| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 10 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.556 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 86.89% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1144 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 3 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "suddenly" | | 1 | "truly" | | 2 | "slowly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 30.07% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1144 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "scanned" | | 1 | "pulsed" | | 2 | "warmth" | | 3 | "rhythmic" | | 4 | "whisper" | | 5 | "gleaming" | | 6 | "etched" | | 7 | "tracing" | | 8 | "silk" | | 9 | "pulse" | | 10 | "could feel" | | 11 | "otherworldly" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 102 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 110 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 26 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1132 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 11 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 58 | | wordCount | 1027 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 1.66 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | December | 1 | | Nyx | 9 | | Veil | 3 | | Heartstone | 4 | | Earth | 2 | | Belphegor | 1 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Fae | 4 | | Courts | 1 | | Isolde | 8 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Rory | 17 | | Dymas | 2 | | Shade | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Nyx" | | 1 | "Veil" | | 2 | "Heartstone" | | 3 | "Belphegor" | | 4 | "Isolde" | | 5 | "Rory" | | 6 | "Dymas" | | 7 | "Shade" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Earth" |
| | globalScore | 0.672 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 41.30% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "spirals that seemed to crawl in her peripheral vision" | | 1 | "quite moonlight" | | 2 | "sounded like a whisper carried on the wind" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 3 | | per1kWords | 2.65 | | wordCount | 1132 | | matches | | 0 | "not arranged, not placed, but grown in a circle" | | 1 | "not placed, but grown in a circle" | | 2 | "not in worship, but in recognition" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 110 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 39 | | mean | 29.03 | | std | 20.94 | | cv | 0.721 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 68 | | 2 | 4 | | 3 | 46 | | 4 | 37 | | 5 | 75 | | 6 | 3 | | 7 | 38 | | 8 | 18 | | 9 | 4 | | 10 | 64 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 66 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 51 | | 16 | 47 | | 17 | 14 | | 18 | 17 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 55 | | 23 | 35 | | 24 | 26 | | 25 | 26 | | 26 | 25 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 48 | | 29 | 3 | | 30 | 34 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 43 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 27 | | 36 | 68 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 28 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 102 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 162 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 9 | | totalSentences | 110 | | ratio | 0.082 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx stepped through behind her, tall—around six foot two when solid—an outline of living shadow that refused to blur at the edges." | | 1 | "The ancient oak standing stones marked the boundary—not arranged, not placed, but grown in a circle that predated the park itself." | | 2 | "Rory's left wrist itched—the small crescent-shaped scar from a childhood accident, white against her skin, suddenly alive with heat." | | 3 | "And sitting upon one—though Isolde never truly sat—was the Half-Fae seer." | | 4 | "The sky of Dymas leaked into the grove—warm amber where there should have been darkness, sprawling orchards imagined in the scent alone." | | 5 | "Her shadow stretched wrong—too long, bending around stones that cast nothing back." | | 6 | "She could not lie—Fae compulsion bound her—but she could mislead, and her riddle wrapped itself around Rory's ribs like a vine." | | 7 | "Wildflowers bowed—not in worship, but in recognition." | | 8 | "Time in the grove snapped back—an hour had passed, or perhaps a minute, or perhaps a day had vanished into the pocket." |
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| 82.13% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1049 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "strange silver-green light" |
| | adverbCount | 49 | | adverbRatio | 0.04671115347950429 | | lyAdverbCount | 20 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.019065776930409915 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 110 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 110 | | mean | 10.29 | | std | 6.46 | | cv | 0.628 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 2 | | 2 | 2 | | 3 | 15 | | 4 | 22 | | 5 | 15 | | 6 | 12 | | 7 | 4 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 19 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 9 | | 12 | 13 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 3 | | 16 | 3 | | 17 | 21 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 25 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 3 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 5 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 10 | | 32 | 1 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 19 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 6 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 19 | | 40 | 7 | | 41 | 19 | | 42 | 9 | | 43 | 10 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 10 | | 46 | 5 | | 47 | 17 | | 48 | 4 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 51.82% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 13 | | diversityRatio | 0.38181818181818183 | | totalSentences | 110 | | uniqueOpeners | 42 | |
| 77.52% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Bright blue eyes narrowed at" | | 1 | "Faintly glowing violet eyes scanned" |
| | ratio | 0.023 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 14 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "She wore her delivery jacket," | | 1 | "Her straight black hair, cut" | | 2 | "Their bark carried spirals that" | | 3 | "They walked deeper." | | 4 | "She didn't check her watch." | | 5 | "She ignored it and drew" | | 6 | "It could cut through magical" | | 7 | "Their voice sounded like a" | | 8 | "She wore no footprints in" | | 9 | "Her shadow stretched wrong—too long," | | 10 | "she breathed, looking at the" | | 11 | "She could not lie—Fae compulsion" | | 12 | "It had cooled, but left" | | 13 | "She walked back through." |
| | ratio | 0.163 | |
| 70.47% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory pushed through the shimmer" | | 1 | "The frost-crusted grass of London" | | 2 | "She wore her delivery jacket," | | 3 | "Her straight black hair, cut" | | 4 | "Nyx stepped through behind her," | | 5 | "Rory's fingers found the Heartstone" | | 6 | "Warmth spread across her collarbone," | | 7 | "The ancient oak standing stones" | | 8 | "Their bark carried spirals that" | | 9 | "The grove existed in a" | | 10 | "They walked deeper." | | 11 | "Rory felt it in her" | | 12 | "An hour inside could be" | | 13 | "She didn't check her watch." | | 14 | "The hands wouldn't obey the" | | 15 | "Nyx drifted closer, their form" | | 16 | "The realm of gluttony." | | 17 | "Prince Belphegor's domain of excess," | | 18 | "The Heartstone pulsed faster, confirming" | | 19 | "The Veil weakened during the" |
| | ratio | 0.779 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 86 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 28.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 50 | | technicalSentenceCount | 8 | | matches | | 0 | "The frost-crusted grass of London vanished beneath her boots into something that refused to crunch." | | 1 | "Nyx stepped through behind her, tall—around six foot two when solid—an outline of living shadow that refused to blur at the edges." | | 2 | "Rory felt it in her joints, a sluggishness that had nothing to do with temperature." | | 3 | "In the strange silver-green light of the grove, it glowed faintly, luminescent in moonlight that wasn't quite moonlight." | | 4 | "A pool lay ahead, still as glass, reflecting stars that hadn't shown through the twisted canopy." | | 5 | "Her shadow stretched wrong—too long, bending around stones that cast nothing back." | | 6 | "The scar on Rory's wrist flared white-hot, then cooled, leaving a phantom itch that lingered." | | 7 | "But Rory knew, as she turned toward the standing stones and the faint shimmer of the Veil that waited beyond, that they had crossed something ancient." |
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| 75.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 10 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | |
| 38.89% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 9 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Isolde corrected (correct)" | | 1 | "she breathed (breathe)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.222 | | effectiveRatio | 0.222 | |