Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCTTZ1QPASWJKDR3GFKAWRZ

Run Details

Duration:
13.5s
Cost:
$0.014956
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The three deadbolts on the heavy oak door gave out a series of hollow, metallic clicks before Rory finally pulled it open, her right hand still resting on the brass brass knob. She expected the takeaway driver with her late-night order, or perhaps Eva returning from the archives with arms full of damp leather folios. She did not expect Lucien Moreau standing under the flickering yellow bulb of the Brick Lane stairwell. He looked insufferably broad-shouldered in the narrow hall, framed by the peeling wallpaper of the landing. His charcoal suit was tailored so sharply it seemed a crime against the sprawling damp of East London, and his platinum hair was slicked back, untouched by the drizzle misting the streets below. In his right hand, he held his ivory-handled cane, the polished bone resting lightly against the floorboards. "Rory," he said. His voice was low, carrying that smooth Marseille cadence that made every sentence sound like a secret he was letting you in on. Rory’s heart gave an ugly, jagged thud against her ribs. She didn't step back. She tightened her grip on the edge of the door, her bright blue eyes narrowing as she took him in. It had been four months. Four months since the mess at the docks, four months since he’d walked away from her flat above Silas’ bar without looking back, leaving her with a bruised shoulder, a handful of half-truths, and a quiet, suffocating absence. "You're in the wrong borough, Lucien," she said, her voice steady despite the prickle of heat under her skin. "Mayfair is west." "I am precisely where I intend to be." Lucien tilted his head, his heterochromatic eyes—one dark as polished jet, the other a striking, inhuman amber—sweeping over her. She was wearing an oversized wool sweater, her straight black hair falling down to her shoulders, untamed and unstyled. "Are you going to leave me in the draft? The stairs smell faintly of stale cumin and old damp." "It's Brick Lane. It always smells like cumin." Rory made to swing the door shut, but Lucien didn't use a spell or his demon-born strength to stop it. He simply leaned the ferrule of his cane into the jam, holding the wood half an inch from the frame. "Please, Rory. Ten minutes." The *please* was soft, stripped of his usual theatrical arrogance. That was the dangerous thing about Lucien; he knew exactly when to drop the velvet facade to expose the razor edge beneath, and he knew precisely which buttons to press to make her hesitate. Rory let out a sharp breath, her thumb absently tracing the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—an old habit when her nerves spiked. She stepped back, opening the door wider. "Ten minutes. And leave the cane by the coat rack." Lucien stepped over the threshold, his gaze flickering down to the concealed blade within the ivory handle, then back to her face. With a slight incline of his head, he rested the cane against the wall. He pulled off his dark leather gloves, tucking them neatly into his breast pocket. The flat was crammed to capacity. Books were stacked in leaning towers against the skirting boards, and scrolls bound in dried twine lay scattered across the faded rug. From the depths of a velvet armchair, a fat tabby cat raised its head, let out a low, scolding chirp, and settled back down. "Ptolemy remembers me, at least," Lucien murmured, crossing the small room with effortless grace. "Ptolemy hates everyone," Rory said, closing the door and throwing two of the deadbolts back into place. The routine gave her hands something to do. "He's just hoping you brought fish." She turned around, folding her arms across her chest to keep from fidgeting. Up close, in the light of Eva’s desk lamps, she could see the fatigue etched around his eyes. The black eye was unreadable, a pit of shadow, but the amber one glowed faintly, a subtle tell of his Avarosian blood when his control slipped. "What are you doing here, Lucien?" she asked, dropping all pretense of hospitality. "We settled this. You went back to your high-society clients, and I went back to delivering dim sum for Yu-Fei and helping Eva translate seventh-century Welsh hexes." "Settled?" Lucien repeated softly. He took a step toward her, then paused, reading the sharp line of her shoulders and honoring the distance. "Is that what we did? I seem to recall a great deal of shouting, a glass broken against my front door, and you leaving before the sun came up." "You lied to me." "I omitted details." "You let me think you were working for the Counsel when you were setting them up!" Rory’s voice rose, sharp and clear in the small room. She took a step toward him now, the anger that had sat dormant in her chest for sixteen weeks flaring back to life. "I put my neck on the line for you, Luc. I stood in that warehouse with three rogue warlocks pointing iron at my chest, believing you had my back. And you were just playing chess." Lucien’s jaw tightened, a tiny muscle jumping near his cheekbone. "I was keeping you alive, Laila." "Don't call me that," she snapped, using the old alias like a shield. "My name is Rory. And you weren't keeping me alive, you were keeping me in the dark because you don't trust anyone. You never have." The air between them pulled taut, thick with the heavy scent of old parchment, rain, and the faint, sulfur-and-clove undertone that belonged entirely to Lucien’s demonic heritage. Lucien looked down at her, his amber eye burning a little brighter. He closed the gap between them in two long strides. Rory didn't flinch, standing her ground even as he stopped just inches away, so close she could feel the heat radiating from his coat, so close she could smell the cold night air clinging to his wool lapels. "I trusted you enough to show you what I am," he whispered, his voice dropping an octave, rough around the edges. "I trusted you enough to let you see the blood on my hands. Do you have any idea how few people alive have seen me bleed, Rory?" "Is that supposed to make me feel special?" Her breath caught in her throat. She hated how easily he dismantled her defenses, how her body remembered the exact weight of his hands, the warmth of his mouth, the brief, terrifying moments when he had let her see past the polished fixer to the man underneath. "No," Lucien said, reaching out. His fingers hovered near her face, hesitant, before he let his knuckles brush lightly against her cheek, tracing the line of her jaw. His skin was warm—warmer than a human's ought to be. "It was supposed to keep you safe from me. From my life. But I was an idiot, because leaving you was worse." Rory swallowed hard, her pulse hammering in her throat. She wanted to slap his hand away. She wanted to lean into his palm. The hurt was still there, a dull ache beneath her ribs, but beneath it was the quiet, undeniable truth that she had spent four months looking at the doorway of her flat, waiting for a knocking sound that never came until tonight. "You can't just show up," she said, though her voice lacked its previous venom. "You can't just walk into Eva's flat at midnight, look at me with those ridiculous eyes, and expect me to forget that you broke my heart." Lucien froze, his knuckles resting against her skin. For a fraction of a second, the master broker of the London underworld looked entirely disarmed, his dark eye widening slightly. "I didn't expect you to forget," he said softly, his thumb finally moving to trace the curve of her lower lip. "I came to ask if I could spend the rest of my life trying to fix it." Rory looked up into his gaze, seeing the raw, unvarnished truth lying bare in his amber eye. She reached up, her hand wrapping around his wrist—feeling the steady, heavy beat of his pulse beneath her fingers—and pulled his hand down, but she didn't let go. "Ten minutes," she reminded him, her breath hitching as he leaned down, his forehead resting gently against hers. "Then I have nine minutes left," Lucien murmured against her lips, "to convince you to give me eleven."
created_at"2026-07-25T14:28:31.541Z" 7/25/2026, 2:28:31 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
82.35% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Lucien repeated softly [softly]"
1"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.515
leniency1
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.118
68.18% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1414
totalAiIsmAdverbs9
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"lightly"
count2
2
adverb"precisely"
count2
3
adverb"softly"
count2
4
adverb"slightly"
count1
5
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"lightly"
2"precisely"
3"softly"
4"slightly"
5"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
50.50% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1414
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"velvet"
count2
1
word"facade"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count2
3
word"depths"
count1
4
word"effortless"
count1
5
word"etched"
count1
6
word"unreadable"
count1
7
word"could feel"
count1
8
word"weight"
count1
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count2
highlights
0"velvet"
1"facade"
2"tracing"
3"depths"
4"effortless"
5"etched"
6"unreadable"
7"could feel"
8"weight"
9"warmth"
10"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences63
filterMatches
0"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences79
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1408
ratio0.001
matches
0"please"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1022
uniqueNames10
maxNameDensity1.27
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Rory9
Eva2
Lucien13
Moreau1
Brick1
Lane1
East1
London2
Marseille1
Avarosian1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Eva"
2"Lucien"
3"Moreau"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"East"
3"London"
4"Marseille"
globalScore0.864
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1408
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean40.23
std20.17
cv0.501
sampleLengths
032
140
266
326
477
522
665
748
84
944
1040
1150
1252
1314
1431
1557
1640
1752
184
193
2084
2116
2238
2327
2460
2548
2655
2760
2865
2940
3029
3138
3245
3318
3418
88.55% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount3
totalSentences63
matches
0"was tailored"
1"was slicked"
2"was crammed"
3"were stacked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs168
matches
0"was letting"
1"was wearing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences5
totalSentences79
ratio0.063
matches
0"\"I am precisely where I intend to be.\" Lucien tilted his head, his heterochromatic eyes—one dark as polished jet, the other a striking, inhuman amber—sweeping over her."
1"That was the dangerous thing about Lucien; he knew exactly when to drop the velvet facade to expose the razor edge beneath, and he knew precisely which buttons to press to make her hesitate."
2"Rory let out a sharp breath, her thumb absently tracing the crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist—an old habit when her nerves spiked."
3"His skin was warm—warmer than a human's ought to be."
4"She reached up, her hand wrapping around his wrist—feeling the steady, heavy beat of his pulse beneath her fingers—and pulled his hand down, but she didn't let go."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount527
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount19
adverbRatio0.036053130929791274
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.013282732447817837
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences79
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences79
mean17.82
std9.72
cv0.545
sampleLengths
032
123
217
316
433
517
63
723
810
94
1020
115
1238
1319
143
1527
1619
1719
1828
1920
204
2110
2234
2323
247
2510
2622
2714
2814
296
3022
3124
3214
3317
348
356
3613
3718
3826
3913
4027
414
4219
4329
444
453
4626
4723
4835
4910
53.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.379746835443038
totalSentences79
uniqueOpeners30
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
26.45% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences62
matches
0"She expected the takeaway driver"
1"She did not expect Lucien"
2"He looked insufferably broad-shouldered in"
3"His charcoal suit was tailored"
4"His voice was low, carrying"
5"She didn't step back."
6"She tightened her grip on"
7"It had been four months."
8"she said, her voice steady"
9"She was wearing an oversized"
10"He simply leaned the ferrule"
11"She stepped back, opening the"
12"He pulled off his dark"
13"She turned around, folding her"
14"she asked, dropping all pretense"
15"He took a step toward"
16"She took a step toward"
17"she snapped, using the old"
18"He closed the gap between"
19"he whispered, his voice dropping"
ratio0.484
8.39% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount56
totalSentences62
matches
0"The three deadbolts on the"
1"She expected the takeaway driver"
2"She did not expect Lucien"
3"He looked insufferably broad-shouldered in"
4"His charcoal suit was tailored"
5"His voice was low, carrying"
6"Rory’s heart gave an ugly,"
7"She didn't step back."
8"She tightened her grip on"
9"It had been four months."
10"she said, her voice steady"
11"Lucien tilted his head, his"
12"She was wearing an oversized"
13"Rory made to swing the"
14"He simply leaned the ferrule"
15"The *please* was soft, stripped"
16"That was the dangerous thing"
17"Rory let out a sharp"
18"She stepped back, opening the"
19"Lucien stepped over the threshold,"
ratio0.903
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"His voice was low, carrying that smooth Marseille cadence that made every sentence sound like a secret he was letting you in on."
1"The air between them pulled taut, thick with the heavy scent of old parchment, rain, and the faint, sulfur-and-clove undertone that belonged entirely to Lucien’…"
66.18% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"he whispered, his voice dropping an octave, rough around the edges"
1"she said, though her voice lacked its previous venom"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount5
fancyTags
0"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
1"Lucien repeated softly (repeat)"
2"she snapped (snap)"
3"he whispered (whisper)"
4"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences33
tagDensity0.364
leniency0.727
rawRatio0.417
effectiveRatio0.303
74.2364%