Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCV4K9CVYZRH3XB0N3P51H8

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Duration:
7.7s
Cost:
$0.005209
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Three deadbolts ground open in rapid succession. I gripped the iron handle, ready to brain whatever drunk stumbled up from the curry house below. "Expecting someone else?" Heterochromatic eyes caught the harsh fluorescent glow of the hallway. One amber, one black. A tailored charcoal suit wrapped around shoulders too broad for Brick Lane. Slicked-back platinum blond hair caught the light. Lucien Moreau stood on the threshold, leaning heavily on an ivory-handled cane. "You're bleeding on my welcome mat." I didn't move from the doorway. "A minor inconvenience." A manicured hand touched the side of his neck, coming away stained with dark crimson. "May I come in, Aurora?" "The door was locked for a reason." "And yet, you opened it." Lucien stepped past me before I could block the entrance. The cramped one-bedroom flat vanished beneath the sudden weight of his presence. Every surface disappeared behind the magnetism of a man who smelled like expensive tobacco, rain, and old iron. Ptolemy bolted from a pile of research notes, his tabby tail puffing up like a bottle brush before he hissed and scrambled under the sofa. "Nice place. Smells like curry and desperation." Lucien glanced at the stack of ancient texts covering the kitchen table. "Get to the point, Lucien. I have an essay due and zero patience." I crossed my arms, pressing hard against the small crescent-shaped scar on my left wrist. "Cold as ever." He tapped his cane against the floorboards, the rhythmic click vibrating straight through my soles. "A mutual acquaintance of ours in the supernatural underground found a rather interesting ledger. It bears your signature. Or at least, a very clever forgery of it." "I signed nothing." "Naturally." A thin smile touched the corner of his mouth. "That is why we are going to retrieve it together." "We aren't going anywhere." "You think you can hide in East London forever? Pretend you are just a stressed student delivering noodles by day?" Lucien closed the distance between us until the heat radiating off his tailored wool jacket chased away the draft from the hallway. "The demon factions do not care about your pre-law degree, Rory." "Stop calling me that." "Why? It suits you." His gaze dropped to my lips for a fraction of a second before locking back onto my eyes. "Fierce. Unyielding. Utterly reckless." "You abandoned me in Marseille." The words slipped out before I could cage them. "I saved your life." "You left me bleeding in an alley behind a casino with half of Avaros hunting my blood." "And yet, you survived." He reached out, his long fingers hovering an inch from my cheek before he caught himself and dropped his hand to the ivory handle of his cane. "Because of what I taught you." "I learned how to survive despite you." "Prove it." Lucien reached into his coat pocket and pulled out a heavy gold signet ring, dropping it onto the stack of research notes with a sharp clatter. "That belongs to the debt collector who currently holds your forged contract. He wants an audience. Tonight." "I am not walking into a trap." "It is not a trap if we spring it first." "You expect me to trust you again?" "I expect you to value your own skin." Lucien leaned in close, his breath warm against my ear, carrying the rich, intoxicating scent of French wine and danger. "Unless you fancy a permanent vacation in the lower realms?" "You are insufferable." "And you have missed me terribly." "Get your coat. We're taking the tube." "Subway? Truly, Rory, you have embraced the proletariat lifestyle." "Shut up and walk." I grabbed my leather jacket from the hook by the door, sliding my arms into the sleeves while keeping a wary eye on the man who had wrecked my life three years ago and somehow managed to look infuriatingly handsome doing it. The metal blade hidden inside his cane made a faint sliding sound as he shifted his weight, a subtle reminder of the violence trailing in his wake. "Lead the way, chérie." "Don't call me that." I shoved past him into the narrow corridor, descending the creaking wooden stairs toward the street. The damp London air hit us instantly, thick with exhaust and the promise of rain. Brick Lane stretched out before us in a blur of neon signs and late-night shadows, completely ordinary to the mortals rushing past. "We take a cab," Lucien said, stepping out onto the tarmac and flagging down a black cab with a flick of his cane. "I'm paying my own fare." "Independant to the end." He pulled the door open, gesturing for me to enter first. The interior smelled of old leather and mint disinfectant. I slid across the bench seat, pressing my back firmly against the opposite door as Lucien folded his long frame in beside me, taking up far too much space. The vehicle lurched forward into traffic, the streetlights smearing into bright ribbons across the windows. "Driver, Soho," Lucien murmured, leaning back and resting his cane across his knees. "You didn't say we were going to Soho." "A surprise keeps the blood pumping." "I have a knife in my boot, Lucien." "I know. I bought it for you." The cab wove through the congested labyrinth of central London streets, the engine purring a low, mechanical bassline beneath the ambient roar of the city. I watched the reflection of his heterochromatic eyes in the glass, tracking every subtle shift in his expression. The tension between us felt thick enough to slice with a razor, every shared breath pulling us backward into the tangled mess of history we never quite managed to bury. "We're here," the driver grunted, pulling up to the curb beside an unmarked black door wedged between two shuttered bakeries. Neon light pulsed faintly from an alley nearby. A heavy padlock hung from the handle of the black door, and fresh scratch marks scored the iron frame. Someone had tried to force entry recently, and failed. "After you," Lucien said, stepping out onto the pavement and offering a gloved hand. I ignored his hand, pushed past him, and drew my boot knife in one fluid motion. The cold steel caught the orange glow of a streetlamp. "Show-off," he muttered, drawing the thin blade from his cane with a soft *shing* that sent a shiver straight down my spine. I kicked the black door hard. It didn't budge. "Allow me," Lucien purred, pressing the tip of his hidden blade into the mechanism of the lock with surgical precision. A sharp click echoed through the alley. The heavy door swung inward, revealing a pitch-black stairwell that smelled of ozone and fresh copper. "Stay behind me," I whispered. "Never." We stepped into the dark together, the door slamming shut behind us with a heavy, final thud that cut off the sounds of the city entirely.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:33:47.067Z" 7/25/2026, 2:33:47 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags21
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.396
leniency0.792
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
82.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1144
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"very"
count1
1
adverb"utterly"
count1
2
adverb"truly"
count1
3
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"very"
1"utterly"
2"truly"
3"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
43.18% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1144
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"rhythmic"
count1
2
word"reminder"
count1
3
word"firmly"
count1
4
word"lurched"
count1
5
word"pumping"
count1
6
word"mechanical"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"shared breath"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count1
10
word"down my spine"
count1
11
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"rhythmic"
2"reminder"
3"firmly"
4"lurched"
5"pumping"
6"mechanical"
7"tension"
8"shared breath"
9"pulsed"
10"down my spine"
11"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences52
matches(empty)
60.44% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences52
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"managed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen42
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1144
ratio0.001
matches
0"shing"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions12
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
81.93% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount808
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity1.36
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Brick2
Lane2
Moreau1
Lucien11
French1
London2
Neon1
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
globalScore0.819
windowScore1
98.98% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences49
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"smelled like expensive tobacco, rain, and"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1144
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences84
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs57
mean20.07
std17.85
cv0.889
sampleLengths
024
13
245
312
423
57
615
755
819
928
1045
113
1220
134
1453
154
1626
1714
184
1917
2037
217
2245
237
2410
257
2638
273
286
297
309
314
3269
334
344
3553
3623
375
3815
3953
4013
418
426
438
447
4573
4620
4736
4814
4926
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences52
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs120
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences84
ratio0
matches(empty)
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount814
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.025798525798525797
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.009828009828009828
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean13.62
std9.02
cv0.662
sampleLengths
07
117
23
310
44
512
67
712
812
918
105
117
1215
1312
1418
1525
1619
1728
1818
1927
203
2110
2210
234
2442
2511
264
2722
284
2914
304
3117
3231
336
347
3528
3617
377
3810
397
4028
4110
423
436
447
459
464
4742
4827
494
80.16% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.4880952380952381
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners41
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
ratio0
94.51% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences51
matches
0"I gripped the iron handle,"
1"I didn't move from the"
2"I crossed my arms, pressing"
3"He tapped his cane against"
4"His gaze dropped to my"
5"He reached out, his long"
6"I grabbed my leather jacket"
7"I shoved past him into"
8"He pulled the door open,"
9"I slid across the bench"
10"I watched the reflection of"
11"I ignored his hand, pushed"
12"he muttered, drawing the thin"
13"I kicked the black door"
14"It didn't budge."
15"We stepped into the dark"
ratio0.314
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount47
totalSentences51
matches
0"I gripped the iron handle,"
1"A tailored charcoal suit wrapped"
2"Lucien Moreau stood on the"
3"I didn't move from the"
4"A manicured hand touched the"
5"Lucien stepped past me before"
6"The cramped one-bedroom flat vanished"
7"Every surface disappeared behind the"
8"Ptolemy bolted from a pile"
9"Lucien glanced at the stack"
10"I crossed my arms, pressing"
11"He tapped his cane against"
12"A thin smile touched the"
13"Lucien closed the distance between"
14"His gaze dropped to my"
15"The words slipped out before"
16"He reached out, his long"
17"Lucien reached into his coat"
18"Lucien leaned in close, his"
19"I grabbed my leather jacket"
ratio0.922
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences51
matches(empty)
ratio0
45.45% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences22
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Every surface disappeared behind the magnetism of a man who smelled like expensive tobacco, rain, and old iron."
1"I grabbed my leather jacket from the hook by the door, sliding my arms into the sleeves while keeping a wary eye on the man who had wrecked my life three years …"
2"The heavy door swung inward, revealing a pitch-black stairwell that smelled of ozone and fresh copper."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags21
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He tapped, the rhythmic click vibrating straight through my soles"
74.53% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
1"the driver grunted (grunt)"
2"he muttered (mutter)"
3"I whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences53
tagDensity0.113
leniency0.226
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.151
81.8567%