Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCW3CV26T0K1C4XNSN437GJ

Run Details

Duration:
25.6s
Cost:
$0.030192
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Water dripped from a rusted iron girder sixty feet below Camden High Street, striking the concrete with the rhythmic tick of a dead clock. Harlow Quinn adjusted the collar of her coat against the subterranean draught. Moisture clung to her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair, glistening under the stark glare of halogen work lights. She checked the worn leather watch on her left wrist. Two in the morning. "Mugged by local junkies, ma'am." Detective Sergeant Vance pointed a gloved finger at the body sprawled across the disused platform tracks. "Slipped through the security grate up on Buck Street. Throat cut, coat pockets ripped out, left for dead on the ballast." Harlow didn't answer. She walked the edge of the pit with military precision, her dark eyes sweeping the curved Victorian tile work. Victorian white enamel, yellowed by a century of coal smoke and brake dust, lined the arched walls of the abandoned Tube station. "Look at the entry point," Vance continued, following her heels. "Grate was pried open with a crowbar. Found footprints in the mud near the access shaft. Boots, size ten, heavily worn tread. Matches the usual crew that squats down here when the nights turn cold." Harlow crouched by the rails, her knees cracking in the damp air. "Size ten boots don't leave four-inch stride gaps while carrying a two-hundred-pound man down a vertical iron ladder without leaving chalk on the rungs." Her voice cut through the hum of the portable generator. "Look at the ladder." Vance squinted up into the shadow of the ventilation shaft. "The rust on those iron rungs remains unbroken." Harlow reached out, running a gloved finger along the lower rung. Dry dust coated her glove. "Nobody came down that shaft tonight, Sergeant." "Then the side service tunnel from the Northern Line—" "Padlocked from the outside." Harlow pointed toward the heavy iron door twenty yards down the tunnel. The heavy padlock hung intact, coated in thick, grey cobwebs that stretched continuously across the jamb. "No one broke that seal." Vance clicked his tongue, shifting his weight. "So how'd he get down here?" Harlow turned her focus back to the corpse. The dead man lay faceup across the steel rails, his arms outstretched like an abandoned doll. His clothes were soaked, but not from the dripping ceiling. "Where is the blood?" Harlow touched the hem of the dead man's heavy wool overcoat. "What do you mean?" Vance gestured at the dark stain blooming beneath the body. "Platform's soaked with it." "Smell it." Vance frowned, leaning down slightly, then winced, taking a step back. "Smells like sulfur. Chemical runoff from the street?" "Offal and ozone." Harlow unbuttoned her jacket, exposing her sharp jawline as she leaned closer to the victim's chest. She picked up a wooden tongue depressor from her kit, carefully parting the slashed fabric of the shirt. "The chest wound didn't bleed. The tissue along the edges is cauterized. Blackened. Like grease hitting a hot frying pan." She tipped the victim's chin back. No ligature marks, but three fine, parallel scratches ran along the curve of his throat, glowing with a faint, iridescent film that caught the blue tint of the police lamps. "This man didn't bleed out," Harlow said. "Something drained him before he hit the ground." "Drained him?" Vance scoffed, shaking his head. "Detective, it's a murder in an underground vault. The place attracts miscreants. We found a bone in his coat pocket." Harlow raised an eyebrow. "Show me." Vance pulled a clear specimen bag from his pocket and tossed it toward her. Harlow caught it cleanly. Inside sat a flat piece of polished ivory, no larger than a coin, carved with jagged, interlocking runes along its perimeter. A smooth thumb-groove was worn into its centre. "Street trinket," Vance said. "Probably picked it up at Camden Market before he took a wrong turn." "This isn't sheep bone." Harlow held the bag up to the halogen light, examining the porous density of the cut edge. "Human femur. Radius at the youngest." A floorboard creaked somewhere in the gloom beyond the perimeter lamps. Harlow stood immediately, her hand dropping to the holster at her hip. Her posture locked, shoulders back, chin tucked. "Who else is down here?" "Just the forensics team back by the lift shaft," Vance said, turning around. "Hey! Who's that?" A shadow detached itself from the gloom of the old ticket booth forty feet up the platform incline. A beam from a flash-lamp cut through the haze, revealing a young woman pinned against the tiled wall. She clutched a heavy, worn leather satchel to her chest like a shield. "Don't shoot!" The woman pulled off her round glasses, wiping them frantically on her sleeve before jamming them back onto her face. Her green eyes wide, her freckled nose caught the glint of the blue lamps. Curly red hair spilled out from beneath a knitted cap. "I have clearance—well, not police clearance, but historical access—" "Hold it right there," Vance barked, unclipping his baton. "Stand down, Sergeant," Harlow ordered sharply. She stepped past the yellow police tape, her boots crunching on the gravel. "You're Eva Kowalski." The young woman froze, tucking a stray red curl behind her left ear. "Detective Quinn?" Eva looked past Harlow toward the body on the tracks. "You shouldn't be disturbing the ground. Not on a night like this." "You're a long way from the British Museum, Miss Kowalski." Harlow didn't relax her stance. "And this is an active crime scene." "It's not a crime scene." Eva took a cautious step forward, her satchel clanking with the weight of heavy books inside. "It's a doorway. Or it was, until three hours ago." "Doorway?" Vance laughed, though the sound died quickly in the vast damp air of the station. "It's an abandoned Tube stop. Hasn't seen a passenger since 1924." "It saw dozens of passengers last month," Eva said, her eyes fixated on the bone token in Harlow's hand. "They don't buy tickets with sterling, Sergeant." Harlow watched the girl carefully. The twitch in Eva's finger, the nervous shifting of her feet—not guilt, but terror. The same terror Harlow had seen three years ago in the eyes of DS Morris before he vanished into thin air inside an empty warehouse on the docks. "Explain the mark on his neck," Harlow demanded. Eva pulled a thick, leather-bound volume halfway out of her satchel, pointing to an inked diagram on a yellowed page. "Salt-burns," Eva said softly. "From a shade-cleaver. Someone tried to skip the toll." Harlow turned back to the body. She knelt once more, ignoring Vance's muttered protests. She reached inside the inner lining of the dead man's jacket, where the fabric felt unusually stiff. Her fingers brushed against cold metal. She pulled out a small brass object, no larger than a pocket watch. Green verdigris caked the edges, but the face remained polished to a mirror shine. Etched sigils circled the outer rim instead of numbers, and the single needle swung wildly, refusing to settle on north. Harlow held the brass casing in her palm. The needle spun three times counterclockwise, then pointed directly at the dark mouth of the eastern tunnel. "What is that?" Vance asked, leaning over her shoulder. "The Veil Compass," Eva whispered from the edge of the light. "It doesn't measure terrestrial magnetism, Detective. It tracks the tear." Harlow closed her fist around the cold brass. A faint hum vibrated through the metal, vibrating against the skin of her palm, mirroring the steady, rhythmic dripping of the water overhead. "Sergeant," Harlow said, her voice dropping an octave, completely devoid of doubt. "Clear the forensics team out of the tunnel." "Ma'am?" "Clear them out now." Harlow stood up, her brown eyes fixed on the black void of the eastern track line where the needle pointed. "The killer didn't leave through the street grate."
created_at"2026-07-25T14:50:36.266Z" 7/25/2026, 2:50:36 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags26
adverbTagCount2
adverbTags
0"Harlow ordered sharply [sharply]"
1"Eva said softly [softly]"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.456
leniency0.912
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.07
73.28% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1310
totalAiIsmAdverbs7
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"carefully"
count2
2
adverb"sharply"
count1
3
adverb"quickly"
count1
4
adverb"softly"
count1
5
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"slightly"
1"carefully"
2"sharply"
3"quickly"
4"softly"
5"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
54.20% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1310
totalAiIsms12
found
0
word"rhythmic"
count2
1
word"glistening"
count1
2
word"stark"
count1
3
word"weight"
count2
4
word"eyebrow"
count1
5
word"gloom"
count2
6
word"glint"
count1
7
word"etched"
count1
8
word"vibrated"
count1
highlights
0"rhythmic"
1"glistening"
2"stark"
3"weight"
4"eyebrow"
5"gloom"
6"glint"
7"etched"
8"vibrated"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences77
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences77
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences107
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen37
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1308
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
11.73% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions56
wordCount904
uniqueNames12
maxNameDensity2.77
worstName"Harlow"
maxWindowNameDensity4
worstWindowName"Harlow"
discoveredNames
Camden1
High1
Street1
Quinn1
Sergeant1
Vance14
Harlow25
Victorian2
Tube1
Dry1
Eva7
Morris1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Sergeant"
2"Vance"
3"Harlow"
4"Eva"
5"Morris"
places
0"Camden"
1"High"
2"Street"
globalScore0.117
windowScore0.333
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences61
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
47.09% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches2
per1kWords1.529
wordCount1308
matches
0"not police clearance, but historical access"
1"not guilt, but terror"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs55
mean23.78
std15.23
cv0.64
sampleLengths
053
114
242
344
445
512
638
710
831
99
1037
117
126
1334
1415
1518
162
1711
188
1957
2036
2115
2227
234
242
2547
2617
2727
2811
2919
305
3116
3249
3355
349
3522
3613
3724
3822
3931
4027
4126
4247
438
4420
4513
4637
4747
4825
499
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences77
matches
0"was worn"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs148
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences107
ratio0.009
matches
0"The twitch in Eva's finger, the nervous shifting of her feet—not guilt, but terror."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount910
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"thick, leather-bound volume"
adverbCount26
adverbRatio0.02857142857142857
lyAdverbCount16
lyAdverbRatio0.017582417582417582
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences107
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences107
mean12.22
std6.96
cv0.569
sampleLengths
024
112
217
310
44
521
621
73
819
922
1010
1135
1212
1334
144
1510
1619
175
187
199
2016
2116
225
237
246
258
2616
2710
2815
2914
304
312
3211
338
3419
3518
3620
376
3830
397
408
417
4220
434
442
4514
464
4721
488
494
86.29% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats6
diversityRatio0.5514018691588785
totalSentences107
uniqueOpeners59
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount14
totalSentences74
matches
0"She checked the worn leather"
1"She walked the edge of"
2"Her voice cut through the"
3"His clothes were soaked, but"
4"She picked up a wooden"
5"She tipped the victim's chin"
6"Her posture locked, shoulders back,"
7"She clutched a heavy, worn"
8"Her green eyes wide, her"
9"She stepped past the yellow"
10"She knelt once more, ignoring"
11"She reached inside the inner"
12"Her fingers brushed against cold"
13"She pulled out a small"
ratio0.189
7.30% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences74
matches
0"Water dripped from a rusted"
1"Harlow Quinn adjusted the collar"
2"Moisture clung to her closely"
3"She checked the worn leather"
4"Detective Sergeant Vance pointed a"
5"Harlow didn't answer."
6"She walked the edge of"
7"Victorian white enamel, yellowed by"
8"Vance continued, following her heels"
9"Harlow crouched by the rails,"
10"Her voice cut through the"
11"Vance squinted up into the"
12"Harlow reached out, running a"
13"Harlow pointed toward the heavy"
14"The heavy padlock hung intact,"
15"Vance clicked his tongue, shifting"
16"Harlow turned her focus back"
17"The dead man lay faceup"
18"His clothes were soaked, but"
19"Harlow touched the hem of"
ratio0.905
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
79.83% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences34
technicalSentenceCount3
matches
0"The heavy padlock hung intact, coated in thick, grey cobwebs that stretched continuously across the jamb."
1"No ligature marks, but three fine, parallel scratches ran along the curve of his throat, glowing with a faint, iridescent film that caught the blue tint of the …"
2"A faint hum vibrated through the metal, vibrating against the skin of her palm, mirroring the steady, rhythmic dripping of the water overhead."
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags26
uselessAdditionCount2
matches
0"Eva took, her satchel clanking with the weight of heavy books inside"
1"Harlow said, her voice dropping an octave, completely devoid of doubt"
44.74% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount6
fancyTags
0"Vance continued (continue)"
1"Vance barked (bark)"
2"Harlow ordered sharply (order)"
3"Vance laughed (laugh)"
4"Harlow demanded (demand)"
5"Eva whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences57
tagDensity0.228
leniency0.456
rawRatio0.462
effectiveRatio0.211
79.5000%