Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCVGAD34B736JWQDDVYNEF0

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Duration:
37.3s
Cost:
$0.060277
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt rattled in its socket as the door swung inward, revealing six feet of tailored charcoal wool and an ivory-handled cane resting against the threshold. "You took six months to find my address, Moreau." "I knew your address three minutes after you stole Eva's spare key, chérie. I simply waited until you stopped checking the street corner every four hours." Lucien stepped across the threshold without an invitation. His polished leather oxfords clicked against the warped floorboards, cutting through the thick scent of toasted cumin and fried garlic drifting up through the building from the curry house below. He swept a critical glance over the mountain of yellowing scrolls and cracked leather bindings cluttering Eva's small front room. "Tidy," he murmured. "Get out." "You always were atrocious at hospitality." He leaned his cane against the edge of a mahogany side table. The amber eye caught the dim bulb hanging from the ceiling while the black one swallowed the light whole. Platinum blond hair, slicked back with surgical precision, held not a single strand out of place. He looked entirely too pristine for a cramped flat on Brick Lane, entirely too alive for a man who had vanished after leaving me in the ruins of the Old Bailey cellar. "I asked you a question six months ago," I said. My fingers tightened around the heavy iron knocker I had unbolted from the broken outer frame earlier that afternoon. "You shouted an accusation," Lucien corrected smoothly. "There is a distinction. Though your syntax usually degrades when you hold heavy iron." Ptolemy padded out from beneath a stack of centuries-old parish registries. The ginger tabby sniffed the hem of Lucien's trousers, let out a low hiss, and retreated behind the velvet armchair. "The cat has better survival instincts than you," I said. "The cat recognizes a superior predator." Lucien reached into his breast pocket. My arm tensed, ready to drive the iron knocker straight into his tailored lapel, but he merely withdrew a silver cigarette case. "May I?" "No." He flicked the latch open anyway, slid an unlit clove cigarette between his lips, and let it hang there. "You left Cardiff to escape a pathetic bully, Rory. Yet here you are, crouching in an East End attic, breathing mould and ancient paper, waiting for the past to bite your heels." "Evan was an amateur. You are a threat." "I am a solution." "You sold my father's ledger to the court in Avaros!" The room went dead silent. The faint rumble of double-decker buses on the street below faded behind the sudden heavy pressure building in the flat. Lucien took one slow step forward. The ivory handle of his cane flickered in the periphery of my vision. "I saved your life," he whispered. "You traded me!" "I bought you time!" His voice cracked like a whip, sharp and razor-smooth at once. "Do you think the demon realm operates on Welsh legal precedent? Do you think your father's pre-law textbooks prepared you for entities that eat souls for breakfast?" He closed the distance between us before I could draw a breath. His hand, cold and immaculately manicured, locked around my left wrist. His thumb pressed directly over the small crescent-shaped scar near my pulse point. Heat shot through my arm, hot and prickling, matching the amber fire dancing in his right eye. "Let go," I said. My voice did not shake. "Make me." I jerked my hand up, bringing the heavy iron knocker toward his jaw. Lucien caught my right wrist effortlessly, twisting my arm back until the metal clattered onto the hardwood floor. He pinned my hands against his chest. I felt the solid, rhythmic thud of his heart beneath the heavy charcoal wool. Fast. Faster than a human heart ought to beat. "You always fight when you should negotiate," he muttered. His breath carried the sharp scent of bitter clove and old silk. "I don't negotiate with liars." "Then read my eyes, Aurora. Tell me what I'm lying about." He leaned down, his mouth inches from the curve of my neck. The darkness in his left eye seemed to bleed into the room, stretching shadows along the peeling wallpaper, pulling the bitter chill of Avaros right into the stuffy London room. I pulled against his grip, but his fingers held like iron bands. The friction of his suit against my linen shirt sent a dark, unwanted spike of heat down my spine. "You came here for Eva's translation notes," I breathed, forcing my gaze up to meet his mismatched eyes. "I came here because you are in danger." "I am only in danger when you are in the room." "A flattering lie." He tilted his head, his lip curling into that sharp half-smile that had haunted every dream I had suffered through since spring. "The court of Avaros found the ledger missing three days ago. They know your father hid the second half in London. They know you have the key." My blood ran cold. "The second half was destroyed." "It was locked in a vault beneath the Thames," Lucien said. "And forty minutes ago, someone blew the vault open." He released my wrists so suddenly I stumbled back against the crowded bookcase. Books rained down around my ankles, heavy leather bindings slapping the dusty floorboards. Ptolemy scrambled under the sofa with a screech. "Why tell me now?" I gripped the edge of a shelf, steadying my ragged breathing. "Why walk in here like you didn't leave me stranded six months ago?" "Because I spent those six months bleeding in Marseille to clear your name," he said, his voice dropping into a rough, unvarnished tone I had never heard him use. "Because every night I spent in Avaros, I remembered the way your skin felt under my hands in that damp cellar. And because you are the most stubborn, arrogant human woman in this wretched city." He stepped close again, his dark eye swallowing the light around us, his hand reaching out to touch the curve of my cheek. His fingers felt cool and smooth, terrifying me far more than any demon in the underworld. I didn't pull away. I couldn't. "You should have stayed in France," I whispered, my heart slamming against my ribs. "I couldn't leave my favourite bad habit behind." His thumb traced the line of my lower lip, pressing lightly until my breath hitched. "Say the word, Rory. Tell me you want me to leave, and I walk out that door right now." I opened my mouth, the rejection sitting on the back of my tongue, heavy and bitter. Before I could speak, a sickening wooden crunch echoed through the hallway outside. The ancient warding sigils Eva had painted on the doorframe burst into violet flame. Sparks showered over the carpet. The three iron deadbolts shrieked as the entire wooden door buckled inward, exploding off its hinges under a massive, crushing force. Lucien snatched the ivory cane from the table, twisting the top with a sharp metallic click. Six inches of narrow, gleaming silver steel unsheathed in his hand. "Don't move," he snarled, shoving me behind his back as three ash-skinned figures stepped through the smoke.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Lucien corrected smoothly [smoothly]"
1"His voice cracked like [like]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.415
leniency0.829
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.098
91.66% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1199
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
1
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
1"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.62% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1199
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"pristine"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count1
2
word"predator"
count1
3
word"flicked"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"dancing"
count1
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"silk"
count1
9
word"chill"
count1
10
word"down my spine"
count1
11
word"traced"
count1
12
word"echoed"
count1
13
word"gleaming"
count1
highlights
0"pristine"
1"velvet"
2"predator"
3"flicked"
4"flickered"
5"pulse"
6"dancing"
7"rhythmic"
8"silk"
9"chill"
10"down my spine"
11"traced"
12"echoed"
13"gleaming"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences65
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences65
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences89
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1199
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions18
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions18
wordCount814
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.98
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva2
Brick1
Lane1
Old1
Bailey1
Ptolemy2
Lucien8
Avaros1
London1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Old"
2"Bailey"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"London"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1199
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs47
mean25.51
std20.63
cv0.809
sampleLengths
027
19
226
358
43
52
66
779
829
921
1031
1110
1236
131
1451
158
164
1710
1844
196
203
2142
2253
239
242
2561
2621
275
2811
2973
3018
318
3211
3352
349
3520
3634
3728
3864
3945
4014
4142
4216
4313
4440
4527
4617
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences65
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs122
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences89
ratio0
matches(empty)
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount821
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
1"narrow, gleaming silver steel"
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.03532277710109622
lyAdverbCount9
lyAdverbRatio0.010962241169305725
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences89
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences89
mean13.47
std8.06
cv0.599
sampleLengths
027
19
226
38
430
520
63
72
86
912
1019
1116
1232
1310
1419
157
1614
1711
1820
1910
2012
2122
222
231
2419
2532
268
274
2810
295
3020
316
3213
336
343
3515
3627
3712
3811
3913
4017
414
425
432
4413
4518
467
4714
481
498
52.81% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats8
diversityRatio0.3707865168539326
totalSentences89
uniqueOpeners33
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences56
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount31
totalSentences56
matches
0"His polished leather oxfords clicked"
1"He swept a critical glance"
2"He leaned his cane against"
3"He looked entirely too pristine"
4"My fingers tightened around the"
5"My arm tensed, ready to"
6"He flicked the latch open"
7"His voice cracked like a"
8"He closed the distance between"
9"His hand, cold and immaculately"
10"His thumb pressed directly over"
11"My voice did not shake."
12"I jerked my hand up,"
13"He pinned my hands against"
14"I felt the solid, rhythmic"
15"His breath carried the sharp"
16"He leaned down, his mouth"
17"I pulled against his grip,"
18"I breathed, forcing my gaze"
19"He tilted his head, his"
ratio0.554
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences56
matches
0"The third deadbolt rattled in"
1"Lucien stepped across the threshold"
2"His polished leather oxfords clicked"
3"He swept a critical glance"
4"He leaned his cane against"
5"The amber eye caught the"
6"Platinum blond hair, slicked back"
7"He looked entirely too pristine"
8"My fingers tightened around the"
9"Lucien corrected smoothly"
10"Ptolemy padded out from beneath"
11"The ginger tabby sniffed the"
12"Lucien reached into his breast"
13"My arm tensed, ready to"
14"He flicked the latch open"
15"The room went dead silent."
16"The faint rumble of double-decker"
17"Lucien took one slow step"
18"The ivory handle of his"
19"His voice cracked like a"
ratio0.946
89.29% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"Before I could speak, a"
ratio0.018
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences36
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He looked entirely too pristine for a cramped flat on Brick Lane, entirely too alive for a man who had vanished after leaving me in the ruins of the Old Bailey …"
1"He stepped close again, his dark eye swallowing the light around us, his hand reaching out to touch the curve of my cheek."
95.59% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"I whispered, my heart slamming against my ribs"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags12
fancyCount7
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"Lucien corrected smoothly (correct)"
2"he whispered (whisper)"
3"he muttered (mutter)"
4"I breathed (breathe)"
5"I whispered (whisper)"
6"he snarled (snarl)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.293
leniency0.585
rawRatio0.583
effectiveRatio0.341
81.9654%