Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCVZP91301JDZDTX8K8RKS5

Run Details

Duration:
16m 46s
Cost:
$0.036134
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The deadbolts surrendered one by one. Rory’s fingers moved through the sequence without thought—top, then middle, then bottom—three locks that kept Eva’s flat sealed against Brick Lane’s relentless noise. She pulled the door inward. The smell of fried onions from the curry house below drifted up to meet the scent of old paper and drying ink that lived in the flat’s walls. Her straight black hair fell forward as she stepped back, and her bright blue eyes fixed on the figure in the hallway. Lucien Moreau stood there. No knock. No warning. Just the sharp cut of his charcoal suit against the peeling yellow paint of the corridor. His platinum hair, slicked back with surgical precision, caught the sick bulb overhead. One amber eye burned with focused heat. The other, black as polished obsidian, swallowed the light whole. His ivory-handled cane rested over one shoulder like a sceptre, and the tailored lines of his jacket did nothing to hide the coiled tension in his frame. "Rory." His voice carried the low roll of Marseille, warm and dangerous. She did not move aside. "This building has three deadbolts for a reason." "I have other methods." He stepped past her threshold without invitation, but he did not touch her. The cane tapped once against the wood floor. "Your security is charming, but it was never meant for me." Inside, the cramped flat seemed to freeze. Books climbed the walls in unstable towers. Scrolls pinned between mugs of cold tea. Eva’s frantic research notes—scribbles in four languages—covered every flat surface like snow. Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, slinked out from beneath a stack of grimoires, tail high, then hissed with theatrical disdain at the intruder. "Even the cat remembers you." She crossed her arms over her chest, hiding the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist beneath her sleeve. Lucien’s mouth curved—not a smile, but an acknowledgment of old wounds. "Cats possess excellent memories for betrayal." "You shouldn’t be here." "I needed to see you." The words landed hard. Rory felt them in her ribs. She leaned her shoulder against the door, the wood cold through her shirt. "Eva’s out." "I know. That is why I came." The flat held its breath. Books, scrolls, the rustle of Ptolemy’s tail—everything waited. Rory’s fingers tightened on the doorframe. "You disappeared." "Work demanded my absence." "Don’t." Her voice dropped, sharp as broken glass. "Don’t feed me that polished excuse. You vanished after I told you about Evan. After I told you everything." Lucien set his cane against the wall with deliberate care. The movement revealed nothing, but Rory knew the thin blade concealed within the ivory handle. She had seen it draw once, in an alley behind Golden Empress, and the image had scored into her memory. "You said you needed space." "I said I needed honesty. Space I could have found in a library. Honesty required you to stay." The amber eye held her. The black one studied the scar she tried to hide. "And I gave you silence. That was my error." Ptolemy jumped onto a teetering pile of books and knocked a scroll loose. The parchment rustled like dead leaves in winter. Rory bent to catch it before it hit the floor. Her black hair fell like a curtain. When she straightened, the crescent scar on her left wrist caught the dim light—a pale reminder of childhood accidents and adult failures. "You think showing up fixes it? Unannounced? At Eva’s flat, with your cane and your suit and your four languages?" "I think leaving things broken fixes nothing." She should have thrown him out. Should have unlocked the three deadbolts and pushed him back into the curry-scented hallway. Instead, her back pressed harder against the door, anchoring her. "You hurt me." "I know." He stepped closer. The air between them changed—colder, charged with the dark scent of Avaros that clung to his skin. "If I could take the blade from my cane and carve the hurt from both of us, I would. Without hesitation." "That’s violent." "That is the only honest thing I have left to offer." The cat meowed, a sharp interruption that broke nothing and everything. Rory looked past him, past the books and scrolls and Eva’s chaotic research, to the small window that showed a slice of Brick Lane’s grey sky. "Eva isn’t here to buffer us." "We do not need a buffer." "Don’t assume what I need." But her voice had lost its edge. Lucien reached into his inner pocket. Not for a weapon. For a folded sheet of paper, pressed flat and exact. He held it out between them. "Eva asked me to deliver this. A translation from Marseille." Rory took it. Their fingers brushed—hers warm from the flat’s poor heating, his cool as marble. She left her hand there a second too long. "Read it," he said. She unfolded it. The handwriting was precise, elegant, weaving English with traces of French and something older. Not a translation. A confession. "I shouldn’t." "You should." She read. The words spoke of regret. Of attraction that had terrified him more than any demon realm. Of silence chosen not from indifference, but from fear that she deserved better than a half-demon fixer with blood on his hands. When she looked up, her bright blue eyes held no tears—only a dangerous warmth, like a flame held too close to dry paper. "You came here for this?" "I came here for you. The paper is only an excuse." The flat seemed to freeze. Ptolemy watched from his tower of books. The scroll on the floor rustled again, unsettled by the tension. Rory folded the note with steady fingers and tucked it into her pocket, over her heart. "Then stay. But only for the truth. Nothing else." Lucien’s amber eye caught the light like a live coal. The black one remained unreadable, deep and infinite. "Only the truth," he echoed. She moved away from the door. Not an invitation, but not a dismissal either. The three deadbolts stayed locked behind them, keeping the world out, leaving them alone with everything they had left unsaid.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:48:34.856Z" 7/25/2026, 2:48:34 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags6
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.171
leniency0.343
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1028
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
41.63% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1028
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"tension"
count2
1
word"silence"
count2
2
word"reminder"
count1
3
word"charged"
count1
4
word"chaotic"
count1
5
word"marble"
count1
6
word"warmth"
count1
7
word"unsettled"
count1
8
word"unreadable"
count1
9
word"echoed"
count1
highlights
0"tension"
1"silence"
2"reminder"
3"charged"
4"chaotic"
5"marble"
6"warmth"
7"unsettled"
8"unreadable"
9"echoed"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences76
matches(empty)
86.47% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences76
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
1"tried to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1018
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions7
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
98.72% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions32
wordCount780
uniqueNames13
maxNameDensity1.03
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Eva4
Brick2
Lane2
Moreau1
Marseille1
Lucien5
Ptolemy4
Rory8
Golden1
Empress1
Avaros1
English1
French1
persons
0"Eva"
1"Moreau"
2"Lucien"
3"Ptolemy"
4"Rory"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Marseille"
globalScore0.987
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences57
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords2.947
wordCount1018
matches
0"not a smile, but an acknowledgment of old wounds"
1"not from indifference, but from fear"
2"Not an invitation, but not a dismissal either"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount1
totalSentences105
matches
0"fear that she"
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean18.51
std17.19
cv0.929
sampleLengths
06
178
24
377
41
511
613
736
854
924
1017
114
125
1310
1415
157
1613
178
184
1927
2045
215
2218
2324
2421
2539
2620
277
2830
293
3043
312
3211
3311
3432
356
365
377
3826
3910
4025
414
4220
432
442
452
4640
4723
485
4911
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs129
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount10
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences8
totalSentences105
ratio0.076
matches
0"Rory’s fingers moved through the sequence without thought—top, then middle, then bottom—three locks that kept Eva’s flat sealed against Brick Lane’s relentless noise."
1"Eva’s frantic research notes—scribbles in four languages—covered every flat surface like snow."
2"Lucien’s mouth curved—not a smile, but an acknowledgment of old wounds."
3"Books, scrolls, the rustle of Ptolemy’s tail—everything waited."
4"When she straightened, the crescent scar on her left wrist caught the dim light—a pale reminder of childhood accidents and adult failures."
5"The air between them changed—colder, charged with the dark scent of Avaros that clung to his skin."
6"Their fingers brushed—hers warm from the flat’s poor heating, his cool as marble."
7"When she looked up, her bright blue eyes held no tears—only a dangerous warmth, like a flame held too close to dry paper."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount794
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount25
adverbRatio0.031486146095717885
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.0012594458438287153
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean9.7
std6.49
cv0.67
sampleLengths
06
123
25
328
422
54
62
72
816
913
107
1110
1227
131
1411
155
168
1717
188
1911
207
217
227
2312
2421
2524
2611
276
284
295
304
316
3213
332
347
355
368
376
382
394
408
4119
4210
4315
4420
455
4618
475
4810
499
57.14% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.37142857142857144
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners39
95.24% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences70
matches
0"Just the sharp cut of"
1"Instead, her back pressed harder"
ratio0.029
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount19
totalSentences70
matches
0"She pulled the door inward."
1"Her straight black hair fell"
2"His platinum hair, slicked back"
3"His ivory-handled cane rested over"
4"His voice carried the low"
5"She did not move aside."
6"He stepped past her threshold"
7"She crossed her arms over"
8"She leaned her shoulder against"
9"Her voice dropped, sharp as"
10"She had seen it draw"
11"Her black hair fell like"
12"She should have thrown him"
13"He stepped closer"
14"He held it out between"
15"Their fingers brushed—hers warm from"
16"She left her hand there"
17"She unfolded it."
18"She moved away from the"
ratio0.271
67.14% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount55
totalSentences70
matches
0"The deadbolts surrendered one by"
1"Rory’s fingers moved through the"
2"She pulled the door inward."
3"The smell of fried onions"
4"Her straight black hair fell"
5"Lucien Moreau stood there."
6"His platinum hair, slicked back"
7"The other, black as polished"
8"His ivory-handled cane rested over"
9"His voice carried the low"
10"She did not move aside."
11"He stepped past her threshold"
12"The cane tapped once against"
13"Books climbed the walls in"
14"Scrolls pinned between mugs of"
15"Eva’s frantic research notes—scribbles in"
16"Ptolemy, Eva’s tabby, slinked out"
17"She crossed her arms over"
18"Lucien’s mouth curved—not a smile,"
19"The words landed hard."
ratio0.786
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences70
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"The smell of fried onions from the curry house below drifted up to meet the scent of old paper and drying ink that lived in the flat’s walls."
1"Rory looked past him, past the books and scrolls and Eva’s chaotic research, to the small window that showed a slice of Brick Lane’s grey sky."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags6
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags1
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences35
tagDensity0.029
leniency0.057
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
84.6781%