Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCVG6ZTWHFJ93QCD5PW816J

Run Details

Duration:
8m 29s
Cost:
$0.018697
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The green neon of The Raven’s Nest bled through Soho rain like a bruise that refused to heal. Rory pushed through the door and the smell of stale hops, old wood, and polished regret swallowed her whole. Maps yellowed at the edges clung to the walls; black-and-white photographs of strangers in unfamiliar coats watched from frames. She stood at 5’6” in soaked trainers, her straight shoulder-length black hair plastered flat against her neck, her bright blue eyes adjusting to the dim. A man moved behind the bar with a slight limp in his left leg. Grey-streaked auburn hair, neatly trimmed beard matching it, hazel eyes that had once read rooms like open books. He wore a silver signet ring on his right hand and polished a glass with a cloth that looked older than the photographs. He was 6’1” and carried fifty-eight years like a coat he could not take off. "You came back," he said. She kept her hands flat on the counter. Rain dripped from her sleeves onto the wood. "I never really left. I live upstairs." Silas set the cloth down. "Three years. Not one foot inside." Rory shrugged. The motion felt borrowed. "You changed." "You haven't seen me since Prague." He rounded the bar slowly, his left knee dragging the weight of an old injury. "The operation failed. The exit was dirty. I opened this place as a front, just like I told you I might." "You're running contacts out of a bookshelf now." She nodded toward the hidden back room behind the old volumes. "From spymaster to landlord." "Bar owner." He corrected her gently. "The ring is silver now, not gold. The hair went grey at the temples. But I still know every lie in this room." Rory touched the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist, the childhood accident she never explained to strangers. "And I still deliver for Yu-Fei Cheung. Golden Empress. Night shifts. Part-time. Just like I told you I wouldn't end up." "You fled Evan." Silas stopped a foot away. "You ran to London at Eva's word. You studied pre-law at Cardiff because your father, Brendan the barrister, wanted a legacy. Your mother Jennifer taught literature. You were cool-headed. Intelligent. You thought outside boxes." "I stopped thinking in boxes when the boxes started hurting." Her voice stayed flat, but her fingers tightened against the scar. "I'm Rory now. Carter died somewhere between Cardiff and here. Sometimes I'm Laila. Sometimes Malphora. Depends on who asks." Silas leaned his hip against the bar, the limp forcing him to favour his right side. "You work delivery. You wear other people's names. You live in my flat and avoid my stairs." "You never came up either." "I tried once." He looked at his signet ring, twisted it. "You had the lock changed. I heard you through the floorboards. You were crying. I walked away because I thought you needed to become whoever you were going to be without an old MI6 failure standing guard." The weight of the years sat between them like a third drink neither had ordered. "You look like someone running from a ghost," Silas said. "You look like a ghost running a graveyard." He almost smiled. "Prague took my knee. The botched extraction. I retired. The Raven's Nest is my network. The green sign lights up for people who still need old debts settled. But you, Aurora Carter, you don't need a spymaster. You need to stop hiding behind aliases and delivery bags." She lifted her chin. The bright blue in her eyes did not waver. "Evan taught me that names are weapons. Rory is smaller. Harder to grab." "And your mother?" Silas asked. "Your father? Do they know you deliver dumplings instead of writing briefs?" "They know I left. They don't know I live above a bar owned by the man who taught me how to disappear." Rory stepped back from the counter. The rain on her coat began to dry in the warmth, leaving dark patches. "You regret Prague. I see it in the limp, in the ring, in the way you polish glasses that are already clean." "I regret not reaching for you when you had the knife." Silas spoke quietly. "Not the physical one. The one in your head. You were twenty-two, maybe younger, and you ran. I opened the bar. I let you live upstairs because I told myself proximity was protection. It was cowardice dressed as strategy." Rory's breath hitched, barely audible over the low hum of the bar's ancient refrigerator. "You couldn't have stopped me." "I could have tried." "You did. You just did it too quietly." She turned toward the door, then stopped. The black-and-white photographs seemed to shift in the low light. "I'm not the girl who fled. I'm not the pre-law student. I'm not even Carter half the time. But I'm not dead either. I'm just... heavier." Silas watched her, his hazel eyes holding the map of every unspoken word. "The flat is still yours. The stairs still work. The hidden room behind the bookshelf is for people who need it. You don't have to be Laila or Malphora in here." She touched the crescent scar once more, then dropped her hand. "Maybe tomorrow." "Not tomorrow." He picked up the cloth, began polishing the same glass again, the motion slow, deliberate, filled with the patience of a man who had waited years for a door to open. "Tonight." Rory stood in the green neon shadow, soaked hair drying, bright eyes fixed on a past she had not outrun but had not finished facing. The old maps on the walls suggested places neither of them had reached. The silence between them was not empty; it was full of everything they had become and everything they had lost to time.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:40:07.683Z" 7/25/2026, 2:40:07 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
97.44% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags15
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Rory stepped back [back]"
1"Silas spoke quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.385
leniency0.769
rawRatio0.133
effectiveRatio0.103
84.49% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount967
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"slowly"
count1
2
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slowly"
2"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
74.15% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount967
totalAiIsms5
found
0
word"weight"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"unspoken"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"weight"
1"warmth"
2"unspoken"
3"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences37
matches(empty)
65.64% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences37
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences61
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen72
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords967
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
50.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions16
wordCount437
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity1.6
worstName"Silas"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Silas"
discoveredNames
Raven1
Nest1
Soho1
Rory6
Silas7
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Rory"
3"Silas"
places
0"Soho"
globalScore0.699
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences25
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
96.59% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords1.034
wordCount967
matches
0"not outrun but had not finished facing"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences61
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean32.23
std20.87
cv0.647
sampleLengths
081
170
25
323
411
58
642
723
829
939
1042
1140
1233
135
1448
1515
1610
178
1850
1926
2017
2164
2253
2319
244
2551
2644
2713
2834
2960
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences37
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs82
matches(empty)
49.18% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences61
ratio0.033
matches
0"Maps yellowed at the edges clung to the walls; black-and-white photographs of strangers in unfamiliar coats watched from frames."
1"The silence between them was not empty; it was full of everything they had become and everything they had lost to time."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount398
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount15
adverbRatio0.03768844221105527
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.010050251256281407
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences61
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences61
mean15.85
std12.34
cv0.778
sampleLengths
018
119
219
325
470
55
68
78
87
95
106
112
124
132
1421
1521
1619
174
186
1923
2018
2121
228
2334
2421
2519
2616
2717
285
2911
3037
3115
3210
338
343
3547
364
379
3813
395
4012
4128
4214
4322
4414
4539
4614
475
484
4915
47.54% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.3442622950819672
totalSentences61
uniqueOpeners21
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences33
matches(empty)
ratio0
74.55% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount12
totalSentences33
matches
0"She stood at"
1"She kept her hands flat"
2"He rounded the bar slowly,"
3"She nodded toward the hidden"
4"He corrected her gently"
5"Her voice stayed flat, but"
6"He looked at his signet"
7"He almost smiled."
8"She lifted her chin."
9"She turned toward the door,"
10"She touched the crescent scar"
11"He picked up the cloth,"
ratio0.364
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount33
totalSentences33
matches
0"The green neon of The"
1"Rory pushed through the door"
2"Maps yellowed at the edges"
3"She stood at"
4"A man moved behind the"
5"She kept her hands flat"
6"Rain dripped from her sleeves"
7"Silas set the cloth down."
8"The motion felt borrowed."
9"He rounded the bar slowly,"
10"She nodded toward the hidden"
11"He corrected her gently"
12"Rory touched the small crescent-shaped"
13"Silas stopped a foot away"
14"Her voice stayed flat, but"
15"Silas leaned his hip against"
16"He looked at his signet"
17"The weight of the years"
18"He almost smiled."
19"She lifted her chin."
ratio1
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences33
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences14
technicalSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
89.29% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags14
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Her voice stayed, but her fingers tightened against the scar"
98.72% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags5
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"He corrected (correct)"
1"Silas spoke quietly (speak)"
dialogueSentences39
tagDensity0.128
leniency0.256
rawRatio0.4
effectiveRatio0.103
80.7189%