| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 6 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.333 | | leniency | 0.667 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 94.67% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 938 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 1 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 9.38% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 938 | | totalAiIsms | 17 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | word | "down her spine" | | count | 1 |
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| | highlights | | 0 | "racing" | | 1 | "pulse" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "shattered" | | 4 | "down her spine" | | 5 | "rhythmic" | | 6 | "scanning" | | 7 | "gloom" | | 8 | "whisper" | | 9 | "familiar" | | 10 | "stomach" | | 11 | "searing" | | 12 | "throbbed" | | 13 | "echoed" | | 14 | "reverberated" | | 15 | "warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 78 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 90 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 24 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 2 | | markdownWords | 5 | | totalWords | 938 | | ratio | 0.005 | | matches | | 0 | "Thump. Drag. Thump. Drag." | | 1 | "it" |
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| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 96.30% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 22 | | wordCount | 838 | | uniqueNames | 8 | | maxNameDensity | 1.07 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Rory | 9 | | Park | 1 | | Fae | 1 | | Grove | 1 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Shadows | 1 | | Evan | 4 | | Hel | 2 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Evan" |
| | places | | | globalScore | 0.963 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 58 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 938 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 90 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 37 | | mean | 25.35 | | std | 17.43 | | cv | 0.687 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 42 | | 1 | 45 | | 2 | 47 | | 3 | 14 | | 4 | 16 | | 5 | 34 | | 6 | 9 | | 7 | 47 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 49 | | 10 | 4 | | 11 | 4 | | 12 | 17 | | 13 | 39 | | 14 | 1 | | 15 | 22 | | 16 | 20 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 2 | | 19 | 64 | | 20 | 26 | | 21 | 33 | | 22 | 14 | | 23 | 7 | | 24 | 2 | | 25 | 67 | | 26 | 30 | | 27 | 31 | | 28 | 33 | | 29 | 20 | | 30 | 38 | | 31 | 35 | | 32 | 23 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 44 | | 35 | 17 | | 36 | 15 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 78 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 6 | | totalVerbs | 146 | | matches | | 0 | "was opening" | | 1 | "was opening" | | 2 | "was almost blinding" | | 3 | "were splitting" | | 4 | "were turning" | | 5 | "was collapsing" |
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| 100.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 0 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 1 | | totalSentences | 90 | | ratio | 0.011 | | matches | | 0 | "The thing didn't bleed; black smoke poured from the wound, smelling of sulfur and stagnant river water." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 842 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "long, needle-thin points" |
| | adverbCount | 19 | | adverbRatio | 0.022565320665083134 | | lyAdverbCount | 4 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.004750593824228029 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 90 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 90 | | mean | 10.42 | | std | 6.29 | | cv | 0.604 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 19 | | 1 | 23 | | 2 | 5 | | 3 | 16 | | 4 | 24 | | 5 | 7 | | 6 | 17 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 5 | | 9 | 9 | | 10 | 16 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 23 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 1 | | 16 | 4 | | 17 | 13 | | 18 | 5 | | 19 | 16 | | 20 | 7 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 1 | | 23 | 1 | | 24 | 1 | | 25 | 1 | | 26 | 8 | | 27 | 15 | | 28 | 10 | | 29 | 16 | | 30 | 4 | | 31 | 4 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 8 | | 35 | 5 | | 36 | 13 | | 37 | 13 | | 38 | 1 | | 39 | 3 | | 40 | 18 | | 41 | 1 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 14 | | 44 | 5 | | 45 | 2 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 12 | | 48 | 18 | | 49 | 17 |
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| 59.63% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.4111111111111111 | | totalSentences | 90 | | uniqueOpeners | 37 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 18 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "She pushed through the dense" | | 1 | "She slid her fingers over" | | 2 | "She squeezed the Heartstone pendant." | | 3 | "She took three slow steps" | | 4 | "It remained just beyond the" | | 5 | "She pulled a small iron" | | 6 | "She stumbled forward, landing on" | | 7 | "she said, her voice steady" | | 8 | "It wore Evan’s face, but" | | 9 | "It was opening through *it*." | | 10 | "It took a step forward," | | 11 | "She scrambled toward the edge" | | 12 | "It caught her by the" | | 13 | "Her lungs screamed for air." | | 14 | "She brought her hands up," | | 15 | "It hissed, dropping her onto" | | 16 | "She glanced back over her" | | 17 | "it whispered, extending a hand" |
| | ratio | 0.257 | |
| 10.00% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 63 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | | 0 | "A silver chain dug into" | | 1 | "She pushed through the dense" | | 2 | "Richmond Park vanished behind her." | | 3 | "Time moved differently in the" | | 4 | "Silence hung heavy over the" | | 5 | "Wildflowers bloomed out of season" | | 6 | "She slid her fingers over" | | 7 | "She squeezed the Heartstone pendant." | | 8 | "Heat radiated from the tiny" | | 9 | "Rory’s voice sounded muffled, as" | | 10 | "She took three slow steps" | | 11 | "A dry twig snapping." | | 12 | "Rory spun around, back pressed" | | 13 | "Nothing stood in the shadows." | | 14 | "The silver-barked trees remained still," | | 15 | "A second noise followed, wet" | | 16 | "The sound circled the boundary" | | 17 | "It remained just beyond the" | | 18 | "Rory crouched low, her bright" | | 19 | "She pulled a small iron" |
| | ratio | 0.9 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 70 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 51.28% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 39 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "The arms hung too low, the fingers ending in long, needle-thin points that twitched rhythmically against its thighs." | | 1 | "It wore Evan’s face, but the features stretched tight over an underlying frame that was not human." | | 2 | "Deep underground, a hollow groan reverberated, as if the earth itself were splitting open." | | 3 | "The towering oak standing stones that framed the grove were turning to ash, blowing away on a wind that carried no warmth." | | 4 | "The thing stepped toward her, its neck elongating, its false eyes widening until they swallowed its forehead." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 6 | | uselessAdditionCount | 2 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory’s voice sounded, as though the fog drank the sound before it could travel" | | 1 | "she said, her voice steady despite the hammer of her heart" |
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| 38.89% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 3 | | fancyCount | 2 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "it whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 18 | | tagDensity | 0.167 | | leniency | 0.333 | | rawRatio | 0.667 | | effectiveRatio | 0.222 | |