Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCV4B6J0BYWTS10Z4M837KY

Run Details

Duration:
15.9s
Cost:
$0.015357
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain filtered through the shattered iron grates above the abandoned Camden platform, dripping onto the rusted rails with a rhythmic, hollow ping. Fluorescent work lights, hauled down by the Metropolitan Police, hummed against the dark, casting harsh white glare over Victorian brickwork and peeled plaster. Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the worn leather watch on her left wrist. Three minutes past midnight. The air down here smelled of wet soot, copper, and something sharp—like ozone before a lightning strike. She stepped over a tangle of dead power cables, her combat boots silent on the damp concrete. "I told the Chief Superintendent we didn't need you down here, Harlow." Detective Inspector Miller stood beside a chalk-drawn silhouette near the edge of the defunct platform. He clutched a lukewarm paper cup of coffee, his trench coat pristine despite the grime of the tunnel. "Open-and-shut squatter dispute. Drug deal gone bad." Harlow stopped at the perimeter tape, her sharp jaw set. She surveyed the cavernous station. Blackened archways stretched into the gloom, hiding the labyrinthian sprawl of the old underground network. "Squatters don't carry four grand in uncirculated twenty-pound notes, Miller." Harlow snapped on a pair of blue nitrile gloves. "And drug dealers don't leave the money sitting on the chest of the corpse." "Panicked shooter." Miller gestured with his cup toward the track bed below. "Guy took a bullet to the chest, fell off the ledge. The shooter dropped the cash, grabbed the package, and ran up the stairs before uniformed officers locked down the street level." Harlow crouched at the edge of the platform. She stared down at the dark, swollen pool of blood congealing between the wooden ties. Her brown eyes narrowed. "Which stairs?" "The emergency exit onto Chalk Farm Road." "The padlock on that gate was rusted shut from the outside." Harlow pointed her tactical flashlight toward the ceiling, sweeping the beam over the rusted iron stairs twenty yards away. Heavy cobwebs draped the iron banisters like grey lace, unbroken and thick with dust. "Nobody walked up those steps tonight." Miller shifted his weight, his smooth brow furrowing for a fraction of a second before he recovered. "Then he used the main ventilation shaft. Point is, the victim was stabbed or shot, bled out, and we're looking for a mugger with bad nerve." Harlow dropped into a kneel beside the chalk line. Her eyes tracked the blood spatter. A thick drop rested here, another two feet away, then a long, smears-and-droplets streak leading straight toward the solid brick wall behind them—not toward the tracks where the body was recovered. She leaned closer to the wall. The soot on the London stock brick was uneven. Someone had wiped a broad swath clean, five feet off the ground, leaving faint, oily residue that glistened purple under her flashlight. "Look at the spray pattern, Miller." Harlow traced her gloved finger an inch above the brick. "The arterial spray hits the wall at a forty-five-degree angle pointing upwards. High pressure. The victim was standing right here, facing the wall, when the major vessel ruptured." "So he turned around and tripped into the pit." "If he tripped, where's the void in the spatter?" Harlow stood up, her 5'9" frame casting a tall shadow against the tunnel wall. "If a human body stood between the spurting artery and this brick, there'd be a shadow—a blank spot on the wall where his torso blocked the blood. The wall is entirely coated. Whatever bled here wasn't standing in front of the brick. It was inside it." Miller chuckled, a dry, grating sound that bounced off the curved ceiling. "Inside the wall. Right. Maybe the local ghosts got hungry. Stick to the physical evidence, Harlow. You've been jumpy ever since Morris..." He trailed off, catching himself, but the blow landed all the same. Harlow didn't flinch. Her military precision kicked in, locking the sudden heat in her chest behind an icy visor. Three years since DS Morris vanished from an alley off Whitechapel, leaving behind nothing but a shattered flashlight and a circle of scorched asphalt. "The physical evidence is wrong," Harlow said, her voice dropping an octave. "The body down on the tracks has two puncture marks in the subclavian artery. Smooth, clean cuts. But look at the floor." She swept her flashlight beam across the platform floor. "No footprints," she noted. "Not mine, not yours, not the victim's. The concrete is covered in a fine layer of disturbed soot, but there are no shoe soles printed here. Just these." She focused the beam on a cluster of small, sharp indentations pressed into the damp dust. They were triangular, spaced evenly, as if a tripod made of iron needles had dragged itself across the floor. "Scratches from copper thieves," Miller insisted, stepping closer to inspect the marks. His boots crunched loudly, ruining the pristine soot. "They drag heavy equipment down here all the time." "They don't drag equipment in geometric circles." Harlow pushed past him, following the trail of triangular pricks toward a dark alcove tucked behind an old electrical junction box. The air grew colder here. The smell of ozone spiked, making the hair on her arms stand up. "Harlow, stay within the cordoned area," Miller warned, his tone losing its easy confidence. "Forensics hasn't swept the alcove yet." "Forensics missed the brass." She kicked aside a pile of wet, decaying newspapers. Something glinted beneath the debris. Harlow knelt, using the tip of a pen from her coat pocket to nudge the object into the light. It was a small brass casing, no larger than an old pocket watch, heavily tarnished with a thick patina of verdigris. Etched across its face were intricate, interlocking angular lines—not numbers, not decorative flourishes, but precise, sharp sigils that seemed to shift slightly when her light grazed them. The glass face was cracked. Inside, a heavy iron needle spun erratically, refusing to settle north. It whirred, clicking against the glass with a sound like a dying beetle's legs. "What is that?" Miller asked, standing over her shoulder. "A prop? Some theater kid drop it?" "It's a compass," Harlow whispered. She didn't touch it directly, but she recognized the craftsmanship. It wasn't mass-produced. The sigils matched the markings carved into the silver pocket knife found in Morris's apartment the morning after he disappeared. "It's a shadow compass." "A what?" Harlow stood up slowly, her mind piecing together the broken geometry of the scene. The blood on the wall without a body. The impossible exit route. The triangular tracks. The uncirculated notes left on the chest—not a robbery, but a payment. An entrance fee. "This isn't a murder scene, Miller," Harlow said, her voice deadly quiet. "It's a market." Miller stared at her, his eyes tightening. "You're talking nonsense again, Quinn. Take a breather. Go back upstairs and handle the press brief." "The victim didn't die here," Harlow continued, ignoring him entirely as her eyes scanned the perimeter. "He was paying admission. The blood was a toll. Someone tapped his vein, collected what they needed to open the rift, and let him through. But something went wrong. The compass broke. The rift snapped shut while he was half-way through, slicing the artery and dumping his body onto the tracks below." She turned her beam back to the blank brick wall with the oily purple sheen. "They call it the Veil Market," she murmured, the name slipping out before she could stop it—a word whispered in confiscated informant tapes she'd listened to until her ears bled. "It moves every full moon. And tonight, it was right behind this wall." "That's enough," Miller barked, reaching out to grab her shoulder. "You're off the line, Harlow. I'm taking your log." Harlow pulled back sharply, her gaze locking onto the shadowed mouth of the northern tunnel stretch. Deep in the dark, well beyond the reach of the police floodlights, a soft, metallic scrape echoed through the damp air. Then, the faint, distinct sound of a woman's round glasses clicking against a satchel strap. "Someone else is still down here," Harlow said.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags22
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.55
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.88% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1349
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"slowly"
2"sharply"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
51.82% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1349
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"shattered"
count2
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"pristine"
count2
3
word"gloom"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"furrowing"
count1
6
word"traced"
count1
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"intricate"
count1
9
word"scanned"
count1
10
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"shattered"
1"rhythmic"
2"pristine"
3"gloom"
4"weight"
5"furrowing"
6"traced"
7"etched"
8"intricate"
9"scanned"
10"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences72
matches(empty)
83.33% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences72
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen68
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1344
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions13
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
55.28% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions40
wordCount1003
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.89
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Camden1
Metropolitan1
Police1
Victorian1
Harlow19
Quinn1
Inspector1
Miller9
Heavy1
London1
Morris2
Whitechapel1
Smooth1
persons
0"Police"
1"Harlow"
2"Quinn"
3"Inspector"
4"Miller"
5"Morris"
6"Whitechapel"
places
0"Heavy"
1"London"
globalScore0.553
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sigils that seemed to shift slightly when her light grazed them"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.232
wordCount1344
matches
0"not numbers, not decorative flourishes, but precise, sharp sigils"
1"not decorative flourishes, but precise, sharp sigils"
2"not a robbery, but a payment"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean30.55
std17.62
cv0.577
sampleLengths
045
133
217
352
430
533
644
727
82
97
1050
1143
1246
1337
1444
159
1669
1746
1843
1934
209
2132
2235
2329
247
2539
2620
274
2814
2967
3030
3116
3242
332
3444
3515
3623
3768
3815
3943
4019
4137
4215
438
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences72
matches
0"is covered"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs170
matches
0"wasn't standing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences84
ratio0.071
matches
0"The air down here smelled of wet soot, copper, and something sharp—like ozone before a lightning strike."
1"A thick drop rested here, another two feet away, then a long, smears-and-droplets streak leading straight toward the solid brick wall behind them—not toward the tracks where the body was recovered."
2"\"If he tripped, where's the void in the spatter?\" Harlow stood up, her 5'9\" frame casting a tall shadow against the tunnel wall. \"If a human body stood between the spurting artery and this brick, there'd be a shadow—a blank spot on the wall where his torso blocked the blood."
3"Harlow knelt, using the tip of a pen from her coat pocket to nudge the object into the light. It was a small brass casing, no larger than an old pocket watch, heavily tarnished with a thick patina of verdigris. Etched across its face were intricate, interlocking angular lines—not numbers, not decorative flourishes, but precise, sharp sigils that seemed to shift slightly when her light grazed them."
4"Harlow stood up slowly, her mind piecing together the broken geometry of the scene. The blood on the wall without a body. The impossible exit route. The triangular tracks. The uncirculated notes left on the chest—not a robbery, but a payment. An entrance fee."
5"\"They call it the Veil Market,\" she murmured, the name slipping out before she could stop it—a word whispered in confiscated informant tapes she'd listened to until her ears bled. \"It moves every full moon."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount601
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount9
adverbRatio0.014975041597337771
lyAdverbCount2
lyAdverbRatio0.0033277870216306157
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean16
std12.68
cv0.793
sampleLengths
022
123
212
34
417
517
627
718
87
910
105
1115
1219
1314
1412
1532
168
1715
184
192
207
2130
2214
236
2417
2526
269
276
2831
296
309
3122
3216
3328
349
3550
365
3710
384
3915
401
416
426
4318
4443
4526
463
475
489
4911
84.52% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.5357142857142857
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners45
98.04% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences68
matches
0"Maybe the local ghosts got"
1"Then, the faint, distinct sound"
ratio0.029
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences68
matches
0"She stepped over a tangle"
1"He clutched a lukewarm paper"
2"She surveyed the cavernous station."
3"She stared down at the"
4"Her brown eyes narrowed."
5"Her eyes tracked the blood"
6"She leaned closer to the"
7"It was inside"
8"You've been jumpy ever since"
9"She swept her flashlight beam"
10"She focused the beam on"
11"She kicked aside a pile"
12"She turned her beam back"
13"she murmured, the name slipping"
14"I'm taking your"
ratio0.221
55.59% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences68
matches
0"Rain filtered through the shattered"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn adjusted the"
2"The air down here smelled"
3"She stepped over a tangle"
4"Detective Inspector Miller stood beside"
5"He clutched a lukewarm paper"
6"Harlow stopped at the perimeter"
7"She surveyed the cavernous station."
8"Harlow snapped on a pair"
9"Miller gestured with his cup"
10"Harlow crouched at the edge"
11"She stared down at the"
12"Her brown eyes narrowed."
13"Harlow pointed her tactical flashlight"
14"Miller shifted his weight, his"
15"Harlow dropped into a kneel"
16"Her eyes tracked the blood"
17"A thick drop rested here,"
18"She leaned closer to the"
19"The soot on the London"
ratio0.809
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
60.44% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences26
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Someone had wiped a broad swath clean, five feet off the ground, leaving faint, oily residue that glistened purple under her flashlight."
1"She focused the beam on a cluster of small, sharp indentations pressed into the damp dust. They were triangular, spaced evenly, as if a tripod made of iron need…"
2"Harlow knelt, using the tip of a pen from her coat pocket to nudge the object into the light. It was a small brass casing, no larger than an old pocket watch, h…"
50.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags20
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Harlow said, her voice dropping an octave"
1"Miller warned, his tone losing its easy confidence"
2"Harlow said, her voice deadly quiet"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"Miller chuckled (chuckle)"
1"she noted (note)"
2"Miller insisted (insist)"
3"Miller warned (warn)"
4"Harlow whispered (whisper)"
5"Harlow continued (continue)"
6"The rift snapped (snap)"
7"she murmured (murmur)"
8"Miller barked (bark)"
dialogueSentences40
tagDensity0.325
leniency0.65
rawRatio0.692
effectiveRatio0.45
77.5968%