Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences
49
technicalSentenceCount
19
matches
0
"The Heartstone pendant, hidden beneath her black t-shirt, throbbed against her collarbone with a heat that bordered on burn."
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"Tall ancient grey oak standing stones ringed the space, each one carved with spirals that hurt to trace with her eyes, patterns that seemed to writhe in her per…"
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"Between them, wildflowers bloomed in wild abundance, bluebells and foxgloves and others she couldn't name with black centres that seemed to track her movement w…"
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"The air smelled cloyingly sweet, like lilies left in a sealed room for weeks, with an undertone of copper that made her tongue taste iron and old pennies."
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"At twenty-five, with straight black hair plastered now to her neck with sweat, she had learned to keep her head cool, to think in angles others missed, but her …"
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"The wildflowers pressed soft and insistent against her calves, releasing that sickly perfume with every brush, leaving faint black pollen on her dark jeans."
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"In its place stood a wall of intertwined briars and white-barked birches, thicker than her arms could part, growing with an urgency that made her skin crawl."
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"Now it read quarter past eleven, though the quality of darkness had deepened, thickened, as if hours had collapsed into minutes or stretched into endless days."
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"Time moved differently inside, an hour within could be minutes outside, or the reverse, a pocket suspended between Earth and some older realm that did not respe…"
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"At the north edge she found only more stones, their carvings seeming to shift in her peripheral vision, rearranging with patient, invisible hands that worked fa…"
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"Too slow, too deep, resonating through the soil and up through her boots, rustling through wildflowers that swayed violently though no wind existed in this seal…"
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"In the silence that followed, Rory heard a single word whispered through a thousand flower stems, in a voice like her dead grandmother's Welsh lullaby twisted t…"
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"It had been part of them, woven into bark and root and the very soil that nourished these wrong-coloured flowers, and now it was coming for her with a speed tha…"
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"The ground seemed to tilt beneath her feet, the wildflowers grabbing at her ankles with soft, insistent tendrils that clung like fingers."
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"Behind her, the thing crashed through undergrowth with a sound like an ancient tree falling in a forest with no other trees for miles, a thunder that should hav…"
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"She ran for where the hedge had been, for any opening, her lungs burning, the pendant bouncing hard against her chest, guiding her or dooming her, she couldn't …"
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"In the centre of the circle, the creature rose, unfolding from a crouch into something that wore human shape the way a cheap coat wears a wire hanger, wrong in …"
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"It took one step toward her, then another, each footfall crushing flowers that screamed in frequencies her ears barely registered, and Rory realised she had com…"
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"The thing reached for her with fingers that ended in roots dripping dark soil and something blacker, and Rory Carter, who prided herself on quick thinking, on s…"