| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.448 | | leniency | 0.897 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.52% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1179 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 49.11% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1179 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "whisper" | | 1 | "wavered" | | 2 | "silk" | | 3 | "perfect" | | 4 | "cascading" | | 5 | "lilt" | | 6 | "weight" | | 7 | "pulsed" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "echoed" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 75 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 91 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 40 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1165 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 9 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 52 | | wordCount | 935 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.93 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 18 | | Shadow | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | London | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 2 | | Blade | 2 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Nyx | 9 | | Shade | 2 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Gluttony | 1 | | Isolde | 9 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Shadow" | | 2 | "Nyx" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Blade" | | 4 | "Shade" |
| | globalScore | 0.537 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 16.07% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 56 | | glossingSentenceCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "felt like silk over bone" | | 1 | "not quite oak, not quite ash—something older, bark swirling with patterns that shifted when Rory looked directly at them" | | 2 | "not quite ash—something older, bark swirling with patterns that shifted when Rory looked directly at them" | | 3 | "felt like cool glass" |
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| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 4 | | per1kWords | 3.433 | | wordCount | 1165 | | matches | | 0 | "not a melody, but a chord sustained forever, vibrating in her molars" | | 1 | "not blood, but something older" | | 2 | "Not torn, but worn" | | 3 | "neither alive nor" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 41 | | mean | 28.41 | | std | 18.95 | | cv | 0.667 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 67 | | 1 | 8 | | 2 | 61 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 4 | | 6 | 56 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 42 | | 9 | 29 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 48 | | 12 | 12 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 24 | | 15 | 12 | | 16 | 7 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 84 | | 20 | 22 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 48 | | 23 | 49 | | 24 | 20 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 27 | | 27 | 4 | | 28 | 56 | | 29 | 25 | | 30 | 20 | | 31 | 16 | | 32 | 21 | | 33 | 22 | | 34 | 46 | | 35 | 35 | | 36 | 38 | | 37 | 54 | | 38 | 19 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 20 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 75 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 151 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 13 | | semicolonCount | 2 | | flaggedSentences | 12 | | totalSentences | 91 | | ratio | 0.132 | | matches | | 0 | "The sky overhead was not the bruised London twilight behind them; it spread in a soft, perpetual twilight of silver and pearl, stars visible without darkness, moonlight without a moon." | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground—bluebells, foxgloves, poppies—blooming in impossible clusters, their petals trembling though no wind touched them." | | 2 | "She wore no footprints behind her—only crushed petals where she had drifted." | | 3 | "A wildflower—something crimson with black veins—bloomed at her shoulder, opening like an eye." | | 4 | "The Shade’s violet eyes tracked something in the tree canopy—branches that moved without wind, shadows that pooled in wrong directions." | | 5 | "The path wound between trees that were not quite oak, not quite ash—something older, bark swirling with patterns that shifted when Rory looked directly at them." | | 6 | "The wildflowers changed as they progressed: near the boundary, bluebells and daisies; further in, blossoms that glowed faintly with inner silver light, casting soft illumination on Rory’s black hair, on Nyx’s shadow-form." | | 7 | "Rory heard music—not a melody, but a chord sustained forever, vibrating in her molars." | | 8 | "Her reflection looked back—bright blue eyes, straight black hair, the crescent scar on her wrist visible even in the strange light." | | 9 | "A ripple of crimson spread from the blade—not blood, but something older." | | 10 | "The trees rustled with no wind, and from somewhere deep in the grove, a sound like distant laughter—or distant hunger—echoed and faded." | | 11 | "Isolde smiled, and for the first time, her expression held no mystery—only recognition." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 958 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 32 | | adverbRatio | 0.033402922755741124 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.010438413361169102 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 91 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 91 | | mean | 12.8 | | std | 8 | | cv | 0.625 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 22 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 8 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 30 | | 7 | 17 | | 8 | 13 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 8 | | 11 | 6 | | 12 | 7 | | 13 | 4 | | 14 | 2 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 15 | | 17 | 18 | | 18 | 8 | | 19 | 30 | | 20 | 12 | | 21 | 8 | | 22 | 21 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 13 | | 25 | 14 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 21 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 9 | | 30 | 19 | | 31 | 8 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 20 | | 34 | 5 | | 35 | 7 | | 36 | 7 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 9 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 26 | | 41 | 32 | | 42 | 12 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 11 | | 45 | 11 | | 46 | 11 | | 47 | 6 | | 48 | 5 | | 49 | 28 |
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| 50.92% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.3516483516483517 | | totalSentences | 91 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 16 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "Her breath fogged, then vanished." | | 1 | "Their form wavered at the" | | 2 | "It felt like silk over" | | 3 | "Her left wrist itched where" | | 4 | "She wore no footprints behind" | | 5 | "Her voice carried the lilt" | | 6 | "Her hand rested near the" | | 7 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 8 | "Her Heartstone pendant, hidden beneath" | | 9 | "It pulsed, faint, like a" | | 10 | "Its petals felt like cool" | | 11 | "She stood beside a pool" | | 12 | "Her reflection looked back—bright blue" | | 13 | "She lowered the tip to" | | 14 | "Her legs felt lighter, as" | | 15 | "She slid the blade back" |
| | ratio | 0.239 | |
| 0.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 64 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak stones stood older" | | 1 | "Nyx moved beside her like" | | 2 | "Winter air clung to Richmond" | | 3 | "Rory stepped through the gap" | | 4 | "The change struck her like" | | 5 | "Her breath fogged, then vanished." | | 6 | "The sky overhead was not" | | 7 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground—bluebells, foxgloves," | | 8 | "Nyx said, the whisper carried" | | 9 | "Their form wavered at the" | | 10 | "Rory touched the bark of" | | 11 | "It felt like silk over" | | 12 | "Her left wrist itched where" | | 13 | "The Fae-Forged Blade at her" | | 14 | "Isolde waited in the centre" | | 15 | "The Half-Fae seer stood on" | | 16 | "She wore no footprints behind" | | 17 | "Her voice carried the lilt" | | 18 | "Her hand rested near the" | | 19 | "Isolde tilted her head" |
| | ratio | 0.955 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 67 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 10 | | matches | | 0 | "The oak stones stood older than the park around them, grey-green with lichen, arranged in a ring that made Rory’s teeth ache." | | 1 | "Wildflowers carpeted the ground—bluebells, foxgloves, poppies—blooming in impossible clusters, their petals trembling though no wind touched them." | | 2 | "The Half-Fae seer stood on moss that didn’t bend beneath her bare feet, silver hair cascading to her waist like spun moonlight, lavender eyes holding centuries …" | | 3 | "Her voice carried the lilt of someone who had forgotten the shape of lies but remembered every way to twist truth." | | 4 | "The Shade’s violet eyes tracked something in the tree canopy—branches that moved without wind, shadows that pooled in wrong directions." | | 5 | "The wildflowers changed as they progressed: near the boundary, bluebells and daisies; further in, blossoms that glowed faintly with inner silver light, casting …" | | 6 | "She stood beside a pool that had not been there a moment before, water black and still as obsidian, reflecting stars that did not match the sky above." | | 7 | "The black surface split with silver veins, and for a moment Rory saw another realm beneath: amber skies, sprawling vineyards, a feast of excess that made her st…" | | 8 | "Her legs felt lighter, as if she weighed less here, or more." | | 9 | "Rory looked around the impossible clearing, at the flowers that bloomed forever, at the pool that showed other worlds, at the Shade who was neither alive nor de…" |
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| 86.54% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Nyx said, the whisper carried on an invisible current" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 29 | | tagDensity | 0.379 | | leniency | 0.759 | | rawRatio | 0.091 | | effectiveRatio | 0.069 | |