| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 9 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.375 | | leniency | 0.75 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.73% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1209 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 17.29% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1209 | | totalAiIsms | 20 | | found | | 0 | | | 1 | | | 2 | | | 3 | | | 4 | | | 5 | | | 6 | | | 7 | | | 8 | | | 9 | | | 10 | | | 11 | | | 12 | | | 13 | | | 14 | | | 15 | | | 16 | | | 17 | |
| | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "vibrated" | | 2 | "resonated" | | 3 | "tracing" | | 4 | "silence" | | 5 | "silk" | | 6 | "throbbed" | | 7 | "flickered" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "crystalline" | | 10 | "weight" | | 11 | "warmth" | | 12 | "electric" | | 13 | "pristine" | | 14 | "oppressive" | | 15 | "shimmered" | | 16 | "magnetic" | | 17 | "chilled" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 72 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 87 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 29 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1207 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 2 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 50.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 45 | | wordCount | 1000 | | uniqueNames | 13 | | maxNameDensity | 1.8 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | London | 2 | | Richmond | 1 | | Park | 1 | | Rory | 18 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Pendant | 1 | | Fae-Forged | 1 | | Blade | 1 | | Moonsilver | 1 | | Nyx | 5 | | Fae | 2 | | Isolde | 8 | | Dymas | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Pendant" | | 2 | "Blade" | | 3 | "Moonsilver" | | 4 | "Nyx" | | 5 | "Isolde" |
| | places | | 0 | "London" | | 1 | "Richmond" | | 2 | "Park" |
| | globalScore | 0.6 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 69 | | glossingSentenceCount | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 1207 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 87 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 91.71% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 36 | | mean | 33.53 | | std | 15.79 | | cv | 0.471 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 59 | | 1 | 27 | | 2 | 21 | | 3 | 25 | | 4 | 63 | | 5 | 35 | | 6 | 25 | | 7 | 51 | | 8 | 17 | | 9 | 52 | | 10 | 29 | | 11 | 14 | | 12 | 28 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 67 | | 15 | 58 | | 16 | 55 | | 17 | 22 | | 18 | 19 | | 19 | 39 | | 20 | 27 | | 21 | 32 | | 22 | 13 | | 23 | 49 | | 24 | 64 | | 25 | 35 | | 26 | 35 | | 27 | 16 | | 28 | 45 | | 29 | 19 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 26 | | 32 | 15 | | 33 | 25 | | 34 | 32 | | 35 | 15 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 0 | | totalVerbs | 149 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 2 | | semicolonCount | 3 | | flaggedSentences | 5 | | totalSentences | 87 | | ratio | 0.057 | | matches | | 0 | "Ancient stone ruins emerged from the tangle of roots—broken archways and forgotten pedestals carved with interlocking spirals." | | 1 | "Sound behaved strangely here; her own breathing sounded muffled, yet she could hear the faint, crystalline tinkling of water dripping onto leaves hundreds of yards away." | | 2 | "The silence wasn't empty; it felt full, crowded with unseen observers lurking just past the edge of sight." | | 3 | "The air grew dense, carrying an unexpected scent—rich, heavy, and sickeningly sweet." | | 4 | "Space in the center of the clearing didn't just bend; it tore." |
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| 88.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1016 | | adjectiveStacks | 2 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "small crescent-shaped scar" | | 1 | "ice-cold against her" |
| | adverbCount | 23 | | adverbRatio | 0.022637795275590553 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.00984251968503937 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 87 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 97.06% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 87 | | mean | 13.87 | | std | 5.45 | | cv | 0.393 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 17 | | 2 | 11 | | 3 | 17 | | 4 | 15 | | 5 | 12 | | 6 | 13 | | 7 | 8 | | 8 | 22 | | 9 | 3 | | 10 | 14 | | 11 | 7 | | 12 | 20 | | 13 | 22 | | 14 | 13 | | 15 | 11 | | 16 | 11 | | 17 | 19 | | 18 | 6 | | 19 | 9 | | 20 | 16 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 16 | | 23 | 17 | | 24 | 10 | | 25 | 22 | | 26 | 6 | | 27 | 14 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 14 | | 30 | 7 | | 31 | 7 | | 32 | 20 | | 33 | 8 | | 34 | 17 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 9 | | 37 | 9 | | 38 | 25 | | 39 | 24 | | 40 | 17 | | 41 | 15 | | 42 | 26 | | 43 | 5 | | 44 | 18 | | 45 | 12 | | 46 | 20 | | 47 | 11 | | 48 | 11 | | 49 | 13 |
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| 63.60% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 8 | | diversityRatio | 0.4367816091954023 | | totalSentences | 87 | | uniqueOpeners | 38 | |
| 0.00% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 8 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "Her bare feet left no" | | 1 | "She pulled the thumbnail-sized crimson" | | 2 | "It flickered like a dying" | | 3 | "They climbed higher into the" | | 4 | "She gestured with a pale" | | 5 | "It glowed a warm, oppressive" | | 6 | "Her crimson pendant throbbed in" | | 7 | "She looked through the portal" |
| | ratio | 0.111 | |
| 50.28% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 59 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | | 0 | "The air between the two" | | 1 | "Rory paused at the threshold," | | 2 | "Isolde glided past without making" | | 3 | "Her bare feet left no" | | 4 | "Isolde turned, her pale lavender" | | 5 | "Rory pressed her fingers against" | | 6 | "The world snapped." | | 7 | "The faint rumble of distant" | | 8 | "The sky above altered in" | | 9 | "The bruised grey overcast of" | | 10 | "Shadows pooled around the sprawling" | | 11 | "The darkness coalesced into a" | | 12 | "Nyx drifted out from the" | | 13 | "Rory clutched the heavy silver" | | 14 | "She pulled the thumbnail-sized crimson" | | 15 | "It flickered like a dying" | | 16 | "Rory drew the Fae-Forged Blade" | | 17 | "Moonsilver hummed in her palm," | | 18 | "The leaf-shaped dagger cast a" | | 19 | "Isolde drifted toward a staircase" |
| | ratio | 0.819 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 72 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 46.70% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 52 | | technicalSentenceCount | 7 | | matches | | 0 | "Ahead, the atmosphere vibrated with a golden hum that resonated straight through the soles of her shoes." | | 1 | "Towering oaks gave way to colossal trees with trunk-girths that spanned centuries of untouched growth, their bark shimmering with metallic silver veins." | | 2 | "Beneath her shirt, the Heartstone Pendant throbbed, radiating a sharp heat that seeped into her collarbone." | | 3 | "The leaf-shaped dagger cast a faint luminescence across the forest floor, illuminating flowers that had no right to exist in late autumn." | | 4 | "Starch-white lilies uncurled their petals, exhaling puffs of glowing pollen into the motionless air." | | 5 | "Gravity shifted subtly, making Rory feel light, almost weightless, as if a single strong gust of wind could lift her into the violet canopy." | | 6 | "Rory stepped forward, her boots sinking into moss that shifted from deep emerald to vibrant electric blue." |
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| 69.44% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 9 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory raised, its moonsilver edge glowing brighter against the encroaching warmth" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 1 | | fancyTags | | | dialogueSentences | 24 | | tagDensity | 0.042 | | leniency | 0.083 | | rawRatio | 1 | | effectiveRatio | 0.083 | |