Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCTTZK2P33RD0QQV75QH9NH

Run Details

Duration:
2m 14s
Cost:
$0.004756
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The abandoned Tube station breathed cold. Detective Harlow Quinn pressed her leather watch into her palm and stepped onto the cracked tiles of Camden's buried platform. Water dripped from iron ribs above. Detective Harlow's boots crunched broken glass near the tunnel mouth. The bone token in her coat pocket rested heavy, a grim key that had opened this grave. "Quinn." DS Reeves hovered near the rusted turnstile. His torch beam sliced the dark. "Coroner's done. Looks like a ritual killing. Candles, blood patterns, the lot." Detective Harlow crouched beside the body without glancing at Reeves. The dead man wore a charcoal suit soaked black. His throat had been opened with surgical precision, but the blood pooled wrong—too thick, too dark, pooling in geometric lines rather than spreading naturally. "Not ritual," Detective Harlow said. "Not human ritual, anyway." Reeves shifted his weight. "The candles form a circle. There's ash marking the perimeter. You know how these underground groups operate." Detective Harlow stood, her sharp jaw set. The military precision in her posture never wavered, but her brown eyes tracked the floor with restless suspicion. She pointed her penlight toward a wall where rust had eaten the station tiles. "There." The beam caught brass glinting in the grime. "A compass." The Veil Compass. Its brass casing wore a patina of verdigris. Protective sigils etched across the face caught the light like scars. The needle did not point north. It quivered toward a crack in reality, a shimmering rift hidden behind the old signal box. Reeves followed her gaze. "That's just a curio. Maybe the victim brought it." Detective Harlow slipped on gloves and lifted the instrument. "This was crafted by a Shade artisan. Its needle points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal. That wall behind the signal box isn't concrete. It's a door." She pocketed the compass and walked the perimeter of the blood. Her salt-and-pepper hair stayed close to her scalp, unmoving in the damp air. "Notice the absence of footprints," she said. "Not ours. Not the victim's. No drag marks leading in. He walked here alone." Reeves snorted. "Then he opened his own throat?" Detective Harlow traced the blood's geometric lines. "Look closer. The blood flows uphill. Capillary action doesn't defy gravity unless compelled." Reeves stepped back, his torch trembling. "You're talking about the Market, aren't you? The Veil Market. I heard the rumours. Underground trade in banned alchemical substances." "I lost DS Morris in a case three years ago," Detective Harlow said quietly. "Unexplained circumstances. Supernatural origins. I didn't understand then. I understand more now." She moved toward the rift behind the signal box. The air there tasted of copper and ozone. Through the shimmer, the hidden depths of the abandoned Tube station seemed to extend further—stalls of shadow, whispers of commerce in enchanted goods. "Reeves, check the victim's pockets." Reeves obeyed, his face pale. "Bone token. Another one. And... papers. A manifest." Detective Harlow read without touching. "He was a courier. Delivering information to the Market. But he never arrived." "Something intercepted him," Reeves said. Something. Detective Harlow's gloved fingers brushed the signal box. The wood was cold, older than the station itself. "The compass wasn't brought here accidentally," she said. "It was dropped. Left as a marker. For whoever comes next." Reeves rubbed his neck. "We should call for backup." "We won't find answers above ground." Detective Harlow turned back to the body. "Morris died searching for answers in darkness like this. The clique—those operating out of this market—are involved in criminal activity that extends beyond theft and alchemy." She straightened, her military bearing sharpening like a blade. "We need the archives. Eva Kowalski works the British Museum's restricted archives. She has knowledge of these sigils." "You want to talk to a researcher?" "I want to understand the language of this death." Detective Harlow's brown eyes fixed on the rift, where the needle of the Veil Compass strained with frantic urgency. "Because the evidence doesn't lie. Only people do. And this scene is telling us that the killer didn't enter through the tunnel." Reeves followed her sightline to the ceiling, to a broken ventilation grate that opened into the night sky. "Then they came from above." "Or," Detective Harlow said, "they never left."<|end_message|>
created_at"2026-07-25T14:28:31.981Z" 7/25/2026, 2:28:31 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
70.97% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags10
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Detective Harlow said quietly [quietly]"
1"Detective Harlow turned back [back]"
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.323
leniency0.645
rawRatio0.2
effectiveRatio0.129
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount711
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.74% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount711
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"grave"
count1
1
word"weight"
count1
2
word"wavered"
count1
3
word"glinting"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"quivered"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"depths"
count1
highlights
0"grave"
1"weight"
2"wavered"
3"glinting"
4"etched"
5"quivered"
6"traced"
7"depths"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences46
matches(empty)
80.75% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences46
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences67
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords707
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount403
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity3.23
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Tube2
Harlow13
Quinn1
Camden1
Reeves10
Veil2
Compass2
Detective13
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Camden"
3"Reeves"
4"Compass"
places(empty)
globalScore0
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences32
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount707
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean23.57
std14.26
cv0.605
sampleLengths
059
126
243
39
421
539
611
744
813
937
1024
1121
128
1320
1426
1526
1640
175
1813
1918
205
2118
2219
239
2439
2527
267
2750
2823
297
97.64% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences46
matches
0"been opened"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs68
matches(empty)
57.57% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences67
ratio0.03
matches
0"His throat had been opened with surgical precision, but the blood pooled wrong—too thick, too dark, pooling in geometric lines rather than spreading naturally."
1"Through the shimmer, the hidden depths of the abandoned Tube station seemed to extend further—stalls of shadow, whispers of commerce in enchanted goods."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount407
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.02457002457002457
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.004914004914004914
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences67
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences67
mean10.55
std6.42
cv0.609
sampleLengths
06
120
26
310
417
58
66
712
810
99
1024
115
124
134
1417
157
1618
1714
189
192
203
218
2211
236
2416
254
269
279
2828
2911
3013
317
3214
332
346
357
3613
376
3820
3914
4012
419
428
4323
445
455
468
475
4813
495
69.65% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4626865671641791
totalSentences67
uniqueOpeners31
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences41
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences41
matches
0"His torch beam sliced the"
1"His throat had been opened"
2"She pointed her penlight toward"
3"Its brass casing wore a"
4"It quivered toward a crack"
5"She pocketed the compass and"
6"Her salt-and-pepper hair stayed close"
7"She moved toward the rift"
8"She straightened, her military bearing"
ratio0.22
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount39
totalSentences41
matches
0"The abandoned Tube station breathed"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn pressed her"
2"Water dripped from iron ribs"
3"Detective Harlow's boots crunched broken"
4"The bone token in her"
5"DS Reeves hovered near the"
6"His torch beam sliced the"
7"Detective Harlow crouched beside the"
8"The dead man wore a"
9"His throat had been opened"
10"Detective Harlow said"
11"Reeves shifted his weight."
12"Detective Harlow stood, her sharp"
13"The military precision in her"
14"She pointed her penlight toward"
15"The beam caught brass glinting"
16"The Veil Compass."
17"Its brass casing wore a"
18"The needle did not point"
19"It quivered toward a crack"
ratio0.951
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences41
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences13
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags10
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences31
tagDensity0.194
leniency0.387
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
80.6770%