Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCVFV0Z25326YKSH92G4FKK

Run Details

Duration:
2m 29s
Cost:
$0.004816
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pushed through the oak boundary of Richmond Park, boots crushing frost that had no business in late spring. The Fae Grove swallowed her whole. Ancient oaks ringed the clearing, their bark etched with spirals older than Cardiff's streets, older than her father's law books. Wildflowers blazed in impossible colour—bluebells in October, foxgloves in winter—each bloom unmoving, painted onto air. The pendant hung cold against her collarbone, a deep crimson heartstone no larger than her thumbnail, its silver chain knotted twice. It should have pulsed. Near a Hel portal, the benefactor's note said, it warmed like a second heartbeat. Tonight it stayed dead. That wrongness dug under her ribs sharper than any knife. She came for Eva. Or for the letter that led her here—unsigned, inked in a hand she almost recognised. The clearing opened like a mouth. No wind moved the flowers. Still, they rustled. Rory stopped. Her shoulder-length black hair stuck to her neck. Bright blue eyes scanned the dark. Five foot six of wasted London delivery shifts meant she knew how to move quiet, how to read an empty street. This wasn't empty. The air tasted of iron and rotting sweetness. A twig snapped behind her left shoulder. She turned. The standing stones watched. Between them, the wildflowers bent as if something heavy passed through, though nothing was there. "Show yourself," she said. Her voice sounded thin, swallowed by the pocket between Earth and the Fae realm. No answer. The rustling spread, a slow circle closing in. Rory touched the crescent scar on her left wrist, a childhood accident from a Cardiff playground, a crescent she traced when terrified. The Heartstone stayed silent, its faint inner glow dimmed to nothing. Not near a portal, then. Or worse—something had already opened. Shadows pooled wrong. They stretched toward her boots like fingers of tar. She stepped back. Her heel struck root. The ground gave a dull thud, hollow. Time stuttered. The park outside Richmond should have held traffic noise, plane trails, the hum of the city. Here, only silence thickened, pressing her eardrums until she heard her own pulse, frantic, too loud. Something moved at the edge of vision. Fast. Too fast for shape. A smear of black against black, then gone. Rory's breath shook. She kept her hands low, delivery-bike calluses rough, ready. The flat above Silas' bar felt years away. Her father Brendan's barrister logic failed here; her mother Jennifer's classroom patience meant nothing to this grove. Another sound—closer. A wet drag across moss. She circled left, back to the stones. The flowers turned their heads. Not literally—she forced that thought down—but they seemed to lean, to watch with colours too bright, too hungry. The pendant warmed. One faint pulse. Rory clutched it. "Eva?" The name hung useless. From the centre of the clearing, where no path should exist, a shape unfolded. Not walking—arranging itself from darkness, from the rustle of flowers that now bent away in revulsion. Tall. Too thin. Its face remained hidden behind a veil of moving shadow, but Rory saw the tilt of its head, studying her like a specimen. She did not run. Running made it real. She stood her ground, cool-headed intelligence burning through the fear that tried to lock her knees. "You're not Eva," Rory said. The shape made no sound, but the wildflowers screamed in silent motion, every stem bowing toward it. Rory's heart hammered. The Heartstone pulsed faster, crimson deepening, silver chain biting her skin. Near a portal. The wrongness had a source. She took one step back. The shape matched it, gliding closer without feet. The rustling stopped. In the absolute quiet, Rory heard it breathing—not air, but absence, pulling the grove's stillness into itself. Her bright blue eyes fixed on the hidden face, searching for humanity, for Eva, for anyone she knew. There was none. The crescent scar on her wrist throbbed in time with the pendant. The grove held its breath. The shape reached out—no hand visible, only darkness shaped like a hand—and Rory realised she had come not to find Eva, but to be found. The Heartstone blazed. Warmth spread up her neck, terrifying in its life. The portal was open, and she stood in it, alone, in the wrong place, with nothing but quick thinking and a dead delivery job between her and whatever had just finished arranging itself from the dark.<|end_message|>
created_at"2026-07-25T14:39:55.431Z" 7/25/2026, 2:39:55 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags2
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount739
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
32.34% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount739
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"etched"
count1
1
word"pulsed"
count2
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count2
6
word"throbbed"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"etched"
1"pulsed"
2"scanned"
3"traced"
4"silence"
5"pulse"
6"throbbed"
7"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences83
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences84
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords729
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions3
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
80.36% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount718
uniqueNames14
maxNameDensity1.39
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond2
Park1
Fae2
Grove1
Cardiff2
October1
Hel1
Eva3
London1
Earth1
Heartstone3
Brendan1
Jennifer1
Rory10
persons
0"Eva"
1"Heartstone"
2"Brendan"
3"Jennifer"
4"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"Cardiff"
5"October"
6"Hel"
7"London"
globalScore0.804
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences42
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords2.743
wordCount729
matches
0"not air, but absence, pulling the grove's stillness into itself"
1"not to find Eva, but to be found"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences84
matches
0"forced that thought"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs29
mean25.14
std22.6
cv0.899
sampleLengths
0113
125
28
348
47
521
618
710
843
926
1034
1120
1237
137
1430
156
164
174
1856
1924
205
2117
2222
2313
243
2535
263
2742
2848
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences83
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs124
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount11
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences9
totalSentences84
ratio0.107
matches
0"Wildflowers blazed in impossible colour—bluebells in October, foxgloves in winter—each bloom unmoving, painted onto air."
1"Or for the letter that led her here—unsigned, inked in a hand she almost recognised."
2"Or worse—something had already opened."
3"Her father Brendan's barrister logic failed here; her mother Jennifer's classroom patience meant nothing to this grove."
4"Another sound—closer."
5"Not literally—she forced that thought down—but they seemed to lean, to watch with colours too bright, too hungry."
6"Not walking—arranging itself from darkness, from the rustle of flowers that now bent away in revulsion."
7"In the absolute quiet, Rory heard it breathing—not air, but absence, pulling the grove's stillness into itself."
8"The shape reached out—no hand visible, only darkness shaped like a hand—and Rory realised she had come not to find Eva, but to be found."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount393
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.03307888040712468
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.002544529262086514
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences84
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences84
mean8.68
std6.9
cv0.795
sampleLengths
019
16
220
315
421
54
614
74
810
94
1015
116
125
133
142
158
166
1721
183
198
207
212
224
2315
244
2514
262
278
2822
2911
305
315
323
339
343
354
367
372
3816
3916
407
411
424
438
443
459
468
4717
482
495
70.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.4523809523809524
totalSentences84
uniqueOpeners38
91.32% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences73
matches
0"Bright blue eyes scanned the"
1"Too fast for shape."
ratio0.027
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences73
matches
0"It should have pulsed."
1"She came for Eva."
2"Her shoulder-length black hair stuck"
3"Her voice sounded thin, swallowed"
4"They stretched toward her boots"
5"She stepped back."
6"Her heel struck root."
7"She kept her hands low,"
8"Her father Brendan's barrister logic"
9"She circled left, back to"
10"Its face remained hidden behind"
11"She did not run."
12"She stood her ground, cool-headed"
13"She took one step back."
14"Her bright blue eyes fixed"
ratio0.205
83.29% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences73
matches
0"Rory pushed through the oak"
1"The Fae Grove swallowed her"
2"Wildflowers blazed in impossible colour—bluebells"
3"The pendant hung cold against"
4"It should have pulsed."
5"Tonight it stayed dead."
6"That wrongness dug under her"
7"She came for Eva."
8"The clearing opened like a"
9"Her shoulder-length black hair stuck"
10"This wasn't empty."
11"The air tasted of iron"
12"A twig snapped behind her"
13"The standing stones watched."
14"Her voice sounded thin, swallowed"
15"The rustling spread, a slow"
16"Rory touched the crescent scar"
17"The Heartstone stayed silent, its"
18"Shadows pooled wrong."
19"They stretched toward her boots"
ratio0.753
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences73
matches(empty)
ratio0
66.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences28
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Rory pushed through the oak boundary of Richmond Park, boots crushing frost that had no business in late spring."
1"Between them, the wildflowers bent as if something heavy passed through, though nothing was there."
2"She stood her ground, cool-headed intelligence burning through the fear that tried to lock her knees."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags2
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences3
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.1425%