Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCV83BXVQPXP3W7GCTTTTJ1

Run Details

Duration:
5m 46s
Cost:
$0.011333
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The oak stones stood older than the park around them, grey-green with lichen, arranged in a ring that made Rory’s teeth ache. Nyx moved beside her like a tear in the dusk, the Shadow’s humanoid silhouette barely thicker than smoke, violet eyes faint as dying embers. Winter air clung to Richmond Park, but the clearing inside the stones smelled of honeysuckle and rain-soaked earth in high summer. Rory stepped through the gap between two monoliths. The change struck her like stepping into warm water. Her breath fogged, then vanished. The sky overhead was not the bruised London twilight behind them; it spread in a soft, perpetual twilight of silver and pearl, stars visible without darkness, moonlight without a moon. Wildflowers carpeted the ground—bluebells, foxgloves, poppies—blooming in impossible clusters, their petals trembling though no wind touched them. "Time here breathes differently," Nyx said, the whisper carried on an invisible current. Their form wavered at the edges, shadow spilling wider, then snapping tight. Rory touched the bark of the nearest oak. It felt like silk over bone. "An hour inside, minutes outside. Or days." "Or nothing at all." She turned. Behind them, the standing stones formed a perfect circle now, the path out visible only as a shimmer of distorted air. Her left wrist itched where the crescent scar lived, an old memory of childhood glass. The Fae-Forged Blade at her hip, moonsilver and leaf-shaped, felt colder than ice, humming faintly against her thigh. Isolde waited in the centre of the clearing. The Half-Fae seer stood on moss that didn’t bend beneath her bare feet, silver hair cascading to her waist like spun moonlight, lavender eyes holding centuries of mischief and grief. She wore no footprints behind her—only crushed petals where she had drifted. "You brought the shadow with you," Isolde said. Her voice carried the lilt of someone who had forgotten the shape of lies but remembered every way to twist truth. "Nyx came of their own will," Rory replied. Her hand rested near the blade, not drawing it, just feeling its weight. "All things come of their own will, until they don’t." Isolde tilted her head. A wildflower—something crimson with black veins—bloomed at her shoulder, opening like an eye. "The Grove remembers you, Aurora Carter. Laila. Malphora. So many names for one frightened girl who ran from Cardiff to London." Rory’s jaw tightened. "We didn’t come for riddles. We came for answers." "You came for passage." Isolde walked past them, and where she moved, the air smelled of thunder and honey. "Walk deeper. The stones only guard the mouth." Rory glanced at Nyx. The Shade’s violet eyes tracked something in the tree canopy—branches that moved without wind, shadows that pooled in wrong directions. "I feel it," Nyx murmured. "The boundary. The space between. It pulls." "Then don’t let it pull you apart." Nyx laughed, a sound like dry leaves skittering across stone. "You think I fear dissolution, Rory? I am dissolution." They moved deeper into the grove. The path wound between trees that were not quite oak, not quite ash—something older, bark swirling with patterns that shifted when Rory looked directly at them. The wildflowers changed as they progressed: near the boundary, bluebells and daisies; further in, blossoms that glowed faintly with inner silver light, casting soft illumination on Rory’s black hair, on Nyx’s shadow-form. The air grew thicker, sweet with nectar and decay in equal measure. Rory heard music—not a melody, but a chord sustained forever, vibrating in her molars. Her Heartstone pendant, hidden beneath her collar, warmed against her collarbone. It pulsed, faint, like a second heart noticing danger or invitation. "What feeds them?" Rory asked, touching one of the glowing flowers. Its petals felt like cool glass. "Memory," Isolde answered from ahead. She stood beside a pool that had not been there a moment before, water black and still as obsidian, reflecting stars that did not match the sky above. "The Grove eats what is forgotten. It blooms what is remembered. You carry both, Carter." Rory knelt at the pool’s edge. Her reflection looked back—bright blue eyes, straight black hair, the crescent scar on her wrist visible even in the strange light. But behind her reflection, the water showed another shape: a silhouette of shadow, six feet of violet darkness, reaching toward her shoulder. Nyx stood behind her, solid now, their form dense enough to cast no reflection of its own in the pool. "The blade," Isolde said, pointing with a finger that left no mark in the air. "Show it the water." Rory drew the Fae-Forged Blade. Moonsilver, slender, leaf-shaped. In this light it glowed softly, luminescent as promised, always cold. She lowered the tip to the pool’s surface. The water reacted instantly. A ripple of crimson spread from the blade—not blood, but something older. The black surface split with silver veins, and for a moment Rory saw another realm beneath: amber skies, sprawling vineyards, a feast of excess that made her stomach turn with sudden, unnatural hunger. Dymas. The Gluttony realm. The Heartstone against her chest burned hot. "Hel breathes close here," Nyx said, stepping back, their shadow-form thinning at the edges. "The Veil is thin in this pocket. Not torn, but worn." The vision vanished. The pool returned to black stillness, though the crimson veins lingered at the edges like lips parted. Rory pulled the blade back. The moonsilver dripped with darkness that evaporated before hitting the moss. "You feel it now," Isolde said. "The Grove sits between. Not Earth, not Fae, not Hel. A pocket. A breath held." Rory stood. Her legs felt lighter, as if she weighed less here, or more. "You brought us here to show us this?" "I brought you here because the Veil weakens," Isolde said, her lavender eyes hardening with something almost like urgency, though her voice stayed riddle-smooth. "The winter solstice approaches. The barriers thin. And you, Rory, carry the tools to walk through them—whether you wish to or not." Nyx moved closer to Rory, their whisper intimate against her ear, though the Shadow stood two feet away. "The blade cuts wards. The stone finds doors. You are armed for something you don’t yet understand." The wildflowers around them pulsed in unison, silver light brightening, then dimming, like a collective heartbeat. The trees rustled with no wind, and from somewhere deep in the grove, a sound like distant laughter—or distant hunger—echoed and faded. Rory looked around the impossible clearing, at the flowers that bloomed forever, at the pool that showed other worlds, at the Shade who was neither alive nor dead, at the seer who could not lie but had said nothing straight. The wonder of it sat heavy in her chest, beautiful and wrong and necessary. She slid the blade back into its sheath. The Heartstone cooled slowly, its crimson gem dimming but never dark. "We’re not leaving yet," Rory said. Isolde smiled, and for the first time, her expression held no mystery—only recognition. "No one ever does, the first time."
created_at"2026-07-25T14:35:41.83Z" 7/25/2026, 2:35:41 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.448
leniency0.897
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.52% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1179
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
1"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.11% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1179
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"whisper"
count2
1
word"wavered"
count1
2
word"silk"
count1
3
word"perfect"
count1
4
word"cascading"
count1
5
word"lilt"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"pulsed"
count2
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"whisper"
1"wavered"
2"silk"
3"perfect"
4"cascading"
5"lilt"
6"weight"
7"pulsed"
8"stomach"
9"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences91
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen40
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1165
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions52
wordCount935
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.93
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Rory18
Shadow2
Richmond1
Park1
London1
Fae-Forged2
Blade2
Half-Fae1
Nyx9
Shade2
Heartstone3
Gluttony1
Isolde9
persons
0"Rory"
1"Shadow"
2"Nyx"
3"Heartstone"
4"Isolde"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Blade"
4"Shade"
globalScore0.537
windowScore0.5
16.07% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences56
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"felt like silk over bone"
1"not quite oak, not quite ash—something older, bark swirling with patterns that shifted when Rory looked directly at them"
2"not quite ash—something older, bark swirling with patterns that shifted when Rory looked directly at them"
3"felt like cool glass"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches4
per1kWords3.433
wordCount1165
matches
0"not a melody, but a chord sustained forever, vibrating in her molars"
1"not blood, but something older"
2"Not torn, but worn"
3"neither alive nor"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean28.41
std18.95
cv0.667
sampleLengths
067
18
261
325
421
54
656
78
842
929
1021
1148
1212
1327
1424
1512
167
1719
186
1984
2022
2117
2248
2349
2420
2519
2627
274
2856
2925
3020
3116
3221
3322
3446
3535
3638
3754
3819
396
4020
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs151
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount13
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences91
ratio0.132
matches
0"The sky overhead was not the bruised London twilight behind them; it spread in a soft, perpetual twilight of silver and pearl, stars visible without darkness, moonlight without a moon."
1"Wildflowers carpeted the ground—bluebells, foxgloves, poppies—blooming in impossible clusters, their petals trembling though no wind touched them."
2"She wore no footprints behind her—only crushed petals where she had drifted."
3"A wildflower—something crimson with black veins—bloomed at her shoulder, opening like an eye."
4"The Shade’s violet eyes tracked something in the tree canopy—branches that moved without wind, shadows that pooled in wrong directions."
5"The path wound between trees that were not quite oak, not quite ash—something older, bark swirling with patterns that shifted when Rory looked directly at them."
6"The wildflowers changed as they progressed: near the boundary, bluebells and daisies; further in, blossoms that glowed faintly with inner silver light, casting soft illumination on Rory’s black hair, on Nyx’s shadow-form."
7"Rory heard music—not a melody, but a chord sustained forever, vibrating in her molars."
8"Her reflection looked back—bright blue eyes, straight black hair, the crescent scar on her wrist visible even in the strange light."
9"A ripple of crimson spread from the blade—not blood, but something older."
10"The trees rustled with no wind, and from somewhere deep in the grove, a sound like distant laughter—or distant hunger—echoed and faded."
11"Isolde smiled, and for the first time, her expression held no mystery—only recognition."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount958
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.033402922755741124
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.010438413361169102
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences91
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences91
mean12.8
std8
cv0.625
sampleLengths
022
124
221
38
49
55
630
717
813
912
108
116
127
134
142
1521
1615
1718
188
1930
2012
218
2221
238
2413
2514
2613
2721
283
299
3019
318
324
3320
345
357
367
3710
389
396
4026
4132
4212
4314
4411
4511
4611
476
485
4928
50.92% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3516483516483517
totalSentences91
uniqueOpeners32
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences67
matches
0"Her breath fogged, then vanished."
1"Their form wavered at the"
2"It felt like silk over"
3"Her left wrist itched where"
4"She wore no footprints behind"
5"Her voice carried the lilt"
6"Her hand rested near the"
7"They moved deeper into the"
8"Her Heartstone pendant, hidden beneath"
9"It pulsed, faint, like a"
10"Its petals felt like cool"
11"She stood beside a pool"
12"Her reflection looked back—bright blue"
13"She lowered the tip to"
14"Her legs felt lighter, as"
15"She slid the blade back"
ratio0.239
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences67
matches
0"The oak stones stood older"
1"Nyx moved beside her like"
2"Winter air clung to Richmond"
3"Rory stepped through the gap"
4"The change struck her like"
5"Her breath fogged, then vanished."
6"The sky overhead was not"
7"Wildflowers carpeted the ground—bluebells, foxgloves,"
8"Nyx said, the whisper carried"
9"Their form wavered at the"
10"Rory touched the bark of"
11"It felt like silk over"
12"Her left wrist itched where"
13"The Fae-Forged Blade at her"
14"Isolde waited in the centre"
15"The Half-Fae seer stood on"
16"She wore no footprints behind"
17"Her voice carried the lilt"
18"Her hand rested near the"
19"Isolde tilted her head"
ratio0.955
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences67
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount10
matches
0"The oak stones stood older than the park around them, grey-green with lichen, arranged in a ring that made Rory’s teeth ache."
1"Wildflowers carpeted the ground—bluebells, foxgloves, poppies—blooming in impossible clusters, their petals trembling though no wind touched them."
2"The Half-Fae seer stood on moss that didn’t bend beneath her bare feet, silver hair cascading to her waist like spun moonlight, lavender eyes holding centuries …"
3"Her voice carried the lilt of someone who had forgotten the shape of lies but remembered every way to twist truth."
4"The Shade’s violet eyes tracked something in the tree canopy—branches that moved without wind, shadows that pooled in wrong directions."
5"The wildflowers changed as they progressed: near the boundary, bluebells and daisies; further in, blossoms that glowed faintly with inner silver light, casting …"
6"She stood beside a pool that had not been there a moment before, water black and still as obsidian, reflecting stars that did not match the sky above."
7"The black surface split with silver veins, and for a moment Rory saw another realm beneath: amber skies, sprawling vineyards, a feast of excess that made her st…"
8"Her legs felt lighter, as if she weighed less here, or more."
9"Rory looked around the impossible clearing, at the flowers that bloomed forever, at the pool that showed other worlds, at the Shade who was neither alive nor de…"
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Nyx said, the whisper carried on an invisible current"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Nyx murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences29
tagDensity0.379
leniency0.759
rawRatio0.091
effectiveRatio0.069
71.4718%