Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCVRD20Q3G1FQ8XJS8GBBYM

Run Details

Duration:
6m 26s
Cost:
$0.014334
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pushed through the rusted gate of Richmond Park well after midnight. The dark swallowed the path behind her like a mouth closing. She came because the pendant had burned against her collarbone since dusk, a crimson thumb-sized warning that pulsed like a second heartbeat. Near a Hel portal, the folded note had read. Given by an unknown benefactor, the silver chain now felt heavier than silver should. The ancient oaks rose first. Standing stones, black with moss and older than the city, ringed a clearing she should not have found. She stepped between them. The air flattened. No traffic hum from the A307 reached here. Only wildflowers—bluebells in October, poppies in frost—glowed under a moon that seemed too close, too watchful. "Wrong season," Rory said. Her voice came back thin, smaller. The Heartstone hung cold against her skin, then warm, then insistent. Deep crimson, roughly the size of a thumbnail, it glowed with a faint inner light. She wrapped her fingers around it. The gem throbbed. A second pulse answered from the trees, not echo but reply. She turned. The wildflowers bent, not with wind—the air hung still, dead—but with attention. Their stems tracked her movement across the clearing. A twig snapped to her left. Rory whipped her head. Nothing. Only shadows that stretched longer than the moon allowed, black tendrils reaching toward her boots. "Show yourself." She spoke to the dark, to whatever watched. "You wanted me here." The silence thickened until it pressed on her eardrums. Then the sound came: her own breath, echoed back from the centre of the clearing, delayed by half a second. Not a reflection. A repetition that knew her lungs. Rory's free hand found her left wrist, the crescent-shaped scar hidden beneath her sleeve. Childhood accident. Old damage. Now the skin itched, as though the mark remembered wounds that had never fully closed. The flowers rustled in unison. Not random. Rhythmic. A language of stems. She backed toward the stones. They looked farther away than the three paces she had taken inside. Time inside the grove moved differently—an hour could be minutes, or days. She checked her watch. The hands crawled backwards, then stuttered, then froze. The pendant flared hot. Deep crimson light spilled through her fingers, painting her knuckles in bloody hues. She squeezed the gem tighter. Its warmth turned to urgency, pulling her not away, but deeper. Footsteps now. Soft, on grass that should not hold weight. They circled left, then right, never breaking cover, never showing a shape. Rory kept her chin level. Cool-headed. Quick out-of-the-box thinking. She scanned the boundary. The oaks seemed to lean inward, their branches knitting together overhead, cutting off the moon. "I'm not afraid of you," she said. The lie hung there, fragile, transparent. The whisper came then—not words, but a shape of sound, like silk tearing slowly in a closed room. It came from everywhere and nowhere, brushing her ear, threading through her straight black hair. She ran. Not toward the gate—she had lost its direction—but into the centre, where the portal might be, where she could understand. The wildflowers brushed her knees, staining her jeans with pollen that smelled of iron and old rain. The Heartstone guided her, pulling like a magnet dragged through bone. Behind her, the footsteps quickened. Rory reached a hollow in the grass. The earth there was black, not soil but absence, a wound in the ground. A Hel portal, she realised. The pendant's warmth turned to a burn against her palm. She dropped to her knees. The crimson gem lit her face from below. "Close it," she said, though no one had taught her how. "Whatever you are. Let me close it." The whisper answered, closer now, threading through her hair, cold against her neck. The flowers bowed in waves, a field of bowed heads. Rory gripped the stone with both hands. Its glow intensified, spilling up her arms. The air screamed—not with sound, but with pressure, bending around her like a fist closing on empty space. She held on. The presence leaned over her shoulder. She felt its weight, its cold breath, its absolute certainty. Not human. Not Fae, not entirely. Something that had waited in this pocket between Earth and the Fae realm, fed by the wrongness of the place, grown patient in the stillness. The pendant pulsed once, hard, a crimson heartbeat that matched her own. The black hollow in the earth flickered. Rory did not look back. She spoke through clenched teeth, her bright blue eyes fixed on the absence in the ground. "Get back." The weight lifted—not gone, but retreated, pulled to the edge of vision where shadows lived. The flowers straightened slowly, reluctantly. The footsteps faded into the rustle of real wind, finally arriving, carrying the smell of rain and normal London air. She stayed on her knees until the crimson glow dimmed to a faint inner warmth, the gem settling back to a thumbnail of quiet crimson. The watch ticked forward. Rory stood. Her legs shook. The gate waited ten paces away, the standing stones framing it like a mouth that had decided not to bite. She walked out without running, though every nerve screamed. The ancient oaks watched her leave, silent and unmoving. Behind her, the wildflowers closed their petals one by one, like eyes shutting against the dark. The gate clicked shut. The park returned. The moon slipped behind ordinary clouds. Rory touched the pendant, now cool, and did not look back.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:44:36.042Z" 7/25/2026, 2:44:36 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
83.77% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount924
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
1
adverb"reluctantly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"reluctantly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
0.00% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount924
totalAiIsms23
found
0
word"pulsed"
count2
1
word"throbbed"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"echo"
count1
4
word"silence"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"rhythmic"
count1
7
word"warmth"
count3
8
word"footsteps"
count3
9
word"weight"
count3
10
word"scanned"
count1
11
word"whisper"
count2
12
word"silk"
count1
13
word"quickened"
count1
14
word"flickered"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"throbbed"
2"pulse"
3"echo"
4"silence"
5"echoed"
6"rhythmic"
7"warmth"
8"footsteps"
9"weight"
10"scanned"
11"whisper"
12"silk"
13"quickened"
14"flickered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount2
narrationSentences101
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences104
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen25
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords914
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
93.82% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions21
wordCount890
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity1.12
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Hel2
October1
Heartstone2
Fae2
Earth1
London1
Rory10
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Hel"
3"October"
4"London"
globalScore0.938
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches6
per1kWords6.565
wordCount914
matches
0"not echo but reply"
1"not away, but deeper"
2"not words, but a shape of sound, like silk tearing slowly in a closed room"
3"not soil but absence, a wound in the ground"
4"not with sound, but with pressure, bending around her like a fist closing on emp"
5"not gone, but retreated, pulled to the edge of vision"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences104
matches
0"warning that pulsed"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs41
mean22.29
std15.99
cv0.717
sampleLengths
068
15
249
34
46
546
622
76
820
914
109
1129
1233
1312
1441
154
1629
1722
1828
197
206
2133
222
2348
245
2536
2631
2723
2832
293
3047
3112
327
3323
3440
3525
364
3725
3834
3913
4011
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences101
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs162
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences104
ratio0.067
matches
0"Only wildflowers—bluebells in October, poppies in frost—glowed under a moon that seemed too close, too watchful."
1"The wildflowers bent, not with wind—the air hung still, dead—but with attention."
2"Time inside the grove moved differently—an hour could be minutes, or days."
3"The whisper came then—not words, but a shape of sound, like silk tearing slowly in a closed room."
4"Not toward the gate—she had lost its direction—but into the centre, where the portal might be, where she could understand."
5"The air screamed—not with sound, but with pressure, bending around her like a fist closing on empty space."
6"The weight lifted—not gone, but retreated, pulled to the edge of vision where shadows lived."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount903
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount32
adverbRatio0.035437430786267994
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.012181616832779624
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences104
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences104
mean8.79
std5.75
cv0.654
sampleLengths
012
111
222
39
414
55
618
74
83
98
1016
114
126
1311
1415
156
163
1711
182
1912
208
216
224
231
2415
2510
264
279
2820
293
306
3114
322
332
3415
355
362
371
384
395
4012
4112
424
438
444
4513
465
4711
482
498
48.08% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats10
diversityRatio0.34615384615384615
totalSentences104
uniqueOpeners36
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount3
totalSentences88
matches
0"Only wildflowers—bluebells in October, poppies"
1"Only shadows that stretched longer"
2"Then the sound came: her"
ratio0.034
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount23
totalSentences88
matches
0"She came because the pendant"
1"She stepped between them."
2"Her voice came back thin,"
3"She wrapped her fingers around"
4"Their stems tracked her movement"
5"She spoke to the dark,"
6"She backed toward the stones."
7"They looked farther away than"
8"She checked her watch."
9"She squeezed the gem tighter."
10"Its warmth turned to urgency,"
11"They circled left, then right,"
12"She scanned the boundary."
13"It came from everywhere and"
14"She dropped to her knees."
15"she said, though no one"
16"Its glow intensified, spilling up"
17"She held on."
18"She felt its weight, its"
19"She spoke through clenched teeth,"
ratio0.261
62.27% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount70
totalSentences88
matches
0"Rory pushed through the rusted"
1"The dark swallowed the path"
2"She came because the pendant"
3"The ancient oaks rose first."
4"She stepped between them."
5"The air flattened."
6"Her voice came back thin,"
7"The Heartstone hung cold against"
8"She wrapped her fingers around"
9"The gem throbbed."
10"A second pulse answered from"
11"The wildflowers bent, not with"
12"Their stems tracked her movement"
13"A twig snapped to her"
14"Rory whipped her head."
15"She spoke to the dark,"
16"The silence thickened until it"
17"A repetition that knew her"
18"Rory's free hand found her"
19"The flowers rustled in unison."
ratio0.795
56.82% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences88
matches
0"Now the skin itched, as"
ratio0.011
89.29% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences40
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"Only wildflowers—bluebells in October, poppies in frost—glowed under a moon that seemed too close, too watchful."
1"It came from everywhere and nowhere, brushing her ear, threading through her straight black hair."
2"The wildflowers brushed her knees, staining her jeans with pollen that smelled of iron and old rain."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"She spoke (speak)"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.25
81.9680%