Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCVMQPPJF7B3DJZPZEBS8P1

Run Details

Duration:
2m 50s
Cost:
$0.006469
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4418" name="Nyx" aliases="Nyx, the Shadow, Nightwhisper" pronouns="they/them" species="Shade" storyRole="Wild Card"> <eyeColor>faintly glowing violet</eyeColor> <height>approximately 6'2" in solid form</height> <age>ageless</age> <form>humanoid silhouette of living shadow, can shift between solid and incorporeal</form> <voice>sounds like a whisper carried on the wind</voice> <description>A being of living shadow, existing between the mortal plane and the spaces between realms.</description> <backstory>Nyx was once a human sorcerer named Aldric who became trapped between realms during a failed summoning ritual in 1643. They now exist as a Shade, bound to the mortal plane but able to slip between shadows.</backstory> </character> <character id="4424" name="Isolde Varga" aliases="Isolde, the Seer" pronouns="she/her" species="Half-Fae" storyRole="Oracle"> <eyeColor>pale lavender</eyeColor> <hair>silver, reaching her waist</hair> <height>5'5"</height> <age>300 years old</age> <appearance>ethereal, ageless</appearance> <speech>speaks in riddles</speech> <footprints>leaves no footprints when she walks</footprints> <compulsion>cannot lie (Fae compulsion) but can mislead</compulsion> <description>A Half-Fae seer exiled from the Fae Courts for sharing visions with mortals.</description> <backstory>She now lives in a hidden grove in Richmond Park, offering cryptic prophecies to those who seek her out.</backstory> </character> <location id="853" name="Dymas (Gluttony)" aliases="Dymas, gluttony, Dymasian" realm="Hel" sin="Gluttony"> <ruler>Prince Belphegor</ruler> <skyColor>warm amber</skyColor> <description>A place of excess and indulgence. Sprawling vineyards, orchards, and gardens provide exotic ingredients for master chefs — often helbound souls contracted from Earth. Grand feasts and culinary competitions are common.</description> </location> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> <item id="2006" name="Fae-Forged Blade" aliases="the Fae blade, Isolde's gift" type="Weapon" origin="The Fae Courts"> <material>moonsilver</material> <shape>slender, leaf-shaped dagger</shape> <temperature>always cold to the touch</temperature> <glow>faintly luminescent in moonlight</glow> <power>can cut through magical wards; particularly effective against demons</power> <givenTo>given to Aurora by Isolde as a gift</givenTo> <description>A weapon of the Fae Courts, rare and highly coveted.</description> </item> <lore id="7001" name="The Veil" aliases="the Veil, the Barrier, the Boundary" category="Cosmology"> <solsticeEffect>weakens during the winter solstice, strengthens during the summer solstice</solsticeEffect> <appearance>faint shimmering distortion visible only to those with supernatural sight</appearance> <monitoring>rift points (tears in the Veil) are monitored by the Wardens</monitoring> <description>The Veil is the metaphysical barrier separating Earth from Hel and the Fae Realms.</description> </lore> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the fantasy genre. A small group enters an ancient, otherworldly place for the first time. The environment is alien and wondrous. Describe their exploration — what they see, hear, and feel as they move deeper. Include moments of discovery, unease, and wonder. Let the world-building emerge through the characters' experience rather than exposition. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters, setting, and lore. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The crescent scar on Aurora Carter's left wrist burned like a lit match as she pushed through the twisted oak boundary of Isolde's grove. She was Rory now, cool-headed, quick out of the box, but nothing in Cardiff or London prepared her for the pocket where Richmond Park curved into fiction. Nyx drifted beside her, a silhouette of shadow six feet high, violet eyes glowing faint. "The Veil hums louder here," they said, voice like wind through dead reeds. Rory touched the Heartstone Pendant beneath her collar. The crimson gem, thumbnail-sized, pulsed with faint warmth against her skin, its faint inner glow confirming the rift point nearby. She had carried it since the unknown benefactor left it at Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress. "It knows." The standing stones were ancient oak, silver with moonlight, arranged in a ring that leaked cold air. Time moved differently; she felt it in her bones. Outside, London traffic roared. Inside, silence pooled like water. "An hour inside can be minutes or days outside," Isolde had said, her silver hair reaching her waist, pale lavender eyes seeing through lies. The half-fae seer left no footprints, spoke in riddles. Rory gripped the moonsilver dagger Isolde had given her. The blade was slender, leaf-shaped, always cold, faintly luminescent. It could cut magical wards. She hoped it wouldn't need to. Above them, amber skies bled into violet at the edges, not earth colors, not Dymas colors either, though the gluttony realm shared that warm hue. Dymas was excess, vineyards and orchards for master chefs who used helbound souls. Here, the air smelled of wildflowers blooming year-round. Eva walked behind Rory, breath sharp. "This is real." Rory didn't answer. She moved deeper. The ground softened under her boots, moss swallowing sound. Flowers bloomed in colors she had no names for—petals like crushed velvet, stems that glowed with their own faint bioluminescence. Wonder settled in her chest, tight and warm. Then unease. Nyx's form flickered, solid then incorporeal. "Something watches." The shadow wasn't wrong. Between the trees, shapes moved—not animals, not quite human. Rory's bright blue eyes scanned the darkness. The Heartstone grew hotter, its crimson pulse quickening. "We're not alone," Nyx said, a whisper carried on a wind that didn't exist. Rory drew the Fae blade. The moonsilver felt like ice against her palm. "Show yourselves." The shapes stepped closer, and Rory's stomach dropped. They were helbound souls, contracted from Earth, faces worn by excess and hunger, eyes hollow with the gluttony of Dymas. But they didn't attack. They bowed, or they tried to, bodies broken by service in Prince Belphegor's realm. Their silence spoke of orchards picked bare, of vineyards drained, of feasts that never ended. "Lost," one mouthed, lips cracked. Rory lowered the blade, not entirely. Wonder and dread tangled in her throat. "We're explorers," she said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands. "Not masters." The souls melted back into shadow. Nyx drifted closer, violet eyes studying the grove's center. "The Veil is thin here. Rifts open like wounds." Rory followed their gaze. In the clearing's heart, the air shimmered with a distortion visible only to those who could see. The Boundary between Earth and Hel, between Earth and Fae, thinned to a membrane she could almost touch. The winter solstice weakened it; they were close to that weakening. "Eva," Rory said, not turning. "Check the perimeter." Eva moved, boots silent on moss. The half-fae's gift—the blade, the grove—was meant to guide her, not trap her. But Rory knew traps came disguised as gifts. She stepped into the clearing's heart. The wildflowers bent away from her steps, though she left no footprints herself—no, that was Isolde's gift, not hers. She left prints, small and human. The air tasted of honey and rot, of feast and famine. Dymas leaked through. The Heartstone pendant burned now, crimson glow visible against her black hair, shoulder-length and straight. She was 25, five feet six, born in Cardiff, fleeing an abusive ex named Evan, working delivery for Golden Empress, living above Silas' bar. She was not a hero. She was smart. She was quick. "We need to document the rift," she said, pulling a small notebook from her coat—part-time delivery worker's habit, always carrying paper. "Before it widens." Nyx materialized beside her, solid enough to cast shadow. "The Wardens monitor these tears. They won't be pleased." "Then we'll deal with them." The wildflowers bloomed brighter, reacting to the Veil's shimmer. Rory felt time slip—an hour, a minute, a day. Outside, London might move on without her. Here, she was suspended, caught between realms, a human with a crescent scar on her wrist, holding a blade that could cut demons. She looked up. The amber sky pulsed once, like a heartbeat, and in that pulse, she saw Dymas—vineyards stretching to infinity, chefs carving souls like meat, Prince Belphegor laughing in a language older than Welsh or Irish. Then the vision snapped. Rory exhaled, breath fogging in the cold air. "We see it. We feel it. We don't belong." But they moved deeper anyway, because the grove demanded it, because Isolde's riddles led them here, because the rift needed closing—or opening. The discovery was the boundary itself, shimmering, alive, a wound that breathed. The unease was the souls, the watching, the time that bent wrong. The wonder was the flowers, the light, the possibility that a delivery worker from Cardiff could stand between worlds and choose. Rory tightened her grip on the moonsilver blade. "Let's keep moving."<|end_message|>
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.421
leniency0.842
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount925
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
29.73% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount925
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"warmth"
count1
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"flickered"
count1
5
word"scanned"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count2
7
word"whisper"
count1
8
word"stomach"
count1
9
word"shimmered"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"silence"
3"velvet"
4"flickered"
5"scanned"
6"pulse"
7"whisper"
8"stomach"
9"shimmered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"stomach dropped/sank"
count1
highlights
0"stomach dropped"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences79
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences79
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences91
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords915
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
60.07% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions67
wordCount834
uniqueNames27
maxNameDensity1.8
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Aurora1
Carter1
Isolde5
Rory15
Cardiff3
London3
Richmond1
Park1
Heartstone3
Pendant1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden2
Empress2
Dymas5
Fae2
Earth3
Prince2
Belphegor2
Boundary1
Hel1
Eva2
Evan1
Nyx5
Veil1
Welsh1
Irish1
persons
0"Aurora"
1"Carter"
2"Isolde"
3"Rory"
4"Heartstone"
5"Pendant"
6"Yu-Fei"
7"Cheung"
8"Dymas"
9"Fae"
10"Prince"
11"Belphegor"
12"Eva"
13"Evan"
14"Nyx"
places
0"Cardiff"
1"London"
2"Richmond"
3"Park"
4"Earth"
5"Veil"
globalScore0.601
windowScore0.667
68.03% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"not quite human"
1"felt like ice against her palm"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount915
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences91
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean26.14
std17.58
cv0.673
sampleLengths
051
128
245
335
462
546
69
743
82
98
1028
1114
1215
1361
145
1528
166
1718
1850
198
2027
2145
2250
2324
2418
255
2648
2737
284
2917
3022
3112
3212
3321
3411
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences79
matches
0"was meant"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs152
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount2
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences91
ratio0.11
matches
0"Time moved differently; she felt it in her bones."
1"Flowers bloomed in colors she had no names for—petals like crushed velvet, stems that glowed with their own faint bioluminescence."
2"Between the trees, shapes moved—not animals, not quite human."
3"The winter solstice weakened it; they were close to that weakening."
4"The half-fae's gift—the blade, the grove—was meant to guide her, not trap her."
5"The wildflowers bent away from her steps, though she left no footprints herself—no, that was Isolde's gift, not hers."
6"\"We need to document the rift,\" she said, pulling a small notebook from her coat—part-time delivery worker's habit, always carrying paper."
7"Rory felt time slip—an hour, a minute, a day."
8"The amber sky pulsed once, like a heartbeat, and in that pulse, she saw Dymas—vineyards stretching to infinity, chefs carving souls like meat, Prince Belphegor laughing in a language older than Welsh or Irish."
9"But they moved deeper anyway, because the grove demanded it, because Isolde's riddles led them here, because the rift needed closing—or opening."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount664
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.024096385542168676
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.006024096385542169
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences91
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences91
mean10.05
std6.89
cv0.685
sampleLengths
024
127
215
313
48
520
615
72
817
99
104
115
1224
139
149
159
165
176
1825
1913
208
216
223
233
243
259
2620
278
282
296
302
314
329
337
348
3514
365
378
382
398
4020
414
4214
4315
445
456
467
4713
482
496
48.35% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.32967032967032966
totalSentences91
uniqueOpeners30
42.74% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences78
matches
0"Then the vision snapped."
ratio0.013
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount18
totalSentences78
matches
0"She was Rory now, cool-headed,"
1"they said, voice like wind"
2"She had carried it since"
3"It could cut magical wards."
4"She hoped it wouldn't need"
5"She moved deeper."
6"They were helbound souls, contracted"
7"They bowed, or they tried"
8"Their silence spoke of orchards"
9"she said, her voice steady"
10"She stepped into the clearing's"
11"She left prints, small and"
12"She was 25, five feet"
13"She was not a hero."
14"She was smart."
15"She was quick."
16"she said, pulling a small"
17"She looked up."
ratio0.231
36.92% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount66
totalSentences78
matches
0"The crescent scar on Aurora"
1"She was Rory now, cool-headed,"
2"Nyx drifted beside her, a"
3"they said, voice like wind"
4"Rory touched the Heartstone Pendant"
5"The crimson gem, thumbnail-sized, pulsed"
6"She had carried it since"
7"The standing stones were ancient"
8"Time moved differently; she felt"
9"Isolde had said, her silver"
10"The half-fae seer left no"
11"Rory gripped the moonsilver dagger"
12"The blade was slender, leaf-shaped,"
13"It could cut magical wards."
14"She hoped it wouldn't need"
15"Dymas was excess, vineyards and"
16"Here, the air smelled of"
17"Eva walked behind Rory, breath"
18"Rory didn't answer."
19"She moved deeper."
ratio0.846
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences78
matches(empty)
ratio0
19.70% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences29
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"The standing stones were ancient oak, silver with moonlight, arranged in a ring that leaked cold air."
1"Dymas was excess, vineyards and orchards for master chefs who used helbound souls."
2"Flowers bloomed in colors she had no names for—petals like crushed velvet, stems that glowed with their own faint bioluminescence."
3"Here, she was suspended, caught between realms, a human with a crescent scar on her wrist, holding a blade that could cut demons."
4"The discovery was the boundary itself, shimmering, alive, a wound that breathed."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Nyx said, a whisper carried on a wind that didn't exist"
1"she said, her voice steady despite the tremor in her hands"
2"Rory said, not turning"
44.74% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags7
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Isolde had (have)"
1"one mouthed (mouth)"
dialogueSentences19
tagDensity0.368
leniency0.737
rawRatio0.286
effectiveRatio0.211
75.0095%