| 46.15% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 13 | | adverbTagCount | 2 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Isolde said sweetly [sweetly]" | | 1 | "Isolde corrected softly [softly]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.619 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.154 | | effectiveRatio | 0.154 | |
| 77.13% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1093 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "utterly" | | 1 | "carefully" | | 2 | "suddenly" | | 3 | "sweetly" | | 4 | "softly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 45.11% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1093 | | totalAiIsms | 12 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "tracing" | | 1 | "racing" | | 2 | "pulse" | | 3 | "gloom" | | 4 | "flickered" | | 5 | "stark" | | 6 | "resonated" | | 7 | "treacherous" | | 8 | "stomach" | | 9 | "crystalline" | | 10 | "familiar" | | 11 | "throb" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 1 | | maxInWindow | 1 | | found | | 0 | | label | "eyes widened/narrowed" | | count | 1 |
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| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 90.91% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 2 | | narrationSentences | 55 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 64 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 39 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 1 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 1090 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 14 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 83.33% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 40 | | wordCount | 892 | | uniqueNames | 15 | | maxNameDensity | 1.23 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Half-Fae | 1 | | Dymas | 1 | | Fae | 4 | | Veil | 3 | | Hel | 1 | | Rory | 11 | | Fae-forged | 1 | | Isolde | 6 | | London | 1 | | Nyx | 6 | | Shade | 1 | | Heartstone | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Dymas" | | 1 | "Rory" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Nyx" | | 4 | "Shade" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Veil" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Cardiff" |
| | globalScore | 0.883 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 43.62% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 47 | | glossingSentenceCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like dry leaves sliding across sto" | | 1 | "runes that seemed to writhe whenever Rory tried to look at them directly" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1090 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 64 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 41.92 | | std | 27.32 | | cv | 0.652 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 42 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 43 | | 4 | 100 | | 5 | 46 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 60 | | 8 | 28 | | 9 | 56 | | 10 | 20 | | 11 | 83 | | 12 | 74 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 43 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 97 | | 17 | 5 | | 18 | 33 | | 19 | 37 | | 20 | 68 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 27 | | 23 | 81 | | 24 | 35 | | 25 | 26 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 55 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 138 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 3 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 64 | | ratio | 0.094 | | matches | | 0 | "Where her slippered feet touched the earth, the grass bent and sprang back without a trace; she left no footprints at all." | | 1 | "Rory drew a sharp breath and reached instinctively for the weapon tucked into her belt—the Fae-forged blade Isolde had gifted her." | | 2 | "The trees were not oak or ash; their trunks curled like twisted rope, pale white as bone, bearing broad, violet leaves that bled thick, sweet sap onto the stone below." | | 3 | "High above, strange birds with iridescent plumed tails flitted between branches, singing notes that resonated in Rory’s teeth rather than her ears—a chord that felt uncomfortably close to a invitation to sit down, close her eyes, and sleep." | | 4 | "Within the frame of the arch, the air did not reflect the amber sky; it rippled like oil on water, showing glimpses of a dark, rain-slicked alleyway back in London." | | 5 | "But as she looked into the shifting oil-slick heart of the portal, she saw the truth of the world she had stumbled into—a fragile, beautiful, terrified reality held together by threadbare magic and dangerous allies." |
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| 82.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 867 | | adjectiveStacks | 3 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small, crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "pale, bell-shaped flowers." | | 2 | "High above, strange birds" |
| | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.03229527104959631 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.01384083044982699 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 64 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 64 | | mean | 17.03 | | std | 8.27 | | cv | 0.486 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 17 | | 1 | 28 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 21 | | 5 | 22 | | 6 | 20 | | 7 | 12 | | 8 | 24 | | 9 | 23 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 17 | | 12 | 29 | | 13 | 9 | | 14 | 16 | | 15 | 14 | | 16 | 30 | | 17 | 16 | | 18 | 12 | | 19 | 6 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 21 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 11 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 21 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 25 | | 28 | 27 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 30 | | 31 | 38 | | 32 | 10 | | 33 | 13 | | 34 | 4 | | 35 | 28 | | 36 | 15 | | 37 | 11 | | 38 | 17 | | 39 | 7 | | 40 | 15 | | 41 | 28 | | 42 | 30 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 13 | | 45 | 14 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 16 | | 48 | 21 | | 49 | 16 |
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| 80.21% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.5 | | totalSentences | 64 | | uniqueOpeners | 32 | |
| 62.89% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "Faintly glowing violet eyes flickered" |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 12 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "Her bright blue eyes widened" | | 1 | "It was a rich, suffocating" | | 2 | "It was entirely alien, a" | | 3 | "Her pale lavender eyes reflected" | | 4 | "It stretched upward, coalescing into" | | 5 | "Their voice sounded like dry" | | 6 | "Her fingers wrapped around the" | | 7 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 8 | "Her cool-headed instincts kicked in," | | 9 | "She tilted her head, her" | | 10 | "She looked down at the" | | 11 | "She reached out toward the" |
| | ratio | 0.226 | |
| 73.21% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 41 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "The transition wasn’t a physical" | | 2 | "The Half-Fae seer glided across" | | 3 | "Rory looked down at her" | | 4 | "Her bright blue eyes widened" | | 5 | "It was a rich, suffocating" | | 6 | "The air tasted rich and" | | 7 | "It was entirely alien, a" | | 8 | "Rory muttered, her fingers reflexively" | | 9 | "*A Hel portal is near,*" | | 10 | "Isolde murmured without turning around" | | 11 | "Her pale lavender eyes reflected" | | 12 | "A patch of dark air" | | 13 | "It stretched upward, coalescing into" | | 14 | "Their voice sounded like dry" | | 15 | "Isolde said sweetly" | | 16 | "Rory drew a sharp breath" | | 17 | "Her fingers wrapped around the" | | 18 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 19 | "The trees were not oak" |
| | ratio | 0.774 | |
| 94.34% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 53 | | matches | | 0 | "Even through her leather gloves," |
| | ratio | 0.019 | |
| 46.33% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 37 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory looked down at her own heavy boots, which buried themselves inches deep in a dense carpet of midnight-blue moss." | | 1 | "Beneath her coat, the small crimson heartstone pendant hanging from its silver chain thrummed with a steady, low heat against her collarbone, pulsing in time wi…" | | 2 | "Knowing the cold metal could sever magic wards and bite deep into demon flesh gave her a small anchor of reality in a place that defied it." | | 3 | "High above, strange birds with iridescent plumed tails flitted between branches, singing notes that resonated in Rory’s teeth rather than her ears—a chord that …" | | 4 | "Crystalline trellises held vines bursting with glowing, star-shaped fruit that dripped luminescence onto golden soil." |
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| 86.54% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 13 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory said, her voice steady and quiet" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 11 | | fancyCount | 5 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Rory muttered (mutter)" | | 1 | "Isolde murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" | | 3 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 4 | "Isolde corrected softly (correct)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 21 | | tagDensity | 0.524 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.455 | | effectiveRatio | 0.455 | |