Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCVED015AB7333AF96EAM68

Run Details

Duration:
39.3s
Cost:
$0.047133
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain lashed the asphalt of Camden High Street, transforming the streetlights into smeared pools of greasy amber. Harlow Quinn pushed her stride, heavy boots striking wet pavement with rhythmic force. Thirty yards ahead, Tomás Herrera darted between parked delivery vans, his dark coat billowing behind him. Water ran down his short dark curly hair, plastering it against his scalp. He threw a quick glance over his shoulder, warm brown eyes wide in the gloom, before cutting sharply into a narrow, trash-choked alleyway. Harlow took the corner tight, her shoulder brushing against a brick wall slippery with moss. Three years of dead ends, three years of night terrors after DS Morris vanished into an unmapped basement in Southwark, and now the key sat right in front of her. "Stop!" The command cracked through the downpour, sharp and absolute. Herrera kept running. He ducked beneath a rusted fire escape, his coat sleeve snagging on an exposed bolt. The fabric ripped, revealing his bare forearm and the long, jagged white knife scar carved into his olive skin. A silver Saint Christopher medallion swung wildly from his neck, flashing against the dark under the sputter of a broken sign. Harlow matched his pace, her breath coming in steady, measured exhales through her nose. Eighteen years on the force had built an engine in her chest that refused to stall. At forty-one, her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair stayed flat against her forehead under the storm. She tracked Herrera's ragged movements with the cold, mechanical precision of her military training. Herrera hit the slick cobblestones near the canal wall and skidded, his sneaker losing traction. He tossed a rusted zinc trash can behind him to block the passage. Harlow didn't slow; she vaulted the obstacle, landing hard on the cobbles, her left wrist catching the dim light where her worn leather watch was strapped tight. "Give it up, Herrera!" Herrera grabbed a drainpipe to swing around a pile of soggy cardboard boxes. "Go back to the station, Quinn! You're out of your depth!" "You lost your license for a reason, Tomás! Stand down!" "I was saving lives!" He scrambled up a low cinderblock wall bordering a derelict construction site, his fingers digging into wet mortar. Harlow reached out, her fingers brushing the hem of his coat, but he kicked back, his heel clipping her forearm before he dropped down into the shadow of an abandoned railway embankment. Harlow cleared the wall a second later. Rain roared through the canopy of stunted sycamore trees growing through the gravel ballast. Ahead, the ground sloped downward toward a cavernous concrete archway—a long-forgotten entrance to a decommissioned Tube station, locked behind heavy iron grates and boarded-up plywood. Herrera sprinted straight for it. A hole had been pried open in the bottom corner of the wooden hoarding, just large enough for a man to slide through. "Tomás!" He dropped to his knees, sliding hips-first through the gap into the black maw beneath the street. Harlow reached the grate, unholstering her heavy iron torch from her belt. She clicked the switch. A beam of white light cut through the black hole, illuminating concrete steps descending into deep water. Rain poured down the stairs like a subterranean waterfall, carrying street grit down into the dark. She squeezed through the gap, her shoulder pressing against splintered plywood. Cold mud soaked her knees as she dropped onto the top stair. The sound of the rain died instantly, replaced by a heavy, booming echo. The air shifted. Up on the street, the night smelled of wet exhaust and stagnant Thames runoff. Down here, thirty feet below the surface, the air grew thick and stiflingly warm. It carried an unnatural blend of crushed cinnamon, wet copper, and something sharp like ozone that stung the back of her throat. Harlow descended the stairs, her right hand hovering over the grip of her service weapon. Her boots created hollow slaps against the submerged tiles. White glazed brick, blackened by decades of soot and subterranean mould, lined the curved tunnel walls. Fifty yards ahead, the beam of her torch caught Herrera standing before a massive iron bulkhead door embedded in the Victorian brickwork. The metal frame looked centuries older than the surrounding station, carved with dense, winding geometric grooves that didn't belong on any London Underground blueprint. Herrera reached into his coat pocket and withdrew a small, yellowed object—a flat piece of carved bone, notched along its edges. He jammed it into a slit in the iron frame. The door clunked, heavy locking pins sliding back with the sound of iron grinding against stone. The heavy door swung inward, revealing a wash of deep violet light that spilled out across the flooded concrete floor. "Freeze!" Harlow brought her weapon up, locking her wrists, the torch beam pinned directly on Herrera's face. Herrera raised a hand against the glare, his dark eyes narrowing. Water dripped from his sharp jaw, running down the Saint Christopher medallion resting on his collarbone. "Put your hands on your head and step away from the door!" Herrera didn't move toward her. He took one step backward, slipping across the threshold into the violet glow. "You don't want to follow me in here, Detective." "You're a suspect in three open homicides and an illegal trafficking ring. Step back into the tunnel!" "Those homicides weren't men, Quinn! And if you cross that line, you aren't in London anymore!" Harlow advanced, her boots cutting through the ankle-deep water. She reached the threshold of the iron door and stopped. Beyond the frame lay the Veil Market. The abandoned Tube station expanded into a staggering underground expanse beneath Camden. Stalls constructed from dark timber, brass poles, and thick velvet drapes filled an ancient, vaulted cavern. Hanging lanterns burned with purple and green flames that cast no smoke. Scores of figures in heavy cloaks and tailored coats moved between stalls, trading items that defied logic—vials of liquid light, bound books that shifted their spines, preserved anatomical specimens floating in glowing jars, and strange, humming instruments of polished nickel. A vendor with elongated fingers turned his head toward the open doorway, his gaze locking onto Harlow's police coat. A low hum rose from the crowd as nearby patrons took notice of the intruder. Harlow's pulse hammered against her neck. Her sharp jaw tightened. Every instinct built over eighteen years in uniform screamed at her that she was standing on the precipice of something that violated every procedure, every law, and every reality she understood. Backup wouldn't come down here. Radio signals wouldn't penetrate thirty feet of solid earth and whatever strange energy hummed in the air. Herrera stood five feet inside the market, watching her carefully. "Turn around, Harlow. Go back to your station. Tell them you lost me in the dark." Harlow looked down at her left wrist. The secondhand on her worn leather watch stuttered, spun backward twice, and stopped dead. She looked up, meeting Herrera's brown eyes through the violet haze. She adjusted her grip on her sidearm and stepped over the iron threshold. The heavy door slammed shut behind her, sealing out the tunnel and the rain.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:39:08.299Z" 7/25/2026, 2:39:08 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
91.60% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1191
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"sharply"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count1
highlights
0"sharply"
1"carefully"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
62.22% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1191
totalAiIsms9
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count1
1
word"gloom"
count1
2
word"measured"
count1
3
word"mechanical"
count1
4
word"maw"
count1
5
word"echo"
count1
6
word"constructed"
count1
7
word"velvet"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"gloom"
2"measured"
3"mechanical"
4"maw"
5"echo"
6"constructed"
7"velvet"
8"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences73
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences73
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences85
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen41
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1188
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions0
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions49
wordCount1086
uniqueNames19
maxNameDensity1.2
worstName"Herrera"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Herrera"
discoveredNames
Camden2
High1
Street1
Quinn1
Tomás1
Herrera13
Morris1
Southwark1
Saint2
Christopher2
Tube2
Thames1
Victorian1
London1
Underground1
Veil1
Market1
Harlow13
Rain3
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Tomás"
2"Herrera"
3"Morris"
4"Saint"
5"Christopher"
6"Harlow"
7"Rain"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
3"Southwark"
4"Thames"
5"Victorian"
6"London"
globalScore0.901
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences66
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1188
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean28.29
std22.26
cv0.787
sampleLengths
082
145
21
367
459
555
64
713
811
910
104
1150
1246
1328
141
1517
1649
1723
1866
1940
2046
2131
2236
231
2416
2527
2612
2718
289
2917
3016
3119
327
3380
3434
3563
3610
3716
3821
3911
4013
4114
95.65% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences73
matches
0"was strapped"
1"been pried"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs177
matches
0"was standing"
8.40% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences85
ratio0.047
matches
0"Harlow didn't slow; she vaulted the obstacle, landing hard on the cobbles, her left wrist catching the dim light where her worn leather watch was strapped tight."
1"Ahead, the ground sloped downward toward a cavernous concrete archway—a long-forgotten entrance to a decommissioned Tube station, locked behind heavy iron grates and boarded-up plywood."
2"Herrera reached into his coat pocket and withdrew a small, yellowed object—a flat piece of carved bone, notched along its edges."
3"Scores of figures in heavy cloaks and tailored coats moved between stalls, trading items that defied logic—vials of liquid light, bound books that shifted their spines, preserved anatomical specimens floating in glowing jars, and strange, humming instruments of polished nickel."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1097
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"narrow, trash-choked alleyway."
1"long, jagged white knife"
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.019143117593436645
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.007292616226071103
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences85
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences85
mean13.98
std7.15
cv0.512
sampleLengths
017
113
216
313
423
515
630
71
89
93
1015
1119
1221
1314
1416
1515
1614
1715
1813
1927
204
2113
2211
2310
244
2518
2632
277
2814
2925
305
3123
321
3317
3412
354
3617
3716
3811
3912
4013
413
4214
4314
4422
4515
469
4716
4822
4924
65.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.43529411764705883
totalSentences85
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount16
totalSentences73
matches
0"He threw a quick glance"
1"He ducked beneath a rusted"
2"She tracked Herrera's ragged movements"
3"He tossed a rusted zinc"
4"He scrambled up a low"
5"He dropped to his knees,"
6"She clicked the switch."
7"She squeezed through the gap,"
8"It carried an unnatural blend"
9"Her boots created hollow slaps"
10"He jammed it into a"
11"He took one step backward,"
12"She reached the threshold of"
13"Her sharp jaw tightened."
14"She looked up, meeting Herrera's"
15"She adjusted her grip on"
ratio0.219
42.19% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences73
matches
0"Rain lashed the asphalt of"
1"Harlow Quinn pushed her stride,"
2"Water ran down his short"
3"He threw a quick glance"
4"Harlow took the corner tight,"
5"The command cracked through the"
6"Herrera kept running."
7"He ducked beneath a rusted"
8"The fabric ripped, revealing his"
9"A silver Saint Christopher medallion"
10"Harlow matched his pace, her"
11"She tracked Herrera's ragged movements"
12"Herrera hit the slick cobblestones"
13"He tossed a rusted zinc"
14"Harlow didn't slow; she vaulted"
15"Herrera grabbed a drainpipe to"
16"He scrambled up a low"
17"Harlow reached out, her fingers"
18"Harlow cleared the wall a"
19"Rain roared through the canopy"
ratio0.836
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
71.43% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences60
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"He scrambled up a low cinderblock wall bordering a derelict construction site, his fingers digging into wet mortar."
1"Harlow reached out, her fingers brushing the hem of his coat, but he kicked back, his heel clipping her forearm before he dropped down into the shadow of an aba…"
2"It carried an unnatural blend of crushed cinnamon, wet copper, and something sharp like ozone that stung the back of her throat."
3"The metal frame looked centuries older than the surrounding station, carved with dense, winding geometric grooves that didn't belong on any London Underground b…"
4"Scores of figures in heavy cloaks and tailored coats moved between stalls, trading items that defied logic—vials of liquid light, bound books that shifted their…"
5"Every instinct built over eighteen years in uniform screamed at her that she was standing on the precipice of something that violated every procedure, every law…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
83.6106%