Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCV4P0J65S1Y3KMNX1PGWT9

Run Details

Duration:
2m 37s
Cost:
$0.005331
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon of The Raven's Nest bled through the Soho rain like a bruise that refused to heal. Rory Carter pushed through the door, soaked to the bone, her black hair plastered dark against her collar, her delivery jacket smelling of ginger and burnt oil from Yu-Fei's kitchen. She hadn't meant to come here. The flat above had felt too empty, Eva's old voicemail still glowing on her phone, Evan's shadow long but fading. The bar smelled of wax, old tobacco, and something sharper—whisky and secrets. Old maps curled behind dust-caked glass. Black-and-white photographs of strangers stared back like witnesses. She ordered nothing. She sat. Then a voice cracked the air like a dropped bottle. "Rory." She turned. A man rose from a corner stool, favouring his left leg, the movement deliberate. Grey-streaked auburn hair caught the dim bulb. His beard was trimmed neat, matching the streaks. His hazel eyes held a weight she didn't remember from childhood summers in Cardiff. "Silas Blackwood," she said. "Last I heard, you were fleeing." His voice carried that quiet authority, the kind that made rooms lean closer. "Last I heard, you were dead in Prague." He smiled, thin and tired. "Close enough. Come sit, Laila." That old nickname struck like a match. She moved toward him, her heels clicking on the wood, her bright blue eyes fixed on the silver signet ring glinting on his right hand. "Don't call me that." "Then Carter?" "Rory's fine." He laughed, low. "Rory delivered dumplings tonight. The girl I knew argued with barristers." She sat. The stool creaked. "People change. You changed." "Retired MI6. Opened a front. The knee doesn't bend right, but I correct the books." She studied him. The limp, the ring, the map-strewn walls. "This place is a graveyard." "It's honest." "Cardiff was honest once." Silas turned a glass in his hands, the liquid amber. "Your father still practices?" "Brendan Carter still wins cases he shouldn't. Mother teaches. I left them both. Left Evan. Left law." "Evan?" "An ex. Abusive. Not worth the breath." Silas nodded, slow. "You carry it well." "I carry everything." A silence stretched, thick with the bass from the jukebox and the rain against green neon. "You never wrote," he said. "You never looked up." "I was in Prague. Then the nest. Always the nest." Rory touched the crescent scar on her left wrist, hidden under her sleeve. "We promised we'd be different. Remember? Summer by the bay? You said you'd build something real." "I built this." "It's a lie with good furniture." He didn't flinch. "Your hair was longer." "Your face was softer." He drank. "Time doesn't ask permission." "Time takes," she said. "It takes the girl who laughed. It takes the boy who believed in justice." "That boy is dead. I'm a spymaster with a limp and a bookshelf that hides a room." She leaned forward. "Show me." "Not for strangers." "I'm not a stranger. I'm the girl you pulled out of the rain in Cardiff." Silas stood, favouring his left leg, and walked to the wall of books. His fingers found the spine of a false volume. The bookshelf groaned, sliding aside to reveal darkness and the smell of old paper and gun oil. Inside, a small room, bare. A table. Two chairs. Photographs pinned—maps of Prague, faces crossed out in red. Rory stepped in, her breath shallow. "This is what you built?" "This is what survived." She turned to him, her black hair falling across her face. "I work for Yu-Fei now. Deliveries. I live above this bar and don't tell anyone." "You could do more." "I did more. I broke." Silas closed the hidden door with a soft click. They faced each other in the cramped space, the neon glow filtered through cracks. "We had years," he said. "Years I filled with silence because I thought you wouldn't understand." "You never tried." "I tried every time I saw a map of Cardiff." Rory's voice dropped. "I'm tired of being brave." "Then stop." She laughed, bitter and bright. "You don't stop being brave. You just stop showing it." He reached out, his rough hand hovering near her wrist, near the scar. He didn't touch it. "I miss the old you," he said. "I miss the old you too. The one who wasn't a ghost with a bar." "I'm still here, Rory. Just older. Just broken in new places." The rain hammered the roof. The hidden room held its breath. "We could have been lawyers together," she said. "Or teachers. Or nothing." "Instead we're this." She stepped back into the bar proper. The green neon felt colder now. "Same old friends," she said. "No," Silas answered, following her, his limp pronounced on the old floorboards. "Not the same at all."<|end_message|>
created_at"2026-07-25T14:33:49.858Z" 7/25/2026, 2:33:49 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.161
leniency0.321
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount796
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.87% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount796
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"weight"
count1
1
word"glinting"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
highlights
0"weight"
1"glinting"
2"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences58
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen31
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords794
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
94.44% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount450
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.11
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Carter1
Yu-Fei1
Eva1
Evan1
Cardiff1
Rory4
Prague1
Silas5
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Carter"
3"Eva"
4"Evan"
5"Rory"
6"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
1"Yu-Fei"
2"Cardiff"
3"Prague"
globalScore0.944
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences32
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount794
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs66
mean12.03
std11.9
cv0.989
sampleLengths
075
126
25
310
41
545
64
719
88
910
1032
114
122
132
1414
159
1615
1715
182
194
2014
2117
221
237
247
253
2616
275
284
2910
3029
313
326
337
344
356
3618
3717
385
393
4015
4139
4218
436
445
454
4626
474
485
4923
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences58
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs84
matches(empty)
88.44% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences105
ratio0.019
matches
0"The bar smelled of wax, old tobacco, and something sharper—whisky and secrets."
1"Photographs pinned—maps of Prague, faces crossed out in red."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount458
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"behind dust-caked glass."
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.021834061135371178
lyAdverbCount0
lyAdverbRatio0
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean7.56
std5.54
cv0.733
sampleLengths
019
130
26
320
412
56
68
73
82
910
101
112
1214
137
148
1514
164
1719
188
195
205
217
2225
234
242
252
263
2711
282
293
304
3115
323
337
345
352
364
3710
384
3917
401
417
423
434
443
4516
465
474
4810
4913
50.48% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats12
diversityRatio0.37142857142857144
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners39
74.07% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences45
matches
0"Then a voice cracked the"
ratio0.022
60.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences45
matches
0"She hadn't meant to come"
1"She ordered nothing."
2"His beard was trimmed neat,"
3"His hazel eyes held a"
4"His voice carried that quiet"
5"He smiled, thin and tired."
6"She moved toward him, her"
7"He laughed, low."
8"She studied him."
9"He didn't flinch."
10"She leaned forward."
11"His fingers found the spine"
12"She turned to him, her"
13"They faced each other in"
14"She laughed, bitter and bright."
15"He reached out, his rough"
16"He didn't touch it."
17"She stepped back into the"
ratio0.4
15.56% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount40
totalSentences45
matches
0"The green neon of The"
1"Rory Carter pushed through the"
2"She hadn't meant to come"
3"The flat above had felt"
4"The bar smelled of wax,"
5"She ordered nothing."
6"A man rose from a"
7"His beard was trimmed neat,"
8"His hazel eyes held a"
9"His voice carried that quiet"
10"He smiled, thin and tired."
11"That old nickname struck like"
12"She moved toward him, her"
13"He laughed, low."
14"The stool creaked."
15"She studied him."
16"The limp, the ring, the"
17"Silas turned a glass in"
18"Silas nodded, slow."
19"A silence stretched, thick with"
ratio0.889
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences45
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences18
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"She moved toward him, her heels clicking on the wood, her bright blue eyes fixed on the silver signet ring glinting on his right hand."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences56
tagDensity0.143
leniency0.286
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.3953%