Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCWD17T13VQD983E4GZCNHS

Run Details

Duration:
9m 55s
Cost:
$0.015692
Provider:
DeepInfra

Model input

System
You are an expert novelist with a gift for vivid, immersive prose. You write in tight third-person limited point of view with a strong narrative voice. Your prose is clean, precise, and engaging — you favor strong verbs, concrete details, and natural-sounding dialogue. You will be given a story bible (codex) containing canonical details about characters, locations, items, and lore. Use these details to ground your writing in the established world. Stay consistent with the codex. Write only the prose of the scene. Do not include titles, chapter headings, markdown formatting, or any commentary before or after the scene.
User/Human
<codex> <character id="4416" name="Detective Harlow Quinn" aliases="Quinn, Detective Quinn, Harlow" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Antagonist"> <eyeColor>brown</eyeColor> <hair>closely cropped salt-and-pepper</hair> <height>5'9"</height> <age>41</age> <jawline>sharp jaw</jawline> <watch>worn leather watch on her left wrist</watch> <bearing>military precision</bearing> <description>A Metropolitan Police detective with 18 years of decorated service who suspects the clique is involved in criminal activity.</description> <backstory>She lost her partner, DS Morris, during a case three years ago under unexplained circumstances that had supernatural origins she doesn't yet understand.</backstory> </character> <character id="4414" name="Eva Kowalski" aliases="Eva, Evie" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Best Friend"> <eyeColor>green</eyeColor> <hair>curly red</hair> <height>5'4"</height> <age>26</age> <glasses>round glasses</glasses> <satchel>worn leather satchel full of books</satchel> <freckles>freckled complexion</freckles> <nervousHabit>tucking hair behind her left ear</nervousHabit> <description>Aurora's childhood friend and an occult researcher.</description> <backstory>Moved to London two years before Aurora and works as a research assistant at the British Museum's restricted archives. She holds a master's degree in Ancient History from Oxford.</backstory> </character> <location id="856" name="The Veil Market" aliases="Veil Market, the Market, underground market" realm="Earth"> <currentLocation>abandoned Tube station beneath Camden</currentLocation> <entryRequirement>bone token</entryRequirement> <schedule>moves locations every full moon</schedule> <description>A hidden supernatural black market that sells enchanted goods, banned alchemical substances, and information.</description> </location> <item id="2004" name="Veil Compass" aliases="the Compass, shadow compass" type="Tool" origin="The Veil Market"> <casingMaterial>small brass compass</casingMaterial> <faceMarkings>face etched with protective sigils</faceMarkings> <needle>points toward the nearest supernatural rift or portal</needle> <patina>casing has a patina of verdigris</patina> <creator>crafted by a Shade artisan</creator> <description>A compass attuned to supernatural energy.</description> </item> </codex> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the mystery genre. A detective arrives at a crime scene in an unusual location. Something is wrong — the evidence doesn't add up. A colleague is present, offering a different interpretation. Through careful observation and deduction, the detective begins to see what others have missed. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for characters and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary.

Model response

AI
The abandoned station breathed cold. Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off the crumbling platform edge, her boots crunching on grit that smelled of rust and ancient electricity. Below Camden, the old Northern line tunnel had become something else—something that moved with the moon and traded in secrets. She had the bone token in her coat pocket, smooth and warm, proof she belonged here, or proof she was trespassing. Her left wrist bore the worn leather watch, its face scratched but the second hand still relentless. Eva Kowalski was already crouched beside the body, her curly red hair catching the weak beam of Eva’s own flashlight, round glasses glinting. The satchel full of books sat open at her hip, a leather bulwark against the dark. “You’re late,” Eva said, not looking up. She tucked a strand of hair behind her left ear, a nervous flicker Quinn had learned to read like a pulse. “Traffic in the real world,” Quinn said. Her voice carried the clipped precision of eighteen years in uniform, though her bearing was pure military discipline—shoulders square, gaze level. She looked down at the dead man. Middle-aged, well-dressed in a coat of charcoal wool that cost more than her monthly rent. His face was calm, almost serene. No blood. No wounds visible. Just stillness that didn’t belong in a place like this. “The station master found him an hour ago,” Eva said. “But that’s not right, is it? The market moved two nights ago—full moon. This place should be empty. Dead space.” Quinn knelt. The floor tiles were black with age, except for a path of clean ceramic leading from the tunnel’s far arch to the body. She ran her finger along the grout. No dust. The rest of the platform wore a thick gray coat. “He was carried,” Quinn said. Eva shook her head. “Not carried. Brought. Through the rift.” Quinn looked up. Eva’s green eyes were bright with the fervor of someone who had read too many restricted texts. “You have another theory,” Quinn said. Not a question. Eva stood, brushing her knees. Her freckles seemed paler in the dim light. “He’s a vendor from the Market. Or was. Look at his hands.” Quinn obligingly examined the dead man’s hands. The fingers were long, manicured, clutching nothing but air—except the right palm held something small and brass. “A compass,” Eva said, leaning in. “A Veil Compass. Crafted by a Shade artisan. The face is etched with protective sigils, and the needle—” She paused, letting Quinn see. Quinn lifted the object gently from the dead palm. It was small, brass, heavy for its size, coated in verdigris that had aged into a green-black patina. The face was indeed etched with intricate sigils—protective, binding, warning. But the needle did not point north. It pointed downward, angled sharply toward the tiled wall of the tunnel, trembling as if caught in an invisible current. “It points to the nearest supernatural rift,” Eva said. “Which means he was killed by whatever came through. A Shade. A debt-collector from the other side. The compass tried to warn him, and it failed. The needle locked on the portal at the moment of death.” Quinn turned the compass in her palm. The needle wavered, then steadied, still pointing to the wall. She noted the weight, the temperature—cool, not cold. The verdigris had settled into the etchings like moss in stone. She brought it closer to her eye. The needle’s tip was clean. Unscathed. “If he died clutching it in terror,” Quinn said slowly, “then his sweat, his oils, would have disturbed the patina. Here.” She pointed to the brass casing near the needle’s pivot. “This green is undisturbed. No smudge. No heat bloom. He wasn’t holding this when he died, Eva. Someone placed it in his hand after.” Eva’s mouth tightened. “You’re saying it was planted.” “I’m saying the evidence contradicts the emotion of the scene.” Quinn stood, her sharp jaw set, and surveyed the platform. Her eyes—dark brown, sharp—tracked details others glossed over. The dead man’s shoes were polished black leather, immaculate. Not a speck of platform dust. But the hem of his coat was damp, stained with clay and something metallic that smelled like copper and old water. “He was killed elsewhere,” Quinn said. “Somewhere dirty. Then cleaned, dressed, and brought here through that rift.” She nodded toward the wall the compass indicated. “Your portal. The needle confirms it. This isn’t the crime scene. It’s the disposal site.” Eva’s breath caught. She tucked her hair behind her left ear again, faster this time. “You’re dismissing the supernatural entirely.” “I’m separating the mechanism from the myth.” Quinn walked to the wall. The tiles looked ordinary—white ceramic, cracked, stained with age. But the compass needle pulled her closer, vibrating. She pressed her palm to the grout. Cold radiated back, not the cold of stone, but the cold of absence. “The Veil Market moves every full moon,” Quinn said, turning back. “That means access points shift. This rift is temporary. Someone used it while it was active—two nights ago, when the market relocated. They moved a body through it and left the compass as a signature. A Shade signature, perhaps, but a human hand holding it.” Eva followed her gaze. “Why stage it here? Why not just bury him?” “Because this station is abandoned. Unpatrolled. But it’s also known. A supernatural death here sends a message to anyone who trades in this world. It warns them. Or it distracts them.” Quinn’s fingers brushed her watch—worn leather, the strap softened by years—checking the time out of habit, though time meant little underground. “Three years ago, my partner, DS Morris, died under circumstances that had supernatural origins I didn’t understand then. I understand now that people use these things—these rifts, these markets—to hide human crimes. The supernatural is the alibi.” Eva’s expression shifted, the researcher giving way to something more fragile. “And the bone token? You used one to enter.” Quinn pulled it from her pocket—a small, carved fragment, warm against her skin. “The entry requirement. Someone had to bring the body in with a token, or the rift wouldn’t open for them. That takes planning. Knowledge. Not a Shade’s instinct. A human’s.” She turned back to the body. The man’s face, serene, looked almost peaceful, but Quinn saw the tension in the jaw now, the slight discoloration around the throat that the collar hid. Strangulation, perhaps. Or something that left no external mark but stopped the breath. Eva crouched again, her satchel open, pulling out a slim volume with a cracked leather cover. “The sigils on the compass,” she said, her voice steadier now, analytical. “They’re not just protective. They’re directional. They guide the needle. If this was placed after death, then the killer knew exactly what it was and what it would do. They wanted it to point here.” “Exactly.” Quinn’s voice was low, precise. “The killer isn’t hiding from the supernatural world, Eva. They’re fluent in it. They used the market’s schedule, the rift’s location, and an artisan-crafted tool to build a scene that looks like a Shade execution. But it’s human murder wearing a ghost costume.” Quinn walked the perimeter of the platform, her boots silent. She noted the absence of footprints in the dust—except one partial, near the arch, the heel of a boot with a worn rubber edge, too small for the dead man. A woman’s boot? Or a man with small feet. She filed it away. “The dust,” Eva said, following her. “There’s no disturbance except that path.” “Because they came through the rift,” Quinn said, “not through the tunnel. The portal leaves no footprint in our dirt. But the body was carried physically from the rift’s exit point to here, which is why the coat hem is dirty from the other side, and then the killer stepped back through—or out—leaving only the partial print where they touched our ground first.” Eva stood fully now, her round glasses reflecting the faint light. “So what do we do? The rift closes with the market’s movement?” “Not necessarily. It weakens.” Quinn looked at the compass again, the needle trembling toward the wall. “We document. We pull the tile if we can. And we look for who in this city knows enough about Shade artisans and Veil Compasses to use one as a prop.” Eva tucked her hair behind her ear, a gesture of acceptance rather than anxiety. “The British Museum archives have records on Shade craftsmanship. Restricted, but I have access.” Quinn nodded. The sharp line of her jaw softened almost imperceptibly—not warmth, but acknowledgment. “Then you’re useful, Eva. Not as a believer in ghosts, but as a map reader.” Eva smiled faintly, though her green eyes remained troubled. “And you? You still think it’s just a human crime?” Quinn surveyed the dark station, the dead man, the compass pointing like an accusation at the wall. “I think DS Morris taught me that the supernatural is real, Eva. I just refuse to let real monsters use imaginary ones to get away with murder.” She straightened, her bearing military, her brown eyes fixed on the hidden portal in the tile. The watch on her wrist ticked on. The evidence had spoken, quietly, precisely—through patina undisturbed, through dust untouched, through a needle that pointed not at death, but at escape. And Quinn, for the first time in three years, felt the pieces align not with fear, but with clarity.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:55:52.065Z" 7/25/2026, 2:55:52 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags19
adverbTagCount1
adverbTags
0"Quinn said slowly [slowly]"
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.452
leniency0.905
rawRatio0.053
effectiveRatio0.048
87.44% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1592
totalAiIsmAdverbs4
found
0
adverb"gently"
count1
1
adverb"sharply"
count1
2
adverb"slowly"
count1
3
adverb"precisely"
count1
highlights
0"gently"
1"sharply"
2"slowly"
3"precisely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
68.59% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1592
totalAiIsms10
found
0
word"glinting"
count1
1
word"flicker"
count1
2
word"pulse"
count1
3
word"etched"
count2
4
word"intricate"
count1
5
word"wavered"
count1
6
word"weight"
count1
7
word"tension"
count1
8
word"warmth"
count1
highlights
0"glinting"
1"flicker"
2"pulse"
3"etched"
4"intricate"
5"wavered"
6"weight"
7"tension"
8"warmth"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells1
narrationSentences94
matches
0"t with fear"
97.26% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount3
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences94
filterMatches
0"watch"
1"see"
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences116
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen64
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1573
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions19
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
8.08% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions48
wordCount916
uniqueNames6
maxNameDensity2.84
worstName"Quinn"
maxWindowNameDensity4.5
worstWindowName"Quinn"
discoveredNames
Harlow1
Quinn26
Camden1
Northern1
Kowalski1
Eva18
persons
0"Harlow"
1"Quinn"
2"Kowalski"
3"Eva"
places(empty)
globalScore0.081
windowScore0.167
69.35% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences62
glossingSentenceCount2
matches
0"seemed paler in the dim light"
1"smelled like copper and old water"
0.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches6
per1kWords3.814
wordCount1573
matches
0"not the cold of stone, but the cold of absence"
1"no external mark but"
2"not warmth, but acknowledgment"
3"Not as a believer in ghosts, but as a map reader"
4"not at death, but at escape"
5"not with fear, but with clarity"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences116
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs40
mean39.33
std21.08
cv0.536
sampleLengths
084
139
228
371
430
544
65
710
820
99
1025
1124
1229
1364
1446
1549
1655
178
1864
1940
2020
2149
2256
2313
2489
2520
2643
2745
2863
2949
3053
3112
3263
3323
3447
3528
3629
3719
3844
3964
100.00% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount0
totalSentences94
matches(empty)
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs148
matches
0"was trespassing"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount14
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences12
totalSentences116
ratio0.103
matches
0"Below Camden, the old Northern line tunnel had become something else—something that moved with the moon and traded in secrets."
1"Her voice carried the clipped precision of eighteen years in uniform, though her bearing was pure military discipline—shoulders square, gaze level."
2"The fingers were long, manicured, clutching nothing but air—except the right palm held something small and brass."
3"The face was indeed etched with intricate sigils—protective, binding, warning."
4"She noted the weight, the temperature—cool, not cold."
5"Her eyes—dark brown, sharp—tracked details others glossed over."
6"The tiles looked ordinary—white ceramic, cracked, stained with age."
7"“Because this station is abandoned. Unpatrolled. But it’s also known. A supernatural death here sends a message to anyone who trades in this world. It warns them. Or it distracts them.” Quinn’s fingers brushed her watch—worn leather, the strap softened by years—checking the time out of habit, though time meant little underground."
8"Quinn pulled it from her pocket—a small, carved fragment, warm against her skin."
9"She noted the absence of footprints in the dust—except one partial, near the arch, the heel of a boot with a worn rubber edge, too small for the dead man."
10"The sharp line of her jaw softened almost imperceptibly—not warmth, but acknowledgment."
11"The evidence had spoken, quietly, precisely—through patina undisturbed, through dust untouched, through a needle that pointed not at death, but at escape."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount933
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"brown, sharp—tracked details"
adverbCount37
adverbRatio0.03965702036441586
lyAdverbCount11
lyAdverbRatio0.011789924973204717
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences116
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences116
mean13.56
std10.8
cv0.797
sampleLengths
05
121
220
321
417
523
616
77
821
97
1021
117
1215
136
142
153
1610
1710
1820
192
2023
217
222
2310
245
254
266
273
2817
296
303
315
328
3312
347
3517
366
3723
389
3918
4010
417
4220
439
4437
457
4610
478
4811
497
52.59% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats4
diversityRatio0.33620689655172414
totalSentences116
uniqueOpeners39
41.15% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount1
totalSentences81
matches
0"Just stillness that didn’t belong"
ratio0.012
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount22
totalSentences81
matches
0"She had the bone token"
1"Her left wrist bore the"
2"She tucked a strand of"
3"Her voice carried the clipped"
4"She looked down at the"
5"His face was calm, almost"
6"She ran her finger along"
7"Her freckles seemed paler in"
8"She paused, letting Quinn see"
9"It was small, brass, heavy"
10"It pointed downward, angled sharply"
11"She noted the weight, the"
12"She brought it closer to"
13"Her eyes—dark brown, sharp—tracked details"
14"She nodded toward the wall"
15"She tucked her hair behind"
16"She pressed her palm to"
17"She turned back to the"
18"she said, her voice steadier"
19"She noted the absence of"
ratio0.272
40.25% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount68
totalSentences81
matches
0"The abandoned station breathed cold."
1"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off"
2"She had the bone token"
3"Her left wrist bore the"
4"Eva Kowalski was already crouched"
5"The satchel full of books"
6"Eva said, not looking up"
7"She tucked a strand of"
8"Her voice carried the clipped"
9"She looked down at the"
10"His face was calm, almost"
11"The floor tiles were black"
12"She ran her finger along"
13"The rest of the platform"
14"Eva shook her head."
15"Quinn looked up."
16"Eva’s green eyes were bright"
17"Eva stood, brushing her knees."
18"Her freckles seemed paler in"
19"Quinn obligingly examined the dead"
ratio0.84
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences81
matches(empty)
ratio0
30.08% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences38
technicalSentenceCount6
matches
0"Detective Harlow Quinn stepped off the crumbling platform edge, her boots crunching on grit that smelled of rust and ancient electricity."
1"Below Camden, the old Northern line tunnel had become something else—something that moved with the moon and traded in secrets."
2"Middle-aged, well-dressed in a coat of charcoal wool that cost more than her monthly rent."
3"Eva’s green eyes were bright with the fervor of someone who had read too many restricted texts."
4"It was small, brass, heavy for its size, coated in verdigris that had aged into a green-black patina."
5"It pointed downward, angled sharply toward the tiled wall of the tunnel, trembling as if caught in an invisible current."
46.05% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags19
uselessAdditionCount3
matches
0"Eva said, not looking up"
1"she said, her voice steadier now, analytical"
2"Quinn looked, the needle trembling toward the wall"
100.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags13
fancyCount0
fancyTags(empty)
dialogueSentences42
tagDensity0.31
leniency0.619
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
74.4947%