Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCTQW6Y9F6357VF0F2XHYPS

Run Details

Duration:
26.2s
Cost:
$0.027436
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt gave a heavy, metallic clack, the iron tongue snapping back inside the frame. Aurora lifted the brass latch, expecting the courier from the Golden Empress or Eva returning with another armful of smuggled codices. Instead, the door opened on Lucien Moreau. He stood in the dim, narrow stairwell like a shadow painted in charcoal and silver. His platinum blond hair was slicked back, not a single strand displaced by the damp autumn chill clinging to Brick Lane, and his tailored three-piece suit looked as though it had never encountered a smudge of city grime. He rested both hands over the rounded head of his ivory-handled cane, his posture deceptively relaxed, his weight pitched forward just enough to take up all the air in the threshold. "You took your time with the locks," Lucien said. His voice was a low velvet rasp, carrying the faintest trace of a southern French cadence that sent an involuntary ripple down her spine. "I was beginning to think you’d added a fourth." Rory’s hand froze on the edge of the door frame. Her pulse hammered against her throat, wild and traitorous, but she forced her shoulders down, wrapping her armor tightly around herself. She knew better than to show blood around a fixer, especially one who doubled as a half-demon. "Three is enough to keep out most lingering damp," she said, her voice cool and steady despite the heat blooming behind her ribs. "Apparently not all of it." "Brilliant as ever, Rory." His eyes met hers—one a sharp, gleaming amber that caught the bare bulb above the landing, the other an abyss of solid, lightless black. That heterochromatic gaze had undone her more times than she cared to remember, reading every shift in her expression before she could bury it. He didn't wait for an invitation. He stepped past her into the flat, the faint scent of rain, sandalwood, and ozone sweeping over her as he cleared the threshold. Rory closed the door and turned the locks again, if only to buy her hands three seconds of activity. "You shouldn't be here, Lucien. We said everything that needed saying six weeks ago in Soho." "You said things," Lucien corrected smoothly, his cane ticking against the worn floorboards as he navigated the narrow hallway. "I listened. There is a distinct difference." He stopped in the center of the main room, taking in the chaotic landscape of Eva’s flat. Books were piled three feet high beside the sofa; ancient, crackling scrolls overflowed from cardboard boxes, and the rich, pungent aroma of cardamom and cumin drifted up through the floorboards from the curry house below. Ptolemy, the battered orange tabby who usually hated everyone on sight, immediately stalked out from beneath a mahogany desk. The cat wound himself around Lucien’s hand-tailored trouser legs, purring loudly. Lucien leaned down without a glance, brushing two long, pale fingers beneath the cat’s chin with practiced ease. "Traitor," Rory muttered to the cat. "Animals have an instinct for quality, *ma chérie*," Lucien said softly, straightening up. His black eye seemed to drink in the ambient light of the room, while the amber one remained fixed on her face. "You look tired." "I work twelve-hour shifts delivering duck and fried rice, and then I spend my nights trying to translate third-century Aramaic," Rory said, crossing her arms over her chest. She pulled her sleeves down over her hands, her fingers instinctively brushing the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. "I’m allowed to look tired. What do you want, Luc?" The nickname slipped out before she could stop it. It hung in the space between them—a relic from two months ago, when they hadn't been standing on opposite sides of a quiet, bleeding rift. Lucien’s mouth flexed, the corner dipping into something sharp and pained before his practiced composure sealed it away. He set his cane against the side of an overstuffed armchair and slowly removed his leather gloves, pulling them off finger by finger. "I need to know why you stopped returning my calls," he said. The banter had evaporated. The tone beneath his words was raw, stripped of the charm he sold to the highest bidders in London’s underbelly. "Because I don't like being played," Rory said, stepping forward. The cool-headed logic she prided herself on felt brittle now, threatened by the sheer, imposing reality of him standing in her space. "You used me to get to the Avaros archives. You let me think—" She cut herself off, swallowing the lump in her throat. "It doesn't matter what I thought. You got what you wanted. You always do." Lucien took a step toward her. He didn't move like a human; there was a silent, predatory fluidity to his frame that reminded her exactly what his father had been. "Is that really what you believe?" "It’s what the evidence suggests," she shot back, raising her chin. "I’m a pre-law drop-out, Lucien. I know how to look at the facts. You needed a key, I was convenient, and when the dust settled, you vanished back into your office with a suit full of secrets." "I vanished because if I had stayed, my father’s court would have hunted you to the bottom of the Thames," he snarled softly, the amber in his right eye flaring like a struck match. The air in the flat grew suddenly warm, the faint smell of sulfur rising over the scent of rain and spices. "I left you to keep you alive, Rory. Not because you were convenient." The absolute conviction in his voice hit her like a physical blow. Rory took a half-step back, her hip catching the edge of the dining table, knocking a stack of research papers into a messy flutter on the floor. Neither of them looked down at the papers. Lucien closed the remaining distance between them until he was standing inches away. He was taller than her by five inches, his broad shoulders casting a shadow over her face, but she refused to drop her gaze. Up close, she could see the dark smudges under his eyes—the subtle, human cracks in his immaculate facade. "You think so little of me," he whispered, his breath warm against her cheek. "You think I could hold you in the dark, touch you until you couldn't remember your own name, and walk away because of a manuscript?" "You didn't give me a choice," she breathed, her pulse thumping wildly in her ears. The anger in her chest was dissolving, replacing itself with the heavy, suffocating weight of the attraction that had drawn them together in the first place—a dangerous, electric thing that neither of them had the power to put out. "You never give me a choice. You manage people, Lucien. You broker deals. You don't let anyone in." "I let you in," he said. His voice dropped to a gravelly murmur, all polished armor stripped away. Slowly, carefully, as if approaching a wild animal that might bolt, he raised his right hand. His long, pale fingers hovered near her face before gently tucking a strand of her shoulder-length black hair behind her ear. His knuckles brushed the shell of her ear, then slid down the curve of her jawline. His touch was burning hot—the infernal heat beneath his skin coming through, unshielded. Rory gasped softly, her eyes fluttering shut for a fraction of a second at the contact. Every nerve ending in her body remembered him. Remembered the bite of his teeth against her collarbone, the taste of gin on his lips, the way he breathed her name into the dark when he thought she was already asleep. When she opened her eyes, he was watching her, his amber eye fierce and bright, his black eye unfathomable. "I tried to stay away," Lucien admitted, his thumb tracing the soft line of her lower lip. "I made it six weeks. I sat in my flat, I managed my quiet little empire, and every single room smelled like copper and ashes because you weren't in it." "Lucien..." Her voice was a bare whisper, torn between the caution that had kept her alive after Cardiff and the terrifying, magnetic pull of the man standing in front of her. "Tell me to leave," he murmured, his face dipping closer, his mouth hovering a breath away from hers. "Tell me you don't want this, Rory. Look me in the eye and tell me to lock those three deadbolts behind me, and I will go. I swear it." Rory looked into his eyes—the gold and the dark, the demon and the man—and felt the thin thread of her resolve snap entirely. She reached up, her hand closing around his silk lapel, her fingers tangling in the heavy fabric to pull him down the final inch. Her crescent-scarred wrist pressed against his neck, feeling the heavy, rapid thud of his heart matching her own. "Don't you dare leave," she whispered against his lips. Lucien let out a low, shuddering breath and pulled her against him, his mouth claiming hers with a dark, desperate heat that burned away six weeks of silence in a single stroke.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:26:50.213Z" 7/25/2026, 2:26:50 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
42.11% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount3
adverbTags
0"Lucien corrected smoothly [smoothly]"
1"Lucien said softly [softly]"
2"he snarled softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.576
leniency1
rawRatio0.158
effectiveRatio0.158
67.34% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1531
totalAiIsmAdverbs10
found
0
adverb"tightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count3
2
adverb"slowly"
count2
3
adverb"really"
count1
4
adverb"suddenly"
count1
5
adverb"carefully"
count1
6
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"tightly"
1"softly"
2"slowly"
3"really"
4"suddenly"
5"carefully"
6"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
31.42% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1531
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"velvet"
count1
3
word"down her spine"
count1
4
word"pulse"
count2
5
word"gleaming"
count1
6
word"navigated"
count1
7
word"chaotic"
count1
8
word"practiced ease"
count1
9
word"charm"
count1
10
word"imposing"
count1
11
word"facade"
count1
12
word"electric"
count1
13
word"tracing"
count1
14
word"whisper"
count1
15
word"magnetic"
count1
16
word"resolve"
count1
17
word"silk"
count1
18
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"weight"
2"velvet"
3"down her spine"
4"pulse"
5"gleaming"
6"navigated"
7"chaotic"
8"practiced ease"
9"charm"
10"imposing"
11"facade"
12"electric"
13"tracing"
14"whisper"
15"magnetic"
16"resolve"
17"silk"
18"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences70
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences70
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords2
totalWords1524
ratio0.001
matches
0"ma chérie"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount1166
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.94
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Golden1
Empress1
Eva2
Lucien11
Moreau1
Brick1
Lane1
French1
London1
Cardiff1
Rory8
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Rory"
places
0"Golden"
1"Brick"
2"Lane"
3"London"
4"Cardiff"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"as if approaching a wild animal that might bolt, he raised his right hand"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1524
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
87.77% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs38
mean40.11
std18.34
cv0.457
sampleLengths
037
17
284
342
448
528
652
729
835
926
1052
1148
126
1338
1457
1534
1641
1736
1869
1936
2048
2168
2239
238
2455
2539
2672
2718
2866
2956
3019
3147
3231
3347
3423
3542
369
3732
95.24% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences70
matches
0"was slicked"
1"were piled"
49.34% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount4
totalVerbs177
matches
0"was standing"
1"was dissolving"
2"was burning"
3"was watching"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount7
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences84
ratio0.095
matches
0"\"Brilliant as ever, Rory.\" His eyes met hers—one a sharp, gleaming amber that caught the bare bulb above the landing, the other an abyss of solid, lightless black."
1"Books were piled three feet high beside the sofa; ancient, crackling scrolls overflowed from cardboard boxes, and the rich, pungent aroma of cardamom and cumin drifted up through the floorboards from the curry house below."
2"It hung in the space between them—a relic from two months ago, when they hadn't been standing on opposite sides of a quiet, bleeding rift."
3"He didn't move like a human; there was a silent, predatory fluidity to his frame that reminded her exactly what his father had been."
4"Up close, she could see the dark smudges under his eyes—the subtle, human cracks in his immaculate facade."
5"The anger in her chest was dissolving, replacing itself with the heavy, suffocating weight of the attraction that had drawn them together in the first place—a dangerous, electric thing that neither of them had the power to put out."
6"His touch was burning hot—the infernal heat beneath his skin coming through, unshielded."
7"Rory looked into his eyes—the gold and the dark, the demon and the man—and felt the thin thread of her resolve snap entirely."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1182
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount42
adverbRatio0.03553299492385787
lyAdverbCount22
lyAdverbRatio0.018612521150592216
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean18.14
std8.56
cv0.472
sampleLengths
016
121
27
315
438
531
69
724
89
910
1021
1117
1223
135
1428
1524
166
1723
1819
1916
2019
217
2217
2335
2419
2511
2618
276
2813
2922
303
3128
3219
3310
349
3525
3618
3723
3812
394
4020
4110
4222
4323
4414
456
4624
476
4811
4937
47.62% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.35714285714285715
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners30
99.50% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences67
matches
0"Instead, the door opened on"
1"Slowly, carefully, as if approaching"
ratio0.03
34.93% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences67
matches
0"He stood in the dim,"
1"His platinum blond hair was"
2"He rested both hands over"
3"His voice was a low"
4"Her pulse hammered against her"
5"She knew better than to"
6"she said, her voice cool"
7"His eyes met hers—one a"
8"He didn't wait for an"
9"He stepped past her into"
10"He stopped in the center"
11"His black eye seemed to"
12"She pulled her sleeves down"
13"It hung in the space"
14"He set his cane against"
15"She cut herself off, swallowing"
16"He didn't move like a"
17"she shot back, raising her"
18"he snarled softly, the amber"
19"He was taller than her"
ratio0.463
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount62
totalSentences67
matches
0"The third deadbolt gave a"
1"Aurora lifted the brass latch,"
2"He stood in the dim,"
3"His platinum blond hair was"
4"He rested both hands over"
5"His voice was a low"
6"Rory’s hand froze on the"
7"Her pulse hammered against her"
8"She knew better than to"
9"she said, her voice cool"
10"His eyes met hers—one a"
11"That heterochromatic gaze had undone"
12"He didn't wait for an"
13"He stepped past her into"
14"Rory closed the door and"
15"Lucien corrected smoothly, his cane"
16"He stopped in the center"
17"Books were piled three feet"
18"Ptolemy, the battered orange tabby"
19"The cat wound himself around"
ratio0.925
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
12.99% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences44
technicalSentenceCount8
matches
0"His platinum blond hair was slicked back, not a single strand displaced by the damp autumn chill clinging to Brick Lane, and his tailored three-piece suit looke…"
1"His voice was a low velvet rasp, carrying the faintest trace of a southern French cadence that sent an involuntary ripple down her spine."
2"Rory took a half-step back, her hip catching the edge of the dining table, knocking a stack of research papers into a messy flutter on the floor."
3"The anger in her chest was dissolving, replacing itself with the heavy, suffocating weight of the attraction that had drawn them together in the first place—a d…"
4"Slowly, carefully, as if approaching a wild animal that might bolt, he raised his right hand."
5"His touch was burning hot—the infernal heat beneath his skin coming through, unshielded."
6"She reached up, her hand closing around his silk lapel, her fingers tangling in the heavy fabric to pull him down the final inch."
7"Her crescent-scarred wrist pressed against his neck, feeling the heavy, rapid thud of his heart matching her own."
46.05% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"he whispered, his breath warm against her cheek"
1"she breathed, her pulse thumping wildly in her ears"
2"Lucien admitted, his thumb tracing the soft line of her lower lip"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags15
fancyCount8
fancyTags
0"Lucien corrected smoothly (correct)"
1"Rory muttered (mutter)"
2"he snarled softly (snarl)"
3"he whispered (whisper)"
4"she breathed (breathe)"
5"Lucien admitted (admit)"
6"he murmured (murmur)"
7"she whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.455
leniency0.909
rawRatio0.533
effectiveRatio0.485
70.4766%