wiped her thumb across"
1"He rested both hands over"
2"He smelled of damp cedar,"
3"He didn't offer to take"
4"His gaze swept the flat,"
5"Her black hair fell over"
6"She gestured toward the chaotic"
7"He shifted his grip on"
8"His amber eye narrowed slightly,"
9"He stopped just outside her"
10"She stepped out of her"
11"His fingers hovered in the"
12"His skin felt unnaturally warm,"
13"She didn't move away."
14"Her blue eyes locked onto"
15"he murmured, using the name"
16"She grabbed his wrist, her"
17"He twisted his wrist within"
18"He pinned her hand between"
19"He squeezed her hand, his"
ratio0.448
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences58
matches
0"The third brass deadbolt yielded"
1"Aurora pulled the door inward,"
2"She wiped her thumb across"
3"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
4"Rain slicked his platinum hair"
5"He rested both hands over"
6"Lucien stepped past her into"
7"He smelled of damp cedar,"
8"Aurora slammed the door shut,"
9"Ptolemy trotted out from the"
10"The cat circled Lucien’s leather"
11"Lucien unbuttoned his coat, revealing"
12"He didn't offer to take"
13"His gaze swept the flat,"
14"Aurora leaned her spine against"
15"Her black hair fell over"
16"Lucien said, turning to face"
17"She gestured toward the chaotic"
18"He shifted his grip on"
19"His amber eye narrowed slightly,"
ratio0.966
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
ratio0
67.67% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"He twisted his wrist within her grasp, catching her hand and lacing his fingers through hers before she could pull back."
1"Aurora felt the heat of his palm seeping through her skin, spreading up her arm to settle in the pit of her stomach."
2"He backed her up against the heavy oak panel of the door, his weight pressing her flat, his fingers digging into the small of her back through her cotton shirt."
3"Aurora dragged her hands up his throat, cupping his jaw, feeling the slight prickle of dark stubble along his skin."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"Lucien said, turning to face her"
1"She grabbed, her grip tight over his pulse point"
2"Lucien conceded, his amber eye flashing with a sudden, dangerous light"
3"Aurora demanded, her voice dropping lower, raspy around the edges"
4"he said, his voice a low vibration against her skin,"
52.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"Lucien conceded (concede)"
2"Aurora demanded (demand)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.195
leniency0.39
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.195
73.0722%