Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCW3RKB6HHXAAH9FBACQXVF

Run Details

Duration:
10m 45s
Cost:
$0.022081
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory Carter pushed the rusted gate of Richmond Park open with her shoulder. Midnight air bit at her cheeks. Her straight black hair, cut sharp at her shoulders, caught the breeze like a flag of surrender. At twenty-five, she had built a reputation for cool-headed thinking, for out-of-the-box moves that kept her alive after she fled Cardiff and an abusive ex named Evan. Tonight, that reputation felt thin. The Heartstone Pendant hung against her collarbone, hidden under her jacket. Deep crimson. Roughly the size of a thumbnail. Silver chain. It pulsed. Warmth spread through her sternum, faint but insistent, like a second heartbeat pointing north, west, toward the old oak boundary. She had come because of that pull. Three nights running, the gem had glowed with a faint inner light, guiding her from her flat above Silas' bar. By day she delivered meals for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress. By night, an unknown benefactor's gift demanded something else. The ancient oak standing stones appeared first, darker than the surrounding trees. They marked the boundary of the Fae Grove, Isolde's grove, Richmond grove — a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm where time moved differently. Rory stepped between them. Wrongness struck immediately. The air smelled of summer — jasmine, warm earth, blooming foxgloves — though October had frozen the rest of London. Wildflowers glowed white and purple under moonlight that should have been blocked by the dense canopy. They bloomed year-round here, yes, but this was excessive, almost aggressive in their colour, as if the ground itself refused winter. She stopped in the clearing. "Right," Rory breathed. Her bright blue eyes scanned the dark. "You pulled me here. Make it worth the trip." No answer came. Only silence. Not peaceful — absent. No owls called. No fox rustled through undergrowth. No wind moved the branches, though they swayed with a rhythm that matched nothing she knew. Rory's boots crushed flowers that released no scent, only a dry crackle like old paper burning. She walked deeper. The pendant grew hotter. Its crimson glow illuminated her left wrist — the small crescent-shaped scar from a childhood accident, pale against her skin. The silver chain tightened against her neck. A sound came. Footsteps on moss, though moss made no noise. Then a laugh, high and brittle, like glass dropped on stone. It came from everywhere and nowhere at once. Rory turned with care. Something stood between two oaks at the clearing's edge, taller than a man, wearing darkness like a cloak. Its head tilted at an angle that suggested curiosity rather than hunger. She blinked. Gone. Her pulse struck her throat hard. "You're not alone," she said to the trees. Her voice sounded borrowed. The Heartstone throbbed harder. Near a Hel portal, the descriptions had said. Rory didn't know what a Hel portal looked like. She knew only that the stone never lied, and it was pulling her toward the grove's centre. She moved. Her watch read eleven past midnight. The moon hung low, silver and sharp. But after what felt like minutes, the moon hadn't shifted. Or perhaps hours had collapsed into seconds — inside the grove, an hour could become minutes or days outside. She couldn't tell which. The flowers began to close. Not with sunset — there was no sun. They folded inward with deliberate slowness, petals turning black at the edges. A year-round bloom, dying in seconds without reason. Rory's breath came faster. "I came for answers," she said, louder now, directing her words at the empty air. "Not for games." The laugh returned, closer. Behind her left shoulder. Then beside her ear. Then inside her skull, vibrating through her teeth. She reached the centre. A flat stone lay there, moss-covered, carved with patterns that seemed to shift when she looked away. The Heartstone dangled free, swinging like a dowsing rod. Its warmth intensified, crimson light painting her face in blood-coloured shadows. Something brushed her shoulder. Not wind. A touch, cold and precise, like fingers testing the weave of her jacket, lingering just long enough to confirm she was solid, real, present. Rory spun. Nothing. But the presence remained. Heavy. Patient. Watching. The flat stone glowed faintly, matching the pendant's crimson hue. A portal, perhaps. The warmth confirmed it. But the grove didn't want her to pass through. It wanted her to stay. To become part of its strange time, to bloom and close and root herself in soil that never froze, to forget the delivery routes and the flat above the bar and the father who practised law in Cardiff. She backed away. The ancient oaks seemed to lean, branches lowering like arms reaching for her hair. "Not tonight," Rory said. Her hands shook, but her voice stayed steady. She clutched the Heartstone, let its warmth anchor her to the world outside. "Keep your secrets." She turned and walked toward the boundary stones. Behind her, the laugh faded into a whisper that followed, soft as falling petals, close enough to raise the hair at her neck. She didn't run. Running meant admitting the wrongness had teeth. At the iron gate, she paused. Her watch read three in the morning. Hours had vanished, or minutes had become years — she couldn't tell. The pendant cooled against her chest. Rory touched the crescent scar on her wrist. She was still herself. Still Aurora Carter, part-time delivery worker, survivor, fool who walked into darkness alone. She looked back at the grove. The wildflowers had reopened, bright and wrong, glowing softly in the dark. She walked away.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:50:48.306Z" 7/25/2026, 2:50:48 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.714
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.54% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount916
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"softly"
count1
highlights
0"softly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
39.96% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount916
totalAiIsms11
found
0
word"pulsed"
count1
1
word"warmth"
count4
2
word"scanned"
count1
3
word"silence"
count1
4
word"footsteps"
count1
5
word"pulse"
count1
6
word"throbbed"
count1
7
word"whisper"
count1
highlights
0"pulsed"
1"warmth"
2"scanned"
3"silence"
4"footsteps"
5"pulse"
6"throbbed"
7"whisper"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences106
matches(empty)
75.47% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount2
hedgeCount3
narrationSentences106
filterMatches
0"watch"
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
1"seemed to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen38
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords924
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions8
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
94.26% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions37
wordCount897
uniqueNames20
maxNameDensity1.11
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity2
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Carter2
Richmond2
Park1
Cardiff2
Evan1
Heartstone4
Pendant1
Yu-Fei1
Cheung1
Golden1
Empress1
Fae2
Grove1
Isolde1
Earth1
October1
London1
Hel2
Aurora1
Rory10
persons
0"Carter"
1"Evan"
2"Heartstone"
3"Pendant"
4"Yu-Fei"
5"Cheung"
6"Isolde"
7"Earth"
8"October"
9"Aurora"
10"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"Cardiff"
3"Fae"
4"Grove"
5"London"
6"Hel"
globalScore0.943
windowScore1
25.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount3
matches
0"looked like"
1"felt like minutes, the moon hadn't shif"
2"patterns that seemed to shift when she looked away"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount924
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs44
mean21
std16.71
cv0.796
sampleLengths
068
121
22
320
446
541
63
757
85
919
103
1130
1216
1334
1430
154
1633
176
1812
1938
202
2146
225
2328
244
2518
2620
2741
2830
293
307
3117
3252
333
3414
3528
3631
3710
3825
396
4025
416
4212
433
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount1
totalSentences106
matches
0"been blocked"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs160
matches
0"was pulling"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount8
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences7
totalSentences109
ratio0.064
matches
0"They marked the boundary of the Fae Grove, Isolde's grove, Richmond grove — a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm where time moved differently."
1"The air smelled of summer — jasmine, warm earth, blooming foxgloves — though October had frozen the rest of London."
2"Not peaceful — absent."
3"Its crimson glow illuminated her left wrist — the small crescent-shaped scar from a childhood accident, pale against her skin."
4"Or perhaps hours had collapsed into seconds — inside the grove, an hour could become minutes or days outside."
5"Not with sunset — there was no sun."
6"Hours had vanished, or minutes had become years — she couldn't tell."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount150
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount2
adverbRatio0.013333333333333334
lyAdverbCount1
lyAdverbRatio0.006666666666666667
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean8.48
std6.69
cv0.789
sampleLengths
013
16
217
327
45
511
62
76
82
92
1020
117
1220
1310
149
1512
1625
174
183
1920
2016
2121
225
233
247
259
263
272
284
293
305
3116
3216
333
344
3520
367
373
388
3911
408
414
4218
4312
442
451
466
478
484
494
59.63% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.3853211009174312
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners42
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences91
matches
0"Roughly the size of a"
1"Then a laugh, high and"
2"Then beside her ear."
3"Then inside her skull, vibrating"
ratio0.044
88.13% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount30
totalSentences91
matches
0"Her straight black hair, cut"
1"She had come because of"
2"They marked the boundary of"
3"They bloomed year-round here, yes,"
4"She stopped in the clearing."
5"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
6"She walked deeper."
7"Its crimson glow illuminated her"
8"It came from everywhere and"
9"Its head tilted at an"
10"Her pulse struck her throat"
11"she said to the trees"
12"Her voice sounded borrowed."
13"She knew only that the"
14"Her watch read eleven past"
15"She couldn't tell which."
16"They folded inward with deliberate"
17"she said, louder now, directing"
18"She reached the centre."
19"Its warmth intensified, crimson light"
ratio0.33
91.87% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences91
matches
0"Rory Carter pushed the rusted"
1"Midnight air bit at her"
2"Her straight black hair, cut"
3"Tonight, that reputation felt thin."
4"The Heartstone Pendant hung against"
5"Warmth spread through her sternum,"
6"She had come because of"
7"The ancient oak standing stones"
8"They marked the boundary of"
9"Rory stepped between them."
10"Wrongness struck immediately."
11"The air smelled of summer"
12"Wildflowers glowed white and purple"
13"They bloomed year-round here, yes,"
14"She stopped in the clearing."
15"Her bright blue eyes scanned"
16"Rory's boots crushed flowers that"
17"She walked deeper."
18"The pendant grew hotter."
19"Its crimson glow illuminated her"
ratio0.736
54.95% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences91
matches
0"To become part of its"
ratio0.011
31.25% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences32
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Wildflowers glowed white and purple under moonlight that should have been blocked by the dense canopy."
1"They bloomed year-round here, yes, but this was excessive, almost aggressive in their colour, as if the ground itself refused winter."
2"A touch, cold and precise, like fingers testing the weave of her jacket, lingering just long enough to confirm she was solid, real, present."
3"To become part of its strange time, to bloom and close and root herself in soil that never froze, to forget the delivery routes and the flat above the bar and t…"
4"Still Aurora Carter, part-time delivery worker, survivor, fool who walked into darkness alone."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
25.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"Rory breathed (breathe)"
dialogueSentences7
tagDensity0.571
leniency1
rawRatio0.25
effectiveRatio0.25
82.6685%