Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCW1363WCPY5P28K1MQYKVZ

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Duration:
12.8s
Cost:
$0.005020
Provider:
Together

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4417" name="Tomás Herrera" aliases="Tommy, Tomás, Herrera" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Support"> <eyeColor>warm brown</eyeColor> <hair>short curly dark brown</hair> <height>5'10"</height> <age>29</age> <skinTone>olive skin</skinTone> <scar>scar running along his left forearm from a knife attack</scar> <medallion>Saint Christopher medallion around his neck</medallion> <birthplace>Seville, Spain</birthplace> <description>A former paramedic who provides off-the-books medical care for the clique.</description> <backstory>Born in Seville, Spain. He moved to London to work for the NHS but lost his license after administering unauthorized treatments to supernatural patients.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the thriller genre. A detective is pursuing a suspect through rain-soaked city streets at night. The chase takes them from the street level down into an underground market. The detective must decide whether to follow the suspect into unfamiliar and potentially dangerous territory. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
Rain turned Soho into a mirror world, neon bleeding red and gold across the asphalt. Detective Harlow Quinn kept her head down, collar up against the slanting cold, her worn leather watch catching a brief flicker under a streetlamp. The suspect—tall, hooded, moving with the liquid urgency of someone who knew every alley—was already half a block ahead, weaving through the midnight foot traffic on Dean Street. Quinn accelerated. Her boots struck solid rhythm, military precision in every stride. The sharp cut of her jaw was set like flint. "Quinn, wait!" The voice came from behind, breathless. Tomás Herrera caught her elbow, his olive skin gleaming with rain and sweat, dark curls plastered to his forehead. The Saint Christopher medallion at his throat caught the light. "You don't want to follow him down there." "I'm not asking for a medical opinion." She shrugged him off. "I wasn't offering medicine. I'm telling you that scar on my arm wasn't for fun." He gestured to the raised white line along his left forearm. "That market—" "I know what it is." "Then you know bone tokens, Harlow. You need one to enter. You need one to leave unbroken. You're walking into a room with no doors." The suspect—she'd been tracking him for three nights, linking him to the disappearances near Camden—glanced back once, brown eyes wide with recognition, then bolted toward the Raven's Nest. The green neon sign above the entrance buzzed and spat in the rain, casting an otherworldly glow across the wet brick. Quinn ignored Tomás's warning and followed. The bar smelled of old whiskey and older secrets, walls covered with yellowed maps and black-and-white photographs of London before the Blitz. The suspect didn't brake for the bar; he moved straight through, past Silas behind the counter, toward the back wall lined with bookshelves. His palm pressed a hidden catch. The shelf swung inward. A stairwell yawned downward, smelling of rust and cool stone. Quinn hesitated only long enough to feel Tomás's presence behind her, his warm breath near her shoulder. "He went down to the Veil Market," Tomás said quietly. "The old Tube station beneath Camden. It moves every full moon. You don't have the token." Quinn's hand went to her coat pocket. Her partner's badge—DS Morris—pressed cold and familiar against her ribs, a talisman and a wound three years old. She'd lost Morris somewhere in this hidden architecture, somewhere between the law she served and the darkness it refused to name. "I'm going," she said. She stepped through the hidden doorway in the bookshelf and descended. The stairwell spiraled into blackness, each step echoing. The air grew colder, smelling of iron and something sweeter, like burning herbs. Below, a cavernous space opened—the abandoned Tube station, its arches ribbed with velvet darkness and hanging lanterns. The Veil Market. Tables stretched into shadow, draped in black cloth, displaying goods she couldn't fully parse—silver vials, bones carved with languages, books that seemed to breathe. Figures in long cloaks moved with purpose, their faces half-hidden. Enchanted goods gleamed in the gloom. Banned alchemical substances bubbled in glass tubes. Information, her quarry's true currency, was being traded in whispers. Quinn's heart hammered with the old, precise discipline of pursuit, but her stomach turned with something sharper. Unfamiliar territory. Dangerous. She had no bone token. No exit promised. There—twenty yards ahead, near a stall selling what looked like bottled memories—the suspect turned, seeing her through the crowd. His face twisted not with guilt but with terror. He shoved through the vendors, knocking over a table of crystalline vials that shattered like ice. Quinn pursued, her boots loud on the damp stone. The crowd parted not out of courtesy but recognition—she wore no cloak, no mask, no token. She was an intruder, and they knew it. She reached the platform's center, breath fogging, when the suspect slipped through a tunnel arch painted with faded Underground signs. Quinn stopped. The tunnel was narrow, unlit, and beyond it lay not just darkness but a deeper wrongness—a pressure in the air that made her teeth ache, the same pressure that had surrounded Morris on the night he died. She looked back. Tomás stood at the stairwell's mouth, rain dripping from his hair, the St. Christopher medallion dark in the gloom. "You can still come back up," he called. "Before they close the gate." Quinn's brown eyes—sharp, exhausted, forty-one years old and carrying eighteen decorated years—held his across the distance. "My partner came through a gate like this," she said, her voice carrying in the hollow space. "I'm not leaving anyone else behind it." She stepped into the tunnel after the suspect, the darkness closing around her like a mouth.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
57.14% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags7
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Tomás said quietly [quietly]"
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.5
leniency1
rawRatio0.143
effectiveRatio0.143
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount794
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
30.73% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount794
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"flicker"
count1
1
word"gleaming"
count1
2
word"otherworldly"
count1
3
word"familiar"
count1
4
word"echoing"
count1
5
word"velvet"
count1
6
word"gloom"
count2
7
word"stomach"
count1
8
word"crystalline"
count1
9
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"flicker"
1"gleaming"
2"otherworldly"
3"familiar"
4"echoing"
5"velvet"
6"gloom"
7"stomach"
8"crystalline"
9"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
95.24% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences56
matches
0"t with guilt"
1"t with terror"
91.84% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences56
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences63
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords780
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
82.33% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions36
wordCount665
uniqueNames21
maxNameDensity1.35
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Soho1
Harlow1
Quinn9
Dean1
Street1
Tomás5
Herrera1
Saint1
Christopher2
Camden1
Raven1
Nest1
London1
Blitz1
Silas1
Morris3
Tube1
Veil1
Market1
Underground1
St1
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Tomás"
3"Herrera"
4"Saint"
5"Silas"
6"Morris"
places
0"Soho"
1"Dean"
2"Street"
3"Raven"
4"London"
5"St"
globalScore0.823
windowScore1
33.72% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences43
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"books that seemed to breathe"
1"looked like bottled memories—the suspect"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches3
per1kWords3.846
wordCount780
matches
0"not with guilt but with terror"
1"not out of courtesy but recognition"
2"not just darkness but a deeper wrongness"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences63
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs30
mean26
std17.08
cv0.657
sampleLengths
067
122
245
311
428
55
625
749
86
951
1014
1117
1226
1346
144
1511
1638
173
1857
1928
2044
2133
2220
232
2437
2522
2613
2716
2824
2916
99.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences56
matches
0"being traded"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs117
matches(empty)
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences10
totalSentences63
ratio0.159
matches
0"The suspect—tall, hooded, moving with the liquid urgency of someone who knew every alley—was already half a block ahead, weaving through the midnight foot traffic on Dean Street."
1"The suspect—she'd been tracking him for three nights, linking him to the disappearances near Camden—glanced back once, brown eyes wide with recognition, then bolted toward the Raven's Nest."
2"The suspect didn't brake for the bar; he moved straight through, past Silas behind the counter, toward the back wall lined with bookshelves."
3"Her partner's badge—DS Morris—pressed cold and familiar against her ribs, a talisman and a wound three years old."
4"Below, a cavernous space opened—the abandoned Tube station, its arches ribbed with velvet darkness and hanging lanterns."
5"Tables stretched into shadow, draped in black cloth, displaying goods she couldn't fully parse—silver vials, bones carved with languages, books that seemed to breathe."
6"There—twenty yards ahead, near a stall selling what looked like bottled memories—the suspect turned, seeing her through the crowd."
7"The crowd parted not out of courtesy but recognition—she wore no cloak, no mask, no token."
8"The tunnel was narrow, unlit, and beyond it lay not just darkness but a deeper wrongness—a pressure in the air that made her teeth ache, the same pressure that had surrounded Morris on the night he died."
9"Quinn's brown eyes—sharp, exhausted, forty-one years old and carrying eighteen decorated years—held his across the distance."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount683
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount16
adverbRatio0.02342606149341142
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.005856515373352855
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences63
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences63
mean12.38
std7.91
cv0.639
sampleLengths
015
124
228
32
410
510
68
719
810
98
1011
1126
122
135
1425
1528
1621
176
1822
1923
206
214
2210
2317
2410
2516
267
2718
2821
294
3011
318
3213
3317
343
3524
3610
376
387
3910
4017
412
421
435
443
4519
469
4716
489
4916
63.49% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.42857142857142855
totalSentences63
uniqueOpeners27
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount15
totalSentences50
matches
0"Her boots struck solid rhythm,"
1"She shrugged him off"
2"He gestured to the raised"
3"His palm pressed a hidden"
4"Her partner's badge—DS Morris—pressed cold"
5"She'd lost Morris somewhere in"
6"She stepped through the hidden"
7"She had no bone token."
8"His face twisted not with"
9"He shoved through the vendors,"
10"She was an intruder, and"
11"She reached the platform's center,"
12"She looked back."
13"she said, her voice carrying"
14"She stepped into the tunnel"
ratio0.3
10.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences50
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn kept her"
1"The suspect—tall, hooded, moving with"
2"Her boots struck solid rhythm,"
3"The sharp cut of her"
4"The voice came from behind,"
5"Tomás Herrera caught her elbow,"
6"The Saint Christopher medallion at"
7"She shrugged him off"
8"He gestured to the raised"
9"The suspect—she'd been tracking him"
10"The green neon sign above"
11"Quinn ignored Tomás's warning and"
12"The bar smelled of old"
13"The suspect didn't brake for"
14"His palm pressed a hidden"
15"The shelf swung inward."
16"A stairwell yawned downward, smelling"
17"Quinn hesitated only long enough"
18"Tomás said quietly"
19"Quinn's hand went to her"
ratio0.9
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences50
matches(empty)
ratio0
47.62% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences30
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"The suspect—tall, hooded, moving with the liquid urgency of someone who knew every alley—was already half a block ahead, weaving through the midnight foot traff…"
1"Tables stretched into shadow, draped in black cloth, displaying goods she couldn't fully parse—silver vials, bones carved with languages, books that seemed to b…"
2"He shoved through the vendors, knocking over a table of crystalline vials that shattered like ice."
3"The tunnel was narrow, unlit, and beyond it lay not just darkness but a deeper wrongness—a pressure in the air that made her teeth ache, the same pressure that …"
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags7
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"The voice came, breathless"
1"she said, her voice carrying in the hollow space"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences14
tagDensity0.286
leniency0.571
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
70.3703%