Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCWD9KPAM7E2GEKRE7P01V3

Run Details

Duration:
23.4s
Cost:
$0.034939
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
Rory pressed the mobile to her ear, her boots crunching through damp autumn leaves near the southern boundary of Richmond Park. "I am at the edge, Silas." Static hissed through the speaker, slicing through his heavy voice. "Turn around, Rory. The Grove bends wrong after dark. You know that." "The pendant hasn't stopped pulsing since nine." She tucked a strand of straight black hair behind her ear and touched the thumbnail-sized gem resting over her sternum. Deep crimson heat radiated through her denim jacket. "If a rift opened, Yu-Fei's deliveries aren't the only thing getting disrupted." "It's not worth getting trapped in a time-pocket. An hour in there could drop you into next Tuesday." "I am taking five paces inside. If I see nothing, I walk back out." "Rory—" The call cut to a flat, high-pitched hum. Rory lowered the phone. The screen flickered black, the battery indicator draining from eighty percent to dead in three blinks. She slid the device into her back pocket and looked up. Two massive oak trees flanked the clearing ahead, their gnarled roots intertwined like locked fingers to form the standing stones of the Grove boundary. Beyond them, the moonlight shifted color, bleaching the earth to a bruised gray. Wildflowers—foxgloves, poppies, pale bluebells—bloomed in dense, impossible thickets despite the November frost coating the rest of the park. She stepped between the twin oaks. The ambient roar of London traffic died instantly. The distant hum of Heathrow-bound jets vanished. Silence rushed into her ears, heavy and thick as grease. Rory drew a breath. The air tasted of crushed stems and ozone, sweet enough to trigger an ache behind her molars. She reached down with her right thumb, tracing the pale crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist out of habit. Her five-foot-six frame felt strangely light, her soles sinking into moss that yielded like wet foam. "Five paces," she spoke to the dark. Her voice sounded small, swallowed instantly by the canopy. She took her first step forward. Her left foot landed on a patch of white clover. The crimson pendant against her chest gave a sharp, rhythmic throb, casting a faint bloody glow down the front of her jacket. Step two. A dry snap echoed to her left. Rory froze. She scanned the treeline. Nothing moved among the pale trunks. Yet the shadows between the silver birches didn't align with the gibbous moon overhead. One long, jagged shape stretched sideways across the grass, pointing straight toward her boots, completely detached from any tree trunk. She locked her gaze on the stray shadow. "Isolde?" she called out. The air remained dead still. No wind stirred the wildflowers, yet three red poppies six feet away bent toward the ground, flattening one by one as if an invisible, heavy foot trod over them. A vibration hummed up through the soles of her boots. Step three. Rory took it backward. Her heel met smooth, cold wood. She turned her head. The twin oak standing stones she had passed moments ago were gone. In their place stood a wall of thorn bushes, their black spikes glinting with clear, gel-like sap. The pocket had altered its geometry. Rory swallowed hard, her cool head fighting the spike of adrenaline in her throat. She grabbed the silver chain around her neck. The Heartstone burned hot now, nearly scorching her skin through her clothes. It pulsed faster—a rapid, frantic heartbeat that matched her own. A wet, slithering slide dragged through the high grass to her right. She whirled around. "I can hear you," she said, her voice sharp, stripped of hesitation. Nothing answered. Thirty feet away, where the wildflower meadow sloped down toward a hollow, the dark twisted. It wasn't a shadow. It was a lack of space, a jagged tear in the twilight where the air rippled like oil on water. Inside the tear, something pale clicked. It sounded like fingernails tapping against dry bone. Rory backed away until her spine hit the thorny wall. The spikes dug through her jacket, pricking her shoulder blades, but she didn't break her gaze from the hollow. The air temperature plunged. Her breath billowed in gray plumes. The crimson glow from her pendant flared, throwing long, bloody fingers of light across the blooming bluebells. The flowers nearest to the tear began to rot, their petals blackening and liquidating into foul syrup in seconds. A low frequency vibration rattled her teeth. The tear widened. A limb extended from the breach—too long, folded at three joints, white as peeled birch bark and slick with dark fluid. It didn't touch the grass. It hovered an inch above the stems, drifting toward her with the unnatural smoothness of a needle slipping through silk. She slid her hand into her coat pocket, fingers wrapping around the dead weight of her iron house keys. Iron was supposed to burn Fae flesh, but the pendant's frantic, searing heat warned her this was no creature of the Grove. The crimson gemstone pulsed in tandem with a Hel portal tearing wider. The pale limb twitched. Another joined it, emerging from the tear with a sickening sound of peeling hide. The creature possessed no eyes, only a vertical seam split down a head that tapered like a blunt wedge. The seam parted a fraction of an inch, revealing rows of translucent, needle-thin denticles. It took no steps, yet it bridged half the distance between them instantly. Rory pressed her palms flat against the thorn bush behind her, ignoring the sharp bites into her palms. "Wrong door, mate," she said. The seam on the creature's head stretched wide, revealing a dark throat that reeked of copper and stagnant bog water. No sound came out, but the crimson light off Rory's chest flared violently, illuminating the dozens of hair-like tendrils writhing beneath the creature's translucent skin. It lunged.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:56:00.638Z" 7/25/2026, 2:56:00 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags5
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.455
leniency0.909
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
94.87% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount974
totalAiIsmAdverbs1
found
0
adverb"completely"
count1
highlights
0"completely"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
28.13% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount974
totalAiIsms14
found
0
word"disrupted"
count1
1
word"flickered"
count1
2
word"silence"
count1
3
word"tracing"
count1
4
word"rhythmic"
count1
5
word"throb"
count1
6
word"echoed"
count1
7
word"scanned"
count1
8
word"glinting"
count1
9
word"pulsed"
count2
10
word"silk"
count1
11
word"weight"
count1
12
word"searing"
count1
highlights
0"disrupted"
1"flickered"
2"silence"
3"tracing"
4"rhythmic"
5"throb"
6"echoed"
7"scanned"
8"glinting"
9"pulsed"
10"silk"
11"weight"
12"searing"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences80
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount1
narrationSentences80
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches
0"began to"
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences86
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen29
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords970
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions5
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
99.44% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions20
wordCount890
uniqueNames11
maxNameDensity1.01
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Park1
Deep1
Grove2
November1
London1
Heathrow-bound1
Heartstone1
Fae1
Hel1
Rory9
persons
0"Heartstone"
1"Rory"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Park"
2"London"
globalScore0.994
windowScore1
100.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences60
glossingSentenceCount1
matches
0"sounded like fingernails tapping against d"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches0
per1kWords0
wordCount970
matches(empty)
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences86
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs46
mean21.09
std17.19
cv0.815
sampleLengths
021
16
210
312
447
518
614
71
828
911
1055
116
1225
1356
147
159
1638
172
187
1946
208
214
2234
2310
246
2539
266
2744
2812
293
3012
3141
326
338
3429
3546
367
3749
3853
3918
4033
4113
4218
435
4445
452
96.49% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences80
matches
0"were gone"
1"was supposed"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount0
totalVerbs134
matches(empty)
43.19% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount4
semicolonCount0
flaggedSentences3
totalSentences86
ratio0.035
matches
0"Wildflowers—foxgloves, poppies, pale bluebells—bloomed in dense, impossible thickets despite the November frost coating the rest of the park."
1"It pulsed faster—a rapid, frantic heartbeat that matched her own."
2"A limb extended from the breach—too long, folded at three joints, white as peeled birch bark and slick with dark fluid."
88.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount901
adjectiveStacks2
stackExamples
0"pale crescent-shaped scar"
1"translucent, needle-thin denticles."
adverbCount21
adverbRatio0.023307436182019976
lyAdverbCount8
lyAdverbRatio0.008879023307436182
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences86
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences86
mean11.28
std6.75
cv0.598
sampleLengths
021
16
210
312
427
58
612
718
814
91
108
114
1216
1311
1424
1513
1618
176
188
197
2010
214
2217
2319
2416
257
269
276
2810
2922
302
317
322
334
346
3514
3620
378
384
395
4029
4110
422
434
446
454
4612
4717
486
4914
46.12% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.32558139534883723
totalSentences86
uniqueOpeners28
0.00% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
79.46% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount26
totalSentences74
matches
0"She tucked a strand of"
1"She slid the device into"
2"She stepped between the twin"
3"She reached down with her"
4"Her five-foot-six frame felt strangely"
5"she spoke to the dark"
6"Her voice sounded small, swallowed"
7"She took her first step"
8"Her left foot landed on"
9"She scanned the treeline."
10"She locked her gaze on"
11"she called out"
12"Her heel met smooth, cold"
13"She turned her head."
14"She grabbed the silver chain"
15"It pulsed faster—a rapid, frantic"
16"She whirled around."
17"she said, her voice sharp,"
18"It wasn't a shadow."
19"It was a lack of"
ratio0.351
27.57% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount64
totalSentences74
matches
0"Rory pressed the mobile to"
1"Static hissed through the speaker,"
2"She tucked a strand of"
3"The call cut to a"
4"Rory lowered the phone."
5"The screen flickered black, the"
6"She slid the device into"
7"Wildflowers—foxgloves, poppies, pale bluebells—bloomed in"
8"She stepped between the twin"
9"The ambient roar of London"
10"The distant hum of Heathrow-bound"
11"Silence rushed into her ears,"
12"Rory drew a breath."
13"The air tasted of crushed"
14"She reached down with her"
15"Her five-foot-six frame felt strangely"
16"she spoke to the dark"
17"Her voice sounded small, swallowed"
18"She took her first step"
19"Her left foot landed on"
ratio0.865
0.00% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount0
totalSentences74
matches(empty)
ratio0
55.75% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences41
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"Her five-foot-six frame felt strangely light, her soles sinking into moss that yielded like wet foam."
1"No wind stirred the wildflowers, yet three red poppies six feet away bent toward the ground, flattening one by one as if an invisible, heavy foot trod over them…"
2"It pulsed faster—a rapid, frantic heartbeat that matched her own."
3"The flowers nearest to the tear began to rot, their petals blackening and liquidating into foul syrup in seconds."
4"The seam on the creature's head stretched wide, revealing a dark throat that reeked of copper and stagnant bog water."
25.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags5
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"she said, her voice sharp, stripped of hesitation"
59.09% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags3
fancyCount1
fancyTags
0"she spoke (speak)"
dialogueSentences11
tagDensity0.273
leniency0.545
rawRatio0.333
effectiveRatio0.182
78.1036%