Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCWC0WV7NTJBP04GCT16GG2

Run Details

Duration:
6.2s
Cost:
$0.004289
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert and award-winning novel writer in the dark Romance genre. Your readers are hooked on your stories and can't wait to read the book you have in store. <important> - MUST: Start each chapter in medias res (in the middle of action). AVOID talking about the weather, time of day, the position of the sun, or other boring stuff. - The instructions/summary are just a that, a summary. Feel free to add details, stretch sections and add interesting transitions/descriptions/fillers. - When called for it, have fast-paced action, but otherwise take things slow. This is an experience, and not for people with short attention spans. Enjoy the wine, not slurp Red Bull. - Add descriptions when transitioning places/times/etc, or when coming by new places (e.g. a corner shop, a cafe, etc.). But remember: NOT at the start or end of a chapter. - MUST: AVOID ending in internal monologue, reminiscing or waiting for the next day. A good chapter end is when we're ending right when shit hits the fan. We want to have the reader be excited for what comes next. So no reminiscing, contemplating or summarizing the day. It's popcorn time! </important>
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <character id="4415" name="Lucien Moreau" aliases="Lucien, Luc, the Frenchman" pronouns="he/him" species="Half-Demon" storyRole="Ally"> <eyeColor>heterochromatic — one amber, one black</eyeColor> <hair>slicked-back platinum blond</hair> <height>5'11"</height> <age>32</age> <cane>ivory-handled cane that conceals a thin blade</cane> <dress>tailored charcoal suits</dress> <description>An impeccably dressed fixer and information broker in London's supernatural underworld. He speaks four languages fluently.</description> <backstory>Born in Marseille to a human mother and a demon father from the realm of Avaros.</backstory> </character> <location id="858" name="Eva's Flat" aliases="Eva's place, the flat on Brick Lane" realm="Earth"> <cat>tabby cat named Ptolemy</cat> <security>three deadbolts on the front door</security> <description>A cramped one-bedroom flat above a curry house on Brick Lane, East London. Every surface is covered with books, scrolls, and research notes.</description> </location> </codex> <proseGuidelines> <styleGuide> - Write in past tense and use British English spelling and grammar - Keep a Flesch reading ease score of 60 - Respect the the Royal Order of Adjectives: The order is: opinion, size, age, shape, color, origin, material, purpose, followed by the noun itself (e.g., "a lovely little old rectangular green French silver whittling knife") - Respect the ablaut reduplication rule (e.g. tick-tock, flip-flop) - Write in active voice - Passive voice: <bad>The book was read by Sarah.</bad> - Active voice: <good>Sarah read the book.</good> - Reduce the use of passive verbs - <bad>For a moment, I was tempted to throw in the towel.</bad> - <good>For a moment, I felt tempted to throw in the towel.</good> - Avoid misplaced modifiers that can cause confusion when starting with "-ing" words: - <bad>Considering going to the store, the empty fridge reflected in Betty's eyes.</bad> - <good>Betty stared into the empty fridge. It was time to go to the store.</good> - Avoid redundant adverbs that state the obvious meaning already contained in the verb: - <bad>She whispered quietly to her mom.</bad> - <good>She whispered to her mom.</good> - Use stronger, more descriptive verbs over weak ones: - <bad>Daniel drove quickly to his mother's house.</bad> - <good>Daniel raced to his mother's house.</good> - Omit adverbs that don't add solid meaning like "extremely", "definitely", "truly", "very", "really": - <bad>The movie was extremely boring.</bad> - <good>The movie was dull.</good> - Use adverbs to replace clunky phrasing when they increase clarity: - <bad>He threw the bags into the corner in a rough manner.</bad> - <good>He threw the bags into the corner roughly.</good> - Avoid making simple thoughts needlessly complex: - <bad>After I woke up in the morning the other day, I went downstairs, turned on the stove, and made myself a very good omelet.</bad> - <good>I cooked a delicious omelet for breakfast yesterday morning.</good> - Never backload sentences by putting the main idea at the end: - <bad>I decided not to wear too many layers because it's really hot outside.</bad> - <good>It's sweltering outside today, so I dressed light.</good> - Omit nonessential details that don't contribute to the core meaning: - <bad>It doesn't matter what kind of coffee I buy, where it's from, or if it's organic or not—I need to have cream because I really don't like how the bitterness makes me feel.</bad> - <good>I add cream to my coffee because the bitter taste makes me feel unwell.</good> - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. For instance: - Telling: <bad>Michael was terribly afraid of the dark.</bad> - Showing: <good>Michael tensed as his mother switched off the light and left the room.</good>- Telling: <bad>I walked through the forest. It was already Fall, and I was getting cold.</bad> - Showing: <good>Dry orange leaves crunched under my feet. I pulled my coat's collar up and rubbed my hands together.</good>- Add sensory details (sight, smell, taste, sound, touch) to support the "showing" (but keep an active voice) - <bad>The room was filled with the scent of copper.</bad> - <good>Copper stung my nostrils. Blood. Recent.</good> - Use descriptive language more sporadically. While vivid descriptions are engaging, human writers often use them in bursts rather than consistently throughout a piece. When adding them, make them count! Like when we transition from one location to the next, or someone is reminiscing their past, or explaining a concept/their dream... - Avoid adverbs and clichés and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Avoid writing all sentences in the typical subject, verb, object structure. Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. Like so: <good>Locked. Seems like someone doesn't want his secrets exposed. I can work with that.</good> - Convey events and story through dialogue. It is important to keep a unique voice for every character and make it consistent. - Write dialogue that reveals characters' personalities, motivations, emotions, and attitudes in an interesting and compelling manner - Leave dialogue unattributed. If needed, only use "he/she said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech. Dialogue always is standalone, never part of a paragraph. Like so: - <bad>"I don't know," Helena said nonchalantly, shrugging her shoulders</bad> - <good>"No idea" "Why not? It was your responsibility"</good> - Avoid boring and mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or include unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. Avoid conversations that are just "Let's go" "yes, let's" or "Are you ready?" "Yes I'm ready". Those are not interesting. Think hard about every situtation and word of text before writing dialogue. If it doesn't serve a purpose and it's just people talking about their day, leave it. No one wants to have a normal dinner scene, something needs to happen for it to be in the story. Words are expensive to print, so make sure they count! - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Use body language to reveal hidden feelings and implied accusations- Imply feelings and thoughts, never state them directly - NEVER use indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" - NEVER use em-dashes, use commas for asides instead </styleGuide> <voiceGuide> Each character in the story needs to have distinct speech patterns: - Word choice preferences - Sentence length tendencies - Cultural/educational influences - Verbal tics and catchphrases Learn how each person talks and continue in their style, and use their Codex entries as reference. <examples> - <bad>"We need to go now." "Yes, we should leave." "I agree."</bad> <good>"Time's up." "Indeed, our departure is rather overdue." "Whatever, let's bounce."</good> - Power Dynamic Example: <bad> "We need to discuss the contract." "Yes, let's talk about it." "I have concerns." </bad> <good> "A word about the contract." "Of course, Mr. Blackwood. Whatever you need." "The terms seem..." A manicured nail tapped the desk. "Inadequate." "I can explain every-" "Can you?" </good> </examples> </voiceGuide> <dialogueFlow> When writing dialogue, consider that it usually has a goal in mind, which gives it a certain flow. Make dialogue sections also quite snappy in the back and forth, and don't spread the lines out as much. It's good to have details before, after, or as a chunk in-between, but we don't want to have a trail of "dialogue breadcrumbs" spread throughout a conversation. <examples> - Pattern 1 - Question/Deflection/Revelation: <good> "Where were you last night?" "Work. The usual." "Lipstick's an interesting shade for spreadsheets." </good> - Pattern 2 - Statement/Contradiction/Escalation: <good> "Your brother's clean." "Tommy doesn't touch drugs." "I'm holding his tox screen." </good> - Pattern 3 - Observation/Denial/Truth: <good> "That's a new watch." "Birthday gift." "We both know what birthdays mean in this business." </good> - Example - A Simple Coffee Order: <bad> "I'll have a coffee." "What size?" "Large, please." </bad> <good> "Black coffee.""Size?""Large. Been a long night." "That bodega shooting?" "You watch too much news." "My brother owns that store." </good> This short exchange: - Advances plot (reveals connection to crime) - Shows character (cop working late) - Creates tension (unexpected connection) - Sets up future conflict (personal stake) - Example - Dinner Scene: <bad> "Pass the salt." "Here you go." "Thanks." </bad> <good> "Salt?" "Perfect as is. Mother's recipe." "Mother always did prefer... bland things." "Unlike your first wife?" </good> - Example - Office Small Talk: <bad> "Nice weather today." "Yes, very nice." "Good for golf." </bad> <good> "Perfect golf weather." "Shame about your membership." "Temporary suspension. Board meets next week." "I know. I called the vote." </good> </examples> </dialogueFlow> <subtextGuide> - Layer dialogue with hidden meaning: <bad>"I hate you!" she yelled angrily.</bad> <good>"I made your favorite dinner." The burnt pot sat accusingly on the stove.</good> - Create tension through indirect communication: <bad>"Are you cheating on me?"</bad> <good>"Late meeting again?" The lipstick stain on his collar caught the light.</good> <examples> - Example 1 - Unspoken Betrayal: <bad> "Did you tell them about our plans?" "No, I would never betray you." "I don't believe you." </bad> <good> "Funny. Johnson mentioned our expansion plans today." "The market's full of rumors." "Mentioned the exact numbers, actually." The pen in his hand snapped. </good> - Example 2 - Failed Marriage: <bad> "You're never home anymore." "I have to work late." "I miss you." </bad> <good> "Your dinner's in the microwave. Again." "Meetings ran long." "They always do." She folded the same shirt for the third time. </good> - Example 3 - Power Struggle: <bad> "You can't fire me." "I'm the boss." "I'll fight this." </bad> <good> "That's my father's nameplate you're sitting behind." "Was." "The board meeting's on Thursday." </good> </examples> </subtextGuide> <sceneDetail> While writing dialogue makes things more fun, sometimes we need to add detail to not have it be a full on theatre piece. <examples> - Example A (Power Dynamic Scene) <good> "Where's my money?" The ledger snapped shut. "I need more time." "Interesting." He pulled out a familiar gold pocket watch. My mother's. "Time is exactly what you bargained with last month." "That was different-" "Was it?" The watch dangled between us. "Four generations of O'Reillys have wound this every night. Your mother. Your grandmother. Your great-grandmother.Shall we see who winds it next?" </good> - Example B (Action Chase) It's much better to be in the head of the character experiencing it, showing a bit of their though-process, mannerisms and personality: <good> Three rules for surviving a goblin chase in Covent Garden: Don't run straight. Don't look back. Don't let them herd you underground. I broke the first rule at Drury Lane. Rookie mistake. The fruit cart I dodged sailed into the wall behind me. Glass shattered. Someone screamed about insurance. *Tourist season's getting rough*, the scream seemed to say. Londoners adapt fast. "Oi! Market's closed!" The goblin's accent was pure East End. They're evolving. Learning. I spotted the Warren Street tube station sign ahead. *Shit.* There went rule three. </good> - Example C (Crime Scene Investigation) <good> "Greek." Davies snapped photos of the symbols. "No, wait. Reverse Greek." "Someone's been watching too many horror films." I picked up a receipt from the floor. Occult supply shop in Camden. Paid by credit card. *Amateur hour*. "Could be dangerous though," Davies said. "Remember Bristol?" "Bristol was Sanskrit. And actual cultists." I pointed to the nearest symbol. "This genius wrote 'darkness' backwards but used a Sigma instead of an S. It's summoning Instagram followers at best." "Speaking of followers..." Davies pointed to heavy foot traffic in the dust. Multiple sets. All new trainers. *Ah.* "Anyone check local uni paranormal societies?" </good> - Example D (Dialogue-heavy) <good> "Found your card in her wallet." The detective slid it across the table. Worn edges. Folded corner. Three years old at least. "Standard practice. I work missing persons." "Funny thing about missing persons.Eventually they stop being missing. Turn up in the Thames. Under motorways. In pieces." "I don't-" "You found four last year. All breathing." She opened a file. "This would've been your first dead one. If we hadn't found her first." The card felt heavier somehow. </good> </examples> </sceneDetail> <sceneOpenings> KEY RULE: Never open with more than one paragraph of description, no matter how beautiful. Description should be earned through action and dialogue. Instead of opening with setting description, open with: - A character doing something specific - A line of dialogue that raises questions - An unexpected observation - A moment of tension or conflict - Start with a hook that's 1-2 sentences maximum - Follow with a smaller paragraph that provides immediate context - Vary paragraph size from the start to create visual interest </sceneOpenings> </proseGuidelines> Write a chapter based on the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the romance genre. Two people who parted on complicated terms are forced together again when one shows up unannounced at the other's flat. There's history between them — attraction, hurt, and things left unsaid. Write the scene from the moment the door opens. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Three deadbolts clicked back, loud in the narrow hallway. I yanked the heavy wood inward, ready to yell at the landlord about the leaking pipe in the bathroom. "Delivery for Carter." The voice hit me straight in the chest. Smooth. French. Utterly immovable. Lucien stood in the dim doorway. A tailored charcoal suit hugged his broad shoulders, expensive and completely out of place above the curry house on Brick Lane. His heterochromatic eyes locked onto mine, one amber, one black. "You have the wrong address." "Do I?" He stepped past me without an invitation. My fingers tightened around the edge of the door. The familiar scent of bergamot and woodsmoke drifted off him, filling the cramped entryway before I could breathe. "Get out, Lucien." "A warm welcome. As expected." He stopped by the cluttered table near the sofa, his gaze sweeping over the open books and research notes piled high on every surface. "Ptolemy is missing." "The cat is sleeping under the bed." "Liar." "Check the bedroom then." "I prefer to inspect the premises with the owner." He turned slowly, the ivory-handled cane in his gloved hand tapping against the floorboards. The thin blade concealed inside that stick stayed hidden, but we both knew it was there. "You look tired, Rory." "I worked a double shift at the restaurant." "Delivering spring rolls to warlocks?" "Paying rent." "A vulgar necessity." He closed the distance between us too fast. The air left my lungs. He stopped an inch away, tall enough that I had to tilt my chin up to meet his mismatched gaze. "You vanished from Soho without a word." "I left." "You fled." "Semantics." "A dangerous game." His gloved hand reached out, hovering near my face before his thumb brushed the small crescent-shaped scar on my left wrist. The touch burned right through my skin, sending a jolt straight down my spine. "Who gave you this?" "An old accident." "Evan?" "Leave him out of this." "He breathes still. An oversight on my part." "You promised to stay out of my life, Lucien." "I promised nothing of the sort." His amber eye darkened, shifting toward black in the dim light. "You walked out of my car, left my ring on the dashboard, and thought you could play human in East London." "I am human." "Not when you bleed." "How would you know anything about that?" "I tasted it." The words dropped between us like a lead weight. My breath hitched. I hated how my body betrayed me, how every nerve ending flared alive just because he stood too close. "That was a mistake." "Nothing with us is a mistake, chérie." "Stop calling me that." "Never." He stepped closer, pressing me back against the locked door until the wood dug into my spine. His chest brushed mine, solid and warm. "You miss me." "I miss the quiet." "You never liked quiet." His gaze dropped to my lips, lingering there with a predatory hunger that made my knees weak. "You like the noise. You like the danger." "I like my independence." "You are sharing a building with Silas. A demon who runs a tavern of cutthroats. Do not talk to me about independence." "Silas leaves me alone." "I am not Silas." "Clearly. Silas doesn't break into my flat unannounced." "The deadbolts are rusty. A child could pick them." "I'll add a fourth lock tomorrow." "Add fifty. It will not keep me away." He leaned down, his breath warm against my ear, sending a shiver rippling across my skin. "I came to warn you." "About what?" "Avaros is looking for a human with bright blue eyes and a sharp tongue. Does that description ring any bells?" My blood ran cold. The research scattered across the desk, the stolen grimoires, the sigils Eva had spent weeks decoding—all of it suddenly felt heavier, dangerous. "I have no idea what you mean." "Do not lie to me, Rory. The high lords want the artifact you pulled from the Thames last Tuesday." "I don't have any artifact." "Your coat is wet. The Thames mud clings to your boots." He reached down, his fingers wrapping around my ankle, lifting my foot with effortless strength to inspect the dried silt caked on my heel. "Amateur hour, Carter." "Let go of me." "Or what? You will stab me with a butter knife?" He dropped my foot and stepped back, his smile razor-sharp. "Pack a bag." "I am not going anywhere with you." "The bounty hunters crossed the channel this morning. They will breach these walls in twenty minutes." "You're lying." "Look out the window." I shoved past him, rushing to the cracked glass overlooking Brick Lane. Down below, two figures in heavy wool coats stepped out of a black sedan, their heads tilted upward, sniffing the air like hounds on a scent. One of them turned his face toward my window, revealing glowing yellow eyes that split horizontally. "Shit," I whispered. "Indeed," Lucien said, his voice entirely too calm as he slid the ivory-handled cane into a ready position. "Shall we introduce them to your new locks?"
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags13
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"He turned slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences66
tagDensity0.197
leniency0.394
rawRatio0.077
effectiveRatio0.03
76.39% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount847
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"utterly"
count1
1
adverb"completely"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"suddenly"
count1
highlights
0"utterly"
1"completely"
2"slowly"
3"suddenly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
76.39% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount847
totalAiIsms4
found
0
word"familiar"
count1
1
word"down my spine"
count1
2
word"weight"
count1
3
word"effortless"
count1
highlights
0"familiar"
1"down my spine"
2"weight"
3"effortless"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches1
maxInWindow1
found
0
label"blood ran cold"
count1
highlights
0"blood ran cold"
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences37
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences37
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences90
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen35
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords846
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions11
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions7
wordCount465
uniqueNames4
maxNameDensity0.43
worstName"Brick"
maxWindowNameDensity0.5
worstWindowName"Brick"
discoveredNames
Brick2
Lane2
Eva1
Lucien2
persons
0"Eva"
1"Lucien"
places
0"Brick"
1"Lane"
globalScore1
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences30
glossingSentenceCount0
matches(empty)
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount846
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences90
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs62
mean13.65
std13.7
cv1.004
sampleLengths
028
13
212
337
45
59
627
73
832
97
101
114
1243
138
145
152
1643
172
182
191
2042
213
221
235
248
259
2638
273
284
297
303
3131
324
337
344
3528
364
3729
384
3922
404
414
428
439
446
4529
462
4720
4826
497
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences37
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs74
matches(empty)
100.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount1
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences1
totalSentences90
ratio0.011
matches
0"The research scattered across the desk, the stolen grimoires, the sigils Eva had spent weeks decoding—all of it suddenly felt heavier, dangerous."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount470
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"small crescent-shaped scar"
adverbCount18
adverbRatio0.03829787234042553
lyAdverbCount6
lyAdverbRatio0.01276595744680851
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences90
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences90
mean9.4
std7.75
cv0.824
sampleLengths
09
119
23
38
41
51
62
76
821
910
105
119
129
1318
143
1529
163
177
181
194
2023
2116
224
238
245
252
2611
275
2820
297
302
312
321
3324
3414
354
363
371
385
398
409
4117
4221
433
444
457
463
479
483
4919
85.93% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats1
diversityRatio0.5222222222222223
totalSentences90
uniqueOpeners47
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences33
matches(empty)
ratio0
0.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount20
totalSentences33
matches
0"I yanked the heavy wood"
1"His heterochromatic eyes locked onto"
2"He stepped past me without"
3"My fingers tightened around the"
4"He stopped by the cluttered"
5"He turned slowly, the ivory-handled"
6"He closed the distance between"
7"He stopped an inch away,"
8"His gloved hand reached out,"
9"His amber eye darkened, shifting"
10"My breath hitched."
11"I hated how my body"
12"He stepped closer, pressing me"
13"His chest brushed mine, solid"
14"His gaze dropped to my"
15"He leaned down, his breath"
16"My blood ran cold."
17"He reached down, his fingers"
18"He dropped my foot and"
19"I shoved past him, rushing"
ratio0.606
5.45% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount30
totalSentences33
matches
0"I yanked the heavy wood"
1"The voice hit me straight"
2"Lucien stood in the dim"
3"A tailored charcoal suit hugged"
4"His heterochromatic eyes locked onto"
5"He stepped past me without"
6"My fingers tightened around the"
7"The familiar scent of bergamot"
8"He stopped by the cluttered"
9"He turned slowly, the ivory-handled"
10"The thin blade concealed inside"
11"He closed the distance between"
12"The air left my lungs."
13"He stopped an inch away,"
14"His gloved hand reached out,"
15"The touch burned right through"
16"His amber eye darkened, shifting"
17"The words dropped between us"
18"My breath hitched."
19"I hated how my body"
ratio0.909
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences33
matches(empty)
ratio0
83.33% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences12
technicalSentenceCount1
matches
0"One of them turned his face toward my window, revealing glowing yellow eyes that split horizontally."
86.54% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags13
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"He dropped, his smile razor-sharp"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags2
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"I whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences66
tagDensity0.03
leniency0.061
rawRatio0.5
effectiveRatio0.03
83.6009%