Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCTZAFYPVQ3NSTSRD99RKCT

Run Details

Duration:
49.9s
Cost:
$0.070750
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Neon light bled through the damp window of The Raven's Nest, staining the dark mahogany bar a pale, sickly green. Outside, Soho rain washed over the cobblestones. Silas moved behind the counter with unhurried, rhythmic precision, his left knee giving a faint catch with every third step. His silver signet ring tapped against a heavy glass tumbler as he wiped down the zinc rim. Rory sat on the end stool, elbows planted on the dark oak, black hair falling forward to frame her jaw. She wore her faded canvas coat over a plain black jumper, thumb tracing the rim of her glass. Her bright blue eyes stayed fixed on the reflection of the liquor bottles lining the back mirror. The brass chime above the door rattled. A gust of wet air carried the smell of ozone, roasted chestnuts, and wet asphalt into the warmth of the bar. A man stepped inside, shaking out a heavy black umbrella. Tailored wool coat, silver cufflinks, leather satchel slapped against his hip. He paused under the doorway, scanning the dimly lit booth seating before his eyes locked onto the back of Rory's head. "Rory?" She did not turn immediately. Her fingers stilled on her glass. "Aurora?" The man took three steps forward, leather shoes squeaking against the wet floorboards. "It really is you." Rory turned her head slowly. The amber light caught the sharp angle of her cheekbones. "Julian." Julian Vance pulled off his leather gloves, his face frozen in a mixture of disbelief and sudden, awkward warmth. He had filled out since their nights at the Cathays Library, his jaw broader, his auburn hair styled with immaculate gel. "Good God." Julian took the stool beside her, placing his satchel on the brass rail below. "Five years. You vanished into thin air." "I moved." "Moved?" He let out a breathless laugh, looking around the dim bar, his eyes lingering on the framed monochrome photos of long-dead boxers and old maps of Europe. "You vanished off the face of the earth, Rory. No phone call. No forward address. Your father wouldn't speak a word except that you took a leave of absence." Silas set a fresh coaster in front of Julian. He did not speak, but his hazel eyes measured the younger man's tailored suit in a single, cold sweep. "Single malt." Julian gestured toward the top shelf, pulling a silver money clip from his breast pocket. "Whatever your finest bottle is." Silas nodded once, his limping gait bringing him over to the whiskey decanters. "I work here." Rory pointed a thumb toward the ceiling. "Well, I live upstairs. I deliver takeout for the Golden Empress down the lane." Julian stopped fumbling with his wallet. His hand hovered over the leather satchel. "You're joking." "I don't joke about logistics." "Rory, you had the highest marks in our year." Julian's brow furrowed, genuine confusion cutting through his polished corporate posture. "Professor Davies kept your mock trial closing argument on his syllabus for two terms after you left. Your father had a desk waiting for you at Crown Office Chambers." "Crown Office was my father's dream." Rory raised her glass, downing the last splash of clear liquid. "Not mine." Silas placed a heavy glass of amber scotch on the coaster in front of Julian. The silver ring clicked against the crystal. He scooped up Rory's empty glass without asking and slid a small bowl of salted almonds between them before retreating to the far end of the counter. Julian picked up his scotch, swirled it, but didn't drink. "We thought something terrible happened to you." Julian lowered his voice, dropping into a register reserved for delicate client meetings. "When Evan showed up to the end-of-year ball alone..." Rory's shoulder muscles locked. She tugged the left sleeve of her jumper down over her wrist, hiding the small crescent-shaped scar near her thumb. "Evan always enjoyed an audience." "He was wrecked, Rory. He spent three months looking for you. He came to my flat in Cathays twice, practically in tears, asking if you'd left a note." Rory let out a short, hollow sound that wasn't quite a laugh. "Did he mention the bruises?" Julian froze. The scotch stopped halfway to his mouth. "What?" "Did he mention why the flat was empty?" Rory turned fully on her stool, leaning closer. Her bright blue eyes turned sharp, devoid of the soft, earnest warmth Julian remembered from late-night study sessions over law textbooks. "Did he describe the night I packed my bag while he was passed out on the rug?" Julian swallowed hard. He set the glass back down. The liquid sloshed against the crystal rim. "He stated you had a breakdown. He told everyone the pressure of the bar exams got to you." "He was a good liar then. He's probably a better one now." "Rory..." Julian reached out, his manicured hand hovering an inch above her sleeve before dropping back to the counter. "I didn't know. Nobody knew." "Because I didn't want you to know." She rested her chin on her hand, watching him. "Look at you, Julian. Senior associate?" "Partner, actually. Last autumn." He sounded almost ashamed, the pride bleeding out of his voice. "Clifford Chance. Corporate litigation." "Partner at twenty-seven." She nodded slowly. "You always did love the billable hours." "It's what we worked for. What you worked for." Julian leaned in, his tone pleading, searching her face for a glimpse of the girl who used to draft brilliant legal briefs on coffee-stained napkins. "You were supposed to be standing right there alongside us. We had plans, Rory. You, me, Eva, Gareth. We were going to buy that house in Roath." "Eva's here." Rory rested her hands flat on the counter. "In London." Julian blinked. "You keep in touch with Eva?" "She pulled me out of Cardiff." A silence settled over the bar, heavy and suffocating. The rain outside picked up, drumming against the green neon sign above the entrance. At the far end of the counter, Silas meticulously wiped down a draft handle, his steady presence a wall of quiet watchfulness behind them. "Your father looks ten years older." Julian swirled his scotch. "I ran into him at the Cardiff Law Society dinner last month. He sits on the bench now. Circuit judge." "Good for Brendan." "He misses you." "He misses the concept of me." Rory tugged her sleeve lower again, her thumb catching on the edge of the ribbed cuff. "He misses the daughter who looked good on his promotional pamphlets." "That's unfair." "It's accurate." Julian took a long drag of his scotch, wincing as the peat hit his throat. He looked at her worn boots, the frayed hem of her trousers, the faint dark circles under her eyes. "You live above a pub in Soho, Rory. You're carrying Chinese food through the rain." Anger edged into his voice now, subtle but distinct—the frustration of a man looking at a ruined masterpiece. "You threw away a career at the bar for... this? For hiding?" Rory's gaze flicked up, cold and steady as iron. "I'm not hiding." "Then what do you call this?" Julian gestured broadly at the dark wooden paneling, the quiet shadows, her faded coat. "You ran away." "I survived." The word hung between them, thick and unyielding. Julian opened his mouth to counter, but the words withered before he could speak them. He looked down at his glass, the heavy gold watch on his wrist catching the dim light. "I still have your notes," Julian offered quietly, the anger draining out of him, leaving behind something bruised and worn. "The ones on criminal intent. I kept them in my office drawer." Rory looked at the bowl of salted almonds between them. She picked one up, crushed the dry skin between her fingertips, and let the salt fall back into the porcelain dish. "Throw them out." "I can't just throw them out, Rory." Julian rubbed the bridge of his nose. "We thought you were dead." "Evan liked the drama." "Stop doing that." Julian turned toward her on the stool, his knee knocking against the dark oak frame. "Stop pretending none of it mattered. You were my best friend for three years. We lived in each other's pockets. You helped me pass constitutional law when my mother was in the hospital." "That was five years ago, Julian." "Five years isn't a lifetime!" "It is when you spend it building a different skin." Silas stepped forward, setting a fresh bowl of ice near the tap well. His hazel eyes fixed on Julian for two slow seconds. The unspoken boundary slammed down like an iron gate. Julian caught the older man's gaze and shrank back slightly, clearing his throat. He smoothed the lapels of his tailored suit coat. "If you needed help," Julian offered, his voice barely audible over the rain, "you could have come to me. Not just Eva. Me." "You would have called my father." Julian kept silent. "You would have sat me down in his study," Rory continued, her voice quiet, lethal, measured. "You would have poured tea, spoken about duty and prospects, and handed me right back to the men who wanted to pick me apart." Julian looked down at his leather shoes, the wet polish reflecting the low bar light. "I thought I was protecting you back then." "You were protecting your placement at his firm." "Do you ever think about going back?" Julian tapped his fingers against the glass. "Finishing the degree?" Rory looked past him, toward the neon green glow washing over the rainy street outside. "Cardiff doesn't exist anymore. Not for me." Julian lifted his glass, took a small, bitter sip, and set it down. "I'm staying at the Sanderson tonight." He reached into his pocket and pulled out a small, embossed cream business card, sliding it across the zinc counter toward her. "I'm in London until Thursday. For the arbitration hearing." Rory looked at the crisp black typography on the card. *Julian Vance, Partner, Clifford Chance LLP.* "If you want to talk. Without the ghosts." Rory didn't pick up the card. She left it lying on the dark wood between the almond dish and his sweating glass of scotch. "Enjoy the arbitration, Julian."
created_at"2026-07-25T14:30:54.216Z" 7/25/2026, 2:30:54 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
76.54% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount5
adverbTags
0"Rory turned fully [fully]"
1"He sounded almost [almost]"
2"She nodded slowly [slowly]"
3"Julian gestured broadly [broadly]"
4"Julian offered quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences81
tagDensity0.321
leniency0.642
rawRatio0.192
effectiveRatio0.123
88.27% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1705
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count2
2
adverb"slightly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slowly"
2"slightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
56.01% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1705
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"tracing"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count3
3
word"scanning"
count1
4
word"measured"
count2
5
word"furrowed"
count1
6
word"crystal"
count2
7
word"silence"
count1
8
word"flicked"
count1
9
word"porcelain"
count1
10
word"unspoken"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"tracing"
2"warmth"
3"scanning"
4"measured"
5"furrowed"
6"crystal"
7"silence"
8"flicked"
9"porcelain"
10"unspoken"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"let out a breath"
count1
highlights
0"let out a breath"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences87
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences142
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords6
totalWords1704
ratio0.004
matches
0"Julian Vance, Partner, Clifford Chance LLP."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions64
wordCount1080
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity2.78
worstName"Julian"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Julian"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Rory17
Vance2
Cathays1
Library1
Europe1
Silas6
Julian30
Partner1
Clifford1
Chance1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Vance"
4"Silas"
5"Julian"
6"Clifford"
7"Chance"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cathays"
2"Library"
3"Europe"
globalScore0.111
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences78
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"quite a laugh"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1704
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences142
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs85
mean20.05
std16.28
cv0.812
sampleLengths
064
155
228
342
41
511
618
715
81
940
1023
112
1257
1328
1422
1513
1624
1713
182
195
2049
2119
2249
2310
2429
2524
265
2728
2812
295
309
311
3254
3316
3418
3512
3624
3722
3819
3913
4061
4112
428
436
4447
4530
463
473
4833
492
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences87
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs168
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences142
ratio0.007
matches
0"\"You live above a pub in Soho, Rory. You're carrying Chinese food through the rain.\" Anger edged into his voice now, subtle but distinct—the frustration of a man looking at a ruined masterpiece."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1085
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.022119815668202765
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.010138248847926268
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences142
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences142
mean12
std7.85
cv0.654
sampleLengths
020
17
220
317
420
518
617
77
821
910
1011
1121
121
135
146
1514
164
175
1810
191
2019
2121
2216
237
242
2528
2629
279
2819
2917
305
3113
3210
3314
346
357
362
375
3820
3929
4017
412
4215
437
4427
4510
4620
479
484
4920
48.83% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.33098591549295775
totalSentences142
uniqueOpeners47
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences85
matches
0"His silver signet ring tapped"
1"She wore her faded canvas"
2"Her bright blue eyes stayed"
3"He paused under the doorway,"
4"She did not turn immediately."
5"Her fingers stilled on her"
6"He had filled out since"
7"He let out a breathless"
8"He did not speak, but"
9"His hand hovered over the"
10"He scooped up Rory's empty"
11"She tugged the left sleeve"
12"Her bright blue eyes turned"
13"He set the glass back"
14"She rested her chin on"
15"He sounded almost ashamed, the"
16"She nodded slowly"
17"He looked at her worn"
18"He looked down at his"
19"She picked one up, crushed"
ratio0.282
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount82
totalSentences85
matches
0"Neon light bled through the"
1"Silas moved behind the counter"
2"His silver signet ring tapped"
3"Rory sat on the end"
4"She wore her faded canvas"
5"Her bright blue eyes stayed"
6"The brass chime above the"
7"A gust of wet air"
8"A man stepped inside, shaking"
9"He paused under the doorway,"
10"She did not turn immediately."
11"Her fingers stilled on her"
12"The man took three steps"
13"Rory turned her head slowly."
14"The amber light caught the"
15"Julian Vance pulled off his"
16"He had filled out since"
17"Julian took the stool beside"
18"He let out a breathless"
19"Silas set a fresh coaster"
ratio0.965
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
28.85% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount5
matches
0"He sounded almost, the pride bleeding out of his voice"
1"Rory tugged, her thumb catching on the edge of the ribbed cuff"
2"Julian turned, his knee knocking against the dark oak frame"
3"Julian offered, his voice barely audible over the rain,"
4"Rory continued, her voice quiet, lethal, measured"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory continued (continue)"
dialogueSentences81
tagDensity0.012
leniency0.025
rawRatio1
effectiveRatio0.025
79.7499%