Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCTXHMYMSB1XJ3NGGW6DF15

Run Details

Duration:
28.7s
Cost:
$0.032509
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory slipped past the thick brambles marking the edge of Richmond Park. Midnight draped the open heath in thick, featureless darkness, but as her boots crossed the invisible threshold between the two ancient oak standing stones, the night altered its texture. The ambient hum of Greater London vanished. No distant sirens, no muffled thrum of engine brake exhaust along the A3, no hum of jet engines lined up for Heathrow. The sudden silence pressed hard against her eardrums, dense and absolute as deep water. Cool air rushed into her lungs, thick with the heavy scent of crushed stems, wet soil, and night-blooming jasmine. Yellow primroses and purple foxgloves choked the earth around her boots, blooming in vibrant, unnatural abundance despite the late autumn frost waiting just outside the boundary. Rory lifted her left arm and tapped the face of her watch. The digital display flickered once, the numbers scrambling into nonsensical glyphs before going dark. She let her arm drop, her thumb tracing the small, crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist out of old, subconscious habit. The law textbooks at Cardiff University had never offered a logical framework for places where geometry warped and time slipped its gears, but months in London had forced her to adapt quickly. She pulled the silver chain out from beneath her collar. Resting in her palm, the Heartstone Pendant throbbed. The thumb-sized crimson gem radiated a low, feverish heat that pulsed against her skin like a trapped pulse. A faint red glow spilled through her fingers, staining the damp grass at her feet in shades of fresh rust. She was here for a answer. The scribbled note left beneath a tip jar at the Golden Empress had named the Grove, promising a lead on the benefactor who had sent her the artifact. But the clearing stood empty. Massive oak trunks, wide as carriages and gnarled with age, stood in a jagged ring around the central lawn. Moonshine filtered through the canopy, casting long, sharp shadows across the clearing. Rory took three steps forward. The grass beneath her soles made no sound. It yielded like wet felt, dampening the strike of her heel. She paused near the stone nearest the center. Her bright blue eyes swept the perimeter, methodical and slow, searching for a outline that didn't belong to the timber. A snap cracked through the quiet. The sound came from three feet to her left—a dry branch yielding under heavy weight. Rory whirled, her balance shifting low. Her right hand darted into her coat pocket, fingers curling around the cold, jagged edge of a steel house key. Nothing stood among the ferns. The leaves hung motionless. Not a whisper of wind stirred the high branches, yet a tangle of wild briars three feet away swayed, bent outward as though pushed aside by a broad, invisible torso. She held her breath. "Show yourself." Her voice dropped straight to the soil, stripped of resonance or echo. The briars slowly straightened. Rory backed away, keeping her eyes fixed on the spot. The crimson gem at her throat flared brighter, its heat surging until the silver chain burned hot against the back of her neck. The pendant didn't merely pulse now; it shuddered against her collarbone in short, frantic twitches, reacting to something close, something linked to the cold voids of Hel. *Think,* she told herself, forcing her racing heart down into a controlled rhythm. *It's spatial distortion. The sound traveled from somewhere else in the park.* She glanced down at her feet. The shadow cast by the central oak caught her eye. The moon hung high to her right, throwing silhouettes toward the western edge of the grove. But the shadow cast by the oak trunk before her pointed east, creeping long and razor-thin across the flowering lawn. It moved. The dark stain on the grass stretched, extending a long, jagged tendril that curved away from the tree trunk and slithered directly toward her boots. It moved with fluid, purposeful intent, creeping over petals and stone without altering the light behind it. Rory bolted backward. The shadow snapped back to the base of the tree like a released rubber band, dissolving into the general dark. She reached the space between the two boundary oaks she had entered through, ready to clear the threshold and return to the safe, mundane turf of Richmond Park. She took three long, violent strides through the gap. The air didn't change. The scent of jasmine remained thick and suffocating. She looked down. She stood back in the exact center of the clearing, surrounded by the same ring of ancient oaks. The boundary had folded back on itself, trapping her in a loop. A low, wet sound rustled from the canopy directly above her head. *Schhh. Schhh.* It sounded like heavy, sodden canvas dragging over coarse bark. Rory didn't look up immediately. She shifted her stance, tracking the sound through ears alone as it moved laterally across the high limbs. The branches didn't creak under the weight, but a rain of bruised blossom petals dropped from the dark, floating down to land around her shoulders. One petal brushed her cheek. It left a icy, smear of dark grease across her skin that carried the metallic tang of dried copper and stagnant river water. She wiped her face with the back of her coat sleeve, her blue eyes tracking a shift in the air ten paces ahead. The space between two oaks rippled like heat rising off a sun-baked highway. The wildflowers beneath the distortion flattened, crushed down into the black mud by heavy, unseen pressure. Two distinct depressions appeared in the soil, three feet apart, sinking four inches deep. The air temperature dropped precipitously. Her breath bloomed into white frost before her face. The Heartstone Pendant reached a agonizing temperature, searing through her cotton shirt, demanding her attention. It shone with a violent, blinding crimson light, casting raw red illumination across the invisible shape advancing on her. The red light caught the outline of something tall and impossibly narrow. It lacked a human silhouette; its proportions stretched too long at the joints, its upper frame leaning forward at an angle that defied balance. The red glow glinted off damp, pale surfaces that looked like polished bone or wet river stones embedded deep in dark, fibrous muscle. It took another step. The mud sucked loud around the unseen weight. Rory backed up until her shoulder blades struck the rough, frozen bark of the central oak. The wood behind her offered no warmth, cold as iron. The creature stopped five feet away. The spatial distortion wavered, settling into a dense, oppressive stillness. Rory could feel the heat rolling off the entity—not body warmth, but the dry, suffocating draft of a freshly opened tomb, smelling of dry rot and ancient lime. A sound parted the air right above her head. It wasn't a voice. It was a long, ragged inhalation, drawn through something dry and cavernous, sucking the cold air out of the space between them. The exhaled breath followed a second later, blowing cold and damp across Rory's forehead, ruffling the dark bangs stuck to her skin.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
91.62% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1194
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"quickly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"quickly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
7.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1194
totalAiIsms22
found
0
word"silence"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"tracing"
count1
3
word"framework"
count1
4
word"throbbed"
count1
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count2
7
word"methodical"
count1
8
word"weight"
count3
9
word"whisper"
count1
10
word"resonance"
count1
11
word"echo"
count1
12
word"racing"
count1
13
word"searing"
count1
14
word"warmth"
count2
15
word"wavered"
count1
16
word"oppressive"
count1
17
word"could feel"
count1
highlights
0"silence"
1"flickered"
2"tracing"
3"framework"
4"throbbed"
5"pulsed"
6"pulse"
7"methodical"
8"weight"
9"whisper"
10"resonance"
11"echo"
12"racing"
13"searing"
14"warmth"
15"wavered"
16"oppressive"
17"could feel"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences88
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen32
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans3
markdownWords15
totalWords1192
ratio0.013
matches
0"Think,"
1"It's spatial distortion. The sound traveled from somewhere else in the park."
2"Schhh. Schhh."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount1190
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity0.84
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park2
Greater1
London2
Heathrow1
Cardiff1
University1
Heartstone2
Pendant2
Golden1
Empress1
Grove1
Hel1
Rory10
persons
0"University"
1"Pendant"
2"Empress"
3"Grove"
4"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
4"Golden"
globalScore1
windowScore1
78.57% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences70
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"sounded like heavy, sodden canvas dragging"
1"looked like polished bone or wet river st"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.839
wordCount1192
matches
0"not body warmth, but the dry, suffocating draft of a freshly opened tomb, smellin"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean26.49
std16.15
cv0.61
sampleLengths
041
143
245
326
453
556
639
731
824
928
106
1115
1226
1339
146
1512
164
1760
1825
1916
2036
212
2242
233
2420
2537
2612
2733
2812
292
3010
3148
3228
3323
3443
3514
3634
3759
3812
3926
406
4138
429
4326
4422
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences88
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs170
matches(empty)
14.45% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences89
ratio0.045
matches
0"The sound came from three feet to her left—a dry branch yielding under heavy weight."
1"The pendant didn't merely pulse now; it shuddered against her collarbone in short, frantic twitches, reacting to something close, something linked to the cold voids of Hel."
2"It lacked a human silhouette; its proportions stretched too long at the joints, its upper frame leaning forward at an angle that defied balance."
3"Rory could feel the heat rolling off the entity—not body warmth, but the dry, suffocating draft of a freshly opened tomb, smelling of dry rot and ancient lime."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1197
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small, crescent-shaped scar"
1"yielding under heavy weight."
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.026733500417710943
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.00835421888053467
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean13.39
std8.05
cv0.601
sampleLengths
012
129
27
322
414
519
626
712
814
921
1032
1110
128
1318
1420
156
1628
175
1819
1912
205
218
2211
238
2420
256
2615
276
2820
295
304
3130
324
332
3412
354
3610
3723
3827
3913
403
419
426
4310
4416
4520
462
4725
4817
493
38.76% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.23595505617977527
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners21
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
97.65% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences85
matches
0"She let her arm drop,"
1"She pulled the silver chain"
2"She was here for a"
3"It yielded like wet felt,"
4"She paused near the stone"
5"Her bright blue eyes swept"
6"Her right hand darted into"
7"She held her breath."
8"Her voice dropped straight to"
9"*It's spatial distortion."
10"She glanced down at her"
11"It moved with fluid, purposeful"
12"She reached the space between"
13"She took three long, violent"
14"She looked down."
15"She stood back in the"
16"It sounded like heavy, sodden"
17"She shifted her stance, tracking"
18"It left a icy, smear"
19"She wiped her face with"
ratio0.306
24.71% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount74
totalSentences85
matches
0"Rory slipped past the thick"
1"Midnight draped the open heath"
2"The ambient hum of Greater"
3"The sudden silence pressed hard"
4"Rory lifted her left arm"
5"The digital display flickered once,"
6"She let her arm drop,"
7"The law textbooks at Cardiff"
8"She pulled the silver chain"
9"The thumb-sized crimson gem radiated"
10"A faint red glow spilled"
11"She was here for a"
12"The scribbled note left beneath"
13"Moonshine filtered through the canopy,"
14"Rory took three steps forward."
15"The grass beneath her soles"
16"It yielded like wet felt,"
17"She paused near the stone"
18"Her bright blue eyes swept"
19"A snap cracked through the"
ratio0.871
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
51.95% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences55
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The scribbled note left beneath a tip jar at the Golden Empress had named the Grove, promising a lead on the benefactor who had sent her the artifact."
1"Her bright blue eyes swept the perimeter, methodical and slow, searching for a outline that didn't belong to the timber."
2"Not a whisper of wind stirred the high branches, yet a tangle of wild briars three feet away swayed, bent outward as though pushed aside by a broad, invisible t…"
3"The dark stain on the grass stretched, extending a long, jagged tendril that curved away from the tree trunk and slithered directly toward her boots."
4"It left a icy, smear of dark grease across her skin that carried the metallic tang of dried copper and stagnant river water."
5"It lacked a human silhouette; its proportions stretched too long at the joints, its upper frame leaning forward at an angle that defied balance."
6"The red glow glinted off damp, pale surfaces that looked like polished bone or wet river stones embedded deep in dark, fibrous muscle."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
79.7860%