Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCV9PS0DVF3KX7ARHTFK675

Run Details

Duration:
3m 21s
Cost:
$0.006133
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Green neon bled through the grime on Dean Street and stained Rory’s jacket an unhealthy emerald. She pushed through the door of The Raven’s Nest. The air smelled of old whiskey and varnished pine. A man with grey-streaked auburn hair stood behind the sticky bar. His left leg rested heavier on the boards, that old limp from Prague fixed into the posture like a scar you forgot to hide. His hazel eyes locked onto her over a row of smudged glasses. “It’s been years,” Silas said. His voice stayed low, a baritone dragged through smoke. He did not smile. Rory froze. The delivery bag slipped an inch down her shoulder. Five years collapsed into a single breath. “Five,” she said. He polished a tumbler with a cloth that had seen better wars. The silver signet ring on his right hand caught the green glow and threw it back like a warning. “You look different,” he said. She tucked her black hair behind her ear. The straight shoulder-length cut framed her face sharper than he remembered. Bright blue eyes scanned the black-and-white photographs crowding the walls. “I left Cardiff,” she said. “London hasn’t been kind.” “You carry yourself differently.” He set the tumbler down. “Not the girl who argued pre-law in lecture halls. You’ve gone hard.” She laughed. The sound cracked. “You retired MI6 and bought a bar in Soho. Don’t talk to me about hard.” The Raven’s Nest swallowed her words. Old maps curled at the edges above them. Silas leaned closer. His neatly trimmed beard brushed the bar’s edge. “Evan?” The name landed like a fist. Rory’s fingers tightened on the strap of her bag. “Gone,” she said. “I am Aurora Carter now. Rory died with him.” He studied her. The tension in her jaw, the cool head that had replaced the frantic student. Unspoken regret hung between them like dust in the green light. “You came here for work,” he said. “Not nostalgia.” She nodded. “Yu-Fei Cheung sends me. Golden Empress order.” She lifted a paper bag stamped with gold characters. The smell of ginger and burnt sugar escaped. He took the bag. His fingers brushed hers. The contact lasted half a second longer than necessary. “I open at noon,” he said. “But the back stays open for old ghosts.” She glanced past him at the bookshelf along the far wall. One volume sat crooked. “Your secret room,” she said. His hazel eyes narrowed with something like pride and warning. “You remember.” “I remember everything, Silas. That’s the problem.” She slid onto a stool. The wood groaned. Her scar, that small crescent on her left wrist, pressed against the bar’s cold edge. “You limped before I left,” she said. “You called it an old knee injury. You never said Prague.” “I never said a lot of things.” She looked at the green neon sign reflected in the mirror behind the bottles. “I came to London because Eva begged,” she said. “But I stayed because I had nowhere to go back to.” He untied the Golden Empress bag and pulled out containers of steaming noodles. “We all change,” he said. “Some of us just hide it behind bars and bookshelves.” She watched him move. The limp was more pronounced now, the left leg dragging slightly as he walked to the end of the counter. “I saw your father,” he said suddenly. “Brendan Carter. Six months ago in the Temple. He asked about you.” Rory’s breath caught. “He still practices?” “Barrister to the bone. He mentioned Jennifer. Your mother teaches still. They don’t talk about you leaving law. They talk about you escaping.” The word escaped hung between them. “I didn’t escape,” Rory said. “I survived.” Silas pushed a glass of water across the bar. “Survival looks different on everyone,” he said. “On you, it looks like black hair and blue rage.” She drank. The water tasted of iron. “I deliver Chinese food,” she said. “By day. By night I sit above your bar and wonder if I made the wrong choice.” “You made the only choice Evan left you,” Silas said. His voice hardened. “That’s not regret. That’s arithmetic.” She turned the crescent scar over her wrist, tracing it with her thumb. “I wanted to be a lawyer,” she said quietly. “Like Brendan. I wanted the argument, the order. Instead I have delivery slips and a flat that smells like your whiskey.” He stepped closer. The height difference disappeared when she stood. “Order is a lie,” he said. “You know that now. Intelligence taught me. The bar teaches me every night. People come here with one face and leave with another. You came through that door with Rory’s hair and Aurora’s eyes.” She looked up at him. Six feet one inch of retired spymaster with a silver ring and a limp. “You haven’t changed, Silas,” she said. “You just found a darker corner to stand in.” He smiled then. A brief, sharp thing. “I missed your mind,” he said. “Not your age. Not your hope. Your mind.” The neon sign flickered. Outside, Soho breathed. Rory slid off the stool. The bag from Golden Empress sat empty now. “I should go,” she said. “Eva waits.” “Eva waited for you to leave Cardiff,” Silas said. “She’ll wait for you to come back here.” He reached behind the bar and pulled a small brass key from a hook shaped like a raven. “The bookshelf,” he said. “If you need the room. Not for meetings. For remembering who you were before the world made you hard.” She took the key. Cool metal. Weight of years. “Thank you,” she said. She walked to the door. The green light washed over her again. Then she turned. “You never asked why I really came,” she said. He watched her with hazel patience. “I’m asking now,” he said. She pulled her phone from the bag. A message glowed on the screen. A photo of her father’s office. A file with her name. “Brendan Carter,” she said. “He’s defending Evan. The case starts next week.” The words dropped into the bar like broken glass. Silas set his glass down slowly. “Then you didn’t come for nostalgia,” he said. She shook her head. Black hair swung against her cheek. “I came for you, Silas. You’re the only one who knows how to hurt people properly.” He limped toward her, each step deliberate. “The secret room,” he said. “Tomorrow. Six. We talk about Brendan Carter. We talk about Evan. We talk about who Rory was and who Aurora needs to become.” She nodded once. Outside, London swallowed her. But the brass key stayed in her pocket, heavy and cold, a bridge between the girl who fled and the woman who returned.<|end_message|>
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags30
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"he said suddenly [suddenly]"
1"she said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.492
leniency0.984
rawRatio0.067
effectiveRatio0.066
82.16% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1121
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"suddenly"
count1
2
adverb"really"
count1
3
adverb"slowly"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"suddenly"
2"really"
3"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
73.24% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1121
totalAiIsms6
found
0
word"scanned"
count1
1
word"tension"
count1
2
word"unspoken"
count1
3
word"tracing"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"weight"
count1
highlights
0"scanned"
1"tension"
2"unspoken"
3"tracing"
4"flickered"
5"weight"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences110
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences141
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1121
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions36
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Outside, Soho breathed."
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions25
wordCount676
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity0.89
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Dean1
Street1
Rory6
Raven2
Nest2
Prague1
Golden2
Empress2
Silas6
Soho1
London1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Raven"
2"Nest"
3"Empress"
4"Silas"
places
0"Dean"
1"Street"
2"Prague"
3"Golden"
4"Soho"
5"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
96.81% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences47
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"something like pride and warning"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1121
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences141
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs77
mean14.56
std9.04
cv0.621
sampleLengths
034
147
218
318
43
531
65
729
89
921
1020
1114
1211
131
1415
1512
1628
179
189
1917
2017
2114
2215
235
2410
252
267
2723
2818
297
3014
3120
3213
3315
3424
3519
363
373
3823
396
407
419
4217
437
4423
4518
4613
4730
4810
4940
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs135
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences141
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount680
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount14
adverbRatio0.020588235294117647
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.007352941176470588
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences141
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences141
mean7.95
std5.37
cv0.675
sampleLengths
016
19
29
311
424
512
65
79
84
92
109
117
123
1312
1419
155
168
1711
1810
195
204
219
2212
232
243
2515
266
278
283
298
301
316
329
333
349
353
3614
3711
387
392
402
417
429
438
444
454
469
476
488
4911
46.34% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3120567375886525
totalSentences141
uniqueOpeners44
85.47% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences78
matches
0"Bright blue eyes scanned the"
1"Then she turned."
ratio0.026
40.51% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount35
totalSentences78
matches
0"She pushed through the door"
1"His left leg rested heavier"
2"His hazel eyes locked onto"
3"His voice stayed low, a"
4"He did not smile."
5"He polished a tumbler with"
6"She tucked her black hair"
7"He set the tumbler down"
8"His neatly trimmed beard brushed"
9"He studied her."
10"She lifted a paper bag"
11"He took the bag."
12"His fingers brushed hers."
13"She glanced past him at"
14"His hazel eyes narrowed with"
15"She slid onto a stool."
16"Her scar, that small crescent"
17"She looked at the green"
18"He untied the Golden Empress"
19"She watched him move."
ratio0.449
36.92% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences78
matches
0"She pushed through the door"
1"The air smelled of old"
2"A man with grey-streaked auburn"
3"His left leg rested heavier"
4"His hazel eyes locked onto"
5"His voice stayed low, a"
6"He did not smile."
7"The delivery bag slipped an"
8"He polished a tumbler with"
9"The silver signet ring on"
10"She tucked her black hair"
11"The straight shoulder-length cut framed"
12"He set the tumbler down"
13"The sound cracked."
14"The Raven’s Nest swallowed her"
15"Silas leaned closer."
16"His neatly trimmed beard brushed"
17"The name landed like a"
18"Rory’s fingers tightened on the"
19"He studied her."
ratio0.846
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences20
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags30
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags29
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences61
tagDensity0.475
leniency0.951
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
88.7149%