| 0.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "She walked back [back]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 1 | | tagDensity | 1 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.25 | | effectiveRatio | 0.25 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 927 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 40.67% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 927 | | totalAiIsms | 11 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "pulsed" | | 1 | "chill" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "could feel" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "grave" | | 6 | "warmth" | | 7 | "pulse" | | 8 | "silk" | | 9 | "flickered" | | 10 | "stomach" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 77 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 77 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 38 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 915 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 1 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 63.49% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 44 | | wordCount | 867 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 1.73 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 3 | | Park | 2 | | Eva | 2 | | Fae | 3 | | Grove | 2 | | Isolde | 1 | | Evan | 2 | | Heartstone | 6 | | Earth | 1 | | Cardiff | 1 | | London | 1 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Cheung | 1 | | Golden | 1 | | Empress | 1 | | Hel | 1 | | Rory | 15 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Eva" | | 1 | "Isolde" | | 2 | "Evan" | | 3 | "Heartstone" | | 4 | "Yu-Fei" | | 5 | "Cheung" | | 6 | "Rory" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "Fae" | | 3 | "Grove" | | 4 | "Cardiff" | | 5 | "London" | | 6 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 0.635 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 5 | | per1kWords | 5.464 | | wordCount | 915 | | matches | | 0 | "not with feet but with a fluid motion, as though the darkness itself walked" | | 1 | "neither male nor" | | 2 | "not sky but a depth of red" | | 3 | "not away from the stones, but toward them, toward the rip in the air, because if the Heart" | | 4 | "not fire, but a pulse" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 26 | | mean | 35.19 | | std | 28 | | cv | 0.796 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 94 | | 1 | 3 | | 2 | 82 | | 3 | 5 | | 4 | 61 | | 5 | 11 | | 6 | 55 | | 7 | 78 | | 8 | 3 | | 9 | 33 | | 10 | 10 | | 11 | 64 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 1 | | 14 | 52 | | 15 | 4 | | 16 | 59 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 39 | | 19 | 8 | | 20 | 46 | | 21 | 63 | | 22 | 45 | | 23 | 41 | | 24 | 24 | | 25 | 5 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 77 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 148 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 12 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 77 | | ratio | 0.143 | | matches | | 0 | "The Fae Grove, Isolde's grove—she had come because Evan's shadow still hunted her flat above Silas' bar, and because the crimson Heartstone around her neck pulsed with a heat she did not understand." | | 1 | "Wrongness settled in her bones immediately—time here moved differently, an hour inside could swallow days outside, and she had already lost track of why she needed this." | | 2 | "At the edge of vision, a shape shifted—tall, thin, draped in shadows that moved against the moonlight." | | 3 | "A sound came—low, wet, like breath dragged through broken ribs." | | 4 | "She did not run—running made you prey, and she was cool-headed, intelligent, quick to think outside the box." | | 5 | "Rory ran—not away from the stones, but toward them, toward the rip in the air, because if the Heartstone led her here, then the wrongness was the point." | | 6 | "The wildflowers screamed—no, that was her imagination—but they withered in her wake, petals blackening, stems snapping with sounds like bones." | | 7 | "She could feel the other side—cold, screaming, a realm that devoured time and memory." | | 8 | "The crimson gem caught the portal's red light and exploded into warmth—not fire, but a pulse that shoved the darkness back." | | 9 | "The wildflowers bloomed white again, innocent, though time had slipped—her watch showed she had been inside three minutes, but her stomach ached with three days of hunger." | | 10 | "But she was not alone—she never had been." |
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| 89.74% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 58 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 3 | | adverbRatio | 0.05172413793103448 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.017241379310344827 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 77 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 77 | | mean | 11.88 | | std | 8.75 | | cv | 0.737 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 13 | | 1 | 24 | | 2 | 33 | | 3 | 24 | | 4 | 3 | | 5 | 18 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 9 | | 8 | 20 | | 9 | 27 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 2 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 2 | | 14 | 12 | | 15 | 9 | | 16 | 19 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 7 | | 20 | 17 | | 21 | 17 | | 22 | 4 | | 23 | 8 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 36 | | 26 | 7 | | 27 | 19 | | 28 | 3 | | 29 | 10 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 3 | | 32 | 9 | | 33 | 1 | | 34 | 6 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 2 | | 37 | 18 | | 38 | 12 | | 39 | 21 | | 40 | 6 | | 41 | 5 | | 42 | 23 | | 43 | 1 | | 44 | 17 | | 45 | 7 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 22 | | 48 | 3 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 42.21% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 6 | | diversityRatio | 0.2987012987012987 | | totalSentences | 77 | | uniqueOpeners | 23 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 15 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "She stepped through." | | 1 | "She reached back and touched" | | 2 | "Her bright blue eyes scanned" | | 3 | "It stayed at the perimeter," | | 4 | "She was not alone." | | 5 | "She remembered Eva's warnings about" | | 6 | "It burned now." | | 7 | "She did not run—running made" | | 8 | "She did not want to." | | 9 | "She looked up." | | 10 | "Her black hair whipped behind" | | 11 | "She could feel the other" | | 12 | "She looked at the Heartstone" | | 13 | "Its inner glow dimmed, satisfied," | | 14 | "She walked back toward the" |
| | ratio | 0.214 | |
| 38.57% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory pulled her bike off" | | 1 | "Midnight soaked the trees black," | | 2 | "The Fae Grove, Isolde's grove—she" | | 3 | "The gem rested against her" | | 4 | "She stepped through." | | 5 | "Wildflowers bloomed in winter, white" | | 6 | "The air tasted of copper" | | 7 | "Rory's breath fogged though the" | | 8 | "She reached back and touched" | | 9 | "Wrongness settled in her bones" | | 10 | "A branch snapped behind her." | | 11 | "The grove held only ancient" | | 12 | "Rory walked deeper, her delivery" | | 13 | "The Heartstone warmed against her" | | 14 | "Something rustled in the canopy," | | 15 | "Her bright blue eyes scanned" | | 16 | "It stayed at the perimeter," | | 17 | "She was not alone." | | 18 | "The certainty grew like frost" | | 19 | "She remembered Eva's warnings about" |
| | ratio | 0.843 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 53.57% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 32 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "At the edge of vision, a shape shifted—tall, thin, draped in shadows that moved against the moonlight." | | 1 | "Another sound: her name, whispered from every direction at once, neither male nor female, bending the syllables into something that scraped her ears." | | 2 | "Between the ancient oak standing stones, the air rippled, a tear that showed not sky but a depth of red and hollowness." | | 3 | "Something watched from the other side of the portal, something that had let her leave only because she had brought the stone, because she had served a purpose s…" |
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| 100.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | |