Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCVJJWYRD67BZNX2GVCHH66

Run Details

Duration:
10m 44s
Cost:
$0.025401
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The third deadbolt sighed open. Rory had her fingers wrapped around the brass chain when the door dragged inward. Not a knock—no warning—just the sharp click of metal yielding to fingers that knew exactly where to apply pressure. She pulled back, bare feet sliding on the worn floorboards of Eva’s cramped flat, and Lucien Moreau filled the doorway like a blade sliding free. “You’re not Eva.” His voice dropped low, tinted with Marseille gravel and something older, darker. Rory’s pulse jumped in her throat. “She’s in Bristol. You shouldn’t—” “I didn’t come for Eva.” The flat smelled of turmeric and old paper. Every surface—the coffee table, the windowsill, the narrow kitchen counter—vanished beneath stacks of books, scrolls weighted with iron stones, and Eva’s frantic research notes pinned with red string. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, hissed from behind a tower of grimoires and vanished into the bedroom. Lucien stepped inside without invitation. His charcoal suit remained immaculate despite the London drizzle that clung to his platinum hair in dark streaks. The ivory handle of his cane tapped once against the floor, a sharp punctuation. His eyes caught the dim light—one amber, one black—fixing on her with an intensity that made her breath stall. “Close it,” he said. “Before the curry smell drags every ghost on Brick Lane through the cracks.” Rory didn’t move. Her straight black hair fell forward, hiding the sharp line of her cheek, but her bright blue eyes stayed locked on his. “How did you—” “Three deadbolts.” He glanced back at the frame. “Charming. Useless against someone who remembers your scars.” She flinched. The crescent-shaped mark on her left wrist burned suddenly, though she hadn’t touched it. “What do you want, Luc?” He shut the door himself. The chain rattled like a frightened bird. “I want the version of you that doesn’t run.” The words landed like a punch wrapped in velvet. Rory crossed her arms, her shoulder-length hair brushing her collarbones, and walked past him. Her shoulder grazed his chest, and the contact sparked gooseflesh along her neck. She moved to the kitchen, where Eva’s notes papered the fridge with diagrams of demon contracts and protective sigils. “You don’t get to say that.” She set her palm flat against the cold ceramic of the counter. “Not after—” “Not after I left you with the bill?” His jaw tightened. “Not after I told you to disappear before Evan’s friends traced the blood back to this flat?” “I disappeared just fine.” She turned. The kitchen light caught the crescent scar on her wrist, pale against her skin. “I deliver for Yu-Fei now. Golden Empress. I live above Silas. I’m not running. I’m surviving.” Lucien followed, his cane tapping a slow, deliberate rhythm across the floorboards. “Surviving is a small word for what you did. You vanished from my contacts. From the bar. From every shadow I kept lit for you.” She gripped a mug—empty, just something to hold—until her knuckles whitened. “You never asked me to stay.” “Because asking is a trap.” He leaned against the counter, close enough that she smelled cedar and rain and the faint sulfur hint of his demon blood. “You were bleeding when I pulled you out of that flat near Camden. You don’t remember?” “I remember everything.” Rory faced him fully. At five foot six, she had to tilt her chin up to meet his gaze, but she did it without flinching. “I remember the cane. I remember the blade hidden inside it. I remember you telling me I was too smart for my own good, then walking out like I was a job you finished.” “You were never a job.” “Then what was I?” Ptolemy crept back onto the armchair and watched them with golden, judgmental eyes. Lucien straightened. The tailored charcoal suit stretched across his shoulders as he moved closer, boxing her between the counter and the fridge covered in Eva’s red-string maps. His amber eye glittered; the black one drank the light. “You were the only person in this city who looked at me without seeing the demon half first.” Rory’s breath caught. The hurt lived in her chest, old and sharp, but beneath it—older still—an attraction she had buried under fear and pride. “Don’t.” She pressed her palm flat against his chest, feeling his heart thunder beneath the silk shirt. “Don’t rewrite it. You used me for information about Evan’s circle, then you dropped me when he turned violent.” “I used my blade for you.” His hand covered hers, cold and steady, pressing her palm harder against the rhythm of his ribs. “Every cut I made that night was for the woman who wouldn’t let me call an ambulance because she was afraid of the questions.” Her wrist ached where the scar curved. She looked down at their joined hands—her small fingers against his long ones, the ivory cane handle brushing her hip. “I left because I was scared,” she said, her voice low. “Not of Evan. Of this. Of you seeing me as broken.” “I see you as brilliant.” His breath warmed her cheek. “As the girl who fled Cardiff for a friend and ended up delivering dim sum to pay rent. As the girl who forgot her deadbolts matter more than her pride.” She pulled her hand free, but she didn’t step back. The books and scrolls seemed to lean closer, listening. “Why are you here, Lucien?” He tilted his head. “Because Eva wrote. Because she said you’d locked yourself in here with nothing but research on demon contracts and a cat that hates everyone. Because I can’t sit in Marseille knowing you’re in London with three deadbolts and a scar you won’t let heal.” She laughed, a brittle sound that bounced off the cramped walls. “Eva didn’t write to you.” “No. She called. But I’m here because you opened the door.” Rory looked at the door—the three deadbolts, the chain still hanging loose. Then she looked back at him, at the heterochromatic eyes that held no apology, only a fierce, dangerous tenderness. “You should go.” “I can’t.” The silence stretched between them, thick as the curry smoke rising from the street below. Ptolemy yawned and leapt onto a pile of scrolls, sending a page fluttering to the floor. Rory reached past him and turned the lock—not to keep him in, but to seal them both inside. The click sounded final. “Then don’t,” she said. Lucien’s mouth curved, not quite a smile, but the promise of one. He set the cane aside, the hidden blade forgotten, and stepped into her space until her back touched the fridge covered in Eva’s frantic diagrams. “Say the unsaid thing, Rory.” Her bright blue eyes burned. “I’m still attracted to you.” “Good.” His voice dropped to a whisper that filled the cramped flat. “I’m still hurt you left.” “Then stay hurt.” She gripped his lapel, pulling him down, or herself up—there was no difference anymore. “But stay.” He did. His lips found hers with the precision of a blade finally finding its sheath—sharp, inevitable, and long overdue. The flat seemed to shrink around them, books and scrolls and the hissing past of Ptolemy fading into nothing. Only the taste of cedar, rain, and unfinished business remained. When they broke apart, his forehead rested against hers. The amber eye and the black one both focused on her, unguarded. “One deadbolt,” he murmured. “For now.” Rory’s hand slid up to his slick platinum hair, holding him there, above the curry house, above the bar, above every place she had tried to hide. “One flat,” she corrected. “No more running.” The door stayed locked. The chain stayed down. And for the first time since Camden, she let herself be found.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He glanced back [back]"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.34
leniency0.68
rawRatio0.059
effectiveRatio0.04
96.15% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1300
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
69.23% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1300
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"pulse"
count1
1
word"intensity"
count1
2
word"velvet"
count1
3
word"traced"
count1
4
word"silk"
count1
5
word"tenderness"
count1
6
word"silence"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"intensity"
2"velvet"
3"traced"
4"silk"
5"tenderness"
6"silence"
7"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences74
matches(empty)
84.94% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences74
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1285
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions15
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
97.49% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions28
wordCount857
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.05
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Eva"
discoveredNames
Eva6
Lucien5
Moreau1
Marseille1
Rory9
London1
Ptolemy4
Camden1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Moreau"
3"Rory"
4"Ptolemy"
places
0"Marseille"
1"London"
globalScore0.975
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences52
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"not quite a smile, but the promise of one"
44.36% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.556
wordCount1285
matches
0"not to keep him in, but to seal them both inside"
1"not quite a smile, but the promise of one"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs54
mean23.8
std16.26
cv0.683
sampleLengths
05
158
215
311
45
551
656
717
828
916
1021
1112
129
1355
1420
1528
1636
1737
1817
1943
2062
215
224
2313
2437
2518
2624
2736
2847
2927
3022
3140
3219
335
3448
3516
3611
3731
383
392
4031
4122
424
4337
445
4510
4617
4719
4849
4921
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs148
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount15
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences11
totalSentences107
ratio0.103
matches
0"Not a knock—no warning—just the sharp click of metal yielding to fingers that knew exactly where to apply pressure."
1"Every surface—the coffee table, the windowsill, the narrow kitchen counter—vanished beneath stacks of books, scrolls weighted with iron stones, and Eva’s frantic research notes pinned with red string."
2"His eyes caught the dim light—one amber, one black—fixing on her with an intensity that made her breath stall."
3"She gripped a mug—empty, just something to hold—until her knuckles whitened."
4"His amber eye glittered; the black one drank the light."
5"The hurt lived in her chest, old and sharp, but beneath it—older still—an attraction she had buried under fear and pride."
6"She looked down at their joined hands—her small fingers against his long ones, the ivory cane handle brushing her hip."
7"Rory looked at the door—the three deadbolts, the chain still hanging loose."
8"Rory reached past him and turned the lock—not to keep him in, but to seal them both inside."
9"“Then stay hurt.” She gripped his lapel, pulling him down, or herself up—there was no difference anymore."
10"His lips found hers with the precision of a blade finally finding its sheath—sharp, inevitable, and long overdue."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount875
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount34
adverbRatio0.038857142857142854
lyAdverbCount7
lyAdverbRatio0.008
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean12.01
std8.12
cv0.676
sampleLengths
05
114
219
325
415
56
65
75
88
928
1015
115
1218
1314
1419
154
1613
173
1822
193
208
218
222
2314
245
255
267
279
289
2914
3013
3119
3218
332
3411
3517
366
3714
3816
3912
4025
4111
426
4327
4416
457
4621
4734
485
494
50.78% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.32710280373831774
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners35
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences66
matches
0"Then she looked back at"
1"Only the taste of cedar,"
ratio0.03
50.30% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount28
totalSentences66
matches
0"She pulled back, bare feet"
1"His voice dropped low, tinted"
2"His charcoal suit remained immaculate"
3"His eyes caught the dim"
4"Her straight black hair fell"
5"He glanced back at the"
6"He shut the door himself."
7"Her shoulder grazed his chest,"
8"She moved to the kitchen,"
9"She set her palm flat"
10"His jaw tightened"
11"She gripped a mug—empty, just"
12"He leaned against the counter,"
13"His amber eye glittered; the"
14"She pressed her palm flat"
15"His hand covered hers, cold"
16"Her wrist ached where the"
17"She looked down at their"
18"she said, her voice low"
19"His breath warmed her cheek"
ratio0.424
5.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount60
totalSentences66
matches
0"The third deadbolt sighed open."
1"Rory had her fingers wrapped"
2"She pulled back, bare feet"
3"His voice dropped low, tinted"
4"Rory’s pulse jumped in her"
5"The flat smelled of turmeric"
6"Every surface—the coffee table, the"
7"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, hissed from"
8"Lucien stepped inside without invitation."
9"His charcoal suit remained immaculate"
10"The ivory handle of his"
11"His eyes caught the dim"
12"Rory didn’t move."
13"Her straight black hair fell"
14"He glanced back at the"
15"The crescent-shaped mark on her"
16"He shut the door himself."
17"The chain rattled like a"
18"The words landed like a"
19"Rory crossed her arms, her"
ratio0.909
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences66
matches(empty)
ratio0
84.94% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"His charcoal suit remained immaculate despite the London drizzle that clung to his platinum hair in dark streaks."
1"His eyes caught the dim light—one amber, one black—fixing on her with an intensity that made her breath stall."
2"Then she looked back at him, at the heterochromatic eyes that held no apology, only a fierce, dangerous tenderness."
95.59% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, her voice low"
90.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"She pressed (press)"
1"he murmured (murmur)"
2"she corrected (correct)"
dialogueSentences50
tagDensity0.12
leniency0.24
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.12
82.3081%