| 57.14% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 7 | | adverbTagCount | 1 | | adverbTags | | 0 | "Nyx said sharply [sharply]" |
| | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.143 | | effectiveRatio | 0.143 | |
| 70.17% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 838 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 5 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "sharply" | | 1 | "slightly" | | 2 | "gently" | | 3 | "suddenly" |
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| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 22.43% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 838 | | totalAiIsms | 13 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "warmth" | | 2 | "pulsed" | | 3 | "comforting" | | 4 | "weight" | | 5 | "flickered" | | 6 | "resonated" | | 7 | "stomach" | | 8 | "churn" | | 9 | "shimmered" | | 10 | "crystalline" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 38 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 1 | | narrationSentences | 38 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 45 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 36 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 836 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 64.53% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 702 | | uniqueNames | 10 | | maxNameDensity | 1.71 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 2.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 12 | | Nyx | 6 | | London | 1 | | Isolde | 7 | | Heartstone | 2 | | Pendant | 2 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Veil | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Nyx" | | 2 | "Isolde" | | 3 | "Pendant" | | 4 | "Yu-Fei" | | 5 | "Veil" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Park" | | 2 | "London" |
| | globalScore | 0.645 | | windowScore | 0.833 | |
| 80.56% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 36 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "brambles that seemed to writhe gently, independent of any breeze" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 836 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 45 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 75.09% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 20 | | mean | 41.8 | | std | 17.26 | | cv | 0.413 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 48 | | 1 | 62 | | 2 | 48 | | 3 | 49 | | 4 | 62 | | 5 | 55 | | 6 | 34 | | 7 | 59 | | 8 | 38 | | 9 | 31 | | 10 | 19 | | 11 | 59 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 21 | | 14 | 55 | | 15 | 61 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 55 | | 18 | 35 | | 19 | 25 |
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| 96.03% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 38 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 103 | | matches | | |
| 15.87% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 2 | | totalSentences | 45 | | ratio | 0.044 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, a shimmering distortion hung suspended in the open air—a jagged tear in reality where the damp, sweet air of the grove met something entirely different." | | 1 | "Rory stared through the rift, her hand dropping instinctively to the slender, leaf-shaped dagger tucked into her belt—the moonsilver blade Isolde had gifted her, always biting-cold against her hip." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 713 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "slender, leaf-shaped dagger" |
| | adverbCount | 28 | | adverbRatio | 0.03927068723702665 | | lyAdverbCount | 12 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.016830294530154277 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 45 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 96.02% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 45 | | mean | 18.58 | | std | 7.25 | | cv | 0.39 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 30 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 14 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 31 | | 5 | 17 | | 6 | 31 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 26 | | 9 | 13 | | 10 | 23 | | 11 | 26 | | 12 | 25 | | 13 | 13 | | 14 | 17 | | 15 | 13 | | 16 | 21 | | 17 | 17 | | 18 | 22 | | 19 | 20 | | 20 | 15 | | 21 | 16 | | 22 | 7 | | 23 | 15 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 19 | | 26 | 13 | | 27 | 27 | | 28 | 19 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 14 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 13 | | 33 | 16 | | 34 | 26 | | 35 | 25 | | 36 | 36 | | 37 | 8 | | 38 | 6 | | 39 | 29 | | 40 | 26 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 20 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 17 |
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| 92.59% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 0 | | diversityRatio | 0.5555555555555556 | | totalSentences | 45 | | uniqueOpeners | 25 | |
| 90.09% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 37 | | matches | | 0 | "Instead, a shimmering distortion hung" |
| | ratio | 0.027 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 7 | | totalSentences | 37 | | matches | | 0 | "It was replaced by a" | | 1 | "She did not turn back" | | 2 | "It was her only anchor" | | 3 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 4 | "Her fingers brushed against the" | | 5 | "She stepped aside, gesturing toward" | | 6 | "She looked back toward the" |
| | ratio | 0.189 | |
| 27.57% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 32 | | totalSentences | 37 | | matches | | 0 | "The fog clinging to the" | | 1 | "It was replaced by a" | | 2 | "Rory blinked, her bright blue" | | 3 | "The shade's faintly glowing violet" | | 4 | "Isolde stood a few paces" | | 5 | "She did not turn back" | | 6 | "Nyx murmured, their voice sounding" | | 7 | "Rory nodded, instinctively reaching up" | | 8 | "The Heartstone Pendant rested against" | | 9 | "It was her only anchor" | | 10 | "They moved deeper into the" | | 11 | "Every step felt heavier, as" | | 12 | "Cicadas hummed a slow, discordant" | | 13 | "Rory asked, her voice low" | | 14 | "Her fingers brushed against the" | | 15 | "Isolde replied, her voice drifting" | | 16 | "The half-fae seer paused beside" | | 17 | "Nyx said sharply, stepping between" | | 18 | "The shade’s form flickered, edges" | | 19 | "Isolde turned her head slightly," |
| | ratio | 0.865 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 37 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 0.00% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 30 | | technicalSentenceCount | 6 | | matches | | 0 | "It was replaced by a sudden, heavy warmth that smelled of crushed mint, ozone, and impossibly sweet nectar." | | 1 | "The shade's faintly glowing violet eyes swept across the hidden grove, lingering on the wildflowers that bloomed in riotous crimson and gold despite the bitter …" | | 2 | "Isolde stood a few paces ahead, her silver hair catching a light that had no discernible source." | | 3 | "She stepped aside, gesturing toward a thicket of silver-leafed brambles that seemed to writhe gently, independent of any breeze." | | 4 | "Through the tear, a warm amber sky stretched endlessly over rolling hills of emerald vines and terraced orchards laden with fruit that glowed like jewels." | | 5 | "Rory stared through the rift, her hand dropping instinctively to the slender, leaf-shaped dagger tucked into her belt—the moonsilver blade Isolde had gifted her…" |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 7 | | uselessAdditionCount | 3 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory asked, her voice low" | | 1 | "Isolde replied, her voice drifting back like a melodic riddle" | | 2 | "Rory said, her voice steady despite the unease twisting in her chest" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 7 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "Nyx murmured (murmur)" | | 1 | "Rory whispered (whisper)" | | 2 | "Nyx whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 14 | | tagDensity | 0.5 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.429 | | effectiveRatio | 0.429 | |