Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCVNH8H4BTAK5EZV262TBAF

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Duration:
15.0s
Cost:
$0.019312
Provider:
Google AI Studio

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System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
A blade slid smoothly from the handle of an ivory cane, pressing its razor edge directly under my chin. "You really ought to check the peephole, *chérie*." Lucien stood on the narrow landing outside Eva's flat, looking thoroughly out of place beside a stack of waterlogged takeaway boxes. Tailored charcoal wool hugged his shoulders without a wrinkle. His platinum hair caught the flicker of the bare yellow bulb overhead, completely undisturbed by the misty East London rain that usually ruined everyone else's coat. "Take the knife away, Luc," I said, stepping back into the flat. "Or I'll let Ptolemy use your trousers as a scratching post." "He wouldn't dare." Lucien retracted the blade with a soft click, crossing the threshold and locking three deadbolts behind him. His gaze swept the tiny room, taking in the chaotic piles of ancient scrolls, tea-stained parchment, and open legal texts covering every inch of floor space. "Living like a fugitive suits you, Rory. Very romantic. Very impoverished." "I am working." I snatched a stack of paper off the solitary armchair before he could sit. "What are you doing here? It's been eight months." "Eight months, three weeks, two days." He rested both hands on the ivory pommel of his cane. His left eye, dark as obsidian, fixed on me while the amber right eye tracked the movement of my pulse point. "Not that anyone is counting." "You left a note on a napkin." "It was expensive stationery." "It was a greasy napkin from a kebab shop in Soho!" My voice spiked, cutting through the heavy smell of stale cardamom and paper dust that defined the building. "You wrote 'Do not look for me' in fountain pen." "And yet, here you are. Not looking for me." He stepped closer, the heels of his leather shoes silent on the worn rug. "Until you started asking questions at Silas' bar last night. Prying into my shipments. My clients." I held my ground, though the crescent-shaped scar on my left wrist suddenly throbbed, an old ghost habit from a time when men invading my personal space meant danger. Lucien wasn't Evan. Evan had been brutal, loud, and crude. Lucien was a scalpel. He carved you open so smoothly you didn't notice you were bleeding until the carpet ruined. "I need information," I said. "Clearly. Your court cases aren't going well if you're turning to half-demons for research." He flicked a stray scrap of parchment off the table with his cane. "The Golden Empress pays you to deliver dim sum, not to play detective in Avaros blood-slips." "How do you even know about Yu-Fei's restaurant?" "I know the temperature of your bathwater if I care to ask the pipes, Rory. Don't sound so surprised." He turned, taking off his coat with a slow, deliberate grace that made my chest tighten despite my best efforts. Underneath, his crisp white shirt contrasted sharply with the dark wood of the flat. The space suddenly felt far too small, choked by his presence, by the faint, burnt-vanilla scent of sulfur and expensive cologne that always followed him. "You shouldn't have come," I murmured, backing toward the small kitchen counter. "Eva will be home soon." "Eva is at the British Library until nine. She is currently deciphering a third-century hex." Lucien set his cane against the sofa. "We are alone." "Great. Wonderful." I reached for a chipped mug, purely to give my hands something to hold. "So give me what I need and leave." "Ask properly." "Lucien." "You used to call me Luc when you wanted something." He closed the distance between us in three fluid strides, trapping me against the laminate counter before I could duck away. "You used to say it soft. Like a secret." My breath hitched. Up close, the demon half of him was undeniable. The heat radiating off his skin could melt frost. I could see the subtle, iridescent sheen beneath his collar, where smooth skin yielded to faint, pearlescent scales hidden beneath his clothes. "You walked out," I whispered, staring straight at the top button of his shirt. "You left me in that alley with three dead mercenaries and a bloody knife." "I saved your life." "You made me a suspect!" "I made you invisible," he corrected, his voice dropping an octave, rich and dark as molasses. "If I had stayed, my father's court would have tracked you within hours. They would have peeled the skin from your face just to see why a half-breed fixer cared about a Cardiff law student." I looked up then, meeting those mismatched eyes. "Is that what I am? A human curiosity?" His thumb caught my lower lip, pressing lightly until I parted my mouth. The gesture was surprisingly gentle, a harsh contrast to the tension vibrating through his frame. "You are a plague," he breathed. "I spent eight months in Marseille trying to forget the sound of your voice. I bought three vineyards. I slept with a duchess. I killed two assassins." "Sounds like a busy holiday." "None of it worked." His thumb slid down to my chin, tilting my head back. "You were still there. In the wine. In the bed. In the blood." "Luc..." The name slipped out before I could stop it. His posture broke. The icy composure melted away, replaced by the sharp, desperate edge I had only seen once before, the night we almost burned down his office in Mayfair. He pulled me against his chest, his mouth crashing down on mine before I could draw another breath. It wasn't a soft reunion. It tasted of smoke, rain, and bitter iron. My hands found their way to his hair, tearing the neat platinum strands out of place as I pulled him closer, pressing myself against the heat of his body. The scar on my wrist flared with a strange, prickly warmth, reacting to the ambient magic rolling off him in waves. He groaned into my mouth, his fingers digging into my hips, lifting me onto the edge of the counter. Papers tumbled off the surface, scattering across the linoleum like dying leaves. "Tell me to go," he growled against my neck, his lips tracing the pulse hammering in my throat. "Tell me now, Rory. Because if you don't..." "I need the ledger," I gasped, burying my face in the crook of his neck. "The one from Avaros. Silas said you have it." Lucien pulled back just an inch, his amber eye glowing faintly in the dim light of the kitchen. A slow, dangerous smile curved his lips. "You are absolute poison," he laughed quietly, though there was no humor in it. "You let me kiss you just to ask for stolen demon contraband?" "I let you kiss me because I missed you," I snapped, my cheeks burning. "I asked for the ledger because I want to stay alive. The two things aren't mutually exclusive." He reached into his inner jacket pocket, pulling out a small, leather-bound book wrapped in iron wire. He didn't hand it over. Instead, he dropped it onto the counter beside my thigh. "It comes with a price." "I don't have money, Luc." "I don't want your money." He stepped between my knees, leaning in until his forehead rested against mine. "I want you out of London. Tonight." "I can't leave. Eva—" "Eva is already targeted," he cut in, his voice cold again. "The men searching for this book aren't street thugs, Rory. They are my father's high guards. They crossed the threshold twenty minutes ago." The front door exploded inward, wood splinters showering the hallway.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags23
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"he laughed quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.397
leniency0.793
rawRatio0.043
effectiveRatio0.034
68.33% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1263
totalAiIsmAdverbs8
found
0
adverb"really"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"very"
count2
3
adverb"suddenly"
count2
4
adverb"sharply"
count1
5
adverb"lightly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"completely"
2"very"
3"suddenly"
4"sharply"
5"lightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
60.41% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1263
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"chaotic"
count1
2
word"solitary"
count1
3
word"pulse"
count2
4
word"throbbed"
count1
5
word"flicked"
count1
6
word"tension"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count1
8
word"tracing"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"chaotic"
2"solitary"
3"pulse"
4"throbbed"
5"flicked"
6"tension"
7"warmth"
8"tracing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences59
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences94
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen36
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords1
totalWords1263
ratio0.001
matches
0"chérie"
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions20
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions12
wordCount779
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity0.77
worstName"Lucien"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Lucien"
discoveredNames
Eva1
East1
London1
Lucien6
Evan2
Mayfair1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
2"Evan"
places
0"East"
1"London"
2"Mayfair"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences50
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1263
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs49
mean25.78
std17.38
cv0.674
sampleLengths
019
18
256
323
457
526
643
77
84
939
1039
1159
125
1343
148
1519
1659
1717
1825
1924
202
211
2240
2343
2428
254
265
2751
2816
2928
3033
315
3228
3310
3448
3563
3631
3726
3824
3925
4026
4131
4232
435
445
4525
464
4734
4810
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences59
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs132
matches
0"were bleeding"
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount0
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences0
totalSentences94
ratio0
matches(empty)
87.64% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount783
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"faint, burnt-vanilla scent"
1"small, leather-bound book"
adverbCount28
adverbRatio0.035759897828863345
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.020434227330779056
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences94
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences94
mean13.44
std7.78
cv0.579
sampleLengths
019
18
221
39
426
512
611
720
826
911
1017
119
1217
1321
145
157
164
1729
1810
1923
2016
2129
223
237
244
2516
265
2727
2816
298
3019
3120
3214
3325
3412
355
3622
373
3816
398
402
411
4231
439
443
459
469
4722
4814
4914
50.00% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats13
diversityRatio0.3829787234042553
totalSentences94
uniqueOpeners36
58.48% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences57
matches
0"Instead, he dropped it onto"
ratio0.018
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount36
totalSentences57
matches
0"His platinum hair caught the"
1"I said, stepping back into"
2"His gaze swept the tiny"
3"I snatched a stack of"
4"He rested both hands on"
5"His left eye, dark as"
6"My voice spiked, cutting through"
7"He stepped closer, the heels"
8"I held my ground, though"
9"He carved you open so"
10"He flicked a stray scrap"
11"He turned, taking off his"
12"I murmured, backing toward the"
13"I reached for a chipped"
14"He closed the distance between"
15"My breath hitched."
16"I could see the subtle,"
17"I whispered, staring straight at"
18"he corrected, his voice dropping"
19"I looked up then, meeting"
ratio0.632
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount53
totalSentences57
matches
0"A blade slid smoothly from"
1"Lucien stood on the narrow"
2"His platinum hair caught the"
3"I said, stepping back into"
4"Lucien retracted the blade with"
5"His gaze swept the tiny"
6"I snatched a stack of"
7"He rested both hands on"
8"His left eye, dark as"
9"My voice spiked, cutting through"
10"He stepped closer, the heels"
11"I held my ground, though"
12"Lucien wasn't Evan."
13"Evan had been brutal, loud,"
14"Lucien was a scalpel."
15"He carved you open so"
16"He flicked a stray scrap"
17"He turned, taking off his"
18"The space suddenly felt far"
19"I murmured, backing toward the"
ratio0.93
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences57
matches(empty)
ratio0
80.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences23
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"He turned, taking off his coat with a slow, deliberate grace that made my chest tighten despite my best efforts."
1"He groaned into my mouth, his fingers digging into my hips, lifting me onto the edge of the counter."
38.04% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags23
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"he corrected, his voice dropping an octave, rich and dark as molasses"
1"he growled, his lips tracing the pulse hammering in my throat"
2"I snapped, my cheeks burning"
3"he cut in, his voice cold again"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags11
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"Lucien retracted (retract)"
1"I murmured (murmur)"
2"I whispered (whisper)"
3"he corrected (correct)"
4"he breathed (breathe)"
5"he growled (growl)"
6"I gasped (gasp)"
7"he laughed quietly (laugh)"
8"I snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences58
tagDensity0.19
leniency0.379
rawRatio0.818
effectiveRatio0.31
78.1216%