Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCW3PQ3KFSP8WTS1N3J7FE8

Run Details

Duration:
31.1s
Cost:
$0.035022
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The brickwork didn't yield, but the air before it curdled. Quinn felt the temperature plummet instantly, her breath blooming into a thick plume of white vapor. The heavy scent of iron and crushed lavender washed over the tunnel, drowning out the stale smell of damp earth and ozone. Miller backed up two full paces, his heels cracking against the iron rails. "Harlow. Look at the wall." The dark mortar was weeping. Black, viscous droplets seeped from the joints between the red bricks, crawling downward against gravity, pooling upward along the curve of the arch. Where the fluid touched the air, it hissed, hardening into crystalline needles of dark ice. Quinn kept her footing, her left hand hovering an inch above her holster while her right tightened around her flashlamp. "Stay back, Miller." "We're getting out of here. Right now." Miller's voice cracked, dropping his badge of official composure. "This is compromised. The whole structure could be—" "Shut up and watch." The shadow cast by her beam against the brick wall didn't match her stance. The silhouette projected onto the Victorian masonry remained motionless, even as Quinn took a half-step forward. The shadow's arms were folded neatly behind its back, its frame taller, broader—a man's silhouette wearing a long coat and a peaked cap. DS Morris. Quinn's heart hammered a heavy, deliberate rhythm against her ribs, but her hands stayed steady. "Miller. Do you see the shadow?" Miller blinked hard, shining his phone light directly at the wall, washing out the anomaly. "I see a wet wall, Quinn! We are leaving!" "Put the light down!" Quinn barked, her voice snapping through the cavernous space like a whip. Miller killed his phone light, leaving only the cold beam of Quinn's torch cutting through the dark. The silhouette remained. It turned its head toward her within the flat plane of the brick, slowly raising one hand. It pointed down toward the base of the wall, right where the victim's pristine boot touched the ballast. The brass compass in Quinn's pocket throbbed violently, emitting a high-pitched, harmonic tone that whistled through the metal of her watch strap. She reached in, pulling the device out into the open air. The needle had stopped spinning. It pointed straight down into the gravel at her feet, vibrating so fast it blurred into a grey haze behind the glass. Beside the dead man's hand, the gravel began to shift. It wasn't a cave-in. The dark stones rolled aside neatly, tossed out by an unseen force from beneath, revealing a square slab of black slate embedded in the rail bed. Etched into its face was the exact same notched rune as the bone token in her pocket. Quinn dropped to one knee, ignoring the icy mud soaking through her trousers. She pulled the bone token out and laid it against the slate's indentation. The fit was exact. A sharp snap echoed through the tunnel, like a thick timber breaking under strain. The smell of copper roared back, so intense Quinn tasted metal on the back of her tongue. The weeping brick arch before them turned transparent for a fraction of a second—just long enough for Quinn's trained eyes to slice through the illusion. She saw no dirt. No clay. No Victorian sewer lines. Beyond the brick lay a sprawling, cavernous expanse illuminated by floating globes of bruised-purple fire. Stalls constructed from bleached bone and dark timber stretched into a subterranean fog. Figures in long, heavy cloaks moved between the booths, their faces obscured by shadows or silver masks, trading iron boxes, vials of glowing liquid, and thick, leather-bound folios. A market underground. Not a dead station—a living, breathing bazaar buried beneath the skin of the city. Then the vision snapped shut. The wall slammed back into solid, opaque reality, leaving only the damp red bricks and the weeping mortar. "What was that?" Miller whispered, his face ghastly pale in the flashlamp's spill. "What the hell was that?" Quinn stood up slowly, her knees popping in the cold. She picked up the bone token from the slate; it felt warm now, pulsing with a faint, rhythmic heat like a slow heartbeat. "That," Quinn said, her jaw setting into a hard, unforgiving line, "is where Morris went." "We're reporting this," Miller insisted, his voice trembling as he pulled out his radio. "I'm calling the Superintendent. I'm calling a full hazmat unit—" Quinn grabbed Miller's wrist, her grip like an iron clamp, squeezing until he dropped the radio back into its holster. "You call Vance, and this tunnel gets filled with quicklime by dawn," she said, her voice dropping to a dangerous whisper. "You tell anyone what you saw, and you'll be assigned to desk duty in Croydon before your shift ends." "You can't cover this up, Harlow! There's a dead man on the tracks!" "And I'm going to find out who killed him." Quinn pocketed both the token and the compass, settling her lamp back onto the corpse's pale face. "Look at his collar again, Miller. Look closely." Miller flinched, but forced himself to lean down. Now that the dark fluid on the wall had dried, the crystalline fracture lines on the dead man's neck were fading, revealing a faint, bruised impression underneath. Not fingers. A symbol. Three interlocking circles burned into the pale skin just above his collarbone. "I know that mark," Quinn murmured. "I saw it on a research file in the British Museum archives last month." "The occult department?" "The restricted basement." Quinn turned her back on the wall, her boots crunching decisively over the ballast as she headed back toward the tunnel exit. "Get the ME down here. Tell them it's exposure and heart failure. Keep the scene clean." "Where are you going?" Quinn paused at the mouth of the maintenance tunnel, the faint glow of Camden's streetlights visible in the distance above the stairs. "I'm going to have a chat with a researcher named Kowalski."
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags9
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.36
leniency0.72
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
89.92% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount992
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count2
highlights
0"slowly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
49.60% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount992
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"crystalline"
count2
1
word"structure"
count1
2
word"pristine"
count1
3
word"throbbed"
count1
4
word"etched"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"constructed"
count1
7
word"rhythmic"
count1
8
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"crystalline"
1"structure"
2"pristine"
3"throbbed"
4"etched"
5"echoed"
6"constructed"
7"rhythmic"
8"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences60
matches(empty)
95.24% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount1
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences60
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences76
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords989
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions1
matches
0"Where the fluid touched the air, it hissed, hardening into crystalline needles of dark ice."
43.88% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions29
wordCount801
uniqueNames5
maxNameDensity2.12
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity3.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Victorian2
Quinn17
Morris1
Miller8
Camden1
persons
0"Quinn"
1"Morris"
2"Miller"
3"Camden"
places(empty)
globalScore0.439
windowScore0.5
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences46
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount989
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences76
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs42
mean23.55
std14.98
cv0.636
sampleLengths
010
138
218
343
420
53
624
74
853
92
1021
1124
1216
1317
1438
1533
1627
1710
1847
1926
204
2156
2210
2356
2417
2523
2618
2733
2815
2924
3020
3140
3213
3334
348
3543
3620
373
3841
394
4022
4111
99.42% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences60
matches
0"were folded"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs128
matches
0"was weeping"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount3
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences76
ratio0.053
matches
0"The shadow's arms were folded neatly behind its back, its frame taller, broader—a man's silhouette wearing a long coat and a peaked cap."
1"The weeping brick arch before them turned transparent for a fraction of a second—just long enough for Quinn's trained eyes to slice through the illusion."
2"Not a dead station—a living, breathing bazaar buried beneath the skin of the city."
3"She picked up the bone token from the slate; it felt warm now, pulsing with a faint, rhythmic heat like a slow heartbeat."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount809
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"thick, leather-bound folios."
adverbCount24
adverbRatio0.029666254635352288
lyAdverbCount12
lyAdverbRatio0.014833127317676144
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences76
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences76
mean13.01
std7.23
cv0.556
sampleLengths
010
116
222
313
45
55
623
715
820
93
1016
118
124
1314
1416
1523
162
1715
186
1915
209
2116
2217
233
2417
2518
2622
2711
285
2922
3010
314
3226
3317
3413
3513
364
3714
3817
3925
404
412
424
4315
4413
4528
463
4714
485
4918
55.70% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats11
diversityRatio0.42105263157894735
totalSentences76
uniqueOpeners32
60.61% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences55
matches
0"Then the vision snapped shut."
ratio0.018
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount9
totalSentences55
matches
0"It turned its head toward"
1"It pointed down toward the"
2"She reached in, pulling the"
3"It pointed straight down into"
4"It wasn't a cave-in."
5"She pulled the bone token"
6"She saw no dirt."
7"She picked up the bone"
8"she said, her voice dropping"
ratio0.164
50.91% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount45
totalSentences55
matches
0"The brickwork didn't yield, but"
1"Quinn felt the temperature plummet"
2"The heavy scent of iron"
3"Miller backed up two full"
4"The dark mortar was weeping."
5"Quinn kept her footing, her"
6"Miller's voice cracked, dropping his"
7"The shadow cast by her"
8"The silhouette projected onto the"
9"The shadow's arms were folded"
10"Quinn's heart hammered a heavy,"
11"Miller blinked hard, shining his"
12"Quinn barked, her voice snapping"
13"Miller killed his phone light,"
14"The silhouette remained."
15"It turned its head toward"
16"It pointed down toward the"
17"The brass compass in Quinn's"
18"She reached in, pulling the"
19"The needle had stopped spinning."
ratio0.818
90.91% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences55
matches
0"Now that the dark fluid"
ratio0.018
100.00% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences37
technicalSentenceCount2
matches
0"Miller killed his phone light, leaving only the cold beam of Quinn's torch cutting through the dark."
1"The brass compass in Quinn's pocket throbbed violently, emitting a high-pitched, harmonic tone that whistled through the metal of her watch strap."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags9
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Quinn barked, her voice snapping through the cavernous space like a whip"
1"Miller whispered, his face ghastly pale in the flashlamp's spill"
2"Miller insisted, his voice trembling as he pulled out his radio"
3"she said, her voice dropping to a dangerous whisper"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags6
fancyCount4
fancyTags
0"Quinn barked (bark)"
1"Miller whispered (whisper)"
2"Miller insisted (insist)"
3"Quinn murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences25
tagDensity0.24
leniency0.48
rawRatio0.667
effectiveRatio0.32
81.0059%