Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCW18X9H1TV16KJSPA1Q6JR

Run Details

Duration:
32.4s
Cost:
$0.040308
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4413" name="Silas Blackwood" aliases="Silas, Si, the Spymaster" pronouns="he/him" species="Human" storyRole="Mentor"> <eyeColor>hazel</eyeColor> <hair>grey-streaked auburn</hair> <height>6'1"</height> <age>58</age> <beard>neatly trimmed, matching his grey-streaked auburn hair</beard> <limp>slight limp in his left leg from an old knee injury</limp> <signetRing>silver signet ring, always worn on his right hand</signetRing> <description>Silas is a retired intelligence operative turned bar owner. He carries himself with quiet authority.</description> <backstory>Former MI6 field agent who retired after a botched operation in Prague left him with a permanent knee injury. He opened "The Raven's Nest" bar in Soho as a front for his network of contacts.</backstory> </character> <location id="854" name="The Raven's Nest" aliases="the Nest, Raven, Silas' bar" realm="Earth"> <signColor>distinctive green neon sign above the entrance</signColor> <secretRoom>hidden back room accessible through a bookshelf, used for clandestine meetings</secretRoom> <description>A dimly lit bar in Soho, London. The walls are covered with old maps and black-and-white photographs.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the literary fiction genre. Two old friends who haven't seen each other in years run into each other unexpectedly at a bar. One of them has changed significantly. Through their conversation and the tension between who they were and who they've become, reveal the weight of time and unspoken regret. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rain hammered the stained-glass transom above the heavy oak door, throwing fractured green shadows across the floorboards of The Raven’s Nest. Behind the counter, Silas polished a heavy crystal tumbler with a linen cloth, the silver signet ring on his right hand clicking against the glass in a slow, hypnotic rhythm. Rory leaned against the service station, her black hair tucked behind one ear, her bright blue eyes scanning the handful of regulars scattered among the dark velvet booths. The brass chime above the door chimed. Damp air filled the entryway, bringing with it the sharpness of Soho asphalt and wet wool. A tall man stepped over the threshold, shaking out a collapsible umbrella with a sharp snap. Tailored charcoal wool draped over broad shoulders. Fine leather shoes clicked against the dark floorboards, pristine despite the deluge outside. He paused under the glow of the neon sign, shaking raindrops from a slicked head of sandy hair. Rory dropped the bar towel onto the zinc drainboard. The man straightened his silk tie, his gaze sweeping the old maps lining the walls before landing on the bar. He froze. The umbrella slipped an inch in his grip. "Rory?" Rory kept her hands flat on the polished mahogany. Her pulse flicked twice against her left wrist, right over the crescent scar tucked under her black jersey sleeve. "Julian." He walked forward, each step deliberate, the rain-damped wool of his coat releasing the crisp scent of expensive cedar and clove. The scruffy, round-shouldered student who spent nights sleeping on the floor of the Cardiff University law library was gone. In his place stood a man smoothed down by money and bespoke tailoring, his posture rigid, his chin lifted with calculated authority. "It really is you," Julian said. He took a seat on the oak stool opposite her, resting his elbows on the counter. A gold watch gleamed under the amber pendant light. "Eva swore you were in London, but nobody believed her. Brendan told everyone you went off to Ireland." Silas set down his glass. His hazel eyes lingered on Julian’s coat, then moved to Rory, his grey-streaked auburn beard twitching as his jaw set. He reached for a bottle of dark rye without breaking gaze. "My father speaks when he should listen," Rory said. "It keeps him busy." Julian’s eyes roved over her face, taking in the faint shadow beneath her eyes, the simple black shirt, the absence of the silver fountain pen she used to keep tucked into her hair during tort lectures. "You look... different," Julian said. "You look expensive." Julian let out a short, sharp breath that didn't reach his eyes. He glanced at Silas, who pushed a coaster across the bar and poured a finger of rye into a clean glass. "Just the rye," Julian said to Silas, setting a twenty-pound note on the counter. "Thank you." Silas swept the note away without a word, his slight limp evident as he moved down the bar toward the tap handles, leaving them a cavern of quiet in the dim room. "Five years," Julian said, his fingers tracing the rim of his glass. "No phone call. No address. You vanished off the face of Cathays Park like you never existed." "I packed a bag," Rory said. "It didn't take five years to do that." "We had a seat reserved for you at the firm," Julian said. His voice dropped, losing some of its corporate polish, sliding back toward the soft Welsh lilt he used to fight so hard to hide. "Old man Vance held the junior clerkship open for three months. He thought you were taking a gap term. Then the rumors started about Evan." Rory’s knuckles turned white against the bar frame. "Evan has nothing to do with this." "Doesn't he?" Julian leaned in, the gold on his wrist catching the light. "He came to my flat three nights in a row, Rory. He looked like hell. Crying on my sofa, swearing he didn't know why you left, begging me for your mother's address in Swansea." Rory felt the air leave her chest in a thin, cold draft. She remembered the sound of keycards clicking, the weight of the bolt locking from the outside, the taste of copper on her tongue while Evan explained why she wasn't allowed to attend her own graduation ceremony. "Evan is a master of grief when he has an audience," Rory said. Julian searched her face, his brow furrowing. For a second, the sleek lawyer vanished, replaced by the boy who used to split four-pound fried breakfasts with her behind the student union while they argued over human rights charters. "He said you had a breakdown," Julian whispered. "He said the pressure got to you." "And you believed him." Julian pulled back, his jaw tightening into a sharp line. He picked up his glass, taking a slow sip, letting the amber liquid sit on his tongue before swallowing. "I didn't know what to believe," Julian said. "You were the top of our year. You had the highest moot court scores in the university’s history. You talked about taking down corporate landlords until your throat went raw. And then you disappeared, and Evan was the only one left standing in the lecture hall, picking up the pieces." "He didn't pick up pieces," Rory said. "He collected trophies." Julian set his glass down with a heavy clink. "I'm a senior associate at Carter & Finch now," Julian said. His voice was flat, defensive. "I handle commercial leases for foreign investment funds. I have an apartment in Fitzrovia. I pay a mortgage." "Congratulations," Rory said. "You became everything we spent three years laughing at." Julian’s eyes flashed with a sudden, hot anger that cut through his polished exterior. "I survived," Julian snapped, keeping his tone low so it wouldn't carry to the regulars. "I took the path that was offered. You think it's noble sitting behind a bar in Soho wiping down spilled beer? You think you're better than me because you threw your life away?" "I didn't throw it away," Rory said, leaning over the counter until she was inches from his face, her blue eyes blazing like fresh ice. "I saved it." Julian stared at her, the color rising in his neck. His hands trembled slightly against the wood, the tailored cuffs slipping back to reveal a faint, red scratch near his thumb—a fresh paper cut from a stack of legal briefs. "You were brilliant, Rory," Julian said, the anger draining out of him, replaced by a gray, heavy exhaustion that made him look ten years older than twenty-five. "We were going to change things. You, me, Eva. We had plans." "Plans are for people who can afford the future," Rory said. "I needed to survive the night." Silas returned, dropping a second glass onto the bar in front of Rory. He poured two fingers of amber spirit from a dark, unlabelled bottle, his hazel eyes locking onto Julian with quiet, heavy warning. "Time's catching up, gents," Silas said, his voice like gravel grinding under a boot. "Last orders were ten minutes ago." Julian looked at Silas, taking in the old operative's broad shoulders, the neat beard, the silver ring, and the cold stillness that radiated off him like heat from a radiator. He looked back at Rory, his gaze falling on her bare wrist where the black sleeve had pulled back, exposing the tiny, curved white line of her childhood scar alongside fresh, hard calluses from carrying heavy trays. "Your mother still asks about you," Julian said softly. He didn't touch his glass. "I ran into her at the law society dinner in Cardiff last Christmas. She looked tired, Rory. Really tired." Rory's throat worked, but no sound came out. She picked up the shot glass Silas had poured, her fingers steady, and downed it in one smooth burn. "Tell her I'm alive," Rory said, setting the empty glass down without a sound. "That's all she needs to know." Julian stared at her for a long, silent moment. He reached into his breast pocket, pulled out a thick leather card holder, and slid a heavy cream card across the mahogany. "I'm in town until Friday," Julian said. "We're closing a deal on a hotel chain in Bloomsbury. If you... if you ever want to finish that debate about tort reform." Rory looked at the card. *Julian Vance, LL.B. Senior Associate.* "Goodnight, Julian," she said. Julian stood up, buttoning his coat with swift, precise motions. He picked up his umbrella, holding it tightly by the silver handle. He looked around the dimly lit room one last time, taking in the dusty photographs of forgotten streets and old wars, then turned back to Rory. "You were the best of us," Julian said. He didn't wait for an answer. He turned and walked out, his polished shoes silent on the wet floorboards. The brass chime chimed once as the door opened, letting in a swirl of rain and street noise, then clicked shut, sealing the Raven's Nest back into silence. Silas reached out, picked up the cream business card between two broad fingers, and held it over the glass ashtray near the register. He looked at Rory, waiting. Rory reached out and took the card from his hand, sliding it into her back pocket without looking at it, then grabbed her wiping cloth and turned back to the dark mahogany counter.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:49:26.707Z" 7/25/2026, 2:49:26 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags24
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Julian said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.49
leniency0.98
rawRatio0.042
effectiveRatio0.041
84.12% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1574
totalAiIsmAdverbs5
found
0
adverb"really"
count2
1
adverb"slightly"
count1
2
adverb"softly"
count1
3
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"really"
1"slightly"
2"softly"
3"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (16 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions
0"Blackwood"
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
52.35% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1574
totalAiIsms15
found
0
word"fractured"
count1
1
word"crystal"
count1
2
word"scanning"
count1
3
word"velvet"
count1
4
word"pristine"
count1
5
word"silk"
count1
6
word"pulse"
count1
7
word"flicked"
count1
8
word"calculated"
count1
9
word"tracing"
count1
10
word"lilt"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"furrowing"
count1
13
word"trembled"
count1
14
word"silence"
count1
highlights
0"fractured"
1"crystal"
2"scanning"
3"velvet"
4"pristine"
5"silk"
6"pulse"
7"flicked"
8"calculated"
9"tracing"
10"lilt"
11"weight"
12"furrowing"
13"trembled"
14"silence"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"knuckles turned white"
count1
highlights
0"knuckles turned white"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences85
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences85
filterMatches
0"look"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences110
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen50
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans1
markdownWords5
totalWords1573
ratio0.003
matches
0"Julian Vance, LL.B. Senior Associate."
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions27
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
0.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions68
wordCount1134
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity2.38
worstName"Julian"
maxWindowNameDensity5
worstWindowName"Julian"
discoveredNames
Raven2
Nest2
Silas10
Soho1
Cardiff1
University1
Julian27
Rory21
Welsh1
Evan1
Vance1
persons
0"Raven"
1"Nest"
2"Silas"
3"Julian"
4"Rory"
5"Evan"
6"Vance"
places
0"Soho"
1"Cardiff"
globalScore0.31
windowScore0
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount1573
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences110
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs56
mean28.09
std18.45
cv0.657
sampleLengths
079
123
254
39
430
51
628
71
862
949
1036
1113
1236
135
143
1533
1616
1732
1829
1914
2061
218
227
2347
2448
2513
2638
2715
284
2929
3058
3110
329
3334
3412
3514
3648
3728
3840
3939
4017
4135
4220
4367
4433
4527
4620
4731
4830
4910
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences85
matches
0"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs192
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences110
ratio0.009
matches
0"His hands trembled slightly against the wood, the tailored cuffs slipping back to reveal a faint, red scratch near his thumb—a fresh paper cut from a stack of legal briefs."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1142
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"scruffy, round-shouldered student"
adverbCount23
adverbRatio0.020140105078809107
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0035026269702276708
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences110
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences110
mean14.3
std9.79
cv0.685
sampleLengths
021
130
228
37
416
516
67
713
818
99
1020
112
128
131
149
1519
161
1721
1819
1922
206
2116
229
2318
245
2520
2611
279
284
2936
305
313
3212
3321
3414
352
3632
3712
3817
396
408
4112
4224
4325
448
457
4613
4734
4812
4936
50.91% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats9
diversityRatio0.35454545454545455
totalSentences110
uniqueOpeners39
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
90.59% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences68
matches
0"He paused under the glow"
1"Her pulse flicked twice against"
2"He walked forward, each step"
3"He took a seat on"
4"His hazel eyes lingered on"
5"He reached for a bottle"
6"He glanced at Silas, who"
7"His voice dropped, losing some"
8"She remembered the sound of"
9"He picked up his glass,"
10"His voice was flat, defensive."
11"His hands trembled slightly against"
12"He poured two fingers of"
13"He looked back at Rory,"
14"He didn't touch his glass."
15"She picked up the shot"
16"He reached into his breast"
17"He picked up his umbrella,"
18"He looked around the dimly"
19"He didn't wait for an"
ratio0.324
11.47% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount61
totalSentences68
matches
0"Rory leaned against the service"
1"The brass chime above the"
2"A tall man stepped over"
3"He paused under the glow"
4"Rory dropped the bar towel"
5"The man straightened his silk"
6"The umbrella slipped an inch"
7"Rory kept her hands flat"
8"Her pulse flicked twice against"
9"He walked forward, each step"
10"The scruffy, round-shouldered student who"
11"He took a seat on"
12"A gold watch gleamed under"
13"Silas set down his glass."
14"His hazel eyes lingered on"
15"He reached for a bottle"
16"Julian’s eyes roved over her"
17"Julian let out a short,"
18"He glanced at Silas, who"
19"Julian said to Silas, setting"
ratio0.897
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences68
matches(empty)
ratio0
20.91% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"The man straightened his silk tie, his gaze sweeping the old maps lining the walls before landing on the bar."
1"The scruffy, round-shouldered student who spent nights sleeping on the floor of the Cardiff University law library was gone."
2"For a second, the sleek lawyer vanished, replaced by the boy who used to split four-pound fried breakfasts with her behind the student union while they argued o…"
3"He picked up his glass, taking a slow sip, letting the amber liquid sit on his tongue before swallowing."
4"Julian looked at Silas, taking in the old operative's broad shoulders, the neat beard, the silver ring, and the cold stillness that radiated off him like heat f…"
5"He looked back at Rory, his gaze falling on her bare wrist where the black sleeve had pulled back, exposing the tiny, curved white line of her childhood scar al…"
6"Rory reached out and took the card from his hand, sliding it into her back pocket without looking at it, then grabbed her wiping cloth and turned back to the da…"
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags24
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Julian said, his fingers tracing the rim of his glass"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags23
fancyCount2
fancyTags
0"Julian whispered (whisper)"
1"Julian snapped (snap)"
dialogueSentences49
tagDensity0.469
leniency0.939
rawRatio0.087
effectiveRatio0.082
80.1447%