Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCVN0TJQ3DBBJ691M6NZ08H

Run Details

Duration:
42.6s
Cost:
$0.067001
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Horror genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory forced her shoulder against the cracked oak beam, shoved the stubborn iron gate open, and stumbled into the clearing. Her leather delivery bag thumped heavily against her hip. The client at Yu-Fei’s Golden Empress restaurant paid three hundred quid in crisp banknotes for a single insulated container delivered to the edge of Richmond Park after dark. Yu-Fei grabbed the cash without hesitation. Rory took the night shift because three hundred quid covered half her rent above Silas’ bar, and her bank account rested firmly in the red. Vibrant wildflower petals crushed beneath her steel-toed boots, releasing an unseasonably sweet scent of jasmine and damp earth. Rory paused, her bright blue eyes narrowing as she studied the massive oak standing stones circling the clearing. They stood like ancient petrified sentinels, moss creeping along their grooved bark in dark, jagged spirals. Silence swallowed the distant hum of London traffic. One second the faint rumble of commuter cars echoed behind her, and the next, absolute stillness descended. Rory reached up, her fingers sliding beneath her collar to touch the Heartstone pendant. The thumbnail-sized crimson gemstone pulsed against her collarbone. A steady beat of heat radiated through the delicate silver chain, burning into her skin. "Hello?" Rory called out. Her voice sounded flat, deadened by the dense canopy above. Nobody answered. She pulled a silver wind-up pocket watch from her jacket. Silas gave her the old piece last autumn. The second hand jumped erratically. Tick-tock, tick-tock, then three rapid clicks, then complete standstill. She tapped the glass face. The thin hand spun backward two full rotations before snapping still again. Time moved sideways in this place. Rory traced the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist with her thumb, a quiet habit from childhood. She refocused on her task. The instructions scribbled on the grease-stained delivery receipt were explicit. *Leave the iron box at the center stone. Do not open the latch.* She stepped toward the center of the ring, her boots sinking into unnaturally plush moss. Deep purple foxgloves and pale white anemones swarmed the soil, blooming in thick carpets despite the late season. A sharp snap rang out to her right. Rory whipped her head toward the tree line. No branches swung in the gloom. Yet, the tall grass near the eastern stone flattened, bending downward as if an invisible heavy weight pressed into the stems. She adjusted her grip on the delivery bag, her heart hammering a swift cadence against her ribs. She kept her pace steady. Showing fear invited predators. Her law tutors back in Cardiff taught her that much about negotiations, and London streets taught her the rest. She reached the central stone, a massive slab of grey granite resting on three oak pillars. Scorch marks scarred the top surface of the granite, smelling faintly of sulfur and dried blood. Someone held a ritual here recently. A messy one. Rory unzipped her shoulder bag, pulled out the cold iron box, and set it squarely in the middle of the scorched granite. The iron clunked heavily against the stone. Another sound followed instantly. A wet, rhythmic dragging sound. *Drop, slide. Drop, slide.* The surrounding air turned icy cold, freezing the breath in her lungs, but the Heartstone against her sternum flared with blistering warmth. The gemstone's faint crimson inner glow brightened, bleeding red light through the weave of her black cotton shirt. A Hel portal sat nearby. Or something spawned from its depth. Rory took two deliberate steps backward, her hands hovering near her hips. "Delivery's done," she said into the gloom. "I'm heading out." A pale, elongated shape detached itself from the rough bark of the northern monolith. It moved with a sickening, fluid grace, bending at joints that sat entirely wrong on a frame that roughly resembled a human torso. Its skin possessed the glistening, translucent sheen of peeled fruit. Two dark hollow sockets stared from a skull devoid of a nose or lips, revealing rows of needle-thin bone spikes for teeth. Rory reached into her coat pocket. Her fingers closed around the cold steel handle of her folding knife. She flicked the blade open with a sharp, audible lock. "Back off," she said. The creature tilted its head. A low, rhythmic clicking sound bubbled from its throat, echoing the erratic tick-tock of her broken pocket watch. It didn't walk. It slithered forward on four spindly limbs, its long fingers dragging through the dirt, leaving deep bloody furrows across the bed of crushed anemones. Rory glanced back over her shoulder toward the wooden gate. The rusted iron hinges and cracked oak beam vanished. In their place stood an unbroken wall of black thorn bushes, their long spikes glinting with fresh, sticky sap. The pocket dimension had closed its jaws. Rory planted her feet, sliding her left thumb along the smooth spine of her open knife blade. She maintained her composure, forcing her breathing to remain slow and controlled. "Right," she muttered under her breath. "Trapped." The entity stopped three yards away. Its chest expanded, ribcage opening outward like a pair of pale bone wings. A thick, copper stench hit Rory's nostrils. Blood. Fresh and thick. "Rory..." a voice rasped from the dark hollows of the creature's throat. The sound mimicked human speech, but the pitch fluctuated violently, layered with the metallic rasp of a rusty saw blade. It was the voice of Evan, her abusive ex, twisted and stretched into something grotesque. "Rory, come back inside..." the thing rasped, mimicking Evan’s hated cadence. "You belong to me." A cold chill swept down her spine, but Rory held her ground. Evan was miles away, blocked and banished from her life. This thing read her mind, fishing for fear to break her resolve. "Bad impression," Rory said, her tone dripping with ice. "Evan was much uglier." The creature let out a high-pitched screech that shattered the glass face of her pocket watch in her coat pocket. It scraped its needle teeth together, sparks flying from its jaw as bone ground against bone. The Heartstone scorched her skin now, pulsing a blinding, deep crimson light across the grass. The red radiance illuminated the dark corners of the grove, revealing the true scale of the infestation. From the shadows behind every standing stone in the circle, six more pale, glistening limbs uncurled from the oak bark. Wet, skinless torsos detached themselves from the ancient wood, dropping silently onto the carpet of purple blossoms. They formed a tightening ring around her, blocking every escape route toward the thorn wall. The lead creature recoiled, coiled its elongated spine like a metallic spring, and lunged straight at her throat with its jaw unhinged.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:42:45.218Z" 7/25/2026, 2:42:45 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags8
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.727
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1109
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
5.32% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1109
totalAiIsms21
found
0
word"firmly"
count1
1
word"sentinels"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"echoed"
count1
4
word"pulsed"
count1
5
word"traced"
count1
6
word"gloom"
count2
7
word"weight"
count1
8
word"rhythmic"
count2
9
word"warmth"
count1
10
word"glistening"
count2
11
word"flicked"
count1
12
word"echoing"
count1
13
word"glinting"
count1
14
word"chill"
count1
15
word"down her spine"
count1
16
word"resolve"
count1
17
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"firmly"
1"sentinels"
2"silence"
3"echoed"
4"pulsed"
5"traced"
6"gloom"
7"weight"
8"rhythmic"
9"warmth"
10"glistening"
11"flicked"
12"echoing"
13"glinting"
14"chill"
15"down her spine"
16"resolve"
17"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences94
matches(empty)
97.26% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences94
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences98
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans2
markdownWords17
totalWords1109
ratio0.015
matches
0"Leave the iron box at the center stone. Do not open the latch."
1"Drop, slide. Drop, slide."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
80.10% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount1073
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity1.4
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Yu-Fei2
Golden1
Empress1
Richmond1
Park1
Vibrant1
London2
Heartstone3
Cardiff1
Hel1
Rory15
Evan3
persons
0"Yu-Fei"
1"Heartstone"
2"Rory"
3"Evan"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
3"Cardiff"
globalScore0.801
windowScore0.833
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences73
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1109
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean26.4
std15.98
cv0.605
sampleLengths
029
159
252
325
437
514
62
749
86
946
1033
118
1235
1345
1441
1529
169
174
1840
1911
2012
2110
2269
2328
244
2523
2627
2710
2835
2929
307
3130
3212
3335
3415
3534
3613
3736
3832
3937
4015
4122
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs171
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences98
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount86
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount1
adverbRatio0.011627906976744186
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.011627906976744186
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences98
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences98
mean11.32
std6.49
cv0.574
sampleLengths
020
19
228
36
425
518
618
716
88
917
1014
118
1215
134
1410
152
1610
178
185
199
205
2112
226
2318
245
2510
268
275
2815
2918
308
318
326
3321
3417
355
364
3719
3816
3916
406
413
4222
437
444
455
462
472
4822
4918
68.03% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.4387755102040816
totalSentences98
uniqueOpeners43
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences89
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount24
totalSentences89
matches
0"Her leather delivery bag thumped"
1"They stood like ancient petrified"
2"Her voice sounded flat, deadened"
3"She pulled a silver wind-up"
4"She tapped the glass face."
5"She refocused on her task."
6"She stepped toward the center"
7"She adjusted her grip on"
8"She kept her pace steady."
9"Her law tutors back in"
10"She reached the central stone,"
11"she said into the gloom"
12"It moved with a sickening,"
13"Its skin possessed the glistening,"
14"Her fingers closed around the"
15"She flicked the blade open"
16"It didn't walk."
17"It slithered forward on four"
18"She maintained her composure, forcing"
19"she muttered under her breath"
ratio0.27
38.65% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount75
totalSentences89
matches
0"Rory forced her shoulder against"
1"Her leather delivery bag thumped"
2"The client at Yu-Fei’s Golden"
3"Yu-Fei grabbed the cash without"
4"Rory took the night shift"
5"Rory paused, her bright blue"
6"They stood like ancient petrified"
7"Silence swallowed the distant hum"
8"One second the faint rumble"
9"Rory reached up, her fingers"
10"The thumbnail-sized crimson gemstone pulsed"
11"A steady beat of heat"
12"Rory called out"
13"Her voice sounded flat, deadened"
14"She pulled a silver wind-up"
15"Silas gave her the old"
16"The second hand jumped erratically."
17"Tick-tock, tick-tock, then three rapid"
18"She tapped the glass face."
19"The thin hand spun backward"
ratio0.843
56.18% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences89
matches
0"Yet, the tall grass near"
ratio0.011
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences51
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Yet, the tall grass near the eastern stone flattened, bending downward as if an invisible heavy weight pressed into the stems."
1"It moved with a sickening, fluid grace, bending at joints that sat entirely wrong on a frame that roughly resembled a human torso."
62.50% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags8
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory said, her tone dripping with ice"
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she muttered (mutter)"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.364
leniency0.727
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.182
85.5712%