Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCVJM8TCZRYWX2QT6YY68Y7

Run Details

Duration:
14.7s
Cost:
$0.015234
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hit the grimy glass of the kitchen window in a steady, aggressive rhythm, carrying the sharp stink of toasted cumin and fried onions up from the curry house below. Aurora pushed a pile of heavy yellowed parchment across the scarred mahogany table. Ptolemy hissed, his striped tail flicking against a stack of leather-bound folios before the tabby leapt down, retreating beneath the faded velvet sofa. Aurora rubbed her knuckles over her left wrist, her thumbnail catching the jagged ridge of the crescent-shaped scar there. Three heavy thuds rattled the wooden frame of the front door. Aurora froze. Her fingers pressed flat against a floor plan of the British Museum. Eva was in Oxford until Thursday. Silas never crossed the river after dark. She slid her right hand down to the waist of her trousers, fingers closing around the cold weight of the iron folding knife tucked into her belt. She crossed the creaking floorboards, suspended her breath, and slid back the top deadbolt. The metal screeched in its housing. She threw the second, then the third, swinging the heavy oak door inward a mere three inches. Lucien Moreau leaned against the doorframe, his platinum hair plastered to his forehead by the downpour. Water dripped from the hem of his charcoal wool coat, pooling around the tip of his ivory-handled cane. His amber eye caught the amber glow of the hallway bulb; his black eye swallowed the light entirely. "Your locks need oil, Rory." Aurora did not drop the knife. She held the door firm, her shoulder jammed against the edge. "You're six months late for that observation." "May I come in?" His voice held that smooth, Parisian cadence that always sounded like a velvet sheath hiding a razor. "Or would you prefer I bleed out on the welcome mat? The curry vendors downstairs already find my presence objectionable." Aurora glanced down. A dark crimson stain bloomed across the left rib of his tailored suit, slick against the wet wool. She unlatched the chain, unceremoniously yanked the door wide, and stepped back into the flat. "If you stain Eva's rug, I'll drop you in the Thames myself." Lucien limped past her, the faint, ozone-and-brimstone heat of his demon half cutting through the flat's smell of old paper and stale tea. He shut the door with the heel of his polished oxford, throwing all three deadbolts with a fluid, practiced flick of his wrist. "Always so hospitable," he murmured. He leaned his cane against the sideboard and peeled off his soaked coat, wincing as the motion pulled at his side. Beneath the outerwear, his white silk shirt was ruined, stuck to his skin in a jagged, dark tear. "What happened?" Aurora leaned against the kitchen archway, her arms crossed, iron knife still resting against her forearm. "Did an informant finally realize your intel is fifty percent lies and fifty percent extortion?" "A minor disagreement over a ledger in Soho." Lucien sank onto the worn leather ottoman, his long legs stretching out. His jaw tightened, the pale skin over his cheekbones turning translucent as he gripped his side. "The gentleman in question possessed a blade infused with celestial steel. A quaint touch, really." "Celestial steel leaves ash in the vein." Aurora walked into the tiny kitchenette, pulled a bottle of clear grain alcohol from under the sink, and grabbed a clean rag. She returned, kicking a wooden chair over to sit directly opposite him. "Strip." Lucien’s amber eye gleamed with a sudden, sharp humor, though his lips remained pale. "And here I thought we were going to dance around the unpleasantness of our last encounter in Cardiff." "Strip the shirt, Moreau, or I leave the ash to rot your liver." He unbuttoned the shirt with steady, unhurried fingers, despite the sweat breaking out along his hairline. He sloughed the ruined silk off his shoulders, exposing the lean, pale muscle of his torso and the black, veiny corrosion spider-webbing out from a three-inch slash over his ribs. Aurora poured the spirits directly over the rag. The sharp smell of grain alcohol filled the small space between them. "This will hurt," she said. "Everything with you hurts, Laila." The old name—the one he used only when they were alone in the dark, bargaining for secrets or skin—hung in the air between them. Aurora ignored the twitch in her chest. She pressed the soaked rag directly into the wound. Lucien’s spine snapped straight. A low, wet hiss escaped his teeth, his amber eye flashing a brilliant, fiery gold while the black one dilated until his pupil vanished completely. His right hand shot out, his long, cold fingers clamping around her left wrist, his thumb landing squarely over her crescent scar. His skin seared with unnatural heat. Aurora didn't pull away. She leaned into his space, pressing the rag deeper, flushing out the black, flaking soot that hissed as it met the alcohol. "You left," she said, her voice dropping an octave, flat and hard. "No word. No sign. Silas thought you were dead in a ditch behind the docks." "I was occupied," Lucien grated through clutched teeth, his grip on her wrist tightening just enough to anchor them both. "A contract in Marseille." "You were running." "I was protecting my assets." "Is that what I was?" She wrung the blackened rag onto the floor, the blood dripping into an empty tea saucer she had kicked over. "An asset?" Lucien leaned forward, bringing his face inches from hers. The heat off his skin was stifling now, a wall of pure radiant force that made the tiny hairs on her arms stand up. His breath smelled of iron and mint. "If you were merely an asset, Rory, I would have let Evan cut your throat in that alley behind Cardiff University." Aurora's hand stilled. The rag stayed pinned against his ribs. "I handled Evan." "You panicked. You bought a train ticket to Paddington with thirty pounds in your pocket and blood under your fingernails." Lucien’s gaze locked onto her eyes, searching, ruthless. "I spent three weeks ensuring his family’s barristers didn't trace the paper trail back to your father's practice. I built the wall between you and that life. Do not speak to me of running." The silence in the flat stretched tight, pulled thin like a wire ready to snap under the weight of six months of silence, missed calls, and empty doorways. Downstairs, a heavy door slammed, followed by the muffled yell of the kitchen staff. Aurora released the rag. The black rot was gone, replaced by clean, dark red blood oozing from the raw flesh. "You should have told me," she whispered. "And watch you turn those bright blue eyes on me with pity?" Lucien scoffed softly, though the tension in his shoulders finally gave way. He leaned his head back against the wall, staring up at the water-stained ceiling. "I do not deal in pity, Laila. It is an unprofitable currency." "You're an idiot," she said, reaching for a roll of sterile gauze from the medical kit sitting open on the coffee table. She unrolled a length, wrapping it around his torso, forcing him to lean into her to pull it tight. Her chest brushed his shoulder with every pass. "Undoubtedly," he murmured. His hand slid from her wrist down to her waist, his fingers hooking into the belt loop of her trousers, pulling her half an inch closer as she tied the knot over his hip. "Yet here I am." "Why tonight?" Aurora smoothed the edge of the bandage, her palms lingering against the cool skin of his ribs, feeling the rapid, erratic beat of his dual-natured heart. "You could have gone to a dozen underground chirurgeons in Soho. You have the coin for it." Lucien reached up, his knuckles grazing her jawline, tracing the sharp angle up to her ear. His touch was feather-light, completely at odds with the violence clinging to his clothes. "The chirurgeons in Soho do not keep dry clothes," he said softly, his voice dropping into that dark, velvety register that made her pulse jump. "And none of them look at me as if they want to kill me and kiss me in equal measure." Aurora didn't pull back. She let her gaze drop to his mouth, then back up to his heterochromatic eyes. "I haven't decided which one I prefer tonight." "Take your time," Lucien whispered, his thumb pressing gently into the hollow beneath her lip. "I am not going anywhere."
created_at"2026-07-25T14:41:26.835Z" 7/25/2026, 2:41:26 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Lucien scoffed softly [softly]"
1"he said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.415
leniency0.829
rawRatio0.118
effectiveRatio0.098
78.83% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1417
totalAiIsmAdverbs6
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count2
2
adverb"softly"
count2
3
adverb"gently"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"completely"
2"softly"
3"gently"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
47.07% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1417
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"velvet"
count2
1
word"weight"
count2
2
word"silk"
count2
3
word"dance"
count1
4
word"encounter"
count1
5
word"radiant"
count1
6
word"ensuring"
count1
7
word"silence"
count2
8
word"tension"
count1
9
word"tracing"
count1
10
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"velvet"
1"weight"
2"silk"
3"dance"
4"encounter"
5"radiant"
6"ensuring"
7"silence"
8"tension"
9"tracing"
10"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"hung in the air"
count1
highlights
0"hung in the air"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences75
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences75
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences99
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1415
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions9
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
83.90% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions31
wordCount1059
uniqueNames8
maxNameDensity1.32
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
British1
Museum1
Oxford1
Thursday1
Moreau1
Parisian1
Aurora14
Lucien11
persons
0"Moreau"
1"Aurora"
2"Lucien"
places
0"Oxford"
globalScore0.839
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences64
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like a velvet sheath hiding a razo"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1415
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences99
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs45
mean31.44
std16.18
cv0.515
sampleLengths
030
155
211
354
437
552
65
724
841
921
1027
1146
1244
1333
1451
1542
1632
1713
1846
1920
205
215
2240
2357
2426
2527
2624
273
285
2927
3040
3121
3213
3362
3442
3520
367
3750
3849
3941
4045
4130
4245
4327
4420
95.91% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences75
matches
0"was ruined"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs172
matches
0"was stifling"
85.14% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences2
totalSentences99
ratio0.02
matches
0"His amber eye caught the amber glow of the hallway bulb; his black eye swallowed the light entirely."
1"The old name—the one he used only when they were alone in the dark, bargaining for secrets or skin—hung in the air between them."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1071
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount29
adverbRatio0.02707749766573296
lyAdverbCount13
lyAdverbRatio0.012138188608776844
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences99
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences99
mean14.29
std8.27
cv0.578
sampleLengths
030
113
223
319
411
52
612
76
87
927
1014
116
1217
1316
1418
1518
165
176
1811
197
2021
2120
223
2318
2415
2512
2623
2723
285
2921
3018
3118
3215
3320
3416
3515
3629
3712
381
3914
4018
4113
4216
4330
448
4512
465
475
4824
497
59.26% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats3
diversityRatio0.37373737373737376
totalSentences99
uniqueOpeners37
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
54.29% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences70
matches
0"Her fingers pressed flat against"
1"She slid her right hand"
2"She crossed the creaking floorboards,"
3"She threw the second, then"
4"His amber eye caught the"
5"She held the door firm,"
6"His voice held that smooth,"
7"She unlatched the chain, unceremoniously"
8"He shut the door with"
9"He leaned his cane against"
10"His jaw tightened, the pale"
11"She returned, kicking a wooden"
12"He unbuttoned the shirt with"
13"He sloughed the ruined silk"
14"She pressed the soaked rag"
15"His right hand shot out,"
16"His skin seared with unnatural"
17"She leaned into his space,"
18"she said, her voice dropping"
19"She wrung the blackened rag"
ratio0.414
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences70
matches
0"Aurora pushed a pile of"
1"Ptolemy hissed, his striped tail"
2"Aurora rubbed her knuckles over"
3"Her fingers pressed flat against"
4"Eva was in Oxford until"
5"Silas never crossed the river"
6"She slid her right hand"
7"She crossed the creaking floorboards,"
8"The metal screeched in its"
9"She threw the second, then"
10"Lucien Moreau leaned against the"
11"Water dripped from the hem"
12"His amber eye caught the"
13"Aurora did not drop the"
14"She held the door firm,"
15"His voice held that smooth,"
16"Aurora glanced down."
17"A dark crimson stain bloomed"
18"She unlatched the chain, unceremoniously"
19"Lucien limped past her, the"
ratio0.957
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
69.60% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences39
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The heat off his skin was stifling now, a wall of pure radiant force that made the tiny hairs on her arms stand up."
1"She unrolled a length, wrapping it around his torso, forcing him to lean into her to pull it tight."
2"His hand slid from her wrist down to her waist, his fingers hooking into the belt loop of her trousers, pulling her half an inch closer as she tied the knot ove…"
3"Lucien reached up, his knuckles grazing her jawline, tracing the sharp angle up to her ear."
36.76% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Lucien sank, his long legs stretching out"
1"she said, her voice dropping an octave, flat and hard"
2"Lucien whispered, his thumb pressing gently into the hollow beneath her lip"
52.44% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags8
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"he murmured (murmur)"
1"she whispered (whisper)"
2"he murmured (murmur)"
3"Lucien whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences41
tagDensity0.195
leniency0.39
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.195
78.7730%