Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCW9MXHJCP11FQF6RV0VCA6

Run Details

Duration:
8.4s
Cost:
$0.004270
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The damp air of the abandoned Tube station tasted of copper, stale ballast, and centuries of accumulated soot. Detective Harlow Quinn stood beneath the flickering amber emergency light on the disused platform, her sharp jaw set in a hard line. Eighteen years in the Metropolitan Police had taught her how to read a room, but the defunct Camden platform defied every rule in the manual. She checked the time, her gaze dropping to the worn leather watch on her left wrist. Three-fifteen in the morning. Above them, the Northern Line rumbled through the dark earth, a subterranean heartbeat that rattled the loose iron rivets in the curved tunnel walls. The body sat propped against a rusted cast-iron pillar near the tracks. A young man, pale-faced and dressed in modern streetwear, except for a peculiar pendant clutched in his stiffening fingers—a circular brass trinket coated in a heavy patina of verdigris. Sergeant Miller, a heavy-set uniform cop whose breath plumed in the freezing air, wiped his nose with the back of a gloved hand. He stepped gingerly over a puddle of stagnant rainwater, his flashlight beam slicing through the murk. Nasty business, Detective, Miller said, shaking his head. Looks like a drug deal gone sideways. Junkie probably wandered down here from the street-level grate, OD'd on something synthetic. We find these vagrants down in the transit tunnels all the time. Open-and-shut. Quinn didn't answer right away. At five-foot-nine, she towered slightly over Miller, her closely cropped salt-and-pepper hair stark against the gloom. She moved with military precision, keeping her footsteps measured as she approached the dead man. Her brown eyes narrowed, scanning not just the body, but the negative space around it. Miller called it a drug overdose. Quinn crouched beside the victim, her long coat pooling in the gritty ballast. She leaned in close, catching the faint, sweet scent of ozone and burnt cedar clinging to the fabric of the boy's jacket. It didn't smell like heroin. It didn't smell like street chemicals. Open-and-shut, Miller repeated, sounding eager to pack it in and hand the paperwork off to transit security. No signs of a struggle. Pockets are empty, sure, but the local kids use these abandoned platforms to score. Probably robbed him after he dropped. Look at the walls, Miller, Quinn said, her voice a low, steady rumble. Miller blinked, sweeping his flashlight beam across the curved brickwork behind the pillar. What about 'em? Graffiti? It is not graffiti. Quinn stood up and stepped closer to the wall. Etched into the soot-stained brick were geometric patterns—concentric circles intersected by jagged saltires. They weren't spray-painted with aerosol cans. They were scored deep into the masonry, the edges sharp and white, as if burned into the stone with intense, localized heat. Miller grunted, uncomfortable. Vandalism. Kids with soldering irons or whatever they're using these days. With eighteen years on the force, Quinn knew the signatures of urban decay. She knew the neat, looping lines of turf tags and the frantic scrawls of midnight trespassers. This was neither. The lines possessed a mathematical perfection, a deliberate symmetry that made the hair on the back of her neck stand up. It reminded her, uncomfortably, of the case notes locked away in her private desk drawer back at the station—the unsolved files from three years ago, the ones involving her former partner, DS Morris, and the peculiar anomalies the brass ordered her to forget. She turned her attention back to the victim. Miller was kneeling now, reaching down to pry the brass trinket from the dead boy's stiffened fingers. Leave it, Quinn snapped. Miller jerked his hand back, blinking in surprise. Just bagging the personal effects, boss. Standard procedure. Let's talk about procedure, Miller, Quinn said, stepping into his personal space. She kept her voice even, dangerous. The boy's pupils are fully dilated, yes. But look at his lips. Miller squinted, leaning down. Blue, he muttered. Lack of oxygen. Look closer. Do you see vomit? Do you see needle tracks on his arms? Do you see a single drop of foam, or sweat, or any sign of the violent convulsions that accompany a synthetic narcotic overdose? Miller opened his mouth, then closed it. He stared down at the boy's pristine hands, resting palms-up on his knees. And look at the floor, Quinn continued, gesturing with her chin to the dry, dusty concrete surrounding the body. The platform is covered in a thick layer of fine, undisturbed soot. Anyone walking here leaves footprints. We both walked over here and left clear tracks. But the dust around this boy forms a perfect, unbroken circle. Nothing disturbed it. No feet shuffled in panic. No one dragged him here. Miller swallowed hard. Maybe he flew down here, Detective? Quinn didn't smile. She knelt again, her eyes locked on the brass object in the boy's palm. The patina was thick, but through the green oxidation, she could make out faint, intricate etchings on the face. A compass, though the needle didn't spin north. It twitched nervously toward the black mouth of the tunnel leading deeper into the disused transit network, vibrating with a frequency that felt less like magnetism and more like a pulse. Her mind flashed to the rumors whispered among the transit workers—legends of a secret bazaar that operated in the forgotten veins of the Underground, appearing only under the light of a full moon. A place where impossible things were traded for bone tokens and currency that didn't exist in British mints. Miller adjusted his collar, looking nervously toward the dark mouth of the tunnel. It's giving me the creeps down here, Detective. Let's call the meat wagon, write it off as exposure or a sudden cardiac event, and let the coroner deal with the mystery. Quinn reached out, her gloved fingers hovering inches from the brass compass. The air around it felt heavier, colder, humming with a static charge that made her skin tingle. Three years ago, she would have agreed with Miller. She would have checked the boxes, filled out the forms, and buried the inexplicable under a mountain of bureaucratic convenience. Three years ago, she believed the world was governed by rules. She stood up abruptly, brushing a speck of soot from her knee. Her jaw was set, her eyes fixed on the dark, yawning tunnel where the compass needle pointed. No, Miller, she said, her voice cutting through the distant rumble of the Northern Line. We are not calling the coroner just yet. She pulled her notebook from her coat pocket, flipping it open to a blank page. This isn't an overdose. Someone brought him here, or something brought him here, and he didn't die of a failing heart. He died of fear. Miller stared at her, terrified. Fear? People don't just die of being scared, Detective. They do, Quinn muttered, clicking her pen. When they see something they were never meant to find. She turned away from the pillar, her gaze sweeping the shadows of the abandoned platform. Somewhere out there in the dark labyrinth of the forgotten station, the real killer was watching. And for the first time in three years, Detective Harlow Quinn knew exactly where she had to start looking.
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags0
87.55% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1205
totalAiIsmAdverbs3
found
0
adverb"slightly"
count1
1
adverb"nervously"
count2
highlights
0"slightly"
1"nervously"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
46.06% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1205
totalAiIsms13
found
0
word"synthetic"
count2
1
word"stark"
count1
2
word"gloom"
count1
3
word"footsteps"
count1
4
word"measured"
count1
5
word"scanning"
count1
6
word"etched"
count1
7
word"standard"
count1
8
word"pristine"
count1
9
word"perfect"
count1
10
word"intricate"
count1
11
word"pulse"
count1
highlights
0"synthetic"
1"stark"
2"gloom"
3"footsteps"
4"measured"
5"scanning"
6"etched"
7"standard"
8"pristine"
9"perfect"
10"intricate"
11"pulse"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"eyes widened/narrowed"
count1
highlights
0"eyes narrowed"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells2
narrationSentences105
matches
0"g in surprise"
1"d in panic"
74.83% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount5
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences105
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences105
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen44
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1201
ratio0
matches(empty)
0.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions10
unquotedAttributions7
matches
0"Nasty business, Detective, Miller said, shaking his head."
1"Look at the walls, Miller, Quinn said, her voice a low, steady rumble."
2"Leave it, Quinn snapped."
3"Blue, he muttered."
4"And look at the floor, Quinn continued, gesturing with her chin to the dry, dusty concrete surrounding the body."
5"No, Miller, she said, her voice cutting through the distant rumble of the Northern Line."
6"They do, Quinn muttered, clicking her pen."
66.67% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions54
wordCount1200
uniqueNames15
maxNameDensity1.5
worstName"Miller"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Miller"
discoveredNames
Tube1
Harlow2
Quinn13
Metropolitan1
Police1
Camden1
Northern2
Line2
Miller18
Detective6
Graffiti1
Morris1
Underground1
British1
Do3
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Police"
3"Line"
4"Miller"
5"Morris"
6"Underground"
places
0"Metropolitan"
1"British"
globalScore0.75
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences76
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.833
wordCount1201
matches
0"not just the body, but the negative space around it"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences105
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs35
mean34.31
std21.81
cv0.636
sampleLengths
065
144
241
339
441
551
652
742
813
917
104
1150
1214
1396
1425
154
1616
1730
1810
1937
2020
2169
229
2375
2451
2544
2658
2711
2829
2923
3015
3125
3214
3317
3450
91.90% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount4
totalSentences105
matches
0"were scored"
1"is covered"
2"were traded"
3"was governed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount2
totalVerbs206
matches
0"was kneeling"
1"was watching"
34.01% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences4
totalSentences105
ratio0.038
matches
0"A young man, pale-faced and dressed in modern streetwear, except for a peculiar pendant clutched in his stiffening fingers—a circular brass trinket coated in a heavy patina of verdigris."
1"Etched into the soot-stained brick were geometric patterns—concentric circles intersected by jagged saltires."
2"It reminded her, uncomfortably, of the case notes locked away in her private desk drawer back at the station—the unsolved files from three years ago, the ones involving her former partner, DS Morris, and the peculiar anomalies the brass ordered her to forget."
3"Her mind flashed to the rumors whispered among the transit workers—legends of a secret bazaar that operated in the forgotten veins of the Underground, appearing only under the light of a full moon."
100.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount417
adjectiveStacks0
stackExamples(empty)
adverbCount10
adverbRatio0.023980815347721823
lyAdverbCount5
lyAdverbRatio0.011990407673860911
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences105
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences105
mean11.44
std7.75
cv0.678
sampleLengths
018
122
225
316
44
524
612
729
823
916
108
117
1213
1312
141
155
1616
1715
1815
196
2013
2122
225
236
2417
255
2614
276
2813
2913
303
311
324
339
3413
356
3622
373
381
3910
4013
4116
423
4321
4443
458
4617
474
488
496
71.43% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats5
diversityRatio0.45714285714285713
totalSentences105
uniqueOpeners48
100.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount4
totalSentences98
matches
0"Probably robbed him after he"
1"Just bagging the personal effects,"
2"Maybe he flew down here,"
3"Somewhere out there in the"
ratio0.041
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences98
matches
0"She checked the time, her"
1"He stepped gingerly over a"
2"We find these vagrants down"
3"She moved with military precision,"
4"Her brown eyes narrowed, scanning"
5"She leaned in close, catching"
6"It didn't smell like heroin."
7"It didn't smell like street"
8"It is not graffiti."
9"They weren't spray-painted with aerosol"
10"They were scored deep into"
11"She knew the neat, looping"
12"It reminded her, uncomfortably, of"
13"She turned her attention back"
14"She kept her voice even,"
15"He stared down at the"
16"We both walked over here"
17"She knelt again, her eyes"
18"It twitched nervously toward the"
19"Her mind flashed to the"
ratio0.296
100.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount67
totalSentences98
matches
0"The damp air of the"
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stood beneath"
2"She checked the time, her"
3"The body sat propped against"
4"A young man, pale-faced and"
5"Sergeant Miller, a heavy-set uniform"
6"He stepped gingerly over a"
7"Looks like a drug deal"
8"Junkie probably wandered down here"
9"We find these vagrants down"
10"Quinn didn't answer right away."
11"She moved with military precision,"
12"Her brown eyes narrowed, scanning"
13"Miller called it a drug"
14"Quinn crouched beside the victim,"
15"She leaned in close, catching"
16"It didn't smell like heroin."
17"It didn't smell like street"
18"Pockets are empty, sure, but"
19"Miller blinked, sweeping his flashlight"
ratio0.684
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences98
matches(empty)
ratio0
50.26% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount7
matches
0"Above them, the Northern Line rumbled through the dark earth, a subterranean heartbeat that rattled the loose iron rivets in the curved tunnel walls."
1"They were scored deep into the masonry, the edges sharp and white, as if burned into the stone with intense, localized heat."
2"The lines possessed a mathematical perfection, a deliberate symmetry that made the hair on the back of her neck stand up."
3"Do you see a single drop of foam, or sweat, or any sign of the violent convulsions that accompany a synthetic narcotic overdose?"
4"It twitched nervously toward the black mouth of the tunnel leading deeper into the disused transit network, vibrating with a frequency that felt less like magne…"
5"Her mind flashed to the rumors whispered among the transit workers—legends of a secret bazaar that operated in the forgotten veins of the Underground, appearing…"
6"The air around it felt heavier, colder, humming with a static charge that made her skin tingle."
100.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags0
uselessAdditionCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags0
84.0903%