Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCTS6G3W5FZBY7EFJ6JQN8A

Run Details

Duration:
9m 32s
Cost:
$0.024163
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The rusted gates of Camden's abandoned Tube station groaned open under Harlow Quinn's gloved hand. Her worn leather watch caught the faint glow of emergency lanterns—twenty-two past midnight, the face told her, though time felt thinner down here, stretched across tiled corridors that smelled of ozone and old copper. She stepped over yellow tape that some uniform had strung between cracked pillars, her boots echoing against ceramic walls where advertisements for long-dead plays peeled like old skin. Below, The Veil Market spread in uneasy silence. Stalls of black oak and bone displayed enchanted goods—jars of fog, knives that hummed, banned alchemical substances in amber vials. Every full moon this place moved, but tonight the abandoned station beneath Camden had become something else: a cage for the dead. "Detective Quinn." Eva Kowalski's voice carried from the left, sharp with the particular tension of someone who had already formed a theory and feared being wrong. The curly red hair framed her face in damp ringlets; round glasses reflected the lantern light; her worn leather satchel, stuffed with books from the British Museum's restricted archives, hung heavy from one shoulder. She tucked a strand behind her left ear, the nervous habit giving her away every time. "You're late. The body hasn't been touched, except—" "Except you." Harlow's jaw tightened, sharp as the edge of her military bearing. She moved past Eva without breaking stride, her brown eyes scanning the scene with the precision of eighteen decorated years that had taught her to mistrust easy answers. Three years ago DS Morris had died under circumstances she still couldn't explain, supernatural origins she refused to name aloud, and now every strange death tasted like unfinished business. Eva followed, freckles pale against her complexion. "I only examined the perimeter. There's a compass—" "Show me." They walked between overturned crates of protective sigils and spilled powders that glittered like crushed stars. The victim lay in the centre, a middle-aged man in a coat of expensive grey wool, face frozen in an expression that wasn't fear exactly, more like recognition of something vast and wrong. No blood stained the tiled floor. No wounds marked the skin. Yet his chest had collapsed inward, as though something had reached through his ribs and taken hold. Eva knelt beside the body, her satchel thumping against her hip. "The needle on his Veil Compass points due north even here. Underground. Beneath layers of earth and concrete. That shouldn't happen." She produced the small brass compass from her pocket—casing etched with protective sigils, needle quivering with verdigris across its face. "Crafted by a Shade artisan. It responds to supernatural rifts. This one screams." Harlow crouched lower, closer to the victim's face than Eva expected. The detective's salt-and-pepper hair, closely cropped, caught the lantern glow. The leather watch ticked loud against her wrist, a metronome for her thoughts. "He didn't scream," Harlow said. Eva blinked. "The expression—" "Is staged." Harlow's finger traced the air near the man's open mouth, not touching. "Look at the tongue. Bitten on the left side, not the centre. People biting down in terror bite centre. This is deliberate positioning. And the eyes—wide, yes, but the pupils dilated evenly. No spasms. If a rift had opened, if energy had stripped his soul or whatever theory you're preparing—" "It's not a theory, Quinn. The British Museum archives contain seventeen accounts—" "Then explain the lack of scorch marks on the tiles." Harlow stood, brushing dust from her trousers. She pointed to the floor around the body—a circle of clean ceramic, untouched by the black residue that usually accompanied supernatural discharge in every case file she had reluctantly read since Morris's death. "The market moves every full moon. Tonight's the full moon. This station should crawl with residual energy from the shift. Instead, it's sterile. Purged." Eva rose, adjusting her glasses. "You think someone cleaned it?" "I think someone wanted us to think it was supernatural." Harlow walked a slow circuit, her boots silent on purpose. She noted the bone token left near the victim's right hand—not the victim's own, she realised, because the engraving was fresh, too fresh, the marrow-white surface unyellowed by age. Entry to The Veil Market required a bone token, yet this one bore no wear, no oils from handling. Planted. She picked it up with a gloved hand. "This is new. Carved within the week. The victim had an old token in his coat pocket—worn smooth, genuine. So why place a fresh one in his dead fingers?" Eva's breath came faster, the nervous habit returning—hair tucked behind her left ear, then released, then tucked again. "To misdirect. To make it look like he broke entry rules and was punished by... by the market itself?" "Exactly." Harlow turned the bone token over. Under the lantern, faint scratches revealed themselves—not protective markings, but coordinates. "Someone brought him here. Used the real token to enter, then swapped it. Staged the body. Staged the expression. Staged the supernatural." Eva opened her satchel, pulled out a leather-bound volume, flipped pages with trembling fingers. "There's a clique—" "I know about your clique, Eva. I've suspected them for months." Harlow's voice cut low, edged with the grief she never displayed. "But this isn't them. Or rather, it's them being framed." She reached into her own coat and produced the Veil Compass—the one Eva had mentioned, now held in Harlow's steady grip. The needle, instead of spinning wild, pointed with unnatural certainty toward the east wall, where rusted advertisements for Tube lines had long faded. But Harlow studied the casing, the verdigris, the sigils etched into the brass. "The needle isn't responding to a rift," she said. "It's responding to a magnet. Or to iron." She turned the compass slowly. The needle followed her hand, not the earth, not the supernatural. "Someone altered it. The Shade artisan's work was tampered with—look at the scratch marks inside the casing. The protective sigils are interrupted by a hairline groove. This compass was turned into a prop." Eva leaned in, her green eyes widening behind round lenses. "If the compass is false, and the bone token is planted, and the body is positioned..." "Then the crime scene is a message," Harlow finished. "Not a murder scene. A gallery." She walked to the east wall, where the faded advertisements hid a gap in the brick—a maintenance door, sealed with rust, yet forced open not long before. Behind it, the faint smell of the Thames, not the market's usual incense. "The real evidence isn't the body. It's what's missing." Eva followed, books forgotten in her satchel. "What's missing?" Harlow pushed the door open with her shoulder. Behind it lay not a tunnel, but a small chamber—bare, swept clean, with a single table of black oak. On it rested empty vials, their amber glass unbroken but drained. And in the centre, a ledger—pages torn out, the binding scored with a knife. "They took information," Harlow said. "Not goods. Not lives—though they used one life to cover it. They needed a detective to arrive. To see the supernatural staging. To chase ghosts while they walked away with the real evidence." Eva's hand went to her mouth, then dropped. "The clique—you're saying they're involved, but not as killers?" "I'm saying they're being hunted too." Harlow closed the ledger with a snap, her sharp jaw set with the certainty that had kept her alive through eighteen years of cases that broke other officers. "The victim wasn't killed by a rift. He was killed by someone who understands both worlds—yours and mine. Someone who knows I'd come. Someone who knows I'm still looking for answers about Morris." She turned, her brown eyes hard. "And now they've given me a crime scene that lies. Every piece of it—this compass, this token, this staged body—points me toward the supernatural. But I don't chase shadows anymore, Eva. I chase the hands that craft them." The detective straightened, her watch ticking against her wrist like a warning. Outside, the full moon climbed over Camden's broken skyline, and The Veil Market—this hidden black market that sold banned alchemical substances and enchanted goods—held its breath, waiting for the next move in a game Harlow Quinn had just realised she was already losing. Eva tucked a curl behind her left ear, her satchel heavy with books that suddenly seemed lighter than the truth they had uncovered together. "What do we do?" "We start with the coordinates on the token," Harlow said. "And we stop trusting what the dead are told to say."
created_at"2026-07-25T14:27:33.517Z" 7/25/2026, 2:27:33 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.35
leniency0.7
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.59% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1441
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"reluctantly"
1"slowly"
2"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
75.71% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1441
totalAiIsms7
found
0
word"echoing"
count1
1
word"silence"
count1
2
word"tension"
count1
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"etched"
count2
5
word"traced"
count1
highlights
0"echoing"
1"silence"
2"tension"
3"scanning"
4"etched"
5"traced"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences62
matches(empty)
50.69% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences62
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"try to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences87
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen51
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1419
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions14
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
57.31% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount917
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.85
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Camden3
Tube2
Harlow17
Quinn2
Veil4
Market3
Kowalski1
British1
Museum1
Eva14
Morris2
Compass1
Thames1
persons
0"Camden"
1"Tube"
2"Harlow"
3"Quinn"
4"Market"
5"Kowalski"
6"Museum"
7"Eva"
8"Morris"
places
0"Veil"
1"British"
2"Thames"
globalScore0.573
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"tasted like unfinished business"
59.06% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.409
wordCount1419
matches
0"not protective markings, but coordinates"
1"not a tunnel, but a small chamber"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean40.54
std25.02
cv0.617
sampleLengths
077
150
22
382
470
515
62
777
865
934
105
114
1264
1312
1474
1510
1669
1737
1837
1940
2017
2132
2257
2366
2426
2564
269
2752
2838
2917
3067
3144
3255
3328
3421
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs166
matches
0"was already losing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences13
totalSentences87
ratio0.149
matches
0"Her worn leather watch caught the faint glow of emergency lanterns—twenty-two past midnight, the face told her, though time felt thinner down here, stretched across tiled corridors that smelled of ozone and old copper."
1"Stalls of black oak and bone displayed enchanted goods—jars of fog, knives that hummed, banned alchemical substances in amber vials."
2"The curly red hair framed her face in damp ringlets; round glasses reflected the lantern light; her worn leather satchel, stuffed with books from the British Museum's restricted archives, hung heavy from one shoulder."
3"\"The needle on his Veil Compass points due north even here. Underground. Beneath layers of earth and concrete. That shouldn't happen.\" She produced the small brass compass from her pocket—casing etched with protective sigils, needle quivering with verdigris across its face."
4"She pointed to the floor around the body—a circle of clean ceramic, untouched by the black residue that usually accompanied supernatural discharge in every case file she had reluctantly read since Morris's death."
5"She noted the bone token left near the victim's right hand—not the victim's own, she realised, because the engraving was fresh, too fresh, the marrow-white surface unyellowed by age."
6"Eva's breath came faster, the nervous habit returning—hair tucked behind her left ear, then released, then tucked again."
7"Under the lantern, faint scratches revealed themselves—not protective markings, but coordinates."
8"She reached into her own coat and produced the Veil Compass—the one Eva had mentioned, now held in Harlow's steady grip."
9"\"Not a murder scene. A gallery.\" She walked to the east wall, where the faded advertisements hid a gap in the brick—a maintenance door, sealed with rust, yet forced open not long before."
10"Behind it lay not a tunnel, but a small chamber—bare, swept clean, with a single table of black oak."
11"And in the centre, a ledger—pages torn out, the binding scored with a knife."
12"Outside, the full moon climbed over Camden's broken skyline, and The Veil Market—this hidden black market that sold banned alchemical substances and enchanted goods—held its breath, waiting for the next move in a game Harlow Quinn had just realised she was already losing."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount937
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.026680896478121666
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.007470651013874066
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences87
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences87
mean16.31
std10.97
cv0.672
sampleLengths
015
134
228
38
420
522
62
724
834
916
108
1113
1228
1329
147
158
162
1716
1833
196
205
2117
2211
2341
2413
2511
2610
2713
285
292
302
3114
3250
3312
3417
3533
3624
375
385
3920
4029
4119
421
438
4429
4518
4619
477
4811
4922
74.33% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats2
diversityRatio0.45977011494252873
totalSentences87
uniqueOpeners40
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount13
totalSentences55
matches
0"Her worn leather watch caught"
1"She stepped over yellow tape"
2"She tucked a strand behind"
3"She moved past Eva without"
4"They walked between overturned crates"
5"She produced the small brass"
6"She pointed to the floor"
7"She noted the bone token"
8"She picked it up with"
9"She reached into her own"
10"She turned the compass slowly"
11"She walked to the east"
12"She turned, her brown eyes"
ratio0.236
69.09% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount43
totalSentences55
matches
0"The rusted gates of Camden's"
1"Her worn leather watch caught"
2"She stepped over yellow tape"
3"Stalls of black oak and"
4"Every full moon this place"
5"Eva Kowalski's voice carried from"
6"The curly red hair framed"
7"She tucked a strand behind"
8"Harlow's jaw tightened, sharp as"
9"She moved past Eva without"
10"Eva followed, freckles pale against"
11"They walked between overturned crates"
12"The victim lay in the"
13"Eva knelt beside the body,"
14"She produced the small brass"
15"Harlow crouched lower, closer to"
16"The detective's salt-and-pepper hair, closely"
17"The leather watch ticked loud"
18"Harlow's finger traced the air"
19"Harlow stood, brushing dust from"
ratio0.782
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences55
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences35
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Her worn leather watch caught the faint glow of emergency lanterns—twenty-two past midnight, the face told her, though time felt thinner down here, stretched ac…"
1"Stalls of black oak and bone displayed enchanted goods—jars of fog, knives that hummed, banned alchemical substances in amber vials."
2"Eva Kowalski's voice carried from the left, sharp with the particular tension of someone who had already formed a theory and feared being wrong."
3"She moved past Eva without breaking stride, her brown eyes scanning the scene with the precision of eighteen decorated years that had taught her to mistrust eas…"
4"They walked between overturned crates of protective sigils and spilled powders that glittered like crushed stars."
5"The victim lay in the centre, a middle-aged man in a coat of expensive grey wool, face frozen in an expression that wasn't fear exactly, more like recognition o…"
6"Outside, the full moon climbed over Camden's broken skyline, and The Veil Market—this hidden black market that sold banned alchemical substances and enchanted g…"
17.86% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"She produced, needle quivering with verdigris across its face"
1"Harlow's finger traced, not touching"
2"Harlow walked, her boots silent on purpose"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.1
leniency0.2
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
76.4544%