Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCTWP53ES65W7D41AXBKA35

Run Details

Duration:
13.1s
Cost:
$0.014795
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Aurora adjusted the heavy strap across her shoulder, the cold leather digging through her denim jacket. Step by step, the oak roots beneath her boots twisted into impossibly smooth, polished step-like formations. Behind her, the damp, familiar scent of London's autumn air dissolved, replaced by a atmosphere thick with the smell of crushed star anise, dark chocolate, and damp earth. "Stay close, Rory," Nyx's voice drifted back, less a sound and more a vibration rustling the hair at the nape of her neck. The Shade glided forward, their dark outline stretching long across the luminous moss coating the cavern walls. Where their heels grazed the ground, tiny tendrils of mist coiled and snapped. "The air is... heavy," Aurora muttered, pulling the silver chain out from beneath her collar. The thumbnail-sized gemstone attached to it pulsed against her collarbone. A deep, amber warmth bled from the crimson crystal, throbbing like a frantic heartbeat. She cupped the pendant in her palm, feeling the heat radiate through her fingers. Isolde floated through the twilight ahead, her waist-length silver hair drifting around her shoulders as if suspended in water. Pale lavender eyes scanned the shimmering canopy overhead, where broad-leafed trees bore fruit that glowed like violet lanterns. "The border lies behind us, mortal," Isolde said, her footfalls making no sound against the violet grass. "We walk upon the flesh of Dymas now. Here, every breath is a feast, and every feast demands a price." They emerged onto a high stone ledge overlooking a vast, subterranean basin beneath a sky the color of melted honey. Warm, golden sunlight without a sun suffused the expanse. Sprawling, terraced vineyards cascaded down red-rock cliffs, their vines heavy with grapes the size of plums that bled thick, iridescent juice onto the rocks. Cascades of liquid bronze roared down distant canyon walls, pooling into shimmering rivers that filled the air with the rich, intoxicating scent of caramelized sugar and fermented berries. Aurora stepped to the brink, her breath catching. The sheer scale of the landscape defied the cramped, gray streets of the city she had left behind. "It's incredible." "It is a trap wrapped in silk," Nyx said, their form wavering as sunlight touched their silhouette, pulling smoke from their shadowy edges. "The Prince of Gluttony does not build gardens for beauty's sake. Every leaf is cultivated to entice. Every root drinks from the souls bound to this soil." A breeze swept up the canyon, carrying with it a symphony of quiet, disturbing sounds. It wasn't just the rushing of the sugar falls; beneath the melody sat a soft, rhythmic hum, like hundreds of voices murmuring in quiet, rapturous contentment. "Listen," Isolde turned, her expression unreadable as she tilted her head toward the valley floor. "The harvest sings to those who tend it. Touch nothing that hungers for you, Carter." "I brought my own rations," Aurora said, though her mouth watered involuntarily. The air itself tasted of ripe figs and warm vanilla, coating her tongue and making her stomach rumble with a sudden, unnatural sharp ache. She reached down, her knuckles grazing the hilt of the leaf-shaped dagger tucked into her belt. The moonsilver blade remained ice-cold against her hip, a freezing counterpoint to the sweltering, sweet heat of the realm. Touch it, the metal seemed to remind her. Remember the cold. They descended a flight of stairs carved directly into the red cliff face. Halfway down, the path ran beneath a canopy of low-hanging boughs. Massive blossoms, delicate and pale as porcelain, hung inverted above their heads. As Aurora passed beneath one, the petals quivered, unfurling slightly to drop a thick, clear droplet of nectar toward her face. Nyx’s shadowy arm shot out, intercepting the drop. The liquid sizzled against their incorporeal skin, burning a small, white-hot hole through the dark vapors before vanishing. "Do not let the flora touch skin," Nyx warned, their glowing violet eyes narrowing. "A single drop of Dymasian honey breeds a craving that rots the mind from within." Aurora swallowed hard, stepping around a puddle of the clear sap that hissed softly against the stone floor. "How far to the central court?" "Through the groves," Isolde replied, pointing toward a thicket of towering, stalk-like plants that resembled giant wheat, their golden heads heavy with grain that rustled with the sound of whispered secrets. "Beyond the kitchens of the Helbound." As they penetrated deeper into the golden wheat grove, the light dimmed to a deep, ruddy copper. The ground softened, giving way to soil that felt like damp flour underfoot. Spores drifted through the air like golden snow, catching the light in floating, sparkling dance patterns. Aurora cupped her hand over her mouth and nose, breathing through her sleeve. "The Veil is thin here." "The Veil is torn here," Nyx corrected, drifting higher to scout over the tall stalks. "The weight of this realm presses constantly against Earth. A solstice breach here would drown half of London in Hel's excess." A sudden sound shattered the rhythmic rustling of the grove—a metallic clatter, followed by a sharp, ragged gasp. Aurora froze, her hand instinctively snapping to the hilt of her Fae blade. She slipped the cold moonsilver weapon from its sheath, the faintly luminescent blade casting a blue-white glow across the golden stalks. "Someone's here," she whispered. Isolde drifted back, her face serene yet detached. "Bound souls linger in the fields, girl. They harvest that which they can never consume." Aurora pushed through a dense cluster of stalks and broke into a small clearing. A figure kneeled in the dust, clad in threadbare, oil-stained modern clothes—a chef's coat, torn at the elbows. The man was frantically scraping at the earth with a silver spoon, trying to collect a spilled mound of gleaming, sapphire-colored salt. His hands were raw and bleeding, yet he wept tears of joy as he shoveled the crystals into a shattered porcelain bowl. "Just a little more," the man babbled, his voice rasping like sandpaper. "The broth needs the salt. Master Belphegor requires the broth..." Aurora took a step forward. "Hey. Stop. You're bleeding." The man didn't look up. He scraped harder, his fingernails snapping against the hard earth. "He cannot hear you," Isolde said softly, appearing beside Aurora without a rustle of grass. "His contract was signed in a kitchen in Paris three centuries ago. He believes he is one dish away from freedom." The sight sent a chill straight through the heavy heat of the valley. Aurora gripped the cold hilt of her dagger tighter, the reality of the realm settling heavily in her chest. This wasn't just an alien paradise; it was a gilded cage designed to consume everything that crossed its threshold. The Heartstone pendant around her neck flared brighter, scorching hot against her chest. "Look," Nyx whispered, descending from the upper canopy. Shadows pooled around their feet, rippling with agitation. "The path opens ahead. But we have company at the gates." Aurora looked past the weeping chef. Beyond the edge of the wheat grove stood a massive archway woven entirely from living, thorned grapevines. Beyond it, a sprawling city of brass domes and smoking chimneys stretched out toward the horizon, and guarding the threshold stood a pair of armored figures whose skin gleamed like polished copper under the amber sky.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:29:27.854Z" 7/25/2026, 2:29:27 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
51.85% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Nyx's voice drifted back [back]"
1"Isolde said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.481
leniency0.963
rawRatio0.154
effectiveRatio0.148
87.64% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1214
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"softly"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
13.51% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1214
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"crystal"
count1
4
word"scanned"
count1
5
word"silk"
count1
6
word"wavering"
count1
7
word"symphony"
count1
8
word"rhythmic"
count2
9
word"unreadable"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
11
word"porcelain"
count2
12
word"quivered"
count1
13
word"dance"
count1
14
word"weight"
count1
15
word"shattered"
count2
16
word"gleaming"
count1
17
word"chill"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"pulsed"
2"warmth"
3"crystal"
4"scanned"
5"silk"
6"wavering"
7"symphony"
8"rhythmic"
9"unreadable"
10"stomach"
11"porcelain"
12"quivered"
13"dance"
14"weight"
15"shattered"
16"gleaming"
17"chill"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences66
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences66
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences80
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1212
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount982
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.32
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
London1
Shade1
Aurora13
Fae1
Isolde6
Heartstone1
Shadows1
Nyx6
persons
0"Shade"
1"Aurora"
2"Isolde"
3"Shadows"
4"Nyx"
places
0"London"
globalScore0.838
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like damp flour underfoot"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1212
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
98.92% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs36
mean33.67
std16.71
cv0.496
sampleLengths
060
123
230
315
438
537
637
781
828
950
1041
1130
1236
1346
1457
1526
1629
1724
1837
1946
2018
2136
2218
2334
244
2523
2614
2762
2822
299
3015
3136
3251
3313
3427
3559
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs165
matches
0"was frantically scraping"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences80
ratio0.05
matches
0"It wasn't just the rushing of the sugar falls; beneath the melody sat a soft, rhythmic hum, like hundreds of voices murmuring in quiet, rapturous contentment."
1"A sudden sound shattered the rhythmic rustling of the grove—a metallic clatter, followed by a sharp, ragged gasp."
2"A figure kneeled in the dust, clad in threadbare, oil-stained modern clothes—a chef's coat, torn at the elbows."
3"This wasn't just an alien paradise; it was a gilded cage designed to consume everything that crossed its threshold."
70.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount995
adjectiveStacks5
stackExamples
0"sudden, unnatural sharp ache."
1"ice-cold against her"
2"small, white-hot hole"
3"oil-stained modern clothes—"
4"gleaming, sapphire-colored salt."
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.02613065326633166
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.011055276381909548
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences80
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences80
mean15.15
std6.72
cv0.444
sampleLengths
016
116
228
323
417
513
615
710
814
914
1019
1118
1217
1320
1420
159
1624
1728
188
1918
202
2123
2227
2315
2426
2515
2615
2712
2824
2916
3019
318
323
3313
3411
3512
3621
378
3818
3914
4015
4118
426
4331
446
4517
4613
4716
4813
495
71.67% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.475
totalSentences80
uniqueOpeners38
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences65
matches
0"She cupped the pendant in"
1"They emerged onto a high"
2"It wasn't just the rushing"
3"She reached down, her knuckles"
4"They descended a flight of"
5"She slipped the cold moonsilver"
6"His hands were raw and"
7"He scraped harder, his fingernails"
ratio0.123
60.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount52
totalSentences65
matches
0"Aurora adjusted the heavy strap"
1"Nyx's voice drifted back, less"
2"The Shade glided forward, their"
3"Aurora muttered, pulling the silver"
4"The thumbnail-sized gemstone attached to"
5"A deep, amber warmth bled"
6"She cupped the pendant in"
7"Isolde floated through the twilight"
8"Isolde said, her footfalls making"
9"They emerged onto a high"
10"Cascades of liquid bronze roared"
11"Aurora stepped to the brink,"
12"The sheer scale of the"
13"Nyx said, their form wavering"
14"A breeze swept up the"
15"It wasn't just the rushing"
16"Isolde turned, her expression unreadable"
17"Aurora said, though her mouth"
18"The air itself tasted of"
19"She reached down, her knuckles"
ratio0.8
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
ratio0
76.41% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences43
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"Isolde floated through the twilight ahead, her waist-length silver hair drifting around her shoulders as if suspended in water."
1"Pale lavender eyes scanned the shimmering canopy overhead, where broad-leafed trees bore fruit that glowed like violet lanterns."
2"Sprawling, terraced vineyards cascaded down red-rock cliffs, their vines heavy with grapes the size of plums that bled thick, iridescent juice onto the rocks."
3"Cascades of liquid bronze roared down distant canyon walls, pooling into shimmering rivers that filled the air with the rich, intoxicating scent of caramelized …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Isolde said, her footfalls making no sound against the violet grass"
1"Aurora said, though her mouth watered involuntarily"
2"Nyx warned, their glowing violet eyes narrowing"
3"the man babbled, his voice rasping like sandpaper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Aurora muttered (mutter)"
1"Nyx warned (warn)"
2"Nyx corrected (correct)"
3"she whispered (whisper)"
4"the man babbled (babble)"
5"Nyx whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences27
tagDensity0.407
leniency0.815
rawRatio0.545
effectiveRatio0.444
73.7781%