Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCV43BXY9TDDE87B36CE9WK

Run Details

Duration:
40.1s
Cost:
$0.061692
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The amber sky bled into violet along the horizon, stretched over a canopy of petrified oak trees that towered hundreds of feet into the thick air. Rory crossed the threshold past the ancient standing stones, her boots sinking into moss that crunched like crushed glass underfoot. Her breath caught. The cold humidity of Richmond Park vanished, replaced by a dense heat smelling of burnt sugar and ozone. She pressed a hand to her chest. Beneath her cotton shirt, the deep crimson gemstone of her Heartstone pendant throbbed against her skin, matching the rhythm of her pulse. "The air tastes like old wine." Rory drew the moonsilver dagger from its sheath on her belt. Frost coated her knuckles as her fingers wrapped around the leaf-shaped hilt, a stark white against the suffocating warmth of the realm. Isolde drifted past a cluster of spiral-shaped ferns. Her waist-length silver hair floated in the airless heat, motionless despite her forward motion. Not a single blade of crystalline grass bent beneath her bare soles. "Where the roots drink blood, the branches bear candy." Isolde fixed her pale lavender eyes on the towering stone arches ahead. "Step only where the shadow leads, mortal, or the earth will swallow your memories whole." A dark shape detached itself from the shadow of an ancient monolith. Nyx spilled across the glassy ground, their humanoid form shifting from a flat silhouette into six feet of flickering twilight. Violet light pulsed where eyes ought to be. "The soil is hungry here." Nyx's voice rattled like dry leaves along stone. "This realm sits in the gullet between worlds. Dymas bleeds through the cracks." Rory kept her blade low, every sense dialed sharp. Ahead, a massive staircase carved from pitch-black stone descended into an amphitheatre overrun with giant, bleeding vines. Crimson sap dripped from purple gourds the size of carriage wheels, pooling in carved stone basins below. Each drop hit the rock with a resonance like a struck bell, echoing off monolithic pillars that supported nothing but the glowing violet fog overhead. She stepped toward the edge of the descent. Her left wrist twitched, the crescent-shaped scar pulling tight against her skin. "This isn't just a clearing. It's a temple. Or a slaughterhouse." Isolde paused beside a carved pillar, her fingers hovering a hairsbreadth above intricate glyphs pulsing with golden liquid. "Both functions serve the same appetite. Those who feast upon excess eventually become the meal. The Court of Gluttony leaves no leftovers." Rory glanced down at her pendant. The thumbnail-sized Heartstone glowed hotter now, casting a scarlet stain across her knuckles. "It reacts to something beneath us. A doorway." Nyx draped their shadowy form over the lip of a stone basin. A tendril of shadow dipped into the pooled crimson sap. The liquid hissed, boiling away into purple smoke that smelled of roasted almonds and charred bone. "Or an open jaw. The Veil thins to paper here. Reach out your hand, Rory Carter, and you might scrape your fingers against Hel itself." They stepped onto the spiral staircase. The pitch-black stone felt cold through Rory's thick boot soles, an icy contrast to the heavy atmosphere. Strange flowers nestled in the crevices of the steps—blossoms shaped like open mouths, lined with calcified teeth that snapped shut as her shadow passed over them. She flinched, pulling her hem away from a jaw-like petal that clicked inches from her ankle. "Don't feed them your hem." Isolde turned her head without shifting her torso. "They prefer warm meat, but cloth will stall their digestion for a century." "Charming." Rory adjusted her grip on the Fae-Forged blade. The luminescence of the moonsilver etched sharp white lines against the dark stone. "Which way to the rift?" Nyx pointed a long, ink-black finger down the spiral path. Shadows pooled thickest in the center of the amphitheatre, where four carved serpents intertwined around a central obelisk. "At the root. The stone drinks from the breach. Feel the pulse?" Rory stopped on a wide landing carved into the cliff face. She held her breath. The ground hummed beneath her boots—a rhythmic thud that rattled her teeth. It wasn't the beating of a heart; it felt like a giant bellows pumping liquid heat through hidden pipes under the rock. The air grew thicker with every step, smelling rich and metallic, like iron mixed with spun honey. To her right, a curtain of glowing liquid fell from an archway, cascading into a deep trench without a sound. Rory approached the liquid sheet, holding out her dagger. The moonsilver blade sizzled when the spray touched it, forming tiny beads of luminescent frost that skittered across the metal before vanishing into smoke. "Don't drink from that river." Isolde drifted beside her, her lavender eyes wide. "It is distilled indulgence. A single drop makes a mortal forget their name, their home, and their purpose, leaving them to starve in paradise." Rory pulled the dagger back, watching the liquid light pooling in the stone trench. Tiny bioluminescent creatures shaped like barbed needles swam through the fluid, darting around each other in tight spirals. "How long has this place been buried?" Nyx hovered at her shoulder, their form stretching across the rock wall like spilled ink. "It was never buried. It was forgotten. Mortals built cities over the gates, ignorant of the furnaces burning beneath their streets. London sleeps on a bed of old bones and open mouths." Rory turned away from the shimmering waterfall and continued down the spiral steps. The air pressure mounted, pressing against her ears. The sky above had shrunk to a narrow disc of amber light framed by the petrified trees, while the stone walls around them glistened with veins of crystalline salt that caught the ambient violet light. Isolde glided past her, stopping near a massive stone table set into the center of a wide terrace. The tabletop was carved from a single slab of pale green jade, stained dark in the center by centuries of spilled wine and tallow. Iron goblets as large as buckets sat abandoned across the surface, some encrusted with petrified fruit peels that shimmered like rubies in the gloom. "A banquet for ghosts." Isolde swept her hand across the air an inch above a goblet. The air shimmered, briefly reflecting the ghostly image of horned silhouettes laughing without sound around the table before dissolving back into dust. "The fallen lords of Dymas once traded souls across this board. They gambled away mortal lives for a single draught of celestial honey." Rory touched the rim of a fallen iron cup with the tip of her dagger. The metal chimed—a hollow tone that vibrated through the stone floor and echoed down the dark corridors branching off from the terrace. "Careful." Nyx hovered close. "Sound travels far in the gullet. Things sleep down here that haven't eaten since the court fell." "Then let's find the rift and get out." Rory led the way off the terrace, following the widening channel of glowing sap toward the base of the central obelisk. The heat grew intense enough to raise sweat on her neck, but the Fae-Forged blade in her hand remained ice-cold, soothing the burn in her palm. At the bottom of the amphitheatre, the four carved serpents wrapped around the obelisk were larger than she had realized from above. Their stone scales were inlaid with iridescent mother-of-pearl, and their open jaws framed a circular pit in the floor. In the center of the pit lay an iron ring three feet wide, embedded deep into the stone floor. The iron glowed red around its circumference, white steam rising where it scorched the black rock. Runes along the perimeter snapped with static discharges that lit the amber mist in blue flashes. "The Wardens?" Rory knelt, keeping her blade ready. She avoided the burning metal. "No Warden forged this lock." Isolde stopped at the edge of the pit, her eyes unblinking. "This iron bears the mark of Belphegor's blacksmiths. A lock to keep things in. Or a latch to pull them down." Rory held the Heartstone pendant right over the glowing iron ring. The crimson gem flared with sudden force, casting a beam of blood-red light into the center of the seal. The rock groaned. A hairline fracture opened across the floor, running straight through the serpents' tails, spilling hot amber light from the dark depth below. "It's opening." Rory shifted her weight back as the stone shifted under her boots. "No." Nyx's violet eyes widened into burning circles. "It's breathing." A gust of hot, honey-scented wind blasted out of the crack, rattling the heavy iron ring against the stone. The red glow on the iron turned white-hot. Deep beneath the floor, something heavy moved, dragging itself along subterranean rock toward the light. Rory tightened her grip on her dagger, frost creeping up her forearm as she faced the widening tear in the rock.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:33:30.757Z" 7/25/2026, 2:33:30 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags1
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.034
leniency0.069
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1483
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.20% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1483
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"throbbed"
count1
1
word"pulse"
count2
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"warmth"
count1
4
word"crystalline"
count2
5
word"pulsed"
count1
6
word"resonance"
count1
7
word"echoing"
count1
8
word"intricate"
count1
9
word"etched"
count1
10
word"rhythmic"
count1
11
word"pumping"
count1
12
word"cascading"
count1
13
word"shimmered"
count2
14
word"gloom"
count1
15
word"vibrated"
count1
16
word"echoed"
count1
17
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"throbbed"
1"pulse"
2"stark"
3"warmth"
4"crystalline"
5"pulsed"
6"resonance"
7"echoing"
8"intricate"
9"etched"
10"rhythmic"
11"pumping"
12"cascading"
13"shimmered"
14"gloom"
15"vibrated"
16"echoed"
17"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes widened"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1480
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
81.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions38
wordCount1165
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.37
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone3
Rory16
Fae-Forged2
Isolde8
Nyx7
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Rory"
2"Isolde"
3"Nyx"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
globalScore0.813
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences75
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"felt like a giant bellows pumping liqui"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1480
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs65
mean22.77
std19.32
cv0.848
sampleLengths
067
129
26
333
434
59
612
715
840
95
108
1113
1268
1320
1411
1518
1622
1719
188
1938
2025
2165
225
238
2413
251
2621
275
2828
2912
3066
3153
325
338
3424
3532
367
3715
3832
3956
4066
414
4234
4323
4437
451
463
4717
488
4947
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"was carved"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs188
matches(empty)
38.01% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences109
ratio0.037
matches
0"Strange flowers nestled in the crevices of the steps—blossoms shaped like open mouths, lined with calcified teeth that snapped shut as her shadow passed over them."
1"The ground hummed beneath her boots—a rhythmic thud that rattled her teeth."
2"It wasn't the beating of a heart; it felt like a giant bellows pumping liquid heat through hidden pipes under the rock."
3"The metal chimed—a hollow tone that vibrated through the stone floor and echoed down the dark corridors branching off from the terrace."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1100
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"long, ink-black finger"
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.016363636363636365
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0018181818181818182
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean13.58
std7.35
cv0.542
sampleLengths
026
120
23
318
47
522
66
711
822
98
1014
1112
129
1312
1415
1512
1620
178
185
198
2013
219
2217
2317
2425
258
2612
2711
2818
2922
306
3113
328
3312
3410
3516
3625
376
3817
3926
4016
415
428
4313
441
458
4613
475
4810
4918
56.88% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.3577981651376147
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences80
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount11
totalSentences80
matches
0"Her breath caught."
1"She pressed a hand to"
2"Her waist-length silver hair floated"
3"She stepped toward the edge"
4"Her left wrist twitched, the"
5"They stepped onto the spiral"
6"She flinched, pulling her hem"
7"She held her breath."
8"It wasn't the beating of"
9"Their stone scales were inlaid"
10"She avoided the burning metal."
ratio0.138
22.50% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences80
matches
0"The amber sky bled into"
1"Rory crossed the threshold past"
2"Her breath caught."
3"The cold humidity of Richmond"
4"She pressed a hand to"
5"Rory drew the moonsilver dagger"
6"Frost coated her knuckles as"
7"Isolde drifted past a cluster"
8"Her waist-length silver hair floated"
9"Isolde fixed her pale lavender"
10"A dark shape detached itself"
11"Nyx spilled across the glassy"
12"Violet light pulsed where eyes"
13"Nyx's voice rattled like dry"
14"Rory kept her blade low,"
15"Crimson sap dripped from purple"
16"Each drop hit the rock"
17"She stepped toward the edge"
18"Her left wrist twitched, the"
19"Isolde paused beside a carved"
ratio0.875
62.50% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences80
matches
0"To her right, a curtain"
ratio0.013
32.02% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences58
technicalSentenceCount9
matches
0"The amber sky bled into violet along the horizon, stretched over a canopy of petrified oak trees that towered hundreds of feet into the thick air."
1"Rory crossed the threshold past the ancient standing stones, her boots sinking into moss that crunched like crushed glass underfoot."
2"Each drop hit the rock with a resonance like a struck bell, echoing off monolithic pillars that supported nothing but the glowing violet fog overhead."
3"Isolde paused beside a carved pillar, her fingers hovering a hairsbreadth above intricate glyphs pulsing with golden liquid."
4"Strange flowers nestled in the crevices of the steps—blossoms shaped like open mouths, lined with calcified teeth that snapped shut as her shadow passed over th…"
5"She flinched, pulling her hem away from a jaw-like petal that clicked inches from her ankle."
6"The moonsilver blade sizzled when the spray touched it, forming tiny beads of luminescent frost that skittered across the metal before vanishing into smoke."
7"The sky above had shrunk to a narrow disc of amber light framed by the petrified trees, while the stone walls around them glistened with veins of crystalline sa…"
8"The metal chimed—a hollow tone that vibrated through the stone floor and echoed down the dark corridors branching off from the terrace."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags1
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.8812%