| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 3 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.176 | | leniency | 0.353 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 960 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 68.75% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 960 | | totalAiIsms | 6 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "echoing" | | 1 | "gloom" | | 2 | "scanned" | | 3 | "footsteps" | | 4 | "clandestine" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 1 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 1 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 91 | | filterMatches | | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 105 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 34 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 944 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 3 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 42.13% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 34 | | wordCount | 788 | | uniqueNames | 17 | | maxNameDensity | 2.16 | | worstName | "Quinn" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 3.5 | | worstWindowName | "Quinn" | | discoveredNames | | Camden | 1 | | Town | 1 | | London | 1 | | Underground | 1 | | Tube | 1 | | Raven | 1 | | Nest | 1 | | Silas | 1 | | Morris | 1 | | Saint | 1 | | Christopher | 1 | | Seville | 1 | | Spain | 1 | | English | 1 | | Tomás | 2 | | Herrera | 1 | | Quinn | 17 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Raven" | | 1 | "Morris" | | 2 | "Saint" | | 3 | "Christopher" | | 4 | "Tomás" | | 5 | "Herrera" | | 6 | "Quinn" |
| | places | | 0 | "Camden" | | 1 | "Town" | | 2 | "London" | | 3 | "Silas" | | 4 | "Seville" | | 5 | "Spain" |
| | globalScore | 0.421 | | windowScore | 0.5 | |
| 100.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 59 | | glossingSentenceCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like a lock falling into place" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 0 | | per1kWords | 0 | | wordCount | 944 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 105 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 49 | | mean | 19.27 | | std | 12.68 | | cv | 0.658 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 40 | | 1 | 22 | | 2 | 31 | | 3 | 19 | | 4 | 29 | | 5 | 10 | | 6 | 6 | | 7 | 10 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 16 | | 10 | 21 | | 11 | 16 | | 12 | 6 | | 13 | 27 | | 14 | 4 | | 15 | 58 | | 16 | 18 | | 17 | 11 | | 18 | 31 | | 19 | 15 | | 20 | 21 | | 21 | 2 | | 22 | 30 | | 23 | 28 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 25 | | 26 | 19 | | 27 | 24 | | 28 | 11 | | 29 | 23 | | 30 | 26 | | 31 | 2 | | 32 | 26 | | 33 | 24 | | 34 | 23 | | 35 | 10 | | 36 | 5 | | 37 | 21 | | 38 | 18 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 8 | | 41 | 14 | | 42 | 49 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 36 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 21 | | 48 | 49 |
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| 100.00% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 91 | | matches | | |
| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 149 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 15 | | semicolonCount | 0 | | flaggedSentences | 11 | | totalSentences | 105 | | ratio | 0.105 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn spotted him—gray hoodie, black jeans—ducking into a stairwell marked with faded London Underground roundel." | | 1 | "He pulled something white from his pocket—bone, carved, small—and pressed it to the wall." | | 2 | "The bone token sat in her pocket—she'd lifted it from a dead man three months back, never knew what it did." | | 3 | "The corridor widened into a cavernous space—an abandoned Tube station, tracks rusted, arches dripping with condensation." | | 4 | "The market moved around her—supernatural goods exchanged for coin that glinted with unnatural colors." | | 5 | "She heard footsteps—fast, running—echoing from that direction." | | 6 | "At the tunnel's end, a doorway stood open, framing a bar she recognized from files she shouldn't have seen—The Raven's Nest, Silas's place, hidden back room, clandestine meetings." | | 7 | "Black-and-white photographs hung crooked—faces she almost recognized, dead people, missing people." | | 8 | "She pushed through a swinging door into the hidden room—bookshelves lined one wall, but they stood empty, pulled aside to reveal this space." | | 9 | "The man—Tomás Herrera, she knew the name from reports—stepped closer." | | 10 | "\"I'm the reason some people here stay alive.\" He turned toward the bookshelf wall, pressed something, and a hidden panel slid open—back into the market." |
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| 100.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 807 | | adjectiveStacks | 0 | | stackExamples | (empty) | | adverbCount | 18 | | adverbRatio | 0.022304832713754646 | | lyAdverbCount | 1 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.0012391573729863693 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 105 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 105 | | mean | 8.99 | | std | 6.44 | | cv | 0.717 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 15 | | 1 | 10 | | 2 | 15 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 9 | | 5 | 1 | | 6 | 8 | | 7 | 7 | | 8 | 4 | | 9 | 15 | | 10 | 5 | | 11 | 3 | | 12 | 8 | | 13 | 8 | | 14 | 8 | | 15 | 7 | | 16 | 14 | | 17 | 10 | | 18 | 4 | | 19 | 2 | | 20 | 2 | | 21 | 6 | | 22 | 2 | | 23 | 4 | | 24 | 16 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 10 | | 27 | 6 | | 28 | 1 | | 29 | 6 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 5 | | 32 | 4 | | 33 | 2 | | 34 | 21 | | 35 | 6 | | 36 | 4 | | 37 | 10 | | 38 | 16 | | 39 | 6 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 6 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 8 | | 44 | 2 | | 45 | 8 | | 46 | 6 | | 47 | 5 | | 48 | 17 | | 49 | 14 |
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| 55.24% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 2 | | diversityRatio | 0.34285714285714286 | | totalSentences | 105 | | uniqueOpeners | 36 | |
| 40.65% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Then he stepped through." |
| | ratio | 0.012 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 22 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "She checked her watch." | | 1 | "She edged forward, pistol low" | | 2 | "She broke into a sprint." | | 3 | "Her lungs burned." | | 4 | "She descended, hand on the" | | 5 | "He pulled something white from" | | 6 | "His face was pale, sharp," | | 7 | "She pressed her palm against" | | 8 | "She glanced back up the" | | 9 | "She pulled her phone." | | 10 | "She pressed it to the" | | 11 | "She scanned for the gray" | | 12 | "She needed to find him." | | 13 | "She heard footsteps—fast, running—echoing from" | | 14 | "She wasn't leaving without answers." | | 15 | "She pushed through a swinging" | | 16 | "He wore a Saint Christopher" | | 17 | "His voice carried the softness" | | 18 | "His hands were steady, surgeon's" | | 19 | "He glanced at her gun" |
| | ratio | 0.268 | |
| 51.46% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 67 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | | 0 | "Quinn pressed her back against" | | 1 | "The suspect's sneakers slapped wet" | | 2 | "She checked her watch." | | 3 | "The leather strap had darkened" | | 4 | "She edged forward, pistol low" | | 5 | "The street emptied out near" | | 6 | "Neon bled into puddles." | | 7 | "Quinn spotted him—gray hoodie, black" | | 8 | "She broke into a sprint." | | 9 | "Her lungs burned." | | 10 | "The stairwell stank of rust" | | 11 | "She descended, hand on the" | | 12 | "The suspect paused at a" | | 13 | "He pulled something white from" | | 14 | "A panel slid open with" | | 15 | "Quinn drew her weapon." | | 16 | "His face was pale, sharp," | | 17 | "The panel sealed behind him" | | 18 | "Quinn approached the wall." | | 19 | "She pressed her palm against" |
| | ratio | 0.817 | |
| 0.00% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 82 | | matches | (empty) | | ratio | 0 | |
| 50.69% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 31 | | technicalSentenceCount | 4 | | matches | | 0 | "The market moved around her—supernatural goods exchanged for coin that glinted with unnatural colors." | | 1 | "Quinn tucked her gun away and walked toward the bar, her boots leaving wet prints on wooden floors that had seen too many secrets." | | 2 | "Quinn stood in the center, rain still dripping from her hair, listening to the market hum beyond the walls, and waited for someone to notice her." | | 3 | "He wore a Saint Christopher medallion that caught the green light." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 3 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "He glanced, hidden but present" |
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| 100.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 1 | | fancyCount | 0 | | fancyTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 17 | | tagDensity | 0.059 | | leniency | 0.118 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |