Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCWAK33PMZ9ERJ206DK5VRS

Run Details

Duration:
5.6s
Cost:
$0.002750
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Three loud knocks rattled the timber frame of the door on Brick Lane. Aurora stared through the peephole at platinum blond hair and the sharp shoulder of a charcoal suit. Her pulse spiked against her ribs, jagged and hot. She threw the three deadbolts back, the heavy iron bolts sliding with a metallic screech that echoed off the cramped stairwell. "You missed a lock," Lucien said, stepping past her uninvited into the suffocating warmth of the flat. Ptolemy hissed from atop a towering stack of grimoires, arching his spine before darting under the sagging sofa. Aurora kicked the door shut, the slam rattling the loose panes of glass in the window. "Get out," Aurora said, crossing her arms over her chest to hide the sudden tremor in her hands. Lucien leaned heavily on his ivory-handled cane, his heterochromatic gaze—one amber, one stark black—raking over the clutter of ancient texts and empty takeout boxes. A slow, familiar smirk touched the corner of his mouth. "You always did appreciate a dramatic entrance, Rory." "I told you never to come here," Aurora said, stepping into his space, forcing him to look down at her. "Especially after Marseille." "Marseille was a tactical necessity," Lucien said, his voice dropping an octave as he closed the distance between them. The scent of rain and bitter almond rolled off his tailored wool lapel. Aurora remembered that exact smell from the balcony of the safehouse on the Mediterranean coast, the night he walked away without a backward glance while the sirens wailed below. "You left me in a room full of blood hunters with a broken blade and zero backup," Aurora said, jabbing a finger against his chest. "And you dismantled the entire cell before breakfast," Lucien murmured, his gaze dropping to her lips before flicking back up to her bright blue eyes. "You never needed my backup." "That isn't the point," Aurora hissed, her breath catching as he reached out. His gloved fingers brushed a stray lock of black hair behind her ear, his thumb lingering against the small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist where he gripped her arm to steady her. The contact sent a jolt of electricity straight down her spine, fierce and unwanted. She wanted to pull away, wanted to strike him, but her feet stayed glued to the threadbare rug. "The point," Lucien said, his face inches from hers, "is that you are still breathing, and so am I." "Because I watched my own back," Aurora whispered, her voice losing its edge, melting into something raw and ragged. "You always do," Lucien said. He dropped his cane against the bookshelf, the ivory handle clattering loudly against a stack of leather-bound journals. His hands found her waist, gripping her hard enough to bruise through the cotton of her shirt, pulling her flush against his chest. The solid heat of him burned through her clothes, melting the ice she had spent months building around her ribs. "Don't," Aurora breathed, though her hands drifted up to rest flat against his lapels, feeling the frantic thunder of his heart beneath the charcoal wool. "Tell me to leave," Lucien challenged, his voice rough. "Say the words, Rory." Aurora stared into his mismatched eyes, searching for the calculation, the broker, the demon-spawn who always played three steps ahead. She found only a matching desperation, dark and jagged. "I hate you," Aurora whispered against his mouth. "I know," Lucien muttered. His lips crashed down onto hers, desperate and bruising, tasting of salt and old whiskey. Aurora groaned into the kiss, her fingers curling into his lapels, pulling him tighter until there was no air left between them. All the fury, the abandonment, the endless sleepless nights in London dissolved into the friction of their mouths meeting with violent necessity. Lucien backed her up against the bookshelves, volumes tumbling to the floor with dull thuds as his hands slid down to grip the curves of her hips, lifting her effortlessly. Aurora wrapped her legs around his waist, burying her hands in his platinum hair, tugging the strands until he gasped against her throat. "You never call," Aurora breathed into his ear as his lips trailed down the column of her neck. "I didn't need to call to know you were waiting," Lucien murmured, pressing a hot kiss over the pulse point beneath her jaw. "Arrogant bastard," Aurora said, though her fingers dug into his shoulders, pulling him closer as the last of her defenses shattered on the floor.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:54:32.043Z" 7/25/2026, 2:54:32 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags17
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.81
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
100.00% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount750
totalAiIsmAdverbs0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
46.67% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount750
totalAiIsms8
found
0
word"pulse"
count2
1
word"echoed"
count1
2
word"warmth"
count1
3
word"stark"
count1
4
word"familiar"
count1
5
word"down her spine"
count1
6
word"shattered"
count1
highlights
0"pulse"
1"echoed"
2"warmth"
3"stark"
4"familiar"
5"down her spine"
6"shattered"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences40
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences40
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences44
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen34
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords748
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions17
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
31.89% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions30
wordCount635
uniqueNames7
maxNameDensity2.36
worstName"Aurora"
maxWindowNameDensity3
worstWindowName"Aurora"
discoveredNames
Brick1
Lane1
Ptolemy1
Lucien10
Mediterranean1
Aurora15
London1
persons
0"Ptolemy"
1"Lucien"
2"Aurora"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
2"Mediterranean"
3"London"
globalScore0.319
windowScore0.667
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences36
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount748
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences44
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs28
mean26.71
std16.3
cv0.61
sampleLengths
039
121
217
334
418
534
68
723
819
942
1025
1130
1213
1365
1419
1519
165
1761
1825
1913
2029
218
224
2359
2453
2518
2623
2724
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences40
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs99
matches(empty)
77.92% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount2
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences44
ratio0.023
matches
0"Lucien leaned heavily on his ivory-handled cane, his heterochromatic gaze—one amber, one stark black—raking over the clutter of ancient texts and empty takeout boxes."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount641
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount13
adverbRatio0.0202808112324493
lyAdverbCount4
lyAdverbRatio0.0062402496099844
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences44
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences44
mean17
std7.33
cv0.431
sampleLengths
013
117
29
321
417
518
616
718
824
910
108
1120
123
1319
1413
1529
1625
1725
185
1913
2033
2114
2218
2319
2419
255
2618
2723
2820
2925
309
314
3220
339
348
354
3615
3722
3822
3930
4023
4118
4223
4324
84.85% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5227272727272727
totalSentences44
uniqueOpeners23
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences38
matches(empty)
ratio0
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount8
totalSentences38
matches
0"Her pulse spiked against her"
1"She threw the three deadbolts"
2"His gloved fingers brushed a"
3"She wanted to pull away,"
4"He dropped his cane against"
5"His hands found her waist,"
6"She found only a matching"
7"His lips crashed down onto"
ratio0.211
0.00% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount37
totalSentences38
matches
0"Aurora stared through the peephole"
1"Her pulse spiked against her"
2"She threw the three deadbolts"
3"Lucien said, stepping past her"
4"Ptolemy hissed from atop a"
5"Aurora kicked the door shut,"
6"Aurora said, crossing her arms"
7"Lucien leaned heavily on his"
8"A slow, familiar smirk touched"
9"Aurora said, stepping into his"
10"Lucien said, his voice dropping"
11"The scent of rain and"
12"Aurora remembered that exact smell"
13"Aurora said, jabbing a finger"
14"Lucien murmured, his gaze dropping"
15"Aurora hissed, her breath catching"
16"His gloved fingers brushed a"
17"The contact sent a jolt"
18"She wanted to pull away,"
19"Lucien said, his face inches"
ratio0.974
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences38
matches(empty)
ratio0
6.80% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences21
technicalSentenceCount4
matches
0"She threw the three deadbolts back, the heavy iron bolts sliding with a metallic screech that echoed off the cramped stairwell."
1"His hands found her waist, gripping her hard enough to bruise through the cotton of her shirt, pulling her flush against his chest."
2"Lucien backed her up against the bookshelves, volumes tumbling to the floor with dull thuds as his hands slid down to grip the curves of her hips, lifting her e…"
3"Aurora wrapped her legs around his waist, burying her hands in his platinum hair, tugging the strands until he gasped against her throat."
7.35% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags17
uselessAdditionCount4
matches
0"Aurora hissed, her breath catching as he reached out"
1"Aurora breathed, though her hands drifted up to rest flat against his lapels, feeling the frantic thunder of his heart beneath the charcoal wool"
2"Lucien challenged, his voice rough"
3"Aurora said, though her fingers dug into his shoulders, pulling him closer as the last of her defenses shattered on the floor"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags17
fancyCount9
fancyTags
0"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
1"Aurora hissed (hiss)"
2"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
3"Aurora breathed (breathe)"
4"Lucien challenged (challenge)"
5"Aurora whispered (whisper)"
6"Lucien muttered (mutter)"
7"Aurora breathed (breathe)"
8"Lucien murmured (murmur)"
dialogueSentences21
tagDensity0.81
leniency1
rawRatio0.529
effectiveRatio0.529
74.9828%