| 100.00% | Adverbs in dialogue tags | Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs | | totalTags | 4 | | adverbTagCount | 0 | | adverbTags | (empty) | | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0 | | effectiveRatio | 0 | |
| 91.63% | AI-ism adverb frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked) | | wordCount | 1195 | | totalAiIsmAdverbs | 2 | | found | | | highlights | | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism character names | Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | AI-ism location names | Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each) | | codexExemptions | (empty) | | found | (empty) | |
| 33.05% | AI-ism word frequency | Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked) | | wordCount | 1195 | | totalAiIsms | 16 | | found | | | highlights | | 0 | "chill" | | 1 | "velvet" | | 2 | "silence" | | 3 | "weight" | | 4 | "stomach" | | 5 | "echoed" | | 6 | "rhythmic" | | 7 | "throb" | | 8 | "pulse" | | 9 | "throbbed" | | 10 | "familiar" | | 11 | "crystallized" |
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| 100.00% | Cliché density | Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window | | totalCliches | 0 | | maxInWindow | 0 | | found | (empty) | | highlights | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Emotion telling (show vs. tell) | Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling | | emotionTells | 0 | | narrationSentences | 107 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Filter word density | Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words | | filterCount | 0 | | hedgeCount | 0 | | narrationSentences | 107 | | filterMatches | (empty) | | hedgeMatches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Gibberish response detection | Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words) | | analyzedSentences | 109 | | gibberishSentences | 0 | | adjustedGibberishSentences | 0 | | longSentenceCount | 0 | | runOnParagraphCount | 0 | | giantParagraphCount | 0 | | wordSaladCount | 0 | | repetitionLoopCount | 0 | | controlTokenCount | 0 | | repeatedSegmentCount | 0 | | maxSentenceWordsSeen | 28 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Markdown formatting overuse | Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting | | markdownSpans | 0 | | markdownWords | 0 | | totalWords | 1189 | | ratio | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks) | Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks | | totalAttributions | 4 | | unquotedAttributions | 0 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Name drop frequency | Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words | | totalMentions | 23 | | wordCount | 1173 | | uniqueNames | 9 | | maxNameDensity | 0.94 | | worstName | "Rory" | | maxWindowNameDensity | 1.5 | | worstWindowName | "Rory" | | discoveredNames | | Richmond | 1 | | Road | 1 | | Rory | 11 | | Heartstone | 3 | | Yu-Fei | 1 | | Grove | 2 | | London | 2 | | Heathrow | 1 | | Hel | 1 |
| | persons | | 0 | "Rory" | | 1 | "Heartstone" | | 2 | "Grove" | | 3 | "Heathrow" |
| | places | | 0 | "Richmond" | | 1 | "Road" | | 2 | "Yu-Fei" | | 3 | "London" | | 4 | "Hel" |
| | globalScore | 1 | | windowScore | 1 | |
| 0.00% | Narrator intent-glossing | Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns | | analyzedSentences | 80 | | glossingSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "sounded like a hemlock stalk breaking unde" | | 1 | "looked like a shadow cast by nothing—a na" | | 2 | "looked like fifty, the gray oak pillars r" | | 3 | "looked like peeled birch roots, tapering" | | 4 | "felt like standing before an open furna" |
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| 100.00% | "Not X but Y" pattern overuse | Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words | | totalMatches | 1 | | per1kWords | 0.841 | | wordCount | 1189 | | matches | | 0 | "Not from wind, but with a fluid, deliberate rhythm, like fingers testing the de" |
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| 100.00% | Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding) | Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses | | thatCount | 0 | | totalSentences | 109 | | matches | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Paragraph length variance | Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts | | totalParagraphs | 51 | | mean | 23.31 | | std | 13.9 | | cv | 0.596 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 32 | | 1 | 40 | | 2 | 46 | | 3 | 27 | | 4 | 45 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 41 | | 7 | 39 | | 8 | 1 | | 9 | 26 | | 10 | 3 | | 11 | 23 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 25 | | 14 | 41 | | 15 | 25 | | 16 | 8 | | 17 | 40 | | 18 | 3 | | 19 | 22 | | 20 | 3 | | 21 | 10 | | 22 | 19 | | 23 | 38 | | 24 | 9 | | 25 | 36 | | 26 | 11 | | 27 | 48 | | 28 | 7 | | 29 | 4 | | 30 | 21 | | 31 | 36 | | 32 | 27 | | 33 | 9 | | 34 | 15 | | 35 | 39 | | 36 | 19 | | 37 | 16 | | 38 | 36 | | 39 | 14 | | 40 | 49 | | 41 | 16 | | 42 | 10 | | 43 | 42 | | 44 | 12 | | 45 | 26 | | 46 | 17 | | 47 | 29 | | 48 | 7 | | 49 | 29 |
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| 98.70% | Passive voice overuse | Target: ≤2% passive sentences | | passiveCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 107 | | matches | | 0 | "was supposed" | | 1 | "was gone" |
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| 100.00% | Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse | Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs | | pastProgressiveCount | 1 | | totalVerbs | 185 | | matches | | |
| 0.00% | Em-dash & semicolon overuse | Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons | | emDashCount | 6 | | semicolonCount | 1 | | flaggedSentences | 6 | | totalSentences | 109 | | ratio | 0.055 | | matches | | 0 | "A slip of paper in Yu-Fei’s ledger had pointed her here—a cryptic note mentioning a lost parcel tucked beneath the westernmost stone." | | 1 | "The ambient hum of suburban London—distant sirens, the dull roar of the A3, the drone of night flights out of Heathrow—vanished." | | 2 | "It looked like a shadow cast by nothing—a narrow smudge of grey that lacked shoulders or features." | | 3 | "The artifact only reacted like this near a rupture—a tear leading into Hel's dark, starved reaches." | | 4 | "The twelve standing stones no longer formed a neat ring; they leaned inward now, like ribs curling around an empty chest cavity." | | 5 | "A papery, rattling sound rose from the empty space—the dry, rhythmic rustle of dead locust wings dragging across parchment." |
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| 94.00% | Purple prose (modifier overload) | Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking | | wordCount | 1185 | | adjectiveStacks | 1 | | stackExamples | | 0 | "heavy bell-shaped blossoms" |
| | adverbCount | 27 | | adverbRatio | 0.02278481012658228 | | lyAdverbCount | 10 | | lyAdverbRatio | 0.008438818565400843 | |
| 100.00% | Repeated phrase echo | Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2) | | totalSentences | 109 | | echoCount | 0 | | echoWords | (empty) | |
| 100.00% | Sentence length variance | Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts | | totalSentences | 109 | | mean | 10.91 | | std | 6.3 | | cv | 0.577 | | sampleLengths | | 0 | 14 | | 1 | 18 | | 2 | 16 | | 3 | 4 | | 4 | 20 | | 5 | 5 | | 6 | 18 | | 7 | 23 | | 8 | 15 | | 9 | 12 | | 10 | 22 | | 11 | 8 | | 12 | 15 | | 13 | 5 | | 14 | 7 | | 15 | 21 | | 16 | 13 | | 17 | 6 | | 18 | 9 | | 19 | 19 | | 20 | 5 | | 21 | 1 | | 22 | 12 | | 23 | 14 | | 24 | 3 | | 25 | 4 | | 26 | 17 | | 27 | 2 | | 28 | 15 | | 29 | 5 | | 30 | 5 | | 31 | 15 | | 32 | 7 | | 33 | 4 | | 34 | 16 | | 35 | 9 | | 36 | 1 | | 37 | 2 | | 38 | 2 | | 39 | 15 | | 40 | 10 | | 41 | 8 | | 42 | 5 | | 43 | 15 | | 44 | 4 | | 45 | 16 | | 46 | 3 | | 47 | 9 | | 48 | 13 | | 49 | 3 |
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| 54.74% | Sentence opener variety | Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers | | consecutiveRepeats | 7 | | diversityRatio | 0.3669724770642202 | | totalSentences | 109 | | uniqueOpeners | 40 | |
| 68.03% | Adverb-first sentence starts | Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb | | adverbCount | 2 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "Only the rough bark remained." | | 1 | "Slowly, inch by inch, she" |
| | ratio | 0.02 | |
| 100.00% | Pronoun-first sentence starts | Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun | | pronounCount | 29 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 1 | "She reached into her coat," | | 2 | "It was supposed to be" | | 3 | "She stepped into the ring." | | 4 | "Her boots sank into damp," | | 5 | "She wedged her fingers into" | | 6 | "Her fingernails scraped rough bark." | | 7 | "She drew her hand back" | | 8 | "She spun around." | | 9 | "She shifted her weight right." | | 10 | "Her shadow jerked left, a" | | 11 | "She picked up a fallen" | | 12 | "It sounded like a hemlock" | | 13 | "Her Heartstone stirred." | | 14 | "Her voice sounded flat, instantly" | | 15 | "Her boots made no sound" | | 16 | "She whipped her head toward" | | 17 | "It looked like a shadow" | | 18 | "Her pulse hammered against her" | | 19 | "She turned on her heel" |
| | ratio | 0.296 | |
| 51.84% | Subject-first sentence starts | Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject | | subjectCount | 80 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "The clock on Richmond Road" | | 1 | "She adjusted the strap of" | | 2 | "The air changed instantly." | | 3 | "London’s damp winter chill snapped" | | 4 | "Rory stopped at the perimeter." | | 5 | "She reached into her coat," | | 6 | "The Heartstone rested against her" | | 7 | "A slip of paper in" | | 8 | "It was supposed to be" | | 9 | "She stepped into the ring." | | 10 | "Her boots sank into damp," | | 11 | "The ambient hum of suburban" | | 12 | "The silence that replaced it" | | 13 | "Rory crouched beside the western" | | 14 | "Moss clung to the ancient" | | 15 | "She wedged her fingers into" | | 16 | "Her fingernails scraped rough bark." | | 17 | "She drew her hand back" | | 18 | "A faint tickle brushed the" | | 19 | "She spun around." |
| | ratio | 0.816 | |
| 51.02% | Subordinate conjunction sentence starts | Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction | | subConjCount | 1 | | totalSentences | 98 | | matches | | 0 | "Now, past the iron gates" |
| | ratio | 0.01 | |
| 76.72% | Technical jargon density | Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns | | analyzedSentences | 54 | | technicalSentenceCount | 5 | | matches | | 0 | "London’s damp winter chill snapped off, replaced by a humid, soil-rich heat that smelled of bruised velvet and rotting sugar." | | 1 | "What had been a ten-foot gap now looked like fifty, the gray oak pillars receding into a pale, violet fog that hadn't been there five minutes ago." | | 2 | "Rory ducked, scrambling sideways, her shoulder slamming hard into the rough flank of a boundary stone." | | 3 | "The wildflowers underfoot had closed their petals, turning black and oily in the faint red light radiating from her chest." | | 4 | "It moved with sickening precision, ending in three jointed segments that flexed like a spider's limb." |
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| 0.00% | Useless dialogue additions | Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments | | totalTags | 4 | | uselessAdditionCount | 1 | | matches | | 0 | "Rory said, her voice sharp, cutting through the silence like a blade" |
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| 0.00% | Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy) | Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags | | totalTags | 4 | | fancyCount | 3 | | fancyTags | | 0 | "she whispered (whisper)" | | 1 | "a voice murmured (murmur)" | | 2 | "the darkness whispered (whisper)" |
| | dialogueSentences | 6 | | tagDensity | 0.667 | | leniency | 1 | | rawRatio | 0.75 | | effectiveRatio | 0.75 | |