Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCVHXBJCCY4SEEWWE6MW8Y4

Run Details

Duration:
2m 50s
Cost:
$0.005034
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pulled her bike off the Richmond Park path and killed the lights. Midnight soaked the trees black, but the oak gateposts glowed faint silver, marking the boundary she had only heard about in Eva's terrified whispers. The Fae Grove, Isolde's grove—she had come because Evan's shadow still hunted her flat above Silas' bar, and because the crimson Heartstone around her neck pulsed with a heat she did not understand. The gem rested against her collarbone like a second heartbeat, deep crimson, thumbnail-sized, its faint inner glow casting no light on the path ahead. She stepped through. Wildflowers bloomed in winter, white and yellow and blood-red, crushing under her boots with scents too sweet, cloying. The air tasted of copper and old rain. Rory's breath fogged though the air held no chill. She reached back and touched the small crescent scar on her left wrist, a habit whenever fear tightened her throat. Wrongness settled in her bones immediately—time here moved differently, an hour inside could swallow days outside, and she had already lost track of why she needed this. A branch snapped behind her. She spun. The grove held only ancient oaks, standing stones carved with symbols her pre-law brain could not parse. Nothing moved. But the flowers swayed in wind that did not touch her hair. Rory walked deeper, her delivery bag empty, useless now. The Heartstone warmed against her skin, faint at first, then pulsing harder, matching the quickening rhythm in her chest. Something rustled in the canopy, though the trees stood dead still. Rory stopped. Her bright blue eyes scanned the dark. At the edge of vision, a shape shifted—tall, thin, draped in shadows that moved against the moonlight. It stayed at the perimeter, never stepping into the open, but its presence pressed down on her. She was not alone. The certainty grew like frost spreading across glass. She remembered Eva's warnings about Richmond grove, about pockets between Earth and Fae where things waited. Rory had fled Cardiff for London to escape Evan's fists, had taken the part-time delivery job for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress to survive, lived in the flat above Silas' bar because it was cheap and hidden. But some reasons pulled harder than survival. The unknown benefactor who had slipped her the Heartstone had said only: "When it burns, go to the stones." It burned now. A sound came—low, wet, like breath dragged through broken ribs. Not from the trees. From the ground. Rory dropped to one knee and touched the soil. Warm. Pulsing in sync with the pendant. The flowers near her feet turned black at the edges. Rory stood. She did not run—running made you prey, and she was cool-headed, intelligent, quick to think outside the box. But her palms sweated against the bike handles she had dragged inside. The shape at the perimeter stepped closer, not with feet but with a fluid motion, as though the darkness itself walked. Rory could not see its face. She did not want to. Another sound: her name, whispered from every direction at once, neither male nor female, bending the syllables into something that scraped her ears. Rory. The Heartstone blazed now, crimson glow visible through her shirt, warm as a coal against her sternum. Near a Hel portal, it had said. She looked up. Between the ancient oak standing stones, the air rippled, a tear that showed not sky but a depth of red and hollowness. The portal breathed. The shadow moved. Fast. Rory ran—not away from the stones, but toward them, toward the rip in the air, because if the Heartstone led her here, then the wrongness was the point. Her black hair whipped behind her, shoulder-length strands catching on branches. The wildflowers screamed—no, that was her imagination—but they withered in her wake, petals blackening, stems snapping with sounds like bones. Behind her, the breath dragged closer. Rory reached the stones. The portal yawned. She could feel the other side—cold, screaming, a realm that devoured time and memory. The shadow reached for her, fingers long and wrong, touching her shoulder with a weight like grave dirt. Rory tore the Heartstone chain from her neck. The crimson gem caught the portal's red light and exploded into warmthnot fire, but a pulse that shoved the darkness back. The shadow shrieked, a sound like tearing silk, and collapsed into smoke that the flowers devoured, their blackened petals opening wider. The portal flickered, unstable. Rory stood in the center of the ancient oaks, alone, the silver glow of the boundary stones returning to faint. The wildflowers bloomed white again, innocent, though time had slipped—her watch showed she had been inside three minutes, but her stomach ached with three days of hunger. She looked at the Heartstone in her palm. Its inner glow dimmed, satisfied, or perhaps waiting. The grove was silent now. But she was not alone—she never had been. Something watched from the other side of the portal, something that had let her leave only because she had brought the stone, because she had served a purpose she did not understand. Rory slipped the pendant back on. The crescent scar on her wrist itched. She walked back toward the bike, toward Richmond Park, toward the flat above Silas' bar where Eva waited, where Evan's shadow might still lurk but could be faced. The Fae Grove released her into morning, though she had entered at midnight. The trees looked ordinary. The flowers bloomed in winter, beautiful, wrong. Rory did not look back.<|end_message|>
created_at"2026-07-25T14:41:03.36Z" 7/25/2026, 2:41:03 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
0.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"She walked back [back]"
dialogueSentences1
tagDensity1
leniency1
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.25
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount927
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
40.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount927
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"chill"
count1
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"could feel"
count1
4
word"weight"
count1
5
word"grave"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"pulse"
count1
8
word"silk"
count1
9
word"flickered"
count1
10
word"stomach"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"chill"
2"scanned"
3"could feel"
4"weight"
5"grave"
6"warmth"
7"pulse"
8"silk"
9"flickered"
10"stomach"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences77
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences77
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords915
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions1
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
63.49% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions44
wordCount867
uniqueNames17
maxNameDensity1.73
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond3
Park2
Eva2
Fae3
Grove2
Isolde1
Evan2
Heartstone6
Earth1
Cardiff1
London1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
Hel1
Rory15
persons
0"Eva"
1"Isolde"
2"Evan"
3"Heartstone"
4"Yu-Fei"
5"Cheung"
6"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Fae"
3"Grove"
4"Cardiff"
5"London"
6"Hel"
globalScore0.635
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences54
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches5
per1kWords5.464
wordCount915
matches
0"not with feet but with a fluid motion, as though the darkness itself walked"
1"neither male nor"
2"not sky but a depth of red"
3"not away from the stones, but toward them, toward the rip in the air, because if the Heart"
4"not fire, but a pulse"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs26
mean35.19
std28
cv0.796
sampleLengths
094
13
282
35
461
511
655
778
83
933
1010
1164
1223
131
1452
154
1659
176
1839
198
2046
2163
2245
2341
2424
255
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs148
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount12
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences77
ratio0.143
matches
0"The Fae Grove, Isolde's grove—she had come because Evan's shadow still hunted her flat above Silas' bar, and because the crimson Heartstone around her neck pulsed with a heat she did not understand."
1"Wrongness settled in her bones immediately—time here moved differently, an hour inside could swallow days outside, and she had already lost track of why she needed this."
2"At the edge of vision, a shape shifted—tall, thin, draped in shadows that moved against the moonlight."
3"A sound came—low, wet, like breath dragged through broken ribs."
4"She did not run—running made you prey, and she was cool-headed, intelligent, quick to think outside the box."
5"Rory ran—not away from the stones, but toward them, toward the rip in the air, because if the Heartstone led her here, then the wrongness was the point."
6"The wildflowers screamed—no, that was her imagination—but they withered in her wake, petals blackening, stems snapping with sounds like bones."
7"She could feel the other side—cold, screaming, a realm that devoured time and memory."
8"The crimson gem caught the portal's red light and exploded into warmth—not fire, but a pulse that shoved the darkness back."
9"The wildflowers bloomed white again, innocent, though time had slipped—her watch showed she had been inside three minutes, but her stomach ached with three days of hunger."
10"But she was not alone—she never had been."
89.74% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount58
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount3
adverbRatio0.05172413793103448
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.017241379310344827
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences77
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences77
mean11.88
std8.75
cv0.737
sampleLengths
013
124
233
324
43
518
68
79
820
927
105
112
1217
132
1412
159
1619
1711
182
197
2017
2117
224
238
2416
2536
267
2719
283
2910
304
313
329
331
346
3510
362
3718
3812
3921
406
415
4223
431
4417
457
463
4722
483
493
42.21% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.2987012987012987
totalSentences77
uniqueOpeners23
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences70
matches
0"She stepped through."
1"She reached back and touched"
2"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
3"It stayed at the perimeter,"
4"She was not alone."
5"She remembered Eva's warnings about"
6"It burned now."
7"She did not run—running made"
8"She did not want to."
9"She looked up."
10"Her black hair whipped behind"
11"She could feel the other"
12"She looked at the Heartstone"
13"Its inner glow dimmed, satisfied,"
14"She walked back toward the"
ratio0.214
38.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount59
totalSentences70
matches
0"Rory pulled her bike off"
1"Midnight soaked the trees black,"
2"The Fae Grove, Isolde's grove—she"
3"The gem rested against her"
4"She stepped through."
5"Wildflowers bloomed in winter, white"
6"The air tasted of copper"
7"Rory's breath fogged though the"
8"She reached back and touched"
9"Wrongness settled in her bones"
10"A branch snapped behind her."
11"The grove held only ancient"
12"Rory walked deeper, her delivery"
13"The Heartstone warmed against her"
14"Something rustled in the canopy,"
15"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
16"It stayed at the perimeter,"
17"She was not alone."
18"The certainty grew like frost"
19"She remembered Eva's warnings about"
ratio0.843
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
53.57% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"At the edge of vision, a shape shifted—tall, thin, draped in shadows that moved against the moonlight."
1"Another sound: her name, whispered from every direction at once, neither male nor female, bending the syllables into something that scraped her ears."
2"Between the ancient oak standing stones, the air rippled, a tear that showed not sky but a depth of red and hollowness."
3"Something watched from the other side of the portal, something that had let her leave only because she had brought the stone, because she had served a purpose s…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
74.2752%