Run: 2026-07-25-01KYCWF5F0ZHV48NSB9RDFQ9W5

Run Details

Duration:
21.4s
Cost:
$0.032442
Provider:
Google AI Studio

Model input

System
You are an expert fiction writer. Always keep the following rules in mind: - Write in past tense and use General English spelling, grammar, and colloquialisms/slang. - Write in active voice - Always follow the "show, don't tell" principle. - Avoid adverbs and cliches and overused/commonly used phrases. Aim for fresh and original descriptions. - Convey events and story through dialogue. - Mix short, punchy sentences with long, descriptive ones. Drop fill words to add variety. - Skip "he/she said said" dialogue tags and convey people's actions or face expressions through their speech - Avoid mushy dialog and descriptions, have dialogue always continue the action, never stall or add unnecessary fluff. Vary the descriptions to not repeat yourself. - Put dialogue on its own paragraph to separate scene and action. - Reduce indicators of uncertainty like "trying" or "maybe" When writing text: - NEVER conclude the scene on your own, follow the beat instructions very closely. - NEVER end with foreshadowing. - NEVER write further than what I prompt you with. - AVOID imagining possible endings, NEVER deviate from the instructions. - STOP EARLY if the continuation contains what was required in the instructions. You do not need to fill out the full amount of words possible.
User/Human
Take into account the following glossary of characters/locations/items/lore... when writing your response: <codex> <character id="4412" name="Aurora Carter" aliases="Rory, Laila, Aurora, Carter, Malphora" pronouns="she/her" species="Human" storyRole="Protagonist"> <eyeColor>bright blue</eyeColor> <hair>straight shoulder-length black</hair> <height>5'6"</height> <age>25</age> <scar>small crescent-shaped scar on her left wrist from a childhood accident</scar> <description>Aurora, referred to by her friends as Rory, is cool-headed, intelligent, and known for quick out-of-the-box thinking.</description> <backstory>Born in Cardiff to an Irish barrister father (Brendan Carter) and Welsh teacher mother (Jennifer Carter née Ellis), Rory reluctantly pursued Pre-Law at Cardiff University. She fled to London at the behest of her childhood friend Eva after leaving an abusive ex named Evan. By day, Rory works part-time as a delivery person for Yu-Fei Cheung's Golden Empress restaurant. She lives in a flat above Silas' bar.</backstory> </character> <location id="861" name="The Fae Grove" aliases="Isolde's grove, Richmond grove, the Grove" realm="Earth (Fae-touched)"> <parkLocation>Richmond Park</parkLocation> <standingStones>ancient oak standing stones mark the boundary</standingStones> <timeBehavior>time moves differently — an hour inside can be minutes or days outside</timeBehavior> <flora>wildflowers bloom year-round</flora> <description>A hidden clearing that exists in a pocket between Earth and the Fae realm.</description> </location> <item id="2001" name="Heartstone Pendant" aliases="the pendant, Heartstone" type="Artifact" origin="Dymas"> <gemstoneColor>deep crimson</gemstoneColor> <chainMaterial>silver chain</chainMaterial> <size>roughly the size of a thumbnail</size> <behavior>pulses faintly with warmth when near a Hel portal</behavior> <glow>faint inner glow</glow> <description>Given to Aurora by an unknown benefactor.</description> </item> </codex> Continue the story using the following instructions: <instructions> Write a fully fleshed out scene of at least 1000 words in the horror genre. A character is alone in a strange, isolated place at night. They came here for a reason, but something feels off from the moment they arrive. The wrongness builds slowly — sounds that shouldn't be there, things that move at the edge of vision, a growing certainty that they are not alone. Build tension through restraint, not through gore. Use the codex entries above as your world reference for the character and setting. Only include the prose of the scene without any markdown or commentary. </instructions>

Model response

AI
The clock on Richmond Road had struck two before Rory crossed the tree line. Now, past the iron gates and deep within the park's dark ribcage, time felt stripped of its gears. She adjusted the strap of her canvas bag and pushed through a dense tangle of hawthorn. The air changed instantly. London’s damp winter chill snapped off, replaced by a humid, soil-rich heat that smelled of bruised velvet and rotting sugar. Rory stopped at the perimeter. Twelve towering oak monoliths stood in a rough circle, their petrified bark gray as slate under the moon. Between them, thick drifts of purple foxglove and white meadowsweet flared in full bloom, defying the frost she had left twenty yards behind. She reached into her coat, her fingers brushing the small crimson stone at her throat. The Heartstone rested against her sternum, silent and cool as river pebble. A slip of paper in Yu-Fei’s ledger had pointed her here—a cryptic note mentioning a lost parcel tucked beneath the westernmost stone. It was supposed to be a simple retrieval. Drop in, grab the oak box, leave before the Grove's strange clockwork swallowed the morning. She stepped into the ring. Her boots sank into damp, spongy moss. The ambient hum of suburban London—distant sirens, the dull roar of the A3, the drone of night flights out of Heathrow—vanished. The silence that replaced it pressed heavy against her eardrums, dense as wool. Rory crouched beside the western monolith. Moss clung to the ancient wood like dried scab. She wedged her fingers into a deep crevice near the root flare, feeling for carved timber or cold iron. Her fingernails scraped rough bark. Nothing. She drew her hand back and wiped dark loam on her trousers. A faint tickle brushed the back of her neck, light as a dangling thread. She spun around. The clearing lay empty. Moonbeams cut clean, silver shafts through the canopy, painting the wildflowers in shades of ash and violet. Nothing moved. Yet her shadow, stretched long across the moss, ended three inches short of her heel. Rory stared at her feet. She shifted her weight right. Her shadow jerked left, a fraction of a second too late, then settled into place. A cold knot tightened in her stomach. Cool-headed, she reminded herself. She picked up a fallen acorn and squeezed it until the shell cracked against her palm. Logical explanations existed for visual distortions in fae-touched ground. Refraction. Time slippage. Pocket geometry. A sharp, dry sound echoed from the center of the ring, six feet behind her. It sounded like a hemlock stalk breaking under a heel. Rory turned, her heels digging into the earth. The central clearing remained vacant. The wildflowers leaned toward the inner circle, their heavy bell-shaped blossoms dipping down in unison. There was no wind. The leaves on the canopy high above hung frozen, black cutout shapes against the milky sky. Her Heartstone stirred. A faint, rhythmic throb began beneath her shirt collar. A dull ember of heat bloomed against her skin, spreading across her collarbone. "Is someone there?" Her voice sounded flat, instantly absorbed by the surrounding moss. No answer came. But the air grew thicker, heavy with the metallic tang of wet iron and crushed copper. Rory took a cautious step backward, keeping her eyes fixed on the center of the grove. Her boots made no sound against the velvet carpet. The absolute absence of noise felt predatory, like an inhalation held too long. Something twitched at the edge of her left eye. She whipped her head toward the southern stone. A tall, impossibly thin shape stood pressed against the oak trunk. It looked like a shadow cast by nothing—a narrow smudge of grey that lacked shoulders or features. She blinked. The smudge was gone. Only the rough bark remained. Her pulse hammered against her jaw. The Heartstone grew hotter, its crimson glow bleeding through the weave of her dark jacket, casting a dim, reddish circle on the grass around her boots. The artifact only reacted like this near a rupture—a tear leading into Hel's dark, starved reaches. This was no simple fae glade tonight. "Wrong door," she whispered. She turned on her heel and headed back toward the gap between the two northern oak stones where she had entered. Three strides in, the distance between the monoliths stretched. What had been a ten-foot gap now looked like fifty, the gray oak pillars receding into a pale, violet fog that hadn't been there five minutes ago. Rory broke into a jog. Her breath rasped in her throat. The heat at her chest flared to a sting, her skin burning under the silver chain. A rhythmic tap dropped from directly above her head. She froze, every muscle locking tight. Slowly, inch by inch, she tilted her chin upward. The canopy above was a solid ceiling of black oak leaves. But suspended among the higher branches, hanging upside down, hung a series of long, pale strands. They looked like peeled birch roots, tapering to points fine as needles. They were swaying. Not from wind, but with a fluid, deliberate rhythm, like fingers testing the density of water. One of the strands lengthened, dropping six inches lower. It brushed the crown of her head. Rory ducked, scrambling sideways, her shoulder slamming hard into the rough flank of a boundary stone. Pain shot down her arm, clear and grounding. The scar on her left wrist throbbed with a dull, familiar ache. She turned her back to the oak stone, putting solid wood at her rear. The whole Grove had altered its shape. The twelve standing stones no longer formed a neat ring; they leaned inward now, like ribs curling around an empty chest cavity. The wildflowers underfoot had closed their petals, turning black and oily in the faint red light radiating from her chest. "Come out," Rory said, her voice sharp, cutting through the silence like a blade. "Show yourself." The air six inches in front of her face shivered. It felt like standing before an open furnace, yet a rim of frost instantly crystallized along the collar of her jacket. The red light from her pendant reflected in two tiny, twin points suspended in the air right at her eye level. Not eyes. Holes. Two pinprick voids sucking in the dim red glare. A papery, rattling sound rose from the empty space—the dry, rhythmic rustle of dead locust wings dragging across parchment. It drifted closer, settling near her ear. "You came back," a voice murmured, without tone, without breath, sounding like dry leaves scraped over concrete. Rory pressed herself flatter against the stone, her hand closing tightly around the burning crimson heart at her chest. The heat scorched her fingers, but she didn't let go. "You brought the light," the darkness whispered. A long, pale line separated from the surrounding shadows, extending toward her cheek. It moved with sickening precision, ending in three jointed segments that flexed like a spider's limb. Rory raised her wrist to block it, her blue eyes wide, locked on the empty air in front of her. The silver chain of her pendant snapped taut.
created_at"2026-07-25T14:57:01.928Z" 7/25/2026, 2:57:01 PM
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Evaluation details

Result Evaluator Details Meta Data
100.00% Adverbs in dialogue tags
Target: ≤10% dialogue tags with adverbs
totalTags4
adverbTagCount0
adverbTags(empty)
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0
effectiveRatio0
91.63% AI-ism adverb frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism adverbs (58 tracked)
wordCount1195
totalAiIsmAdverbs2
found
0
adverb"slowly"
count1
1
adverb"tightly"
count1
highlights
0"slowly"
1"tightly"
100.00% AI-ism character names
Target: 0 AI-default names (17 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
100.00% AI-ism location names
Target: 0 AI-default location names (33 tracked, −20% each)
codexExemptions(empty)
found(empty)
33.05% AI-ism word frequency
Target: <2% AI-ism words (290 tracked)
wordCount1195
totalAiIsms16
found
0
word"chill"
count1
1
word"velvet"
count2
2
word"silence"
count2
3
word"weight"
count1
4
word"stomach"
count1
5
word"echoed"
count1
6
word"rhythmic"
count3
7
word"throb"
count1
8
word"pulse"
count1
9
word"throbbed"
count1
10
word"familiar"
count1
11
word"crystallized"
count1
highlights
0"chill"
1"velvet"
2"silence"
3"weight"
4"stomach"
5"echoed"
6"rhythmic"
7"throb"
8"pulse"
9"throbbed"
10"familiar"
11"crystallized"
100.00% Cliché density
Target: ≤1 cliche(s) per 800-word window
totalCliches0
maxInWindow0
found(empty)
highlights(empty)
100.00% Emotion telling (show vs. tell)
Target: ≤3% sentences with emotion telling
emotionTells0
narrationSentences107
matches(empty)
100.00% Filter word density
Target: ≤3% sentences with filter/hedge words
filterCount0
hedgeCount0
narrationSentences107
filterMatches(empty)
hedgeMatches(empty)
100.00% Gibberish response detection
Target: ≤1% gibberish-like sentences (hard fail if a sentence exceeds 800 words)
analyzedSentences109
gibberishSentences0
adjustedGibberishSentences0
longSentenceCount0
runOnParagraphCount0
giantParagraphCount0
wordSaladCount0
repetitionLoopCount0
controlTokenCount0
repeatedSegmentCount0
maxSentenceWordsSeen28
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Markdown formatting overuse
Target: ≤5% words in markdown formatting
markdownSpans0
markdownWords0
totalWords1189
ratio0
matches(empty)
100.00% Missing dialogue indicators (quotation marks)
Target: ≤10% speech attributions without quotation marks
totalAttributions4
unquotedAttributions0
matches(empty)
100.00% Name drop frequency
Target: ≤1.0 per-name mentions per 100 words
totalMentions23
wordCount1173
uniqueNames9
maxNameDensity0.94
worstName"Rory"
maxWindowNameDensity1.5
worstWindowName"Rory"
discoveredNames
Richmond1
Road1
Rory11
Heartstone3
Yu-Fei1
Grove2
London2
Heathrow1
Hel1
persons
0"Rory"
1"Heartstone"
2"Grove"
3"Heathrow"
places
0"Richmond"
1"Road"
2"Yu-Fei"
3"London"
4"Hel"
globalScore1
windowScore1
0.00% Narrator intent-glossing
Target: ≤2% narration sentences with intent-glossing patterns
analyzedSentences80
glossingSentenceCount5
matches
0"sounded like a hemlock stalk breaking unde"
1"looked like a shadow cast by nothing—a na"
2"looked like fifty, the gray oak pillars r"
3"looked like peeled birch roots, tapering"
4"felt like standing before an open furna"
100.00% "Not X but Y" pattern overuse
Target: ≤1 "not X but Y" per 1000 words
totalMatches1
per1kWords0.841
wordCount1189
matches
0"Not from wind, but with a fluid, deliberate rhythm, like fingers testing the de"
100.00% Overuse of "that" (subordinate clause padding)
Target: ≤2% sentences with "that" clauses
thatCount0
totalSentences109
matches(empty)
100.00% Paragraph length variance
Target: CV ≥0.5 for paragraph word counts
totalParagraphs51
mean23.31
std13.9
cv0.596
sampleLengths
032
140
246
327
445
55
641
739
81
926
103
1123
1215
1325
1441
1525
168
1740
183
1922
203
2110
2219
2338
249
2536
2611
2748
287
294
3021
3136
3227
339
3415
3539
3619
3716
3836
3914
4049
4116
4210
4342
4412
4526
4617
4729
487
4929
98.70% Passive voice overuse
Target: ≤2% passive sentences
passiveCount2
totalSentences107
matches
0"was supposed"
1"was gone"
100.00% Past progressive (was/were + -ing) overuse
Target: ≤2% past progressive verbs
pastProgressiveCount1
totalVerbs185
matches
0"were swaying"
0.00% Em-dash & semicolon overuse
Target: ≤2% sentences with em-dashes/semicolons
emDashCount6
semicolonCount1
flaggedSentences6
totalSentences109
ratio0.055
matches
0"A slip of paper in Yu-Fei’s ledger had pointed her here—a cryptic note mentioning a lost parcel tucked beneath the westernmost stone."
1"The ambient hum of suburban London—distant sirens, the dull roar of the A3, the drone of night flights out of Heathrow—vanished."
2"It looked like a shadow cast by nothing—a narrow smudge of grey that lacked shoulders or features."
3"The artifact only reacted like this near a rupture—a tear leading into Hel's dark, starved reaches."
4"The twelve standing stones no longer formed a neat ring; they leaned inward now, like ribs curling around an empty chest cavity."
5"A papery, rattling sound rose from the empty space—the dry, rhythmic rustle of dead locust wings dragging across parchment."
94.00% Purple prose (modifier overload)
Target: <4% adverbs, <2% -ly adverbs, no adj stacking
wordCount1185
adjectiveStacks1
stackExamples
0"heavy bell-shaped blossoms"
adverbCount27
adverbRatio0.02278481012658228
lyAdverbCount10
lyAdverbRatio0.008438818565400843
100.00% Repeated phrase echo
Target: ≤20% sentences with echoes (window: 2)
totalSentences109
echoCount0
echoWords(empty)
100.00% Sentence length variance
Target: CV ≥0.4 for sentence word counts
totalSentences109
mean10.91
std6.3
cv0.577
sampleLengths
014
118
216
34
420
55
618
723
815
912
1022
118
1215
135
147
1521
1613
176
189
1919
205
211
2212
2314
243
254
2617
272
2815
295
305
3115
327
334
3416
359
361
372
382
3915
4010
418
425
4315
444
4516
463
479
4813
493
54.74% Sentence opener variety
Target: ≥60% unique sentence openers
consecutiveRepeats7
diversityRatio0.3669724770642202
totalSentences109
uniqueOpeners40
68.03% Adverb-first sentence starts
Target: ≥3% sentences starting with an adverb
adverbCount2
totalSentences98
matches
0"Only the rough bark remained."
1"Slowly, inch by inch, she"
ratio0.02
100.00% Pronoun-first sentence starts
Target: ≤30% sentences starting with a pronoun
pronounCount29
totalSentences98
matches
0"She adjusted the strap of"
1"She reached into her coat,"
2"It was supposed to be"
3"She stepped into the ring."
4"Her boots sank into damp,"
5"She wedged her fingers into"
6"Her fingernails scraped rough bark."
7"She drew her hand back"
8"She spun around."
9"She shifted her weight right."
10"Her shadow jerked left, a"
11"She picked up a fallen"
12"It sounded like a hemlock"
13"Her Heartstone stirred."
14"Her voice sounded flat, instantly"
15"Her boots made no sound"
16"She whipped her head toward"
17"It looked like a shadow"
18"Her pulse hammered against her"
19"She turned on her heel"
ratio0.296
51.84% Subject-first sentence starts
Target: ≤72% sentences starting with a subject
subjectCount80
totalSentences98
matches
0"The clock on Richmond Road"
1"She adjusted the strap of"
2"The air changed instantly."
3"London’s damp winter chill snapped"
4"Rory stopped at the perimeter."
5"She reached into her coat,"
6"The Heartstone rested against her"
7"A slip of paper in"
8"It was supposed to be"
9"She stepped into the ring."
10"Her boots sank into damp,"
11"The ambient hum of suburban"
12"The silence that replaced it"
13"Rory crouched beside the western"
14"Moss clung to the ancient"
15"She wedged her fingers into"
16"Her fingernails scraped rough bark."
17"She drew her hand back"
18"A faint tickle brushed the"
19"She spun around."
ratio0.816
51.02% Subordinate conjunction sentence starts
Target: ≥2% sentences starting with a subordinating conjunction
subConjCount1
totalSentences98
matches
0"Now, past the iron gates"
ratio0.01
76.72% Technical jargon density
Target: ≤6% sentences with technical-jargon patterns
analyzedSentences54
technicalSentenceCount5
matches
0"London’s damp winter chill snapped off, replaced by a humid, soil-rich heat that smelled of bruised velvet and rotting sugar."
1"What had been a ten-foot gap now looked like fifty, the gray oak pillars receding into a pale, violet fog that hadn't been there five minutes ago."
2"Rory ducked, scrambling sideways, her shoulder slamming hard into the rough flank of a boundary stone."
3"The wildflowers underfoot had closed their petals, turning black and oily in the faint red light radiating from her chest."
4"It moved with sickening precision, ending in three jointed segments that flexed like a spider's limb."
0.00% Useless dialogue additions
Target: ≤5% dialogue tags with trailing filler fragments
totalTags4
uselessAdditionCount1
matches
0"Rory said, her voice sharp, cutting through the silence like a blade"
0.00% Dialogue tag variety (said vs. fancy)
Target: ≤10% fancy dialogue tags
totalTags4
fancyCount3
fancyTags
0"she whispered (whisper)"
1"a voice murmured (murmur)"
2"the darkness whispered (whisper)"
dialogueSentences6
tagDensity0.667
leniency1
rawRatio0.75
effectiveRatio0.75
77.3245%