Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCTXD3QE08AVAQ2YNND1B9E

Run Details

Duration:
43.4s
Cost:
$0.066611
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain smashed against the front window of The Raven's Nest, bleeding green neon across the dark mahogany counter. Silas set a heavy glass onto the wood, silver signet ring tapping the rim with a dull click. His grey-streaked auburn hair caught the amber glow of the overhead lamps. "You’re staring into that gin like it owes you rent, Carter." Rory thumbed the pale, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist. Her straight black hair fell forward, framing her sharp jawline. She kept her gaze fixed on the ice cubes melting into clear liquor. "Just listening to the pipes." "The pipes are fine. It’s the rain." Silas wiped down the stainless steel tap handles with a rag, his left leg taking his weight with a measured stiffness. "Brings out the ghosts." The brass chime over the heavy oak door rang out. A draft of damp, diesel-tainted air swept into the bar, cutting through the smell of roasted malt and old wood. A tall man stepped over the threshold, shaking water off a charcoal cashmere coat. A leather briefcase swung from his right hand. He ran fingers through combed brown hair, scanning the low-ceilinged room with the cautious eye of someone who took the wrong turn off Dean Street. His gaze snagged on the corner stool. His boots froze on the worn floorboards. "Aurora?" Rory’s shoulders hitched. The voice carried the thick, rounded vowels of South Wales—a sound she had spent four years scrubbing off her own tongue. She turned her stool. Bright blue eyes locked onto him. "Gareth." He took three fast steps forward, stopping short of the empty stool beside her as if an outstretched hand might shatter the air between them. A gold watch gleamed under his wet cuff. "I don't believe it. Aurora Carter." "Rory." "Right. Rory." Gareth stripped off his leather gloves, stuffing them into a coat pocket. He surveyed her, taking in the scuffed boots, the dark work trousers, the grease stain on her sleeve from the Golden Empress delivery bike. "Nobody in Cardiff knew where you went. Your dad said you moved to the capital, but your phone went dead. Evan said—" "Leave Evan out of it." The words cut straight through the hum of the bar radio. Gareth's mouth stayed open, a silent rebound of arguments they had never had. Silas limped over, placing a napkin on the dark wood in front of Gareth. "What can I get you, sir?" "Whisky. Whatever is good." Gareth ignored the older man, his attention pinned to Rory's face. Silas poured three fingers of dark rye, set the glass down, and retreated toward the far end of the counter. His hazel eyes lingered on Rory for a second before he began re-stacking spirit bottles against the mirrored wall. Gareth reached for the glass, his fingers neat and clean. "You cut your hair." "Five years ago." "It suits you. Darker." He took a quick sip, wincing as the liquor hit his throat. "You look lean, Rory. Poised to sprint." "London habits." "I made junior partner last month. At Morgan & Ellis." He waited for a reaction, his posture stiffening into the poise of the courtroom. "We took over the ninth floor on Victoria Street. I kept thinking I’d bump into you in the Inns of Court. Your dad swore you’d end up at the Chancery bar before thirty." Rory raised her tumbler, letting the ice hit her teeth. "My dad talks." "He missed you at graduation. We all did. You walked away from a first-class degree six months before finals, Rory. Just vanished." "I didn't vanish. I left." "Without a word?" Gareth set his glass down hard enough to splash the rim. "Eva cried for a month. She thought you ended up dead in a ditch somewhere between Newport and Paddington. I drove down to your flat off City Road three times. The landlord said some bloke swept the place clean and handed back the keys." "Evan." "He panicked." "He looked for his property." Rory shifted her wrist, tucking her left hand into her coat pocket out of sight. Gareth stared at her. The polished surface of his professional life cracked just enough to show the confusion beneath. He glanced around the bar—the dusty maritime maps pinned to the plaster, the black-and-white photos of forgotten boxers, the faint smell of stale draft beer. "Is this what you do now?" "I live upstairs." "Upstairs?" He glanced at the water-stained ceiling. "You were the sharpest mind in our year. You tore down prosecutor arguments in mock trial before the rest of us finished reading the brief. Now you work here?" "I haul food for Yu-Fei down the street." "A courier delivering takeaway?" "It pays rent. Nobody asks for my credentials. Nobody asks who I used to share a bed with." Gareth rubbed his temple with two fingers—a gesture straight out of their old university library sessions. "Evan wasn't right for you. I know that. He held a sharp tongue. But leaving law? Throwing away everything your family built?" "You don't know anything about Evan." "He came to my chambers last year." Gareth leaned closer, dropping his voice below the creak of the ceiling fan. "He looked ruined, Rory. He talked about how you broke his heart. He said you snapped over nothing." Rory's grip tightened around her glass until her knuckles turned chalk white. "Did he tell you about the door locks?" Gareth frowned. "What?" "Did he tell you he installed deadbolts on the outside of the bedroom door? Did he tell you about the charger he yanked out of the wall so I couldn't call my mother?" Silence fell between them, heavy and stifling. Rain beat a metallic rhythm against the window glass outside. Down the counter, Silas paused his wiping, his silhouette tall and immobile against the warm glow of the back bar. Gareth pulled back, his face losing its composure. "Rory... he didn't..." "He did." She swallowed the rest of her gin, feeling the burn settle cold in her chest. "And when I packed my bag while he was out at his dad's firm, I swore I'd never let another person decide where I had to sit, what I had to wear, or who I had to answer to." Gareth looked down at his signet ring, then at his leather shoes. The unspoken weight of five years of assumptions sat between them like a physical obstruction on the counter. "I didn't know." "You didn't ask. You assumed Aurora Carter had a breakdown because the pressure got too high." "I came here tonight because I had a meeting with a client on Soho Square," Gareth murmured, his voice stripped of its crisp legal cadence. "I saw the green sign. I thought I'd get a drink before taking the train back to Surrey." "Surrey." Rory let out a short, dry laugh. "Big house? Garden?" "Three bedrooms. A view of the downs." He looked at her through the dim light, the space between who they were at twenty and who they were now unbridgeable. "Eva and I married two years ago." Rory stopped. Her gaze softened for a fraction of a second, a shadow of the old heat flickering behind her bright blue eyes. "Eva?" "She works in child advocacy now. She kept your old tort textbook on the shelf. She said if you ever walked back into our lives, you'd want it." Rory turned her glass around on the coaster, tracing the wet ring it left on the dark timber. "Tell her to burn it." Gareth flinched. He stood up, smoothing the front of his dark coat with precise movements. He pulled a crisp fifty-pound note from his billfold and laid it beside his half-empty glass. "I should go. The train leaves from Waterloo in twenty minutes." "Don't miss it." He took his briefcase, holding it tight against his hip. He looked at her one last time—at the black hair, the hard lines around her mouth, the sharp intelligence that no amount of grease or cheap booze could erase. "You were better than all of us, Rory. That's the real waste." "I survived, Gareth. That makes me better than the girl who stayed." He hesitated, his lips parted as if to offer a counter-argument, but no legal precedent existed for the space she occupied now. He turned and walked out into the downpour. The brass bell chimed once, sharp and final. Silas limped over, swept the fifty-pound note off the bar, and replaced it with a fresh glass of gin, neat. "Old friend?" "Dead guy," Rory said, staring out at the green light dancing across the wet asphalt.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:29:51.366Z" 7/25/2026, 2:29:51 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags14
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.226
leniency0.452
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1441
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
72.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1441
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"measured"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"unspoken"
count1
5
word"tracing"
count1
6
word"dancing"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"measured"
2"scanning"
3"silence"
4"unspoken"
5"tracing"
6"dancing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences65
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences65
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences113
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1437
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions39
wordCount860
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.63
worstName"Gareth"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Gareth"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Dean1
Street1
South1
Wales1
Golden1
Empress1
Gareth14
Rory11
Silas6
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Gareth"
3"Rory"
4"Silas"
places
0"Dean"
1"Street"
2"South"
3"Wales"
4"Golden"
globalScore0.686
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences59
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1437
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences113
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs77
mean18.66
std16.19
cv0.867
sampleLengths
048
111
233
35
432
530
647
714
81
924
1010
111
1233
136
141
1560
165
1724
1814
196
2015
2139
2210
234
243
2523
262
2757
2810
293
3022
315
3258
331
342
3520
3644
376
383
3936
408
414
4218
4316
4422
456
4638
4712
488
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs131
matches(empty)
41.72% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences113
ratio0.035
matches
0"The voice carried the thick, rounded vowels of South Wales—a sound she had spent four years scrubbing off her own tongue."
1"He glanced around the bar—the dusty maritime maps pinned to the plaster, the black-and-white photos of forgotten boxers, the faint smell of stale draft beer."
2"Gareth rubbed his temple with two fingers—a gesture straight out of their old university library sessions."
3"He looked at her one last time—at the black hair, the hard lines around her mouth, the sharp intelligence that no amount of grease or cheap booze could erase."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount875
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"pale, crescent-shaped scar"
1"damp, diesel-tainted air"
adverbCount9
adverbRatio0.010285714285714285
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences113
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences113
mean12.72
std9.06
cv0.713
sampleLengths
018
118
212
311
410
510
613
75
828
94
1010
1120
1214
138
1425
157
167
171
183
1921
204
216
221
2325
248
256
261
2714
2824
2922
305
3111
3213
3314
346
3515
3620
3719
3810
394
403
4116
427
432
4424
4533
4610
473
4822
495
53.98% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.37168141592920356
totalSentences113
uniqueOpeners42
53.76% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences62
matches
0"Bright blue eyes locked onto"
ratio0.016
71.61% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences62
matches
0"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
1"Her straight black hair fell"
2"She kept her gaze fixed"
3"He ran fingers through combed"
4"His gaze snagged on the"
5"His boots froze on the"
6"She turned her stool."
7"He took three fast steps"
8"He surveyed her, taking in"
9"His hazel eyes lingered on"
10"He took a quick sip,"
11"He waited for a reaction,"
12"He glanced around the bar—the"
13"He glanced at the water-stained"
14"She swallowed the rest of"
15"He looked at her through"
16"Her gaze softened for a"
17"He stood up, smoothing the"
18"He pulled a crisp fifty-pound"
19"He took his briefcase, holding"
ratio0.371
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences62
matches
0"Rain smashed against the front"
1"Silas set a heavy glass"
2"His grey-streaked auburn hair caught"
3"Rory thumbed the pale, crescent-shaped"
4"Her straight black hair fell"
5"She kept her gaze fixed"
6"Silas wiped down the stainless"
7"The brass chime over the"
8"A draft of damp, diesel-tainted"
9"A tall man stepped over"
10"A leather briefcase swung from"
11"He ran fingers through combed"
12"His gaze snagged on the"
13"His boots froze on the"
14"Rory’s shoulders hitched."
15"The voice carried the thick,"
16"She turned her stool."
17"He took three fast steps"
18"A gold watch gleamed under"
19"Gareth stripped off his leather"
ratio0.952
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences62
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"He ran fingers through combed brown hair, scanning the low-ceilinged room with the cautious eye of someone who took the wrong turn off Dean Street."
1"He took three fast steps forward, stopping short of the empty stool beside her as if an outstretched hand might shatter the air between them."
2"He hesitated, his lips parted as if to offer a counter-argument, but no legal precedent existed for the space she occupied now."
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He waited, his posture stiffening into the poise of the courtroom"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Gareth murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences62
tagDensity0.032
leniency0.065
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.032
83.4646%